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Posted: 10 years ago
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Edited by singh24 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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New York

geet " well thats all for now
she concluded her speech in front of her companies clients whose financial discussions greatly lied on her hands pritty much concluding the meeting.
 
The investor who had lost their money were sunk on the chair like some stone was kept on them. While those who had taken her advice were grinning with all that extra money she saved for them again this year.
 
Mr Jack Kelly " thats my girl, he raised a toast to her as they reached to celebrate.
she gave a lopsided smile knowing had he lost money he would have been the first person to kick her out of the company.
 
Well that was not possible. She knew!! her calculations were accurate & she was good. Dam good being a financial advisory. Actually the best.
No wonder she was VP finance in just 5 yrs of her career. Every one knew it was impossible to challenge her work. She was precise & accurate to top it up consistent.
 
Andrew smiled at her as she walked out the conference room checking her meetings on the phone. He softly hugged her placing a sexy peck behind the ears whispering tried darling
she chuckled " little
Andrew " massage he winked
she kissed him back softly " just can't wait
Andrew " my place after dinner
she softly squeezed his hand before leaving " 8 then
he sighed .. its been couple of yrs they have been together now. But he couldn't get enough of her.  After he divorced Kem he never thought he would ever be with some one for so long.
 
Then he immediately shrugged the thought itself. Being with Geet was not possible. They are together because its just about sex. & she had made it clear & makes it very clear every time they  have sex. They just have that cool sex every now & then. Not cool.. dam.. hot!!! he chuckles
 
Jack - hi Andrew
Andrew gives him a warm smile coming out of his thoughts. 
Andrew was an important client to KK group of companies. But geet kept her relation with Andrew out of office so did Andrew.
 
 
Geet met up with her assistant & best friend. They discussed the meetings.
Sasha " r u again going out with andrew
geet rolled her eyes " common it is just couple of hours
Sasha " but u know
geet " just relax
sasha " common babes I am just not sure of this guy
geet " ur again doing too much of thinking
sasha " I think he likes u
geet laughed " off course he likes me, thats why he have so much of fun
she laughed naughtily
definitely u don't get naked with some one u hate
sasha got serious setting the files together " nahi geet .. I am mean he kinda
geet took a deep breath " its not like that. He knows we r just having a good relation.
Thats it
sasha shakes her head. Never understanding her. They have been friends since college. She has seen Geet like this so different towards serious relationships. Like she doesn't understand the four letter words called feel. No one can be so practical. Well Geet is. like she doesn't get it!!
 
 

Delhi

Maan " good morning daadi..
handsome charming man walks in to her cabin
Savitri devi MD of Khurana Group of industries sets her glasses & welcomes him with a elegant yet warm smile.
Daadi " u missed ur breakfast today
Maan " I had this meeting in the morning
daadi sighed " how many times I have told u to wind up that business in NYC
Maan smiles weekly. Both of them knew it is not possible. They have that bond difficult to explain.
Daadi " it is been running in loss for years now Maan
he just looks down defeated. He had managed to excel under her guidance in Delhi but in NYC he is not able to set his foot hold. Not that he doesn't want to, but he had been waiting for the right time. Probably it is..
daadi closes the files " well we have taken few important decision.
His heart felt a tug. He excuses himself & goes to his cabin. 
He softly caress the picture of his parents on his table & then an image that only brings a smile on his lips.. moistening his eyes from the past.
Chehra Mera Tha Nigahen Uski
 Khamshi Mai B Wo Baten Uski
 Mere Chehre Par Ghazal Likhti Gain
 Shair Kehti Hui Aankhen Uski
 Shokh Lamhon Ka Pata Dene Lagin
 Tez Hoti Hui Sansen Uski
 Khud Pe B Khulti Na Ho Jiski Nazar
 Janta Kon Zabanen Uski
 Neend Is Soach Se Tuti Aksar
 Kis Tarah Katti Hain Raten Uski
 Dur Reh Kar B Sada Deti Hain
 Mujko Thame Huay Baahen Uski
 
Daadi slowly knocks the door & walks in carefully. She didn't want him to be so low.
Daadi " is it about ur Pari?
Maan looks away
daadi " common Maan uss baat ko itne saal hogayen.
He doesn't say anything
daadi " trust me, I have spoken to Sheela, she is looking for lot beautiful girls.
Maan rolled his eyes - like the last one.
Both of them laughed reminded of girls marriage broker Sheela had short listed. Even daadi was shocked.
 
Daadi felt she has not been able to do enough for her only grandson. They have been so busy handling the empire which seems to just grow.

 
 
Umm well this is the first part
shall try to type at a better pace
please leave me comments & likes it really means a lot
love
muskan
 
-NEXT   PART 2-
 
 
Edited by muskanp - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#13


first of all congrats for the new story...  tum kithni hi stories kyu na likh daalo, it wont be enough for us... just keep on writing like this and i really wish u get more and more appreciation and love ...

loved the intro part...


geet is really well settled in her profession... respect such ladies... way to go...


she seems a lil more practical than needed... andrew... so ur our next target... pehle ham phir maan aaega then he will take care of u...

hope maan s pari is geet,... also hope that he approaches the financial wizard geet to restore his business...


eagerly waiting for the next part


ps:how did i forget to boast that i came first on muskis new ffs first update Edited by -lakshmi- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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uff.. ye wali Geet tou.. I mean she is so PRACTICAL, like never want to be in relationship... but very strong to handle scenes, Very Impressive 👏👏

on other sidee Maan is heart broken, Di poem ne to roldiya 😭😭
Dadi & maan is only family awe.. Maan missing his parents & that some PARI...

Ahaan... interesting, Khurana Group of Industries in NYC in bad & Geet also is in NY... ok scene so SCENE yaha se start hoga 😉😉

Good start, Have faith for read some thing more new about love, pain, gain, loss, care & relation with its SHIP... Waiting for next Di.. 
Edited by DreamyPrincess1 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Interesting story..Maan pari is Geet..I hope Maan come to NYC..
waiting for next part..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Edited by singh24 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#17
whao a new ff..Congratulations...looking forward to reading it.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#18
Congrats...!!!! I Always get real happy whenever you start a new one!!!

A total different flavor of Maaneet.. A composed maan and a practical Geet..
That was quite a different start... She is too practical to think about any relation.. like sasha says, she doesnt wanna FEEL... Not serious about her current relation.. very focussed in life and too good in her career...
And on the other side, yet to know about Maan... A past that he seems to cherish and seems to make him low too... but yet there is something about NYC that makes stick to his business there... and he has someone in his heart... 
lovely start muskan...
eager to know how the story unfolds... thanks for starting a new and waiting!!!

Edited by Shruthe - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#19
vow nice to see u back witha bang , with lot of things stored in it

Beautiful ff must say

Geet practical

Maans Pari is Geet

waiting



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Posted: 10 years ago
#20
congrast for new story Di..loved da Title 😳

wat an INTRO ufff...me loving it

Wo ik masoom si chahat
Wo ik benaam si ulfat
Wo meri zaat ka hissa
Wo meri zeest ka qissa
Mjhy mehsoos hota hai
Wo mere pas hai ub bhe
Wo jab jab yad ata hay
Nigahoun me samata hai
Zuban khamosh hoti hai
Magar ye ankh roti hai
Mein khud se puch lete hun
Usay kya pyar hai mjh se
Jawaban soch leti hun
Usay bhe pyar hai SHAYAD
Isi SHAYAD se wabsta hai
Ub to her khushi meri
Yahi ek lafz SHAYAD
Ban gya hai zindagi meri.