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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hola guys 🤗

I am here with an poem...read it as SwaRon's point of view post asthma track

Tanhaiyaan


Tanha hai tanhaiyaan bhi
Na mera ab kuch bhi
Yeh dil bhi hai tere pass
Bachi hai bas tujhse milne ki aas

Har pal mein teri hi yaadein
Hawa bhi karti hai bas teri hi baatein
Anuragi tha tera mera saath
Jaane kyun chutey yeh haath



Tere hoto pe mera naam
Laata tha mere chehre pe muskaan
Naam bhi hai ab anjaan
Naa hai iss chehra se koi pehchan

Rahe thi humari alag
Fir q tha humare milne ka sanjog
Dil se kabhi dhadkan nahi hoti juda
Fir q toota yeh sapna pyaara

Rim jim rim jim pyaar ki fuhaaren
Aur masti bhare pal suhane
Fir kaisa yeh khel kismat ne khela
Aa gaya yeh naa mitne wala fasla

Khushi ka tha jaha basera
Banaya tha aisa ek ashiyaan
Ab toh chaya hai andhera
Tanhaiyaan bhi hai tanha


i know its lame...criticisms are welcomed 😊

luv

Shrutika


P.S.: thank u deepu di...SwaRon You
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Posted: 12 years ago
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res for deepu di 😊


Hey my sweetest heart🤗


Such an amazing poem...i loved the way u expressed their feelings through ur words..it was so soulful...i could feel their pain..their love...u are such a beautiful poetess swthrt...why dont u write more...i write so beautifully ...

I want read more works from u ...plz do write more...SWARON U baby😳

Mujhe kyu thank u bola tune😲😲...love u baby🤗

Love
Ur Deepu di
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Posted: 12 years ago
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its great dear...do write more...😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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mast shru...well written..write more😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey very well written dear.😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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it's great shrutika.. chan ahe...
bg music also..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Shrutu yeh tune likha 😲
OMG dis is so beautifull..
Loved it.. Awesome yaar 👏 👏
Tu toh chupi rustam nikli 😛
Amazing work..
Lovely poem.. 👏 👏
Edited by Shilpa_SwaRon - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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shrutika dii🤗
awesome poem
describes swaron equation completely after asthama track
the BG music made it even more magical
Loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: piyu1990

it's great shrutika.. chan ahe...

bg music also..


well written dear ⭐️ n tu marathi aahe ka ??
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Posted: 12 years ago
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It's awsome...sounded like tanha...tanhayein...😳

Loved it

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