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Posted: 12 years ago
exactly meenu
m waiting frm past 15 min😡
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hello Hi My dear Friends,
Love you all for your appreciation .
I actually love your comments when they sound you have actually read my work.
You all rocks . Thankyou.


*SONG CREDIT* - arshi16 & saj111 🤗


Trapped Soul
Chapter 4 : I feel 4 U





Having tears in his eyes and a feeling of pain in his heart ,
Arnav said loudly "I k9 you are hearing me Khushi , I k9 you are still trapped here , I k9 you are still binded to him but after k9ing you , your story , a strange kind of relation has established between you and me .

Till now , i was thinking about my own family and that is why i wanted to go from here , but now i feel that more than my family someone here needs me , and its you . This relation is like what i myself dont k9 . But now i will make you free ."


Saying this , he stood up and started to think deeply about how to help her because he have to face a spirit , an evil spirit . I havent even seen Khushi nor that spirit .

Moving here and there , lost in his own thoughts , suddenly he felt a pressure over his chest that threw him outside the main door .

He ran inside , without any fear , over-determined to save Khushi , but the door closed on his face suddenly and the screams started to hear in his ears . The scream of a woman in pain and a man as if he is over-powering on her . He understood .

He tried to open the door but it jammed .
He stopped in next moment since the sounds stopped themselves .
And there appeared a light and a woman standing there . Her face was not visible .

Arnav's eyes itself got more bigger to focus on her . But he cudnt see her face .

Ofcourse it was Khushi "The soul that has trapped me here since 120 years will never let you win . The more you will try to save me , even more he is still hurting me . He is so strong . He will never let you win."
And she disappeared leaving Arnav in wonder and shock .

He had never knew that this trip is going to change his whole life . He , Arnav singh raizada , who has never cared about anyone after his parent's death except his di , is now full on determined to save Khushi , whose face he hasnt seen . Just by a letter .

May be the pain in Khushi's words melted his solid heart .
He and his di were never happy after his parent's death .They were smiling but though it was a big loss that can never be forgotten .

Just as she disappeared , the sounds again started to come . Arnav cudnt take them now .He cant see khushi in pain anymore .
He closed his ears and started to step back away from the hotel .

Hitted with something , he turned back to see , it was the same beggar woman .Sounds stopped now .Silence again .

The woman "What happened ? Darr gaya ? Only now you are scared ? If you are scared now then how will you face the coming things ?"
Arnav asked in anger "How the hell you are sure that only I am made to save her ? I am not afraid .I cant hear her in pain .Tell me , why i am feeling so much for her ? Who is she to me?"

The woman laughed "Ha ha !!! *points to sky* that god , he has written everything in his own way . Those who gave her the pain will remedy her now ."
Arnav "Whhaa ..?"

She continued "Feel the pain in the screams my son . You will yourself get the way how to help her . Suffer those things. Suffer what she has gone through . May god help you."
And with this she disapperead again .

Noway that arnav was shocked this time or confused . He was fully confident that he will save Khushi .
the door now opened itself . Arnav went in .
He started to roam the hotel again.

Now he realised that the face in the drawer was of Payal , khushi's SIL.
Now he realised the one who wanted to kill him or shoo him away was him . He is trying different tactics to shoo him away .

But one thing that he couldnt realise yet was that why he was not able to kill him yet ? if he is so strong then why he hasnt killed him even though he has given him an open challenge that he will save Khushi .

Leaving this thought aside , he heard a dim voice . It was coming from piano room.
Before entering the room , he was shocked to see a girl (face not visible) , dressed up as bride , playing the piano . Her tones had pain , all her pain could be noticed through the music .



He cudnt believe what he was seeing . Was that his imagination ?
He headed slowly to open the door .
Putting his hand to the door , he opened it only to find the same empty dark room having a piano and the same old book .

But just before he saw that the book was new . It means it wasnt my imagination , he thought . But them what was it ?
He sat on the chair and started to play the piano .
The same notes as the girl was playing . The same pain .
He felt every second of Khushi's pain . He felt each part of her story , her words .


Her marriage ...
Her devil husband ...
The deaths ...
The betrayal by people ...
The rape ...
The suicide ...
the trapped ...

And he was lost in it . He could feel what Khushi gone through . He was still playing it .Notes were high . Pitch was so loud .

His eyes were full of tears . His heart was full of pain .
And finally , being tired , he felt unconscious and rested his head on the piano and his eyes closed themselves .

After sometime , he woke up by a voice .
He opened eyes only to see the room as if it was new . All new.
The voice "She is so attracting . And she will be mine .I asked dad to send the marriage proposal for her today ."

Precap : It was 1893 😲



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Thankyou guys .

Ummahhzzz

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Edited by MT_loverboy - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Res For Tinkerbell aka Ara apu !!!!!!!!!!! 😳

unres by Tinkerbell 😳
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damn so finally arnav nd khushi came face to face but he could not see her face..!

She actually said dat arnav could never save her as shyam,d evil spirit has trapped her nd more sumone will try to save her d more paon he will give to her nd aftr day she dissapeared nly to get tortured by dat evil spirit 😡

but how will armav save her from dat evil spirit,i mean he is nly a human being den how can he save khushi's soul..!!

Nd dat beggar is so much sure abt him destined to make khushi's spirit free is sumthng very mysterious 😳

md so finally arnav felt khushi's pain nd now he is drifted to 1893 to knw d whole story of khushi..!

Hmm interesting indeed 😳

lovely chappy 👍🏼

dis story is very much mysterious yt very painful nd i am loving d bond which arnav is sharing for khushi like he is nly made 2 save her from dis evil spirit ❤️

u r becuming a good writer day by day,hayeee meri princess kisiki nazar na lage 🤣

hatewaa u 😡

hugs 🤗
Edited by CrazyDollAnandi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
my comments for both chap 3 and 4

shyam dat evil spirit

Oh my poor khushi
his spirit has tortured her soo much that she killed herself

now arnav s gonna help her

Chappy-4

fabulous update bhai

d way u portrayed wat Arnav was feelin was jus awesomeee

and wat do u mean by 1893 n d precap

and as aru dii said ur writing skills r getting good day by day bhai

lovedd both these updates


Edited by aishu3003 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
fabulous update...😳
khushi came finally but not face to face...
Loved dat part wen arnav felt her pain
and played d piano...dat ws so touching nd beauiful...
such a painful story... horror bhi😭😭
but lovely update...
nw he drifted back to 1893..
interesting and awesm...brilliantly written 👏mohitaa😆😆
nw he will be able to listen shyams plotting...😲
loved it...
hugss🤗
grt job👍🏼

OMG!!! D song perfectly suit dammit😃
amazingwa😉😃

Edited by flutterlashes - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
res for Togepi aka Shuchi !!!!!!!!!!! 😳

Unres by my Behna ❤️
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M here to editwa !!
Aaj mera comment do do posts mein hoga

Credits to my darlings Chiko n Blossom !!!

Love the strange connect that Arnav felt towards Khushi

Shyamu pushed him out...😡 How dare he ??

He raped Khushi
He met Khushi's soul
120 years
N that Beggar Woman again

Even I m confused now

Why cant Shyamu's spirit kill Arnav ??

Scroll Down for my rest of the comment 😆

Edited by CrazyDollAnandi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
mq

PB tujhe pta hai 😆
jab maine dekha k tune music add kiya hai to was like this ---->

Then dheere dheere i pressed the play button


Then it turned out out be

Woww

Sun PB I want the name of the song plss

Plss Plss Plsss

Agar tune mujhe nhi bataya

toh I'll spam ur threadwa

So temme ASAP

The song described their feelings so well

N yeah an awesome update

Jaldi bataio song ka namewa

N update soonwa



Edited by aishu3003 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
lol 😆

besharam angel,u r toh simply d best..! 😉

u got me d 1st post 🤣
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ara_000

lol 😆

besharam angel,u r toh simply d best..! 😉

u got me d 1st post 🤣


Of course I am the best 😳
mere study ka band baja diya tumne 😡 😕 😆

@Petal tht was for Ara apu only, tinkerbell is ara apu 😳

chalo me going to study again 🤢
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: CrazyDollAnandi


Of course I am the best 😳
mere study ka band baja diya tumne 😡 😕 😆

@Petal tht was for Ara apu only, tinkerbell is ara apu 😳

chalo me going to study again 🤢

go and study hav fun😆😉

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