TAREY- FRIENDSHIP 2 RELATIONSHIP (update prt 20) - Page 88

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sonakshigupta

Hahahahahaha...nyc update :)

thank you!!! 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update yaar...
sweetu update soon and pm me dear...
sorry 4 the short comment...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: QTPie99

awesome update yaar...
sweetu update soon and pm me dear...
sorry 4 the short comment...

thanks... i'll update soon... n will pm also... n its k!!... 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

😉Chapter 18😉

Rey: bt-wat kuch nai...abhi we need u!! Plz taani!

Taani: sorry i cant!!

Rey: but y?!

Taani: cz...

Rey: cz kya?!

Taani: cz mai apane bhai k sath dance nai kar sakti na!!

Rey (laughing): itani si baat?!!

Taani (angry): ye itani si baat hai?!

Rey: ha cz tumahe swayam k nai mere dance karane waali ho! (laughs more wid a broad smile)

Taani: kya?!!...

Rey (dreamingly): ha ...mai tum.. tum mai...

Rohan (cuts): abbe aage toh bol!!!

Rey (coming back frm dreamland): ha ha matlab hum dono dance karange!!

Taani (a blush crept on her face): sacchi?!!

Rey (looks dis n smiles): ha sacchi!!

Rohan: so guys ye fix raha!!ok na taani?!

Taani: yeah k!!

Rinni: gr8!! So u guys abhi se rehalrsals start kar do.. k?!

Taarey: ohk! Bye guys!

(further part is specially dedicated 2 my mohobbat (riyatarey)... as it was her wish 2 c TR romance!! )

(taarey in d rehearsals hall... wer practising dance... wen a step came wer rey have 2 lift taani so close 2 him...he lifted her!!n got lost in her!!... as d music was turned into romantic frm a rocking song!! Dey both wer so lost!!... rey puts her down slowly n holds her by her waist... looking directly into her eyes wid so much love!!... der was a pinkish shade of blush on her face... she looks down shyly ... but rey makes her 2 look in his eyes by holding her chin!!... den rey looking in her brown pure eyes... he cant ctrl his desires n he just kissed her cheek ... n taani blushes hard!!... like dis he kissed her another cheek!! She blushed even harder!!... den rey looked at her lips n went near her lips!!... taani closed her eyes waiting 4 his lips 2 touch hers!!... but instead of kissing her he went 2 her ear n speaks slowly "rehearsals karane ka irada nai hai kya"... listening dis taani opens her eyes in shock... tht wat just happen... n remembering tht she blushed soo much!!... n looks at rey frm her corner of her eyes!!...rey was smiling at her!!... den 2 make situation comfortable 4 her he said...)

Rey: rehearsals kare?!!

Taani (still in her thoughts): kya?!

Rey (little louder): rehearsals kare?!

Taani (again didn't listened): kya?!

Rey (smirks... goes near her ear... whisper slowly while touching his lips wid her ear n asks ... "rehearsals kare")

Taani (coming back 2 d real world): ha ha chalo!!

Rey (smiles): ok!

(dey both again start rehearsals)

-----RIYA'S PLACE-----

(swayam n riya wer sitting chit-chatting wen suddenly riya got a call frm rohan)

Riya (n phone): hey rohan!!... kya hua?!!... taani mann gai na?!!...

Rohan: umm...wo...

Riya: bol na idiot!!

Rohan: nai wo...

Riya (cuts): NAI MAANI!!?? (swayam catches cell frm her hand n puts it on speaker!)

Swayam: dude wo sachame nai maani?!

Rohan: nai wo...

Riya (again cuts): shits man ab kya!?!... ab kya karange ha?!!... nai manni freak!!

Rohan: arre yaar 1 baar...

Swayam (dis time he cuts): kya 1 baar ha?!... ab kya karange?!

Rohan (angry): SHUT UP BOTH OF U!... muje toh bolane do!!!!!

Riyam: oops.. sorry bol!!

Rohan: wo mann gai hai... n right nw dey both r rehearsing!!

Riyam: WAT!!!

Rohan: chilao mat!! -_-

Riyam: sorry!

Riya: abbe idiot pehale nai bata sakta tha ki wo mann gai hai?!

Rohan: tum dono ne bolane ka time diya tha?! -_-

Riya: wo...sorry!!

Rohan: its k!... acha ab i have 2 go!! Byee!!

Riyam: bye!!

(dey hung up!!)

Riya: swayam tu bhi colg ja! sharon se mil le!

Swayam: ussase baad mai mil lunga!... abhi agar tuje akela chodke gaya na toh rey meri jaan le lega!!...

Riya: swayam kuch nai hoga jaa na mil Sharon se... bichari miss kar rahi hogi tuje! (winks at him)

Swayam (blushes little): ha wo...

Riya: oh my my... my best frnd is blushing ha?!

Swayam: riya shut up!

Riya: ok ok... but ab tu jaa!

Swayam: thik hai chal bye! (hugs her)

Riya (hugging back): bye!

Swayam (while gng): btw acting achi kar leti hai tu! (winks)

Riya (shocked): mat...matlab..kya...kya hai te...tera?!

Swayam: kuch nai bye!!(goes)

Riya (2 herself): ye kya tha?!!... kahi swayam ko kuch pata toh... nai nai aaisa kaise ho sakta hai?! Meri acting itani bhi kharab nai hai ki swayam ko kuch bhi pata chale! Den wo baat kis baare mai kar raha tha?! I hope wo sirf mazak kar raha tha!

-----COLG-----

(taarey ends wid rehearsals...)

Rey: u r really a gr8 dancer!

Taani: thanks!

Rey: so lets change! den canteen mai milte hai k?!

Taani: k bye!.. waise 1 baar riya ko call kar lena pls!

Rey: kyu?!

Taani: wo uska leg...

Rey: ha den tum hi kar lo na!

Taani: nai wo mujase thik se baat nai kar payegi!

Rey: kyu?!

Taani: wo.. i guess she will b guilty as ussane mujase rudely baat ki so...

Rey: no... tum hi call karo mai nai karane wala!

Taani: par rey mai kaise!?... i mean i don't want ki wo guilty feel kare!!

Rey: toh rehane do as mai call nai karan waala! (saying dis he walks away)

Taani (2 herself): ab mai kya karu?!... agar call nai karungi toh tensed rahungi... n agar call kar diya toh wo guilty feel karegi!! (her 1 hand was on her hip n other on her chin n was looking so cute!)

Rey (was hiding out side 2 RH): (thinks) she is damn cute man!

(here on d other side swayam nters d colg n went 2 rehearsals hall 2 c if dey r rehearsing properly or not!... he went near n sees tht rey is watching taani...got angry goes near him n taps his shoulder)

(rey was so busy in looking at her tht he just jerk off swayam's hand not knowing tht it was taani's possessive bro!)

(swayam again taps his shoulder but he again jerks off!... den swayam slowly says "wat u doing dude"... rey answered lost in taani "dikh nai raha looking at taani"...)

Swayam (full angry): kyu be saale?!!... meri behen ko kyu dekh raha hai?!

Rey (coming back on d earth): swayam tu...tu yaha?!

Swayam: wo sab chod ye bata tu meri behen ko aaise kyu dekh raha tha ha?!

Rey: ha wo...umm...cz wo...

(den nly taani comes out of RH n asks)

Taani: hey wat u guys doing here?!

Rey (widout thinking): taani u r so lucky 4 me!!

Taani: kya?!

Rey: umm... i mean ha i mean k tumane end time pe hum sabko baccha liya na so u r so lucky 4 us!!...

Taani: oh... thanks!!...

Swayam: guys ab chalo jaldi se tum dono change karke aao den hum aaj sham ka kuch decide karte hai! K!?... n rey tu muje locker room mai mil!

Rey (scared): loc..locker room mai...ky...kyu?!

Swayam (serious tone): kuch kaam hai!

Rey: ha...k! ch...chal!

(reyam goes 2 boys locker room... n taani went 2 gals locker room!!)

-----BOY'S LOCKER ROOM-----

(rey was trying 2 run away frm swayam but swayam was smart enough 22 stop him so he said...)

Swayam: rey ruk toh tujase kuch kaam hai!!

Rey (again trying 2 run away): ha wo mai abhi aata hu na... (but swayam pulls him n makes him sit besides him!)

Swayam: arre baith na!!...

Rey: ha...ha umm... bol!

Swayam: ye bata ki aaj ki rehearsals kaisi rahi?!

Rey (remembering wat was happened): bohot achi!

Swayam: itani kya achi thi?!

Rey (lost): ha wo taani k sath...

Swayam (angry n serious tone): taani k sath kya ha?!

Rey (back 2 his sense): ha wo... taani k sath it was fun n even easy as she is a gr8 dancer!

Swayam: ha k!... btw aaj k dance mai tum dono rock karane waale ho!

Rey: yeah i know!

Swayam: dude u k na?!

Rey (he was really happy as swayam ko koi doubt nai hua n also exited cz of der dance): yeah m totally fine!! (wid a broad smile)

Swayam: really rey?!!.. i mean waha riya ko chot lagi hai n tu thik hai?!... its really wired!!

Rey (happily forgetting everything): re usse sach mai kaha chot lagi hai!!

Swayam: WAT!!??

Rey: nai ... i mean umm... i mean ki... wo...

So here i end wid dis chap!!... i know thoda short tha but dis time clala lena plss!!...

PRECAP:-

(taarey dance finally)

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Taani (totally shocked): rey aapko pata chal gaya tha!!?

Rey: ha!

Taani: den apane muje kyu nai bataya?!

Rey: cz...

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(taani kisses rey's cheek)

Taani (blushing): thank u!

Rey (kisses back n smiles): u r welcome!

Edited by tarey_forever - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
waah waah mein first yipee...
coming to update... thnxx to adding tr part...
loved rey dialogue btw dance rehersals "dance krne ka irada.."🤣
hehe riya teasing swym hehehe
n last scene lolzz
by precap main rey ko kya pta chal gya ??
n again thxx ishq fr a spectacular update muaah!!
update soon ...
Edited by riyataarey - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update
taarey part was superb
interesting precap
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: riyataarey

waah waah mein first yipee...
coming to update... thnxx to adding tr part...
loved rey dialogue btw dance rehersals "dance krne ka irada.."🤣
hehe riya teasing swym hehehe
n last scene lolzz
by precap main rey ko kya pta chal gya ??
n again thxx ishq fr a spectacular update muaah!!
update soon ...

thanks a lot mohobbatt!!! muuahh!!will try 2 update soon!!! 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: taarey_vrimar

Awesome update
taarey part was superb
interesting precap
update soon

thankss!!... will update soon!! 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Taarey romance was super cute
Taani blushing was sweet
Aww Rey lost in his Taani and possessive bhai interrupt him was funny
Superb update
Recap is very exciting
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Natasha.

Taarey romance was super cute
Taani blushing was sweet
Aww Rey lost in his Taani and possessive bhai interrupt him was funny
Superb update
Recap is very exciting

thanks dear!! 😳
Edited by tarey_forever - 12 years ago

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