From The Dark-Part 1-page 2

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Our deepest fear is not that we are inadequate. Our deepest fear is that we are powerful beyond measure. It is our light, not our darkness, that frightens us most.

The White Room

Case Description:

Gender: Male

Background : Indian American

Hair : Black

Eyes :Black

Age :26

Height : 6'1

"Okay so what this ones case number going to be?"

"Case number, doesn't he have a name we can just use?"

"No, he's got full on memory loss, doesn't remember anything about himself or his past life."

"Great, wont that be fun…why do we need him anyway?"

"Ask the Boss, I just work here."

"So, Dr. Sharma…he's your case and this is your specialty. What do you think we should name him?"

Dr. Kripa Sharma, was the physiatrist hired to help the patients. No one knew much about her, expect that she's been working for The Northshore Hospital Company for a very long time. She was very closely related to the Boss. Dr. Sharma looked the patient from behind the tinted window and replied to the two men. "He's case number 114714".

The bright lights in the white room flashed as Dr. Sharma walked in, closing the door shut silently behind her. Her patients was waiting for a very long time. He had been found about a month ago by the shore of Jones Beach. He'd lost all memory about his past life and of himself. The company brought in their most professional and best physiatrist :her: Dr. Sharma: Kripa Sharma.

"Good Morning", she said steadily taking her seat in front of him

Case 11417 looked up at her, and then at the heavy lights shining above them. There was a faint smile of his face, or perhaps a frown. It was hard to tell. Dr. Sharma had been the first other human besides himself in the mirror that he had seen…or remembers to have seen. It might have been a condolence to know he wasn't the only creature in this planet who had skin, someone else like him, that he wasn't alone. Or maybe it was fear, that there was someone else like him, that he wasn't alone. But then again…what did case 11417 know about the planet anyway…his planet was simply this white room that just seemed so dark to him.

Yes, I know. I didnt want to start this right now either. Very bad timing considering I have Mid-Terms and two other fan-fics on at the moment and a life. Well Kuch Pal Ka Saath is a no brainer, I know it from begining to end off the bat. Restless Heart of the other hand is shaky. And so...I'm starting From the Dark. From what I know, Restless Haert is up to its what...10th or 11th part? Well...I'll see this fan-fic until its 11th part. If I think I can write this one better, then I continue with this one and bring a very fast ending to Restless Heart. If I think this isnt doing to well, I'll figure something out...😆

I'll put a poll up after the 11th part. Which ever gets more votes will be the one a continue....for now.

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Karishma

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Posted: 18 years ago
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sounds completely awesome karishma!! really looking forward to it!! and i really love all ure ffs and when u put up that poll it will really be hard to choose, im pretty sure!! continue soon 😛 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Kewl Sounds Wonderful!!!! 😳 👏
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hmm lol i was gonna say before i saw this ff that continue restless heart lol!! this one seems cool!! i hope u do restless heart soon cuz i really like that one!! lol so u already planned out what will happen for kuch pal ka saath! whoa i just never really paid attention to the title of kuch pal ka saath- gotta tell ya it really makes sense, as far as the story is concerned rite now lol hopefully its predicting the relationship of ved and angad too ::Cough::cough:: lol continue soon!
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oh by the way nice qoute!! really goes with the story!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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great intro can't wait for the part
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sounds great!!! cant wait to read it..
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Posted: 18 years ago
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very unique and interesting. continue when u can karishma. good luck with ur mid-terms
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"So, how are you feeling", Dr. Sharma asked filling out some documents. Case 114714 stared at her blankly mainly concentrating on her nails. Dr. Sharma nails were perfectly shaped and painted with pink nail polish. He looked at his own nails and then back at Dr. Sharma's. They looked very different. His were pale and her's pink. Maybe they werent the same kind after all. As he kept repeating this process,but he didn't notice that Dr. Sharma was recording each and every move of his.

"You never answered me, how are you feeling?", she asked again. Case 114714 looked around and then at Dr. Sharma, "I don't know how to answer that", he said. "Well, are you feeling good, or bad?, she explained.

He looked at his hands and thought for a minute and asked, "How do I know if I'm feeling good or not"?

"Does your head hurt, do you feel weak, dizzy…any uneasiness?", she asked.

"No", he replied

"Well then, you feel fine", Dr. Sharma assured him.

" I'm Dr. Sharma, but you can call me Kripa", Dr. Sharma said as she stuck her hand out for a hand shake. Case 114714 looked at her hand and took it in his and kissed it. This gesture startled Dr. Sharma for a second, but she quickly went back to normal and smiled. "Well that was...sweet", she said. "What is my name?", case 114174 asked. Dr. Sharma stood up and went to him, and knelt down in front of his, "Well that's why I'm here, to help you remember what your name is, where you came from, who you are", she said slightly patted his thigh.

"You will get my memory back", he asked still unsure of whether he should trust Dr. Sharma or not.

"No", relied Dr. Sharma. "I wont get your memory back, I'm merely a guide to help you, you will get your memory back", she added.

Dr. Sharma noticed the patient being alert of her every move, her first mission had to be to make him trust her…blindly.

Case 114714 asked another question after a 5 minute pause of silence, "Can you make the voices go away"?

Dr. Sharma looked at him with curiosity, "What voices?"

"The voices that tell me…", he said.

"Tell you what", Dr. Sharma asked anxiously. "I don't know", replied case 114714 blankly. Dr. Sharma took a breath and looked at her patient, "There are no voices. From now on, all the voices in her mind will become silence. From now on, there will only be one voice…your voice.

"Will you save me", he asked. Dr. Sharma was surprised at all the questions he was asking in their very first meeting. "Save you from what", she asked.

"From the Dark", he answered will his eye's blood shot red.

To Be Continued...

Karishma
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Posted: 18 years ago
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WOW, that was AWESUM!!!!!!!!! 👏 👏
i cant explain how i feel about it, it is 22222 GOOD!!!!!!! 👏 👏
i kinda feel sorry for Case 114714!!! 😭
continue soon!!!!! 😃

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