MY IRRESISTIBLE WARRIOR part 5 pg 79 on 3/10/2013

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HI GUYS,

ME AGAIN WITH MY NEW OS ON ''MAANEET''😊

THIS OS IS BASED ON AN EPIC THEAM. I HOPE YOU LIKE IT TOO
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MY IRRESISTIBLE WARRIOR


PART - 1


ARYA NAGAR, A VERY LARGE AND POWERFUL KINGDOM.
Arya Nagar is a city of prosparity and power. Every men is there is a warrior of the king. People blindly trust on their King,who himself was a great warrior. He had numerous queens and daughters,who obeyed him faithfully. No one ever had a courage to disobyed his any order. His words are last for everyone,no matters if it is a queen or an ordinary man. King Suryebhan is very wild and fancier by nature.

Thats why he made a rule to punish his accuses in strange way. He put the culprits in a cage of tiger and whole ppl will enjoy the sight of blood game. As long the culprit survive, people will enjoy his efforts and shreaks of him when he wounded by the wild beast. In this way Suryebhan hit two targets at once. He satisfied his hobby with giving punishment to culprit. People scared of him,so everyone trying not to make him angry in any way. He had a largest army force which alwys ready to destory any Kindom on his one signal. His all army forces are command by his chief commander Maan Singh,after him. He is the best warrior among all he had. Fast like a panther, cunning like a fox. Calm like a monk, and brave like a lion. No on this earth is born who can compete him in any way. He relayed on him completely. Maan always stand bowed head in front of him. He never made an eye contact even to his king. That is the thing most liked by Suryebhan. He known Maan kills anyone blindly on his one command. Maan is like a key toy to him. He never raise his voice in front of him. Suryebhan is God to him,because King himself saved him of being becoming a fest to tigers, when he is a very small kid. No one knows about his parents,but Sureyabhan impressed by his brave nature. Being trapped in a bunch of tigers,he wont cry like other small kids do of his age. Despite he is trying to hit them with a small stick he had in his hands. On that day Suryebhan predict the qualities of him and saved him. He send him to Gurukul to learn fighting styles and when that fragile kid turned into a muscular fighter,he appoint him as his chief commander.


Maan is one who not only a toned and musclar greek body but having sharp edged face with very attractive features. He looks like a prince only. His dark denced eyes having very hidden feelings of him which he never shows to anyone. His sculptured lips was qiute naturaly a desire of any girl but from that he only do his King's praise. He is very faithful to him until he met with princess Geetakshi.


Geetakshi,King's youngest daughter and an epitome of beauty. She was as much beautiful that even her own sibblings were felt jelous of her. She is so fragile and deligate like a flower. Her sleek waist,creamy smooth skin,long dence hairs,almond eyes,petite structue,rose petal lips and chimming voice,are quite enough to made anyone crazy for her.


Though no man is allowed to see King's daughters,but one fate ful day destiney brings Maan and Geetakshi face to face. Suryebhan made very hard rules to protect his 5 daughters from all eyes of the world,thats why all security guards of them are women. On his order many girls got trained to become an security guards of his daughters. Thats why till date no man is able to see them. But Geetakshi is an exceptional case. She love breaking bounderies made by her father. She wants to live life on her own way. She wats to breath in fresh air,wants to rejoice life every small momnet under open sky. She loves rain,lakes, sky, chimming of birds,flowers and old ruined places. Thats why she usualy made an escape in disguise of a servant and enjoyed alot. Less anyone aware of her mischiefs. She felt suffocated in cage of palace where her father imposed so many rules and regulations. He never allowed them to go out sply Geetakshi. She was very curious to know about the world outside but Suryebhan absturct her way. She get fed up with all this and decided to break his rules now. Her servant cum friends was scared so much but on her request they melts and help her going outside of the castel.



One day when she was went to jungle to grab some relax momnets with her friends,Maan also entred in the jungle. He got some news about enemy's activities. To make sure confirm this news he ride his horse towards Jungle. He ride very fastly,when Geetakshi's giggle sound struk him. He stopped his horse and moved in the direction of sound coming. All girls were taking bath in a beautiful cascade. They were playing and sprinkling water oneach other. Unaware of his presence Geetakshi threw a splash which sprinkled his face and he cleshed his eyes for a sec. The next he saw a drenched nude epitomeof beauty in front of him. All girls saw him and made an escape but before she too ran Maan entred in water and grabbed her in a swift moment.



PLS TELL ME GUYS HOWZ THE 1ST PART😉
Edited by richa_kapoor - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Congrats on your new os

Wow I loved how maan saw geet the first time, it is so cute and romantic.

Hate the king though he is so cunning and evil. Hope Maaneet unite

Continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Omg another historic story
I just love those
No problem really they are my favourites
Just loved your demons angel and now this
She is naughty our best
And hero is king right hand man
But he isn't supposed to see the princess
Well too late right
Haiyye both shall be flat on one another for sure
Can't wait for more
But worried about the king he is dangerous
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Lovely start waiting 4 next
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Great start richa. M liking it luking for this particular OS...

In last part u made ur cliff hunger girl plz updt nxt 1 soon becoz wan to knw how geetakashi will react on this
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Posted: 11 years ago
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amazing start yaar...cant wait for next update..pls cont soon..
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congrats for the new story dear
its interesting
king is so cruel 😡😡😡
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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NEW OS ON OUR MAANEET
THANK U DR


KING IS SO CUNNING

HE TREATS MAAN AS A TOY

MAAN IS ALSO VERY LOYAL TO HIM

MAAN SAW GEETAKSHI

HOPE THEY UNITE SOON

WAITING 4 D NEXT

UD SOON


Edited by MISHAGOYAL - 11 years ago

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