MY IRRESISTIBLE WARRIOR part 5 pg 79 on 3/10/2013 - Page 10

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Posted: 11 years ago
#91
Good one, do continue soon
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waiting for the next update
update soon!!!!!!!!
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congrats
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zabardast start richu.prince ne dekha princess ko.ahem ahem.
Sry 4 both late nd short coment as m so busy yaar
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MY IRRESISTIBLE WARRIOR

PART - 2

MAAN clamped Geetakshi by her sleek waist and made her numb. It was the first time she come as much closer to any man. Except her father,she never saw a man,sply like Maan who look like a greek god. His perfect apetite and sharp features made her breath halted. He pressed her to his torso and her naked form rubbed against his bare chest. A silent groan escaped from his mouth.

SWEET LIKE A HONEY,
SOUR LIKE A LEMON,
SHE IS A PERFECT MIXTURE OF ONE,
LITTLE NAUGHTY, LITTLE CALM,
LOST IN HER DREAMY CHARM,
HER SMALL DREAMS LIKE A DEWDROP,
EASILY FORM, EASILY ENDS,
WHAT HE IS SHE DONT KNOW
A DREAM OR REALITY,
BUT LITTLE SHE KNOW HE STOLEN HER VIRGINITY,
ONLY WITH HIS MERE GAZE.
PURE SHE IS AS A ROSE BUD,
BEAUTIFUL AND DELICATE...
MASHED UP IN HIS FORBIDDEN DESIRE.


It was the first time that a man touched her like this. Her body reacts unbelievably. Though she scared of him,dont know what he is up to. Everything is unexpected. His fingers were now moving to her back and pulled her more to him,leaving no space between them. His warm breath was caressing her cold skin and she shivered like a dry leaf. Maan is so strong like a wild wind who had a power to waved her with him. She opened her mouth to say something but her throat felt dry and her lips wouldnt move. Her voice died inside her. His eyes were pouring so much right over her that she felt like melting under him.

On the other hands Maan himself wonder what he is doing and why. Why he is so mesmerised with this strange girl? But the attraction was so strong that he cant denied. She tempted him beyond imagination. His heart thumping so strongly beneath her cotton soft palm resting on his chest.

A ray of hope,
that I've never seen before.
A ray of hope,
it's what I've been looking for.
A ray of hope,
telling me to glow.
A ray of hope,
ready to gloat.
A ray of hope,
and not knowing what to do.
A ray of hope,
coming at the right time.
A ray of hope,
seeing for the first time.
A ray of hope,
coming from a far.
A ray of hope,
that I've never seen before


She was like a bright shine to him,which he want to engulf throughly. He held her and slammed his lips on her
He was always a wild in his manner so he is there to. This searing passion was new for him and it was at its peak now. Her body also respond shamelessly. He can feel her taut peaks stroking against his tips because of her wriggling moments. The desire and passion scared her. After taking the pleasure of her mouth he start placing untamed kisses on her neck. Geetakshi clenched her eyes and palm that her own nails teared off her soft skin. His passion is not bearable for her delicate body. He felt her going limp. She had fainted on him. Maan felt uneasyness seeing her like this as he dont expected this very moment running between them. Maan carried her in his arms and come out from the water.

Though her maids well hell scared with his presence but now he is taking away her and if they wont intrupet the sit going worst. One of her maid stopped him and pleads to leave her.

'senapati ji kripa kar k humari sakhi ko mat le jaiye.',she was not sure of anything still she pleads in a whimpring voice.

Maan struck heraing her plead. He glanced her one more time. Geetakshi was perfectly snuggled inside his hard frame. He felt as he is carrying a delicate flower which is grown for him only. His eyes kept staring her only with so much intensity. When he didnt replied back one more came and start pleading in a meak voice. They know Maan didnt know to whom he is carrying,but what if he find the truth? Geetakshi was in big trouble for sure. Their continous pleading forced him to leave her there with her friends.

He move ahead,followed by all of her maids,who wants her back at any cost. Maan placed her under tree shed and raised his hands towards her friends,signaled them for clothes. One of her maid gave her long scarf to him. Maan covered her with that and step ahead. Few steps and he stopped again. He slanted his neck to view her angelic face again.

'dhyan se le jana ise.',he instruct them all. His heart is paining with unknown fear. He feels to protect her from everything but situation wont allowed him as he have to inspect the jungle bounderies for the safety sake. He leave her there an moved heavy hearted.

Her maids quickly made her wear clothes and trying to bring back her concious. Somehow they managed and Geetakshi woke up with a lurch. She was still shivering scaredly,feeling his touch on her body. Her dark hazled scanning whole place around her.

'shant ho jaiye rajkumari ji wo chale gaye hai.',one of her maid assured her that he left from here.

She sighed and asked about him.' radha wo kon tha?',her lips droodled.

'rajkumariji wo senapatiji the.',she confirmed her.
Now Geetakshi was feared more what if he tell her father about her activities. Her cold hands turn more cold. Her maid read her mind and composed her.

'chinta mat keejiye unhe nahi pata ki aap kon hai. Kintu jaldi keejiye isse pehle ki mehal me kisi ko pata chale ki aap waha nahi hai.',she alerts her and all supports her limp body. They all made a way to castle quickly before any one knows about them.

Maan investigate the matter near bounderies secreatly and yes the information was right. Some rebellions were uprising. He quickly informed Suryebhan about this mutiny.

Suryebhan fumed and ordered Maan to sabotage all the rebellions. Maan bowed and took his army force to oppressed them. For next 7 days he was on battle field fighting against the enemies. It was not new for him. He was born to be there but for the first time he wont able to sleep in peace. Her thought tormenting him his body was there but his mind,soul and heart lies with her only. His eyes thrusting for her one glimpse only. There in unpleasurable sight of blood pool,her feel bounced his heart rejoyfuly. His force was even shocked seeing him smiling in alone. Otherwise they are the spectators of his bravery and red shot eyes only. They never imagined in their dreams that he also know how to smile.

In the Palace Geetakshi's behaviour changed devastfuly. Her maids cum friends wont understand what's wrong going with her. The girl who is full of life and naughtyness,can sit idle lost in her own thoughts for the whole day. The day she had a encounter with him,changer her throughly. Now neither she smile nor she do mischiefs like before. She lost herself. Her eyes always reflects her restlessness. Something bothering her so much which she cant able to understand. She herself wants to know why she cant able to live her life like before. The sensation of his lips was still there. She can feels him. Her dreams now start scaring her. No matters she was awake or slept. Her eyes only saw his face everywhere and she hates this feeling which stole her from herself. One of her close maid got some hint through her behaviour but she wants to make it sure. In order to confirm it she went to her when she was so much lost in her thoughts. She whispere Maan's name in front of her and Geetakshi's all sence start working again. A strange spark come to her eyes. Prityusha now confirmed whats going on with her and she get worried thinking about the consequences of this developing emotions in Geetakshi. She left and Geetakshi too questioned her why she get so excited hearing his name only.

7 days passed and Maan won the battle as usual. Arresting all the culprits he moved back to Aryanagar. Suryebhan's chest widned again. He praised him and gave him rest for two week. He also organised a party to celebrate his win,where all the pawn and their family members are come and enjoyed alot except Maan. In this huge mob he was all alone. He had no one his own with whom he share his happiness and sorrows.

When Geetakshi came to know about his win,her longing of seeing him again rosed. Prityusha understand her condition and told her about the party. Geetakshi insist her maids to go there. As usual they all bowed in front of her and made a way to go. Geetakshi covered her face. Only her eyes are visible. She is peeping inside the a large hall where party is going on. Her maids entered inside and left her alone. She walks blindly,having no clue where to go,when one strong pull grabbed her. Next she found her lands on a rock hard chest,before she realize what's going on.

PRECAP:-SHE DROPPED HER ROBE IN FRONT OF HIM,OFFERING HERSELF TO HIM.
Edited by richa_kapoor - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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amazing ud dr
both maan nd geetakshi r geting atracting towards each other nd frst meting mein he kiss
geet nw hm bt maan doesnt knw hr
hope jald pata chal jaye maan ko geet,s maid knw abt hr feling nd feared d consequences
maan won battle nd geet wnts to see hm
party is held 4 wining d batle
nd maan is al alone in d huge crowd
geet wnt to d party nd sumone caught hr
hope it ws maan
precp is intresting
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Posted: 11 years ago
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update attraction increasing distance increasing it 10 folds



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Posted: 11 years ago
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too good
aag dono taraf baraber ki hai

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Posted: 11 years ago
#99
Wow very nice update...tis story is somethng different from all other maaneet story...realy waiting to read the next chaptr plsss update as soon as possible
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Posted: 11 years ago
haila ek meeting mein itna kuch ho gaya]
and dont ya just love that
they both are craving for the other one look
and yet they didnt know who the other was
had he known would he do what he did
hell no he wouldnt
but he has and he will
he will know the truth of the matter before or after i dont know
that is if anything hapens
awww he just didbt wanna leave her at all
didnt want to separate her from himself but had to
as he had some duties to perform
but still she was in his thoughts
and same was her condition
after their kiss and this encounter sure changed them
but how will this change affect them god only knows
what beautiful lines you wrote though
their feelings put so elegantly right
cant wait for more now

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