Angels Be Thy Devil's Prey

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Posted: 12 years ago
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I am not a writer!

This is my first writing piece (more like a disaster)

Honestly, I have no idea what the hell this is.. I wanted it to be an os, but it looks more like a poem. If I get a good response than I might as well convert it into a fanfiction. (who am I kidding?) 😆

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He was cruel, sadistic and heartless,

Head of utter madness and possessiveness.

Devil.

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She was the epitome of beauty,

With her heart on the sleeves and sweet smile flirting with lips.

Angel.

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He wanted to have her at any cost,

She wanted his head at her feet, which seemed like a lost cause to her folks.

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He admired her beauty and bravery,

She was disgusted by his wary sight and his cruel deed.

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She was his dream,

He was her worst nightmare.

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His lust roared and conquered her mother land,

Her heart wept when she heard his demand,

He didn't budge until she gave away her self respect to protect her mother land,

They compromised in the name of marriage.

The curse was served.

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She refused to lose hope and fought back like a warrior princess,

It was fight against helplessness.

Little one is courageous, murmured cruel monster in darkness, eyes amused.

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He said he didn't have a heart,

Then why does it threaten to come out of his chest whenever she is around?

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He didn't have a heart he tried to assure himself.

But, when his smoldering black eyes met the angry brown ones it started beating loudly itself.

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Follow your heart, her imaginary reflection declared,

He knew he was gone for good..

Thus, he stopped fighting and embraced the foreign feelings.

He vowed to himself that he will make her his.

Body, mind and soul.

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She said he could have her body, but not her soul.

He had her body, but craved for more.

Angel and devil.

Love and hatred.

Can they coexist?

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Cause you can't have one without the other.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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I like 😊 .. Atleast it made much more sense than the ones normally posted! ( c'mon not like most of you don't think the same..)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome !
You actually wrote it yourself ? 😲
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: lovebull

I like 😊 .. Atleast it made much more sense than the ones normally posted! ( c'mon not like most of you don't think the same..)



Frankly, I thought that my post was immature and waste of time.

But, your comment was a boost to my self confidence.

Thank you :) !
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: LuvMishalRaheja

Awesome !

You actually wrote it yourself ? 😲



Yes, I did. 😕

I wrote this all down in less than fifteen minutes.
🤔
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Brilliantly written...awesome...👏👏👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Ah, lovely. I love the title by the by. 😊
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Originally posted by: Super Kool

Brilliantly written...awesome...👏👏👏



Thank you!

I'm glowing in pride. 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I am glad you liked it. 😊
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Originally posted by: Stargirl06

Ah, lovely. I love the title by the by. 😊



Thank you :) !

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