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Posted: 19 years ago
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Hi all, I've got another few lines which I wrote not long ago... Their purpose is unknown, but perhaps they can serve to illustrate the development of Shiv's attraction towards his beloved wife... Whether the man realizes it or not, theres no doubt Shiv Kapoor is madly in love with Gauri... Today's epi only confirmed this!!

About my ff, before someone brings out their dandas, I'm working on it. This week and weekend has been and is going to be busy (did that even make any sense... Oh God help me!😕)... Sorry for the massive delay, I realize I'm putting you guys through a major test of patience and I sincerly apologise. Pls bear with me for this week and next week hopefully things will get better. After this, the next update will most likely be up on Friday. Sorry. But I'm updating later today! And so even though I may not be visibly active very often this week, do know that I'm keeping a faithful eye out on you guys!!😆

"Soulmate" (love)

Aye ajnabee khare darwaaze par,
Darwaaze ko chod... Dil pe dastak di hai tune.
Aye dost saath chalte haath pakar,
Haath ko chod... Rooh ko chooah hai tune.
Aye humsafar kwabon mein roz aane wale,
Kwabon ko chod, zindagi ko jeena sikhaya hai tune.

Translation:

Oh stranger standing at the doorway,
Forget the door, you've stepped at my heart's entrance.
Oh friend walking together hand-in-hand,
Forget the hand, you've touched my soul.
Oh companion ever-present in my dreams,
Forget the dreams, you've taught my life how to live.

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Posted: 19 years ago
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DC,

Babe, I loved the essence of the waiting for a stranger... I had penned a little vignette a while ago.. on the similar essence... and it reminded me so fondly of that feeling!

Gosh, girl at this young age , you have an amazing depth and perception of emotions!! Stay this way and keep penning!!! 😊 Always, Dil se..!!!

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Posted: 19 years ago
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👏 👏 Mashallah.. Nazar na lagai meri neetu ko.. Mind-blowing sweetie, simply mind-blowing. I often feel helpless in front of yours and Sareeta's amazing cognitive and perceptual skills. God help me!!

Sana~
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Posted: 19 years ago
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kya baat hai! its beautiful
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Posted: 19 years ago
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dc....what do i say ?? u have multiple careers now...if ur publishing a book..let me handle ur PR...😃...
haath ko chod...rooh ko chooah hai tune...

well u've made an impact on my soul..i'll never forget this line..
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Posted: 19 years ago
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beautiful nitu... 😊

the first one was just great and this one fantastic.. 👏 👏 👏

keep writing as its a pleasure reading them...

keep it up nitu and these for you... 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Hey DC,Just read the poem and agree how perfectly suitable it is for Gauri,Omg the sweet feeling of love, it is extraordinary, r u sure ur only in love with KAA and not in love otherwise. 😆 hehe, just joking girl, I hope u keep writing such good stuff and I keep reading ans copying, wooops, no-n--no copying. I may add couple of lines in my FF someday if the creator doesn't kick up the havoc re copyrights, 😆 😆 , say what. love every bit u write.
Edited by Iqbaladdict - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Hai Ram mein toh Faint, really good! I lub it. 😳 😳 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
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oyehoye dc kya baat hai.... 👏 👏 👏 that was sooooo touching nd beautifull.....MASHALLAH...wht else can i say....i just luved the last 2 lines......

aye humsafar khwabon mai roz aaney waaley..
khwabon ko chor, zindaki ko jeena sikhaya hai tune...

i just luved it n also it fits very well wid shiv's current state of mind....esp. the last line.....

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