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Originally posted by: MSmyworldMS
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Emotions well described
situations description AWESOME
Characterization fabulous
I am Super Glad reading it
part one loved the title 👏👏👏
Last min editing :P
Gunjan's entry ek dum princess type. and you described it so so well. from her Dream to she left home. her relationship with her baba is very nice. ohho bad past opss poor girl I can understand her feelings.
She is Princess😎n her past needs time to come out :P
Rude side of Gunjan well it was like bade baap ki bigdi huyi ladki 🤣 but its much needed for her character bossy side is more good on her princess character. soft side was too another personality of princess Gunjan. then she crashed with someone Ohho.
@bold.. YES SHE IS!! ... ugliness n goodness is just two sides on one coin :)
I liked that past too.. awesomely described.
treated by friends too good.. and her anger was cherry on top 🤣
friends charm up her life :) i hope it is obvious Mayank and Arman are quite close to him.. n Mayank more !!
then masti will her friends another part of her life and BET or Dare for Diva was too good..
much Needed. :P This Beginning would serve as major turn !!
Entry of prince was not less .Loved the bond of father and son I so much wanted to see this bond in MJHT but alas my wish was never fulfilled but finally you did it 👏👏👏
Even i wanted to :) 🤗
race talk was superb 😃😃 then his bond with his younger sister superb
ohhh they are leaving him tsk tsk.. hope to see family scene every soon..
have to wait nw as but it would be worth of :P
then in college Entry. Samrat's POV.
Entry was like a royal King. 😉 and soon then clashed aahan 😆😆
ohhh dard ka rishta bada hi pyaara hai kitna pagal ye dil humara hai 🤣 🤣
LOL!!!
Opss mr advance was already lost in her beautiful facewa 🤣 dekh beta dekh fir iss thobde ko zindgi bhar samne rakhna hai 🤣
omg!! Radhi how u manage to come with such stuff 🤣?
Help aahan.. psycho seek help hard to believe bt attitude helped say what 😆
destiny :D
their talk was mast mast ... 😆😆
i had to re read their convo to avoid any blunder🤪
Gunjan POV
well u describe POV from both side i loved it so we can understand situations feelings and emotions from both sides
Yeah !! that way may be story would be more obvious but their POV are more important..as their actions n point of views would condratict a lot and at many times !!
awesomely described her POV
her cursing session then lost in Handsome face then Jealousy and EGO Hurt then actual hurt seeking help mr attitude helped. enjoyed ride in his arms... and felt strange feelings 😆😆😆
many more to come :P
then thinking of her that he is too good to be bad. 😆😆😆 not my type and all
Yes he is not at all his type :P
Awesome awesome awesome
i want regular updates no delay please becuase EID is gone 😆😆
i would try :P
dont even try to discontinue it and more over dont forward story with tortoise speed 🤣
haha don't wry radhi.. this story is not going to creep.. as next chapter is about Being Friends. :)
till now its perfect as you promised well presented well choice of words . well written in english
good with emotions different story different starting everything
Thank you so much radhi !! your comment is really very encouraging sach mein felt relieved :P
hope for same thing in future and want next part as soon as possible.
and as promised long comment 😆😉😆
Yeah hope :P
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