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Posted: 12 years ago
#11
Here is part 2
Arjun pe tum log lattomna hojana
Samjhe ya samjaon😆

Arjun is very upset ,,he cant see his best friend like this ,,aaj to poochke rahoonga
She was standing next to her husband with a fake smile
Arjun,,bebo tumse baat karni hai he whispers
Bebo,,kya baat hai arju aap
Aditya,,shanaya chalo dad bula rahe cake kaatne ke liye
Bebo,,arjun sorry woh main..
Arjun,,no no its ok main baad main baat karta hoon koi khaas baat nahi hai
Bebo,,main bas thodi der main aati hoon aap bhi chaliye arjun,,tum chalo main aata hoon
Mr,bajaj,,happy anniversary beta
Bebo,,papa! She hugs him aap aagaye mujhe laga tha aap nahi aayenge
Mr,bajaj,,kaise nahi aata
Mira,,happy anniversary shanaya
Bebo,,thank u mama she hugs her,,bhai thank u so much aap bhi aaye
Manav,,sirf tumhare liye aaya hoon shanaya
Bebo looking behind him,,harshad bhayya nahi aaye
Manav,,nahi woh aaraha tha par uski koi meeting hai to woh nahi aasaka
Bebo,,unko to main dekh loongi aap log chaliye cake katne wala hai
Aditya,,kaha rehgayi thi tum
Bebo,,woh woh mama n papa aaye hai unse milne
Aditya,,yeh jabse mil rahi thi tum aise mil rahi ho jaise saalo se nahi dekha teen amhine pehle to mili thi itna drama karneki kya zaroorat he whispers
She has tears in her eyes ,,aditya kam se kam aaj ke din to tum
Aditya,,God plz ab rona shuru na kardena cake kaatke mujhe free karo jus cant take it anymore he whippers but
Someone is standing behind them n litening to thier conversation arjun is shocked upset n angry how dare he talk like that ,,
They cut the cake then all the guests go for dinner
Aditya ,,ufff thank God
Bebo,,aditya kaha jaa rahe ho
Aditya,,iss irritating party se door
Bebo upset,,irritating?
aditya,,shanaya plz just leave me alone
Bebo..agar logo ne poocha ke tum kaha ho tu kya kahoongi main
Aditya,,bolo kaam se baahar gaya hoon n waise bhi iss ghar ki bahu tum ho to itna tu samhaal hi sakti itna ota kaam bhi nahi hota tumse,,meri mom se kuch seekho n he left the party
Manav,,aaj bhi tumhe akela chod gaya
Bebo,,arrey bhai aap kab aaye ,,nahi woh unko kuch kaam tha
Manav,,usse har kaam aaj hi ke din yaad aata hai shanaya aur kitna bardaash karogi ,,plz shanaya waapas chalo hum sab hai na tumhare saath lyun yeh sab bardaash karrahi ho
Shanaya,,bhai waapas lot ke main sabko aur takleef doongi log kya kya baatien bolenge mama paa ko woh mujhse bardaash nahi hoga bhai plz mujhe samjhne ki khaushish kariye n ek din sab theek hoga aditya bhi badal jaayenge
Manav,,woh 4saal main nahi badla ab kya badlega
Mr,bajaj,,manav maine kaha tha na Iss baare yaha koi baat nahi karna
Manav,,theek hai jo marzi aaye kaho n he left
Bebo,,bhai suniye bhai plz
Mr.bajaj beta tumhe jo theek lage tum woh karo main n tumhari mama hamesha tumhare saath hai
Bebo,,thank u papa
Mira,,achcha beta ab hum chalte hai
Bebo,,kyaaa itni jaldi
Mr,bajaj,,haan beta subah meri meeting hai mujhe waapas jaana hai bas tumse milne aagaya,,
Mora,,apna khaya rakhna
Bebo hugged her mom,,bye maa
Mira,,bye my baby
Mr,bajaj,,chalo
Few minutes later
Rama(aditya's mom)..shanaya adi kaha hai
Bebo,,haar baar ki jaise chale gaye
Rama,,taali ek hasth se nahi bajti shanaya zaroor tumne kuch kaha issi liye chalagaya
Bebo,,mom aap aise
Rama,,mujhe kuch nahi sunna n she left
Arjun was noticing every movement of this horrible family
Arjun,,bebo
Bebo,,haan arjun sorry aapse baat nahi karpayi woh main busy n itne log hai n sabko dekhna n dhaan rakhna kisne khaaya kisne nahi khaayasabne drinks li meetha liya khaana theek se khaaya ya nahi enjoy kiya ya nahi yeh sab dekhna padta hai n issi chakkar aap aaye n aapse baat bhi nahi kari pehle aditya ne bulaliya then aap aaye n cake katne wala tha phir main chali gayi phir dinner laga phir guests ko dekho phir jo guest jaane lage phir unko dekho n wait karte rahe n phir bhi baat na hosaki n abhi bhi aap kuch bol nahi sakte kunki main bol rahi n jab bolna dhuru karti hoon to doosra nahi bolsakta to aapko mere chup honeka wait karna padega taake aap kuch bole ab main chup hone jaarahi hoon ab boliye kya bolna tha
Arjun,,bebo 4ghante seyaah party chal rahi hai aur chaar ghanto main kya kya huantumne mujhe sirf 40second main batadiya yeh talent sirf tumhare paas hi hosakta hai
Bebo ,,woh arjun main
Arjun,,tum kya bebo bolona
Bebo,,4saal ke baad maine itni baat kari hai kissi se mera to bolne ka hi mann nahi karta par aaj na jaane kyun aap se itna kuch bolgayi main
Rama,,shanaya yaha aao
Bebo,,arjun woh
Arjun,,bebo kal dinner ke liye hum sab dadu ke guesthouse jaarahe hai tum bhi zaroor aana
Bebo,,par main kaise?
Arjun,,plz bebo plz tum aaogi tu mujhe bohut achcha lagega
Bebo smiled ,,theek hai Arjun main aditya se poochke aapko batati hoon
Arjun smiled,,ok main tumhare call ka intizar karonga
Bebo,,ok
Arjun,,hum chalte hai bohut der hoayi
Bebo,,theek hai Arjun
Arjun,,i hope ke kal tum aao,,bye
Bebo,,Arjun
Arjun,,haan
Bebo,,aane ke liye thank u
Arjun smiled n left
N bebo went to rama
...
E was lying on his bed n thinking about her best friend,,aisa kya hua ,,woh kyun itna badal kyun pehle ke jaise hasti nahi hai aisa lagta hai sirf saansein chal rahi hai n suddenly he saw a shadow
Arjun stood up,,kaun hai? Kaun hai waha ?
He opened the door,,kaun hai?
N suddenly he jumped on arjun,,BOOO ,,,hahahaa
They fell down arjun,,what The! rajattt kya hai yaar mujhe pehle hi samajh lena tha ke aisa pagalpan tu karsakta hai
Rajat laughed ,,omg acp arjun rawte dar gaye
Arjun,,dara nahi kamine ghussa aaraha hai tumhpe
Dadu n ash came out ,,kya hua yeh awaaz kaisi
Dadu,,arrey rajat,tum kab aaye!
Rajat,,daduuu n hugged him
Ash,,oye meri rajju
Rajat,,buaaa wooow aap to pehle zyada khubsoorat dikh rahi hai
Ash,,ab maska maarna band kar jab dekho drama karta hai dramebaaz
Rajat,,ek to ek bechara seedha saada jawaan ladka saath samundar paar karke aaya hai yoon nahi ek cup chai pilade koi ulta usse sataya jaaraha hai
Ash,,badmaash saaf saaf bol ke chai chahiye,,tu beth main laati hoon chai banake sabke liye
Ash brought the tea
Dadu,,arjun tumhari flight kitne baje hai kal
Arjun,,dadu main kal nahi jaaraha
Ash,,huh? Pat tum to kehrahe the sirf ek din ke liye ja rahe ho
Arjun,,haan par ab nahi jaa raha
Rajat,,koi khaas waje
Arjun looked at him,,agar waja ho bhi to tumhe kyun bataon
Dadu,,chalo achcha hai hum log chaaro kal kahi ghoomne chalenge
Arjun,,dadu main soch raha tha ke kal dinner hum apne guesthouse main kare
Dau,,haan haan bilkul ,,kyun nahi
Arjun,,woh hosakta hai bebo bhi i mean shanaya bhi aaye kal dinner pe
Rajat,,oye hoye,,aap dinner woh bhi ladki ke saath wah wah mere bhai hamare peet peeche ,, family dinner ke bahane date!
Arjun,,oh shut up rajat aisa kuch nahi hai woh meri best friend hai bas
Rajat,,chalo aap interested nahi ho to koi baat nahi hosakta hai mujhse pat jaye waise dikhne main hot hai ya nahi
Arjun,,rajat!stop it uski shaadi hochuki hai n hum yaha ussi ki anniversary patu main aaye hai uske baare main aisa phir kabhi bola to tera woh haal karoonga kissi ladki ko line maarne ke laayaq nahi rahega,,Samjhe ya samjhaon!
Rajat,,samajh gaya samajh gaya
Arjun,,hmmm goood
Ash,,ab agar tum logo ka drama khatam hogaya ho to chai pee lo thandi hogayi
...
2:00am
Bebo worried,,haye rabba 2baj gaye n aditya ka kuch pata nahi,, woh aise kyun hai ,,kahi mujhse to koi ghalati nahi hui? Par agar hui hai to woh batate kyun nahi ,,aaj anniversary hai ,,kuch special karti hoon shayad iss baar maan jaye ,,mm par kya karoo?
2:30am
Aditya opened the door n saw the room decorated beautifully with candels n roses
He looked around ,,she came from back n hugged him
Aditya,,yeh sab kya hai shanaya
Bebo,,woh anniversary hai to socha ke aaj ki raat thodi special hone chahiye tum itni der se aaye kabse. Wait karrahi thi tumhar ,,he removed her hand n went to the bed
kept trying he lied on bed she rested hber head on his chest n hugged him
Aditya pushed her,,stop it shanaya just stop it band karo yeh drama
Bebo,,drama? Tumhe yeh sab drama lagta hai aditya wife hoon main tumhari
Aditya,,dekho shanaya maine tumse pehle bui kaha hai kaushish larna bhi bekaar hai n just bujhao yeh candeles hatao yeh roses kya tamasha laga rakha hai koi shaadi horahi hai yaha kis bat ki khushi mana rahi ho iss duniya hum pehle to nahi jinhone shaadi kari hai sab shaadi karte ismain kaunsi badi baat hai ,,dimagh kharaab karke rakha hai he was about to leave when she stopped him
Bebo crying,,aditya 4saal hogaye hamari shaadi ko aisa kab tak chalega mujhse door bhaag te ho mujhse baat nahi karte na khud haath lagate ho na mujhe haath lagane dete ho aakhir baat lya hai aaj tumhe jawab dena hoga
Aditya,,tumhe agar mere saath rehna hai tu aise hi rehna hoga warna dafa hoao yaha se,,
Bebo grabbed his hand,,aditya yeh mere sawal ka jawab nahi tha mujhe batao kyun karrahe ho mere saath aisa mujhse koi ghalati hui meri koi baat buri lagi tumko n agar lagi hai to batao,,tumse zabardasti shaadi karneko kaha ya tum kissi aur se pyar karte ho?
Aditya,,shanaya mera haath chodo
Bebo,,nahi jab tak jawab nahi doge nahi jaane doongi
Aditya,,maine kaha haath chodo
Bebo,,nahi nahi nahiii mujhe jawab chahiye bolo aditya bolo
Aditya maine kaha chodooo he slapped her
Bebo,,aaah she looked at him aditya tumne mujhe?
Aditya,,agli baar mera raasta roka to tappad nahi jaan se maar doonga
He pushed her n left the room
She lied on the floor n cried the whole night n fell asleep on d floor
,,,,,,,,,,
Next day
She woke n remembered whatever happened last night she removed all the candels n roses,,bhai theek kehte hai aditya kabhi nahi badlega she thought she took her towel n clothes n went to the bathroom
After a while she went downstairs ,,good morning dad
Mr,kapoor,,good morning beta (mr.kapoor is a nice man n he doent know anything abou his son's behavior)
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Dear bebo,i hope tumne aditya n aditya ki family se dinner pe aane ki permission leli hogi n agar na maane to unse kehna Arjun ne kaha hai maan jaaye Samjhe ya samjhaon! She smiled yeh arjun bhi na she continued reading ,,oh thank God mera samjhe ya samjhaon padhke tum muskurayi to ,,bebo ,,iss jasoos ko to sab pata rehta hai,, arjun's msg,,jaanta hoon baba yahi soch rahi ho ke mujhe sab pata rehta hai,,ab jaldi se reply karo n batao aaogi ya nahi
Bebo smiled,,dad woh aaj Dadu ke guesthouse pe dinner hai to mujhe bulaya hai,,main jao?
Rama,,kitna kaam pada hai n tum maze karne chali
Mr,kapoor,,rama bohu hai tumhari usse to seedhe moo baat karlo,,n usne mujhse premission maangi hai tumse nahi,,shanaya tum jao waise tum kahi aati jaati nahi ho jao n enjoy,,
Bebo,,par dad woh aditya
Dad,,usse main baat karoolnga tum jao
Bebo,,thank u papa
...
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He opened his inbox,,bebo!
'theek 8 naje main pohoch jaongi mere swagat ke liye darwaze pe intizaar karna samjhe ya samjhaon?
Arjun smiled,,samjhgaya
Ash,,kya samajh gaye?
Rajar,,oye hoye kya smile hai 20saal main ek baar inki smile dekhne ko milti hai ,,
Arjun,,tu chup chaap naashta kar
Rajat,,haaaye yeh tu kaam se gaye
Arjun,rajattt
Dadu,,beta woh shanaya aayegi na?
Arjun ,,haan dadu 8 baje tak aayegi
Dadu,,thek hai maine apne kuch friends ko bhi bolaya hai so sab saath main dinner karlenge,,mujhe kuch kaam hai raat ko milte hai
Ash,,dad dawayi lele na plz
Dadu,,ok beta
Arjun,,mujhe bhi kuch kaam hai main chalta hoon
Arjun,,bebo ajj to muskurana hi padega i promise aaj ke baad tum phir muskurane
Lagogi i promise you,,
8:00pm
She went out of the car
Arjun,,aayye bebo ji aaye bohut time se aayi 8 baja hai
Bebo,,main kabhi late nahi hoti you know that
Arjun,,haan woh to hai chalo andar chalo
Dadu,,arrey shanaya tumaagayi kaisi ho beta
Bebo,,main theek hoon
Dadu,,beta kal raat tumhare dad se mil nahi paya jitne pata chala ke woh bhi party main tab tak woh chale gaye the iss bajaj ki to khair nahi itne saalon se ghayab hai saza to milegi usse
She smiled
Ash,,haye shanaya how are you? Kal tumse theek se baat nahi ho payi aaj to jamke baatien karenge
Bebo,,bilkul
Ash,,pAr pehle dinner phir baatien
She finished her dinner n put the plate in the kitchen
Arjun ,,bebo aur lona tumne itna sa khaaya
Bebo,,nahi arjun bas mann nahi hai hogaya
Arjun achcha theek hai mere saath chalo
Bebo,,kaha?
Arjun,,chalo to sahi he took her to the. Terrace
Bebo..arjun aap mujhe chat pe kyun laye hai
Arjun,,tumko taare delhna bohut pasand hai na issi liye
Bebo,par aaj to taare hi nahi hai aapko kuch dikh raha hai kya she was looking. Up. To the sky
Arjun staring at her haan dikh raha hai
Bebo still looking up,,kaha kya dikh raha hai?
Arjun,,Dard
She looked at him ,,
He went closer she stepped back he looked into her eyes ,,bohut dard hai tumhari aankhon main iss muskurahat ke peeche aanso main dekh sakta hoon,,
Tumhari zindagi ka kaalipan tumhari aankhon main saaf dikhta hai
She turned she didnt wnt himto see her tears ,aap mujhe itni achche se kaise samajh lete hai
Arjun,,yeh sawal mat karo bebo kyunki iska jawab nahi hai mere paas ,,he said in his mind
Arjun,,main bhi 14saal se hssi cheez ki talaash bathakta rehta hoon jisse tum dhoond rahi ho
Bebo..kya?
Arjun..pyar ke khushi ke,,aisa kya hogaya bebo jo tum itni badal gayi jo ladki zindagi se itna pyar karti thi aaj wahi ladki mujhe haarte hue nazar aarahi..n tumne achaanak shaadi karli mujhe batana bhi zaroori nahi samjha ..chup kyun ho jawab do he turned her n he saw red mark on her face
Arjun,,bebo yeh kya yeh nashaan yeh..bebo! Usne maara tumhe?bebo jawab do haath uthaya usne. Bolo na
She couldnt control herself anymore she closed her eyes n wrpped her hand around him n hugged him toghtly n cried
Arjun worried,,bebo kya hua ro kyun rahi ho bebo kuch to bolo he hugged her back she was crying like a baby he cried with her but dindt show he wiped his tears n brok the hug ,,bebo meri taraf dekho he removed her hair from her face,,kya hua mujhe nahi bataogi he cupped her face,,
Bebo crying,,woh wwoh arjun kal raar main (she told him everything about the last night)
Arjun,,uss kamine ki otni himmat tumpe haath uthaya usne choddonga nahi main usse woh aisa kaise karsakta hai ! N tum yeh sab kyun bardaash karrahi ho
Bebo..rishte todna itna asaan nahi hota arjun,,
Arjun,,par tumne mujhe bataya kyun nahi ke tum shaadi karrahi ho
Bebo looked at him,,maon aayi thi arjun aapko batane aayi thi par uss din
*flashback*
Bebo,,God arjun se ek baar pooch leti hoon mere to samjh hi nahi aaraha ke shaadi ke liye haan kahoon ya nahi shaayad arjun bata de
She entered rawte mansion n saw Arjun n his dad fighting
Dad,,arjun tumne ek baar bhi nahi socha mere baare meri reputation ke baare yeh tak nahi socha ke kya izzat hai meri logo ki nazaron main kya kahenge log business tycoon suryakant rawte ke beta ek maamuli polic officer chiii
Arjun,,aapne kabhi mere baare main socha jo main aaj aapke baare main sochoo
Dad,,arjun zaban samhaal ke baat karo baad hoon main tumhara he yelled
Arjun,,kyun bura lag raha hai sach hi to kaha bada baap banne ka shouk aaraha hai tab kaha the aap jab main school main parents meeting ke liye aapka intizar karta tha tab kaha the jab mujhe best student ka award milta tha mere dadu aate the par meri nazare hamesha aapko dhoond ti thi tab kaha the jab main apni maa ki yaad main raat bhar rota tha ek baar bhi aake dekha ke mera beta bina maa ke kaisa hai kis haal main usne kuch khaaya hai ya nahi meri maa ko mare ek din bhi nahi hua tha n aapne doosri shaadi karli aisa lagraha tha jaise unhi ke marne ka intizar ho kya guzri thi mujhpe meri behne pe kabhi socha hai aapne aap tu sirf sotele rishte nibhane main busy thehe yelled
Dad,,arjun kaha ki baat kaha laga rahe ho ,,main sirf itna kehraha hoon ke tumhe policewala banna hai bano lakin mere ghar ke baahar yaha rehneki ijazat nahi hai tumhe samjhe
Arjun,,aapke saath rehna bhi nahi chata ,,n waise bhi aap to mere liye tabhi margaye jab aapne doosri shaadi kari thi aise ghatya insan se koi rishta nahi rakhna mujhe
Dad,,arjun!! He slapped him
Arjun..ab to dard bhi nahi hota mr.suryakant rawte ..main jaa raha hoon
Dad,,haan jao waapas yaha phir kabhi mat aana he yelled
Bebo,,arjun aap
Arjun,,plz bebo main abhi baat karne ke mood main nahi hoon plz abhi nahi
Bebo,,par arjun,,he left,,arjun arjun suniye to,,
*falshback ends*
bebo..main aayi thi arjun par aap kuch sunna nahi chahte the n mujhe laga app ghusse main hai to phir main agle din aapse milne aayi to aap chale gaye the aapkomphone kiya bohut dhoonda par nahi mile n phir mujhe laga ke aditya hi woh ladka hai jisse main sapno main dekha karti thi n phir sapne dekhne lagi par kitni pagal thi main sapno ki duniya main jeeti rahi n jab haqeeqat se saamna hua to ttot gayi mere saath mere sab sapne to gaye ,,kyun chale gaye the aapmarjun agar aap hote to shayad mujhe bacha lete to aaj yeh sab na hota
Arjun was damn guilty,,mujhe maaf kardombebo tum mujhse baat karne aayi thi n maine apne ghusse ki waje woh sab,, God kaash main uss din tumhari baat sunta
Bebo,,arjun main aapko guilty feel nahi lara rahi arjun jo hona tha woh hogaya aap aisa mat sochiye plz,,khair kuch air baat karte hai,,aap waapas kah jarahe hai
Arjun,,kal ..bebo uss baar main tumhe chod ke chala gaya,,par kss baar main vaada karta hoon apni best friend komkabhi akela nahi chodke jaonga door hoke bhi hamesha tumhare saath rahoonga jab bhi tumhe akelapan mehsoos ho ya koi baat share karna chahti ho to tum mujhse baat karo main poori kaushish karoonga ke ek dost banke tumhara dard kam karsakoo samjhe ya samjhao
She smiled
Arjun,,thank God madam muskurayi to..waise tumhare liye ek surprise hai
Bebo,,kya?
Arjun,,5saal pehle tumne request kari thi tu wahi de raha hoon..
Bebo kya?
Arjun,,tum yaha betho main abhi aaya
After 5mins
He brought his guitar gaana gaon phir to badi wali smile dogo jaise pehle deti thi
Bebo smiled gaana pasand aaya to milegi
Arjun,,hmmm m sure pasand aayega
He playe his guitar
Tum Jo Ho Toh Gaa Rahi Hai Yeh Hawa
Tum Jo Ho To Reshmi Si Hai Fiza
Jao NA JAo Na
Ahe looked at him n smiled
Tum Jo Ho Toh Gaa Rahi Hai Yeh Hawa
Tum Jo Ho To Reshmi Si Hai Fiza
Jao NA JAo Na

Phir Na Yeh Raat Aayegi
Phir Na Yeh Rut Chaayegi
Phir Na Yun Milna Hoga
Phir Na Jaane Kya Hoga
She rested her back on his they were sitting like back to back
Jao Na
She sings with him Jao Na
Jao na
She says,,Jao na
He was playing his guitar she closed her eyes n listened to it,,she was enjoying this moment she was feeling so happy after so many years

Yeh Raat Thodi Toh Dhalne Do
Dheere Dheere Isko Pighalne Do
Aage Hai Do Raah Maana Magar
Thodi Door To Saath Chalne Do

Khone Wali Ho Kal Tum
RUk Sako Jo Do Pal Tum
Kuch Tumhari Tasveerein
Rakh Loon Apni Aankhon Mein
Jao na
She sings,,jao na
Arjun,,jao na n he turns to her
Bebo,,jao naaa
They had a cute eye lock
He was totally lost she looked down n blushed but he was still looking at her face
He didnt notice that someone is standing behind him who was totaly shocked
Bebo,.rajat tum kab aaye n aise moo kholke kyun khade ho
Rajat,,bhai apko fever hai kya ya koi ajeeb se keeda kaat gaya aap aur guitar! N sirf guita hi nahi g g gaanaaa!
Bebo..tumhara bhai hai n tumhe yeh tak nahi pata ke unhe gaana pasand
Rajat,,heee sachchi n yeh guitar kaha se aaya tum layi
Arjun,,tere ko kya?
Bebo,,nahi rajat yeh arjun ka guita hai
Rajat..kyaaa?
Arjun,,woh bebo actually mere guitar n singing ke baare main tumhare siwa aur kissi ko nahi pata issi liye
Bebo..oh i see
Rajat,,main jaa raha hoon nahi main sach main pagal hojaonga ,,buaaa
Arjun,,rajaaat rukkk,,ab saare ghar main dhindora peetega Chugalkhuar kahinka
Bebo laughed
Arjun looked at her kitne saal baad yeh hassi suni hai maine,,aise hi hasa karo bohut achchi lagti ho
She blushed..achcha arjun main chalti hoon bohut late hogaya
Arjun ..ok bebo chalo main tumhe gate tak chodta hoon
Bebo ,,theek hai
They reached the gate
Bebo,,waapas kab aayenge arjun
Arjun,,jab tum bulaogi iss baar kahi door nahi jaonga i promise
Bebo,,arjun thank you
Arjun,,kis baat ka
Bebo,,dinner ke liye aur
Arjun,,aur?
Bebo,,mujhe better feel karane ke liye
Arjun,,maine sirf tumhara formula tumpe hi istimal kiya sirf tumhe purani shanaya se milane ki khaushshi karrahantha main jaise tumne kari thi 5saal pehle
Bebo smiled,,bye arjun apna khayal rakiyega
Arjun,,tumbhi rakhna samjhe ya samjhao
Bebo,,samajh gayi
She smiled,,bye arjun hace a safe trip
Arjun,,thank u bebo bye
And she went back
...
Teaser
Arjun,,bebo kya hua bolo mujhe fikar horahi hai
Bebo,,arjun mujhe bacha lijiye im gonna die
Arjun,,hello hello bebo bebo kya hua baaat karo mujhse bebooo

Edited by luvyoubarun - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#12
Sorry for being late 😳
Here is part 3😳


After she left he went inside
Rajat,,le usse jaane diya?
Arjun,,apne ghar gayi hai rajat
Rajat..abhi to uppar gaa rahe the jao na jao na n ab khud hi gate tak chod kar aagaye
Arjun,,rajat tu bhi na bilkul pagal hai
Rajat..waise bhai aap aur gaana yeh chamatkaar kaise
Arjun smiled,,meri mom bohut achcha gaati thi unse hi seekha tha
Rajat,,sorry bhai main to bas aise hi
Arjun,,arrey its ok na chal,sote hai subah jaana hai
Rajat.ok chalo
Ash..arrey kaha jaa rahe ho yahi ruko arrey chutti pe aaye hai thodi saath main masti to karle aao saap seedi khele
Arjun,,bua iss waqt
Ash..nope chalooop naaa
RJat,haaan bhai plz chalona
Arjun smiled,,ok ok baba chalo
30mins later
Arjun,oye rajat tere 4 aaya tha tujhe saap ne kaat liya to 5kyun chala
Rajat,,n n nahi bhai 5 hi aaye the
Bua,,rajat 4aaye the neeche utar
Rajat..arrey 5 the
Arjun yelled,,rajat!seedhe seedhe 4chal warna tera woh haal karoonga ke agli baar khel ne ke lAyaq nahi bachega samjhe ya samjaon
Rajat,arey baba aap n aapka ghussa achcha chalo yeh lo aagaya neeche ab khush
Tring tring
Ash,,arjun tumhara phone baj raha hai na?
Arjun,,haan par iss waqt kaun hai
Rajat,,dnt tell me tere rathore sir hai koi case hoga
Arjun,,Bebo! iss waqt
Rajat,,oye hoye itni jalldi yaad aagayi aapki unhe
Arjun ,,chup kar pagal
He answered the call...hello
Bebo..h h h hello Arrjjun
Arjun,,bebo tumhari awaz ko kya hua
Bebo breathing heavily,,mujhe bacha lijiye arjun
Arjun worried,,shanaya mujhe fikr horahi hai plz batao kya hua hai tumhe
Rajat n ashlesha left the game n went to Arjun
Bebo,,im gonna die Arjun m gonna die n she cut the call
Arjun,,hello heelo bebo bebooo helLo baat karo mujhse kya hua tumhe bebo
Ash,,kya hua arjun
Arjun scared,,pata nahi bas bol rahi mujhe bacha lo
Ash,,arjun phir se call karo
Arjun,,karraha hoon bua switched off aaraha hai
After few mins
Tring tring
Arjun happily,,shanaya ka phone he answered,, hello hello bebo
Man,,hello aap Arjun bol rahe hai?
Arjun confused,,haan par aap kaun n yeh phone aapke pas kaise aaya
Man,,main inspector kumar,, aap kissi shanaya kapoor ko jante hai
Arjun worried,,h haan wh meri friend hai par hua kya hai woh theek to hao
Kumar,,unki car ka accident hogaya
Arjun..what!!!
Kumar,,,haan n unko abhi hospital legaye hai aap agar unki family ko inform kare
Arjun,,haan main karta hoon n main abhi aata hoon
Rajat ,,bhai kya hua itne dare hue kyun ho
Arjun,,woh shanaya ka accident hogaya
Ash,,kyaaa
Rajat what accident par kaise?
Arjun,,pata nahi rajat main dekh ke aata hoon
Rajat,,bhai main bhi chalta hoon aapke saath
They rushd to the hospital
Ash,,oh God i think dad batana chahiye
Tring tring
Dadu,,haan ashlesha bolo
Ash,,papa kaha hai aap
Dadu,,yahi bas paas main anthony uncle ke ghar pe
Ash,,papa plz jaldi aayye
Dadu worried,,kyun beta kya hua tum theek to ho
Ash,,kuch theek nahi hai papa shanaya ka accident hogaya
Dadu,,what!
Ash,,papa plz jaldi aao
Dadu,,haan haan beta main aata hoon
...
At bajaj mansion
Mr,bajaj..kya hua mira tumhe neend nahi aarahi ?
Mira,,nahi kuch ajeeb sa lag raha hai mujhe aisa lagta hai kuch hone wala hai,,
Mr,bajaj..mira tum bhi na kuch mahi hoga tum pareshaan na ho
Mira,,main soch rahi thi ek. Aar shanaya se baat karloo
Mr.bajaj..mira itni raat hogayi hai tumhari shanno sogayi hogi n itni raat ko phone karna theek nahi i mean tum aditya ko to jaanti ho na
Mira,,par main kya karoo mera dil bohut ghabra raha hai
Mr,bajaj,,achcha aisa karo subah uthte hi tum usse baat kar lena
Mira,,hmmm theek hai
Mr,bajaj smiled,,ab sojao
...
At rawte
"mere photo ko seene se yaar chip kale sayya fevicol se"
Ansh entered the room n yelled,,Mom whats wrong with you itna tezz volume kya horaha hai
Sheena dancing like crazy,,haaaye mera bachcha tu agaya aaj main itni khush hoon ke bata nahi sakti
Ansh turned off the tv..kyun koi diamond ki dukaan khareed layi hai
Sheena nahi re pagal..tere dadu do din ke liye iss ghar se baahar hai ab iss ghar pe mera raj hai
Ansh smirked.,woh din aayega mom jab hum iss ghar pe raj karenge n inn sabko dhakke maar maar ke iss ghar se baahar nikalenge specially dadu n unke laadle acp Arjun rawte ko..i just hate him
Lavanya,,aap log baaz nahi aaoge na god unko unke haal pe chod do
Ansh,,lavanya tu beech main mat bol n jab dekho uss acp ki side leti hai
Lavanya,,main kissi ki side nahi lerahi par jaise tum mere bhai ho waise hai arjun bhayya mere bhai hai
Ansh,,usse itni izzat dene ki zaroorat nahi samjhi
Lavanya,,tum kabhi nahi sudhroge n left the room
Ansh,,ufff mom main hi jaraha hoon friend ke ghar party hai
Sheena ,,theek hai beta enjoy
...
At hospital
Arjun ,,excuse me
Nurse,,yes
Arjun,,thodi der pehle ek ladki aayi thi jiska accidnt hua tha shanaya
Nurse,,shanaya kapoor
Arjun,,haan
Nurse,,yahi saamne wale ward main hai
Arjun,,thank you
He was standing outside the ward holding the door handle
Rajat,,bhai kya hua andar chalona
Arjun,,main nahi jasakta rajat tu dekh aa
Rajat,,bhai aap jao na plz
Arjun,,nahi rajat tu dekh ke aa main aditya ko phone karta hoon
Rajat,,saaf saaf kaho usse iss haal main nahi dekh sakte
Arjun left without looking at his brother
Rajat,,aaj nahi to kal tumhe bhi maana hoga ke usse pyar kArte ho ,,he thought n then entered the room
Arjun,,god yeh aditya ka phone kyun nahi lagraha,,mr.kapoor ko call karta hoon
Tring tring tring tring
Mr,kapoor itni raat ko kaun hosakta hai?
Mr,kapoor..hello
Arjun,,hello mr,kapoor main Arjun ,,Arjun rawte
Mr,kapoor arrey beta sab theek to hai iss timehone kiya
Arjun,,woh uncle actually shanaya ka accident hogaya
Mr,kapoor,,kiyaaa?
Arjun,,haan woh hospital main hai
Mr.kapoor main abhi aata hoon
Rama,,kya hua
Mr,kapoor,,rama jaldi chalo shanaya ka accident hogaya
Rama,,kyaa?oh god ab kal ka saara kaam mujhe hi karna padega bola tha apko mat jaane dijiye pR aap
Mr kapoor yelled,ramaaa! Sharm aane chahiye tumhe tumhai bahu ke saath yeh sab hua n tumhe apne aram ki lagi hai jao jake apne nalayaq bete ko bhi uthao jao
...
Rajat came out
Arjun,,rajat kaisi woh ?kya hua usse ?bohut chot aayi hai? Serious to nahi? Hosh aya ya nahi? Tumse baat kari ya nahi?rajat bolna kaisi hai woh
Rajat held his hand,,bhai main kuch nahi boloonga aap khud jaake dekho
Arjun,,nahi rajat
Rajat,,bhai plz kyun bhaag rahe ho jao betho jsse baat karo plz bhai isse aapko shanti milegi n woh bhi khush hojayegi,,jao
Doctor,,excuse me aap log unke relatives hai
Arjun,,friend hoon uska,,woh kaisi hai doctor usse kya huua bai woh theek hojayegi na ?
Doctor,mdnt worry waise to khatre kikoi baat nahi par unke hosh main aane ke daab hi main bata paonga bcz unke sar pe kaafi ghehri chor aayi hai n haath main fracture bhi hai so hume uske hosh main aaneka intizaar karna hoga..ab main chalta hoon kuch aur logo bhi dekhna hai
Arjun,,thank u doctor
Rajat,,bhai jao plz
Arjun opened the door n entered the room n saw her lying on bed surroundd with machines he went closer n sat on bed next to her n held her hand
Arjun,,bebo plz aankhein kholo dekho maine tumse promise kiyatha na ab kabhi nahi chidke jaonga dekho main yahi hoon tumhare paas bas ek. Aar aankh khol ke dekho plz u cant do this to me tum aise haar nahi maanogi ,,maine apni life main bohut kuch khoya hai ab apne dost ko khoneki himmat nahi hai mujh main plz bebo aankhien kholo plz he held her hand tightly n cried ,,plz bebo aankhein kholo !,he kissed her hand n gently plcd it on bed n left the room
He stepped out,,dadu aap yaha
Dadu was staring ar his face,mhaan woh ash ne phone kiya tha
Ash ,,arjun tum rorahe the!
Arjun,, n n nhai nahi to main kyun rone laga aap bhina kuch bhi bolte ho
Ash ,,par arjun tum
Mr,kapoor..arjun
Arjun,,oh uncle
Mr,,kapoor ,,shanaya kaisi hai kaha hai?
Arjun..ab tak hosh nahi aaya hai
Rama lowered her voice,,pata kaunsi aafat gale padgayi hamare
Arjun heard her,,kuch kaha aapne!
Rama,,n n nahi beta main to bas dua karrahi thi woh jaldi theek hojaye
Arjun,mhmmm
15mins later
Nurse,,unhe hosh aagaya aap log chahe to milaskte hai
Arjun ran toward d door but he stopped n stepped back
Ash,,whats wrong sith him she thought
The all entered the room
Mr kappor,,shanaya
She opened her eyes n looked at him nsmiled
Mr kapoor,,kaisi ho beta
Bebo,,main theekh hoon n looked at arjun..m sorry meri waje se aap sab logo ko pareshaan hona pada
Dadu,,kaisi baatien karrahi ho beta
Ash,,thank God tum theek ho hamari to jaan hi nikAldi tumne
She smiled,,main bhi dekho ke mere aas
Aas ke log mujhse kitna pyar karte hai
Arjun looked at her but she was busy with ash
Bebo,,papa aditya nahi aaye
Rama n mr kPoor looked at eachother
Rama,,woh busy hai
Arjun,,aapne usse nahi bataya?
Rama,,bataya thanpar woh itna busy hai u knw businessman hai to time nahi milta
Arjun losing his control..time nahi milta yeh kaunsi n kaisi meeting hai jo uski wife se zyada zaroori hai thodi der aajaya to kya jaata us,a he yelled
Dadu,,arjun kya hogaya hai tumhe
Mr kapoor nahi beta theek bol rahe ho usse aana chahiye tha
Rajat,,well i think ab hume chalna chahiye
Ash,,haan bebotum bhi araam karo
Mr kapoor hum kAl phir aayenge
Arjun smiled,mbye beb,,bye shanaya
Bebo ..bye
He was abtto leave..Arjun soniye
Arjun,,haan bolo bebo kya baat hai
Bebo..arjun plz ghar pe kissi ko pata na chale mom pareshaan hojayegi,,plz
Arjun,,dnt worry kuch nahi bataonga..take care shanaya
Bebo..bye
They left the she closed her eyes
Mr kapoor,,achcha hum chalte hai kal phir milte hai
Dadu,,ok then take care bye
Mr kapoor,,bye
Tring tring
Arjun,,hello
Sameer,,DAMN IT rawte yaha itna kaam hai n tum waha araam se holiday enjoy karrahe ho ek din ki chutti di thi tumhe n teen din hogaye tum aaye nahi ,,he yelled
Arjun,,tum nabi samjhoge rathore kyun ki rishton ki samajhntum main bilkul nahi hai rathore sir
Sameer,,Damn it. N cut the line
...

Teaser..
Bebo smiled..nurse baahar ek ladka hoga green t shirt main usse kahiye woh andar aake beth sakte hai
...
Arjun,,tumko kaisepata chala ke main baahar hoon
Bebo pata nahi kya hua,,par waise bhi aap hi ne kaha tha ke ab kabhi chod ke nahi jayenge to mujhe laga ke aap bahar hi honge:)
Arjun,,hmmm very smart
Bebo,,woh to main hoon




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#13
Superb concept.
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Originally posted by: khemanisarita

awesome update
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Originally posted by: zebbie0504

Superb concept.
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Yes I will dear pm milhayega 😊

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