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Posted: 11 years ago
#21
Res. 😊
Can't believe you actually wrote in the morning. 😲 😲 😆
I'll unres anytime late night. 😳 😳

**Edited**

Wow Man!It is So Beautifully written Simi!!👏👏⭐️Loved it to the core.❤️
I never knew you are such an Amazing and Talented Writer!!😳

The way you describe Jodha's helplessness and anguish on being married to the Cruel Monster Emperor+Husband😆It was really heart-touching and beautiful.❤️ 😳I was able to feel her pain through your wonderfully beautiful writing...😊
And That "Unknown" presence,Well that was the ultimate attratction, and their destiny which makes them feel this unknown thing...I guess😆 😳
Then The way Jodha could feel Jalal's presence reminding her of the Ghanghor festival...That scene represents their Ultimate Strong and Unbreakable connection with each other...A bond and connect of their hearts which is yet "UNKNOWN" to both of them.😉 😳This was the Best written scene on the whole update...Extremely Beautiful...I loved it.❤️
Then Jalal's anger on Jodha that how dare She to try to attack him again was Wonderfully written.!!I loved this scene equally along with the one which shows his happiness and proud of conquering her...😉She is like some Prized possesion for Jalal.😆
But the last scene where He couldn't hurt her was the Best!!That was a sign that He love her!❤️Aah!The Shanshah of Hindustan can't afford to hurt his newly wedded Begum to whom He is "UNKNOWN"to himself in love with.😛 😉 😳
But this OS looks incomplete this way!You have to write a next part when you get time making them one out of true love and acceptance of both.😊 😳 😳You know the Real Waali SR.😉 😳 😆
And Also When Exams Get Over,Pls Start a FF on Our Akdha,Would love to read one from you.😳Haha,Pls Don't kill me,I know I'm very Demanding.😆
Thanks for the PM.😃 🤗 🤗
And Sorry,Yesterday night Mujhe jaldi neend lag gayi.😳 😳 😆

Edited by janvie - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#22
Wow!!!!! Brilliant...👍🏼👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: janvie

Res. 😊
Can't believe you actually wrote in the morning. 😲 😲 😆
I'll unres anytime late night. 😳 😳


Haha!😛
Believe it darlz, I did.. I'm that sort of a psycho! 😉😆😳
Will wait for u to unres 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#24
Thanks for d lovely comments peeps :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#25
Unres on Previous page.😊😳😳
SimiSays thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: janvie

Res. 😊
Can't believe you actually wrote in the morning. 😲 😲 😆
I'll unres anytime late night. 😳 😳


<font color="#6600ff" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">**Edited**</font>
<font color="#6600ff" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">
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Wow Man!It is So Beautifully written Simi!!👏👏⭐️Loved it to the core.❤️
<font color="#6600ff" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">I never knew you are such an Amazing and Talented Writer!!😳
</font>
<font color="#6600ff" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">
</font>
<font color="#6600ff" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">The way you describe Jodha's helplessness and anguish on being married to the Cruel Monster Emperor+Husband😆It was really heart-touching and beautiful.❤️ 😳I was able to feel her pain through your wonderfully beautiful writing...😊
</font>
<font color="#6600ff" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">And That "Unknown" presence,Well that was the ultimate attratction, and their destiny which makes them feel this unknown thing...I guess😆 😳
</font>
<font color="#6600ff" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Then The way Jodha could feel Jalal's presence reminding her of the Ghanghor festival...That scene represents their Ultimate Strong and Unbreakable connection with each other...A bond and connect of their hearts which is yet "UNKNOWN" to both of them.😉 😳This was the Best written scene on the whole update...Extremely Beautiful...I loved it.❤️
</font>
<font color="#6600ff" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Then Jalal's anger on Jodha that how dare She to try to attack him again was Wonderfully written.!!I loved this scene equally along with the one which shows his happiness and proud of conquering her...😉She is like some Prizedpossesion for Jalal.😆
</font>
<font color="#6600ff" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">But the last scene where He couldn't hurt her was the Best!!That was a sign that He love her!❤️Aah!The Shanshah of Hindustan can't afford to hurt his newly wedded Begum to whom He is "UNKNOWN"to himself in love with.😛 😉 😳
</font>
<font color="#6600ff" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">But this OS looks incomplete this way!You have to write a next part when you get time making them one out of true love and acceptance of both.😊 😳 😳You know the Real Waali SR.😉 😳 😆
</font>
<font color="#6600ff" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">And Also When Exams Get Over,Pls Start a FF on Our Akdha,Would love to read one from you.😳Haha,Pls Don't kill me,I know I'm very Demanding.😆
</font>
<font color="#6600ff" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Thanks for the PM.😃 🤗 🤗
</font>
<font color="#6600ff" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">And Sorry,Yesterday night Mujhe jaldi neend lag gayi.😳 😳 😆
</font>
<font color="#6600ff" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">
</font>



Aww.. thanks for such a warm and vivid feedback dear.. I love & appreciate it 🤗 ..
As soon as i m done with my exams I will get on with some more stuff on AkDha..

And yeah, not to forget evn I m waiting for their #Real wala SR.. 😉 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#27
awesome os
u have written it beautifully

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Posted: 11 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: Rashmi_pari

awesome os
u have written it beautifully


Thanks dear😳

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