Asya OS TURNED INTO SS: the beautiful life after , teaser - pg 10

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INTRO; asad and zoya are married. this is about their life after marriage and how they discovered some beautiful moments .
will update parts later , please do like and comments if u r interested to read , love you all !
This is my first attempt , Guys read the convo imagining Asad and Zoya , and my english is very poor so forgive for mistake , it's written in hindi also to make it realistic and indian
Index :
part 1 : page 4
part 2 : page 8
page 8: teaser

guys i love to write, guide me if i m mistaking ,
this is my first and


guys as u liked my os i m going to change it in ss , with beauti ful story

❤️ I LOVE ASYA❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow..nice concept..waitng for d orts..do continue soon n plz do pm ne..plz..
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cont soon and pls pm me

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Continue soon..n plz add me in ur buddy list..n pm me wen update
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Plz continue soon
plz pm me for update
quite interesting sounds
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Would LOVE to read it.

Pls PM when updated
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plz continue soon.
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part 1
"I love u Asad , i can't believe hamara nikah hua hai , OMG we got married" Zoya was dancing on their beautifully decorated bed.
Asad was very happy for Zoya , after a big time , he got his Zoya back.
he grabbed her hand and made her sit.
"Mr.khan aise kyun dekh rahe hai aap" Zoya asked while blushing.
"Dekhane do mujhe Zoya , you are so beautiful" Asad said making her more red.
"Mr.khan aapko yaad hai hamari pahli mulakat , mai apke gadi se do bar takarayi thi"
"aur aap jab hamare ghar pahli baar ayi thi , u r so special Zoya , i know i caused u so much pain and i m really sorry for that , mai wada karta hun abse tum kabhi sad nahi hogi" Asad said taking her hands.
"Mr.kahan kisiki majal hai Zoya ko dukhi karane ki jab ki mere paas JAHAPANAH SIX PACK ho." Zoya said showing her cute dimple.
"Asad tum mere present ho , jo ki mujhe sabase jyada mayne rakhata hai" she said in her sweet girlish tone.
Asad was staring at her.
"Mr.khan aap mujhe khush dekhana chahte hai na?" Zoya asked excitingly.
Asad nodded in yes.
" toh phir apko Zoya ki khushilist follow karni hogi ,
1st is ki agar Zoya ko khush karna hai toh khud khush rahiye,
aur dusri yeh hai ki Zoya ko kabhi dur mat kariyega!" Zoya said looking into his eyes.
Asad became so emotionally hearing her innocent wishes.
He grabbed her in his wide arms and Zoya losened hereself on him. he was like her protective charm. she knew that she was safe in that warm hold.
Zoya thought that a father gives his daughter sweet lessons of life , a brother give his sister a lifetime protection and son gives his mother incredible happyness and love but all this qualities she found in her love-Asad.
Zoya stopped thinking as she felt something wet on her shoulder,
"Asad?" she nodded in no to stop Asad's tears.
she looked in his eyes and sucked his tears.
Zoya placed her lips on his , Asad was taken aback by the sudden contact of their lips , but soon he recalled that they were married now . and he kissed her lips . the kiss was sweet and gentle. their first kiss . it was amazing.
they broke for the air , a big flash of smile changed into a laugh on their faces.
Zoya saw him laughing for the first time , she was pleased by this surprise gift.
She wanted to reward him for that so she gave him a small peck on cheek and ran from there.
Asad ran towards her too , she was about to open door but he was enough fast for her.
he grabbed her waist and sucked her lips ,
"Mr.khan...!" she chuckeled.
but Asad was Asad he began to kiss her neck. Zoya shivered by his bites.
"ASAD please...!" she pleaded in low voice .
Asad looked into her eyes and understan her uncomfortableness.
He kissed her forehead and lifting her in arms headed towards the bed.
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thank u so much , but my exams are coming so u have to wait , sorry
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Aww cute part
nicely written do cont soon

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