tere ishq mein swaron os partA,B,C * updated*

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Tere ishq mein...[part A]



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In this OS i have used typical hindi/urdu words so only those who has good command on hindi/urdu will be able to understand it well...sorry if some ppl dnt understand but i love writing in urdu but feel free to ask me anything u dnt understand.



Shimla!(jese The queen of hills bhi kaha jatha hai) intihayi veeran or khamosh thi.Siyaah Rang Rover 40ft unchi sadak par dhund ko cheerthi hoi apni manzil ki taraf rawan dawan thi. Din ke 2:00am baj rahe thy, lekin mausam itna kharab tha ke raat ka samaa lag raha tha, chaaro or dhund or ghata chai thi. Aise mein mushkil se driver gaadi chala raha tha. Or peechy seat par beti sharon ka dil zor zor se dharak raha tha Q k ussy kuch mualoom nahi k ussy kaha le jaya ja raha hai.ussy sirf itna patha tha k college se wapsi par kisi ne usky mun par kapra rakh kar gaadi mein beta dia or wo behosh ho gai thi. Hosh aany k baad uss ne bohot shor machaya roi dhoi par koi sunney wala nahi tha. Aakhir kaar wo thak kar chup hogai. Ussy aik personal helicopter mein shimla lejya gya tha or phir H spot pe utarny k baad rang rover mein betaya gya jis main abtak uska safar jaari tha.shron soch soch kar thak gai k kon ho saktha hai ussy kidnap karny wala par dimagh mein aisa koi nahi Aaraha tha.

Aakhir kaar 2hrs k baad safar khtam hoa or sharon ko aik behadd khubsurat bangly mein uthara gya. Bohot sary servents mein aik ne ussy uska room dikaya or bola chote malik shaam ko ayengy aap pareshan na ho. Room mein sab kuch sharon ki pasand ka tha, kapry,joothy,makeup, curtians yahan tak ke sara room uski pasandeeda cheezon se bhara tha.lekin aik cheez jis ne us k hosh uradiye wo tha uss room ka wall paper jis pe sharon ki tasveerain printed thi jis mein wo bohot hi zyada khubsurat lag rahi thi, itni khubsurat k wo apny dil mein is k banay wale ko sarahe baghair na reh saki. Lekin ab uss ka dar uss par or haavi hogya Q k jiss kissi ne b uassy kidnap kiya hai wo issy janta hai.

Knock knock! Sharon knock sunkar"Yes!
Bibi aap k liye khana laya hoon!(servent)
"Theek hai aap rakh do yaha"(sharon ki bhook wakai bad gai thi q k uss ne kai ghanto se kuch nahi khaya tha, aakhir dar lagny ko b tu enegy chahiye hoti hai na tu wo chup chap se khan khany lagi)
"Bibi kissi b cheez ki zaroorat ho tu hum haazir hain,,,chote malik ne kaha tha k aapka bohot khyal rakhein jab tak wo na aaye"
"Apky malik kahan hai?"
"Jee wo shaam tak pohuch jayengy, mumbai mein hai wo ye tu unka holiday home hai iss liye kam hi aaty hein"

Sharon ko itna bharosa tu hogya k yaha koi uss ko nuksaan nahi pohunchaye ga q k jiss ne b ussy yahan laya tha usne khud apny servents ko order dia hai k uss ka khaas khyaal rakha jaye.

Shaam dhalne wali thi thi or sharon thakan k mary neend ki wadiyun mrin chali gai.

Raat k 10 baj rahe the jab sharon ne darwazy pe knock suna usne utth kar darwaza khola or samny khary shaks ko dekh kar ussy bohot zyada zor ka shock laga. Black 3piece suit pehne, balo ko poni mein bandhy, bohot tall sa or chehre pe muskurahat sajaye wo koi or nahi swayam shikhawat tha, jissy wo pichly 7 salo se janti hai.wo high school or ab college mein aik saath thy. Wo swayam jo simple sa tha jo sharon rai prakash se itna pyar karta tha k uss k kehny pe apni jaan b de sakta tha. College mein sab ko ye baat mualoom thi k swayam sharon se bohot muhabbat kartha hai lekin sharon ne kabi ussy qabool nahi kiya, haalanke ander hi ander wo khush hoti thi ke koi ussy itna pyar kartha hai.

Sharon ko yakeen nahi aarha tha k swayam ne ussy kidnap kiya hai. Balke wo tu pareshaan thi k do din se swayam college nahi arha tha.

P.S Next part is it on its way...but before posting that plz do like and comment so i know whether to write more or not.
Edited by Swaron.maniac - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago
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res
unres

OMG!!!
thi is really gonna be a hard task for me
as mujhe hindi nahi aati hain dhang se 😕😕
im really bad at it
but i'll still try 😳😳
but sorry if im not able to
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: -spongy-

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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4">unres</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4">OMG!!!</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4">thi is really gonna be a hard task for me</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4">as mujhe hindi nahi aati hain dhang se😕😕</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4">im really bad at it</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4">but i'll still try😳😳</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4">but sorry if im not able to</font>




Hay thats totally okai...u dnt even nead to read if find it hard coz i knw it can be annoying so totally fine
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey that was a really interesting piece
You do have a great command over the laguage
It's truely said The combo of Hindi-Urdu add Magic to a story
Coming to the OS it was awesome 👏
Sharon being kidnapped was a shock 😲
Eagerly waiting to what happens ahead
Continue soon...
Do PM me 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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i know hindi very well but had a great confusion in urdu words 😕 i didn't understand some words also
but it was awesome
plz update the next part soon

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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice and great start... do continue soon and pm me...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice os😊
i was actually able to relate wid d emotions..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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i totally understand ur language...bindaas likho next part... 👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Swaron.maniac




Hay thats totally okai...u dnt even nead to read if find it hard coz i knw it can be annoying so totally fine


no no
i will read it
even though my reading wii be 100 times slower than the normal one 🤣
but atleast through this i will learn some new hindi words...
and urdu also.. 😉😉

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Posted: 12 years ago
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i totally understand ur language...bindaas likho next part...
👍🏼[/QUOTE

Thnx

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