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Posted: 12 years ago
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Tere ishq mein (last part)
"Sha...ron i'll be fine dnt worry mere phon mein baba ko number milao"

"Haan...haan okai" sharon takes her hand to swayams side pocket and get the phon is hurry"

After an hour at shikhawat's shimla mention

Swayam bed mein leta tha or doctors ki team usko treatment de rahi thi...swayam ab pehle se bohot behtar tha...sharon bhi room mein beti swayam ko dek rahi thi or bohot zyada preshaan thi ussy swayam ko is halat mein dekhna mushkil tha. Swayam ko sleeping pill di gai thi jis ki waja se wo aaraam kar raha tha. Aur sharon ab uske sirhane beti college k sab moments ko yaad kar rahi thi jo swayam ne us k liye special banwaye the. Sharon ko patha bhi nahi chala k kab or kese uske dil ne swayam k liye feeling develop ki or wo ussy accept bhi karne lagi...kehte hein when u r in love there iznt any defining moment tu bas yahi haal sharon ka tha ussy khabar hi nai hoe k kese swayam shikhawat ne usske dil mein jaga bana li.

"Hamein kisi cheez ki value tab pata chalti hai jab hum ussy khone wale hote hain...aur swayam aaj tumy blood or pain main dekar mere dil ko kuch ho gya, aise laga jese mera dham ghut jaye, saans tham jaye gi or shayad dil band ho jaye ga. Mera dil uss insaan ko khone se dar gya tha jis ne hamesha meri khushi chahi thi or jisne mujse junoon or deewangi ki had tak ishq kiya. Kahin na kahin ishq ki ye tapish(rays) mere dil ko b puhonch gai thi"

Sharon neend main doope swayam se apna haal e dil bayaan kar rahi thi.

Shaam k waqt swayam ki aankh khuli or sharon ussi tarha uss k paas beti thi.
"Sharon tum abhi tak yahin ho, plz go and have some rest.dekho na meine tume b pareshan kar diya"

"Bohot araam kar liya abhi to jagi hoon sahi mane mein"(sharon speaks her deep thoughts out)

"Kya?"(swayam asked)

"Nothing...tum theek ho na tumhare leg mein dard tu nahi ho raha na"

"Sharon sharon calm down i m totally fine see am completly fine"(swayam tried to sit up to give a demo) tumne khana khaya?

Ussi waqt baba andar aagya

"Ary kahan chote malik bibi tu subha se apke room main hai, meine bohot kaha k khana kha le lekin keh rahi thi k gale se nahi utre ga"

Sharon was staring at the floor and had tears in her eyes when baba was talking to swayam

"Sharon kya hoa hai sharon plz iss tarha mat ro mujy guilty feel hota hai...baba aap aisa karo yahin room mein khana laye hum dono aaj yahin khayengy...theek hai naa sharon" swayam conferms from sharon.

"Okai" sharon very softly says.

After they ate dinner sharon tell swayam she will stay in his room coz he might need something

"Nahin sharon tum bohot thak gai ho subha se u need rest or else u will get ill"

"Swayam maine khaha na i'll be here only"

"Fine i knw tum apni baat se nahi hatogi but thn u will hve to sleep in the bed"

"Okai i dont mind"

Swayam get up with one leg and moving towards couch

"Kya hoa kuch chahiye, mujy batao tum aise uttho mat injury bad jae gi"

"Nahi wo mein couch pe sone jaa raha hoo"

"Q?"

"Q k tum bed pe ho"

"Tu?"

"Tu...mein ...i mean"

"Just be quite and sit down Main maar nahi doongi agar mere saath aik bed pe soo gy...remember college camp k doran bhi tum mere tent mein the"

"Oh yh that was so funny...mera tent chori hogya tha...swayam sit back in the bed,,they both leaned on the bed crown and talk the college trip.

Next morning swayam wakes up and look at sharon on the other side of his bed...she was looking like an angel...swayam was so bzy staring at her that he dnt realise when sharon opend her eyes.

"Hy mr kya hoa...mujy aise q dekha jaa raha hai?"

"Haan aaa na nahi i was just..."

"Swayam u dnt need to be guilty ...okai aaj mein tumhare liye breakfast banao?"

"Wow really can u do that it will be dream come true"

Sharon smiles and go to her room and leave swayam behind with alot of things in his mind...swayam ko toda bohot idea tu hogya tha k sharon us k liye kuch feel karne lagi hai.

When thy were having breakfast in swayamz room somebody enteres

"Hmmm tu mere bachchy breakfast kar rahe hain..."

"Papa aap? Wow wot a pleasent surprise"

"Surprise to tum ne mujy kiya hai balke shock diya hai beta ye sab kya hai" rishi shikhawat point at swayam leg.

"Aah its nothing papa choriye naa mein theek hoon"

"Wo tu baad main deka jaye ga pehle mein apni beti se tu mil lo"he looks at sharon whoz standing next to the bed

"Hello uncle"

"Hello bete...how r u(he put his hand on sharon head.and thn hug her) iss shetan ne tang tu nahi kiya...agar kiya ho to bata dena abi iske kaan khench loonga"

Three of them laughs together

"Beta i have got good news for u tumare dad ko kidnapers se azaad kiya gya hai and thy are arrested so u are free to go to mumbai whenever u want"

" really uncle...dad kahan hai ab" sharon get very happy

"Beta wo apne ghar pe hai mein kal jaa raha hun tum b chali jana mere saath"

"Excuse me...mujy b apne plan mein shamil karo main akele kya karoonga"

Sharon and mr shikhawat both laughs

"Beta tum iss halat main safar nahi kar sakte tum do din baad aaja na"

"Nahi uncle main swayam k saath do din baad aajongi meine abi shimla b nahi deka so"

"Jese tumhari marzi beta"

In afternoon ...

Sharon come to swayam room to see if hez awake...coz she really wants to tell him her feeling ever since she found out that yes she is in love with swayam...she wanted to this to happen in shimla. So that it ia memorable

"Swayam tum kahan ho?" Swayam is not in his bed she call his name and thn she hear some noise comming from bathroom

"Knock knock! Swayam tum teek ho"

"Sharon thank God tum aagai yaar pata nahi garam pani q band ho gya"

"Open the door let me in"

"No no way tum bahir check karo na mein ne kapre nahi pehne"

Sharon smiles and plan to annoy swayam

"Bas tum khol do darwaza"

" sharon ye tum kya keh rahi ho main nahi khol sakta samjo"

"Agar tumne nahi khola to main papa k sath kal mumbai chali jaongi or tum yaha akele bete raho agle do din tak"sharon put her hand on her mouth to stop her laughter coz all this is very funny to her

"Acha okai okai kholta hoon wait"swayam dnt want sharon to go so he quickly wear his boxers and open the door

Sharon enters and see swayam nacked and she burst out laughing
"Itni fit body tu hai tumahari tu phir chup q rahe the"

"Sharon its so embarassing plz dnt"

"Ok fine or tum kapry pehen lo garam pani nahi aane wala coz bahir snow hoi hai or sab elecrit system down hai"

"Damn it" as swayam turn around he slip but before he falls on the floor sharon hold him. Their eyes are lock into each others and both are holding each others.

"Oh majno kapry pehen lo sardi lag jaye gi"

"Oh i m sorry yh i'll just change"

"Mein help kar doon"

"Nahi i m fine"

Both come out of bathroom and sharon is thinking how to tell swayam about her feelings

"Wese tu sare college mein majno bane phirte the or ab mere aik touch se itne uncomfertble ho rahe ho"

"No nothing like that chalo neechy chalte hain"

sharon gets very irritated coz swayam is ignoring the situation which is trying hard make.

"Listen tum aise q behave kar rahe ho jese main koi stranger hoon"

"Wot stranger r u kidding tum tu mujy apno se bhi apni lagti ho sharon"

Sharon get all pink and bush
"Swayam i need to talk to u"

"Haan tu karo na main sun raha hoon"

"Aise nahi...tum tum us taraf deko"

"What but main wahan q dekho jab tum yahan ho"

"Bas tum dekho naa"

"Okai fine"

"Swayam i actually i ws saying that...nothing lets just go"

Swayam very much knew what sharon wants to say coz he was notcing for so many days sharon was behaving different around him. But now that he was excited to hear her confession she suddenly decide not to say it and he gets angery.

"Fine mat batao main jaa raha hoon"

Sharon sees anger on swayamz face and as he walks towards the door sharon quickly says

" swayam i love u" she says it so fast that swayam stop immidiatly and turn back to sharon" kya phir se kaho mein ne suna nahi"

"I said i love u"

"Toda loud bolo naa"

"I hate u"sharon knws swayam irritating her so she does the same

" i love u too"swayam come closer to sharon and put his hands around her back"

"Finally God am so happy finally sharon tumne wo keh diya jisse mera dil sunne ko basro se tarap raha tha"

"Close ur eyes" sharon put her hands on his eyes

"Q"

"Uff aik tu tum questions bohot karty ho...har bf ko apni gf ki baat chup chap sun leni chahiye"

"Yes ma'am"

Swayam close his eyes and sharon go up on her toes and lock her lips with swayam

Swayam is pleasntly surprised
as that was quick...sharon quickly hide her face in swayams chest after she kissed him

"Wow sharon rai prakash is blushing and that too for swayam God every thing is possible in this world"
He hug her tightly and face up as if thanking God for give him his sharon.

Do din wo dono shimla ghome or do din baad mumbai aa gaye, wo dono college jane k liye bohot excited the q k apne friends ko apni relationship k bare mein jo batana tha...shimla in logo ki zindagi ka haseen safar tha.yahan dono k dil aik sath hoe thy yahan inhon ne bohot se wade kiye thy jis main aik ye wada tha k har saal is date ko ye log shimla aayengy to celebrate the day that brought them together.

P.S i knw this is rubbish part of the os coz i wrote in such hurry coz i wanted to finsh it B4 todays D3 epi for some strange reason. Sorry to dissopint u.


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Posted: 12 years ago
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res...i know mujhe pehle pehla wala unres karna hai..
i wud do that soon...
sorry for being late...

the chapter...was awsm...
loved it..
her hesitance to tell him...actually to confess to him...
and then the "The confession" was awsm...and cute and sweet...
it was like awww...
it was really a treat to read an os like this...thnx a lot to u...
for writing such a beautiful os on an awsm concept and
the language...loved the idea...

hatss off!!

Rohan

Edited by rohan_smile - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: rohan_smile

res...i know mujhe pehle pehla wala unres karna hai..

i wud do that soon...




Takr ur time
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Posted: 12 years ago
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ur 2nd part reminded me of 70's movie...gaon, thakur n all.😃😆...overall os was gud..bit different😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thanks for the PM & i got late sorryyy
Dude it's awesome as usual..U know right i love your os ;) I'm yet to read "tum hi ho" wala OS :( Will read that soon :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: PoonamPSwaRon23

Thanks for the PM & i got late sorryyy
Dude it's awesome as usual..U know right i love your os ;) I'm yet to read "tum hi ho" wala OS :( Will read that soon :)



Thnx 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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aww this story is soo nice..
so cute like swaron itself😳
first start to end loved every bit of it..
plz do write more :)

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