KR OS: Eyes Of Love - Page 6

Mannu.. One of d best writings of urs till date.. I jus loved it from d start to d end.. Lik others,Even I want a continuation to it 😳

D OS witnessed Selfless Love.. Kriyaansh independent.. Madly in love.. Reyaansh stood by kriya during her most difficult times.. He donated his eyes to kriya not only fr his ownself but also fr kriya coz he understands wht her dreams meant to her.. He donated his eyes coz he has seen her lik a free bird.. He cudnt c her dependant on evn himself let alone anyone elz..

N kriya.. Happy coz she cn thru her loves eyes but broken coz Reyaansh isnt wid hr but still is sure that they wud meet again n only u cn reunite dem.. So plz 😳

Though,Its an old concept but u bring a breeze of freshness to it..
Amazingly written.. Flawless ! Loved it :)

Nice os. . .
Bt,i didnt liked the end at all. . .
Mujhe 2nd part chahiye. . . . .
Mannu. .chup chap dede. .

This was a beautiful OS. It was pure bliss to read it. It never means such a loss if you are born blind, but after living most of your life, one of the biggest pain is the loss of eyes. If possible, continue this. It is a request. I love emotional OSes, but I guess this OS can be continued. So please, can you?

nothing to say abt dis os of urs... It's beyond wrds... I cant explain... Loved it.,,..

awesome OS...
ur tooo gud in writing...
it was an emotional OS 😭...
last part made me cry 😭 😭...
rey is d best lover any1 can get...
it ended on a sad note 😔...
i knw its a challenge...
thnx fr d pm...

Mannu you are a sweetheart..
Its so amazing..
Beautiful and true love portrayed in a brilliant way..

you should make a part 2 of it showing that ater few years kria met rey in the bus. They got married and now kria takes care of rey by becoming his eyesight. plz plz plz. that would be so cute. A PART 2 plz with a happy ending and kriyaansh together.