Finding Love #8: COMPLETED

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BSRaizada

@BSRaizada

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Posted: 12 years ago

#171

Nidhi, I'm so proud if this khushi
PS: my 6000th post just for u!

Edited by bhaktiii - 12 years ago

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chitra

@chitrajay

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Posted: 12 years ago

#172

Hi Once again - what a lovely story!👏

Simply told, but its very beauty is in that!

I read Finding love yesterday afternoon - all at one go...loved the concept- two people falling in love and trying to find their space together...notwithstanding all the usual ups and downs in life - loved how well you have woven this story - two people finding love indeed! And doing all they can to be together...forever!!👏

I loved your Arnav - loved his maturity - loved how he wants Khushi to be an equal partner - how he wishes for her to be with him-willingly, not based on sacrifices...

Life is about compromise, isn't it? Its amazing how love makes us re-prioritize life the way we see it...and we do it willingly, because the happiness of the ones we love is the most important thing in life. Of course, everyone need not agree...but this is how I view life and have lived it. So thats entirely my perspective!😊

I loved the progression in their relationship here.

Loved how the families gel well together-I especially loved both sets of parents and Arnav's Dadi, is a pleasant surprise, a welcome one at that!😃

I really hope happier times are in store for the two families- right now, Arnav's mother's health throws a pall on everything...but that is life ...and we have to go through difficult times, face problems head on...loved how beautifully Khushi has dealt with her dilemma - on one hand, an admission to a top business school, on the other hand, Arnav, the man she loves, going through probably the toughest time in his life ...her support is priceless!

Beauuutifulll!!!!

Hope you and your little one get better soon.

I wait for the next...

THANK YOU, VANDYYY a.k.a Vandana Sagar - love you for another brilliant recommendation!

Just noticed that the banner for the last chapter is by Mints!!! Lovelyyy!!!!

😃

Edited by chitrajay - 12 years ago

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Nidsubh007

@Nidsubh007

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Posted: 12 years ago

#173

Originally posted by: nishu_shorna
read all the chapters in one go...mom's up for sehri now and she is surely gonna kill me within next 10 minutes...so commenting before that...
this is so awesome...so romantic...and such a beautifully written story...ArShi relationship is so amazingly portrayed...loved it way too much...waiting for his official proposal...and hope Arnav's mom cures completely this time...
I have to thank Pallavi tomorrow again for telling me about these beautiful stories of u...

Thank you so much for your lovely comments. I always enjoy seeing new readers! I've added you to the email list.

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Nidsubh007

@Nidsubh007

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Posted: 12 years ago

#174

Originally posted by: bhaktiii
Nidhi, I'm so proud if this khushi
PS: my 6000th post just for u!

WOOHOOO 6000TH!!! 🥳

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Nidsubh007

@Nidsubh007

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Posted: 12 years ago

#175

Originally posted by: chitrajay
Hi Once again - what a lovely story!👏
Simply told, but its very beauty is in that!
I read Finding love yesterday afternoon - all at one go...loved the concept- two people falling in love and trying to find their space together...notwithstanding all the usual ups and downs in life - loved how well you have woven this story - two people finding love indeed! And doing all they can to be together...forever!!👏

I loved your Arnav - loved his maturity - loved how he wants Khushi to be an equal partner - how he wishes for her to be with him-willingly, not based on sacrifices...

Life is about compromise, isn't it? Its amazing how love makes us re-prioritize life the way we see it...and we do it willingly, because the happiness of the ones we love is the most important thing in life. Of course, everyone need not agree...but this is how I view life and have lived it. So thats entirely my perspective!😊

I loved the progression in their relationship here.
Loved how the families gel well together-I especially loved both sets of parents and Arnav's Dadi, is a pleasant surprise, a welcome one at that!😃

I really hope happier times are in store for the two families- right now, Arnav's mother's health throws a pall on everything...but that is life ...and we have to go through difficult times, face problems head on...loved how beautifully Khushi has dealt with her dilemma - on one hand, an admission to a top business school, on the other hand, Arnav, the man she loves, going through probably the toughest time in his life ...her support is priceless!
Beauuutifulll!!!!

Hope you and your little one get better soon.
I wait for the next...

THANK YOU, VANDYYY a.k.a Vandana Sagar - love you for another brilliant recommendation!
Just noticed that the banner for the last chapter is by Mints!!! Lovelyyy!!!!
😃

THANK YOU so much!!! You have truly captured the heart of "Finding Love" with your words! I feel so blessed to have such insightful readers who really understand my work.

Welcome aboard!!!

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Nidsubh007

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Posted: 12 years ago

#176

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vandana.sagar

@vandana.sagar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#177

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stalking helps for sure!

so excited cannot wait!

So beautiful ...so perfect...Nidhi ...I am speechless...so engrossed and with a smile on my face as though he was proposing to me...

Nidhi, you make us want your Arnav in our lives...

loved the way he knows that its not the institution but the fact that its with Khushi that he wants to be in it, she is everything he wants and more and she is all that matters to him...beautifully written sentiments.

I loved that his mother gives him the encouragement to go ahead with his plans resolving him of the guilt .

Loved how he has taken permission from her father knowing his importance in her life...so chivalrous too. making him swoon. Loved how he just feels complete when he sees her, love their suggestive teasing, even her nightsuit is a turn on for him...and I love how he takes her to the garden to talk and how just holding her makes them both so happy and content, I always say the way your write about their love makes me feel they are so full of love, like its bursting from the seams...so beautifully have you captured that essence with your simple words, it touches the heart each time...

Loved how he talks to her about going to Lucknow, about how its for them, his future and hers are now connected and he wants her to be there with him every step of the way going forward...love how he teasingly touches her and she is once again lost in his touch...I love how your make it so visual with these small but so very effective and simple gestures...

I love how they are picking fights, Khushi neglected with his working wondering if all he had to do is work why did she come,annoyed at herself for giving into him so easily ha ha...and he with the fact that they were late, their dinner which was part of his plan got affected,Khushi in a bad mood...just a bad day making their relationship more natural and normal...the tantrums, her not being hungry...its part of being in a secure relationship...

But at the end, he knew what he had to do, and he insisted that his plans not get ruined,so in what was the best proposal in IF...he gives her the most gorgeous ring...loved they symbolism behind the ring too...loved how he takes her to her nani's home, a place that has so many memories, and love how he carried her in, how symbolic...the beautiful time of the day literally a new beginning, so significant and then the words, from his heart to her and mine for sure...there was no one else but her ...and never would be..gifting them, her nani's house to create their memories for their future life...and loved how humour intact she does think its a better story for their children!!!

Aww Nidhi, you I tell you own romance...the warmth and love reflected through your beautiful writing, I dont have enough or fancy words to express how beautiful your writing is...the length of the chapter just perfect, doing full justice to the proposal...

Edited by vandana.sagar - 12 years ago

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Aaradhaya1688

@aaradhaya1688

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Posted: 12 years ago

#178

Res

Unresd
Me on the first page yipee*dances*
Loved d update
Finally he proposed that was the most adorable proposal 😆 😊

Edited by aaradhaya1688 - 12 years ago

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ayushi

@flutterlashes

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Posted: 12 years ago

#179

dat ws such a adorable & beautiful
update...
finally arnav propose her.. 😃
must say proposal ws really adorable..lovd d reddish ring...
outstanding part... 😃
totally lovd it 😃

Edited by flutterlashes - 12 years ago

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aashi12

@aashi12

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Posted: 12 years ago

#180

res:)

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firstly sorry for un-resing this late, but i was stuck with lots of work..:|

and when i read the update first, it was almost 4 hrs before this, i was spell bound, i was at loss of words, for i feared that anythng i might write won't justify how much i truly liked this update!

I was already head over heals in Love with Arnav.. Par ab looks like i've fallen just into him! Really!

What to say, his every action, his every word, his every thought give me goosebumps and a smile that refuses to die down!

The way he was apprehensive first , but at his mother's consent, he moved ahaed with the idea..

Putting in all his efforts..
Taking in all her likes..

Asking her dad first..
And then his wish to share his place and be the most imp person in Khushi's life!

Awww... 'Riibiiit' never sounded thid passionate and romantic ever!

And well why does Arnav ever worries over how to make Khushi agree to him.. His one touch and Khushi melts instantly!

Though that fight and delay did put the mood off.., but well arnav Singh Raizada knows to bring back siuation in his control!

Once on terrace, it was heaven, blissful fairytale like scene, for two people, soo in love!

I had loved you..
I've fallen in Love with you..
I had to be with you..
For i need you..

With the love that shines through eyes .
In the heart where the beauty of our relationshp lies..

Wit the thought of having you with me, forevr..
To hold you tight, and let go - Never..

To have you in my life..
To have to as wife..

To give you all i have..
To be with you, for all the time, i have..

For your the one..
And you'd be the one..

I've waited this for long..
Your Love just made my resolution a bit more strong..

You knew it, before i did..
You realised it, before i did..

This place is close to me, as it is to you..

'New beginnings' for both me and you..

For what i want, is you..
This moment, now, today and for the times ahead..
Saying all that i ever left unsaid..

What binds me and you, esides love is this rose..
To keep you and me, forever close..

For i love you, and you love me..
For the future of ours, let 'US' be..

Edited by aashi12 - 12 years ago