MG SS ~Shadow Of His Love~ {NOTE iN pg 81}

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Vibhuti Shah

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Posted: 13 years ago

#31

Amazing update
But why geet is angry in maan

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punam2712

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Posted: 12 years ago

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GEET HATES MAAN BUT WHY

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Ash1991

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Superb update...
geet hates maan...waiting to know why...
Loved the update...

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Thank you so much guys for your support 😊
love you all... 😊

MG SS ~Shadow of his love~

{Special thanks to MAYA RHEA for this awesome banner, love you}

Part 5 ::::::::::::

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Geet: Cuz I hate you...
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maan was shocked: what??? what did i do??
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geet: u haved asked me 1 question & i answer it now leave me...
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maan: but y u hata me?? maine assa bhi kya kar diya hain??
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geet: right... apne kuch bhi nahi kiya... now just leave...
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maan press her to the wall..
maan: first answer me or i will not leave you... why u hate me??
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geet: why u care about my hateness towards you??
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maan: i just want to knw i did??
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geet: u did nothing just leave me like u did before...
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geet pushed him...
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maan: what r u saying??
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geet: wow now u also don't remembered,do u??
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maan: make it clear.. i'm getting u...
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geet: u want to hear na.. then hear..
.. WHEN I WAS CRYING U COME TO ME, CONSOLE ME...
YOU SAY ME TO TRUST YOU,RI8??
I DID...
YOU SAID EVEYTHING WILL OK, I BELIEVE...
BUT WHEN I WAKE UP, U WAS NOT THERE, DO YOU??
YOU LEAVE ME LIKE EVERYONE DID LEAVE ME...
GEET start crying...
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MAAN was shocked...
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geet: you leave me... you just have pity on me, nothing else...
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maan: but i think...
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geet didn't let him complete: u think i'm just a poor girl who want just someone to console her.. so u did..
and when u saw i going in sleep u just left...
you don't even wait for me to thanked you...
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MAAN: that was not true...
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geet grabbed his coller: so what is truth??????
the truth is that BABAJI send me to this world to only leave alone, nothong else...
BABAJI have not time for me to send some one for me...
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maan: look this is not like that...
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geet: then what??
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maan: let me explain...
firstly I don't know why when u were crying i can't control myself... i was actully getting hurt...
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geet: why??
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maan: i really don't know... nd
I thought if u wake up see urself sleeping in my lap u'll feel guilt.. that why i just leave...
i don't want u to regeat for what happend with us...
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geet: u should have arleast wait from me to wake up. don't you??
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maan: i just think u get guilt, that u shared ur pain with one stranger...
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geet: but i was not...
i'm not like the other girls cuz they all have someone to love them frm their childhood...
but i did'nt get anything...
so whenevr anyone come to help me or console me i just trust me, like a fool...
i don't why i'm like this??
i'm so stupid that i alwasys search someones shoulder to cry without even knowing him/her...
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maan: that not bad thing angel... but ITS proved that u still have a baby heart... that's why u believe people easily... tum sabse aalag ho...
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geet : mujhe sabse aalag nahi banna mujhe bhi sabke tarah normal life chahiye... ek pyari se family chahiye... jo mujhe bohot jiyada pyar kare... { she sits ithe bed}
main ka itne burri {bad} hu ke babaji ke pass mere liye time he nahi hain?? {innocently}
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maan: {he also sits beside him} no angel... that's not true...
look u r so sweet & innocent... i'm sure tumhe jald he koi aapna mile ga jo tumhe bohot pyar karrega...
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geet put her head in maan's shoulder: kab hoga assa??
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maan put his hand into hers: jalld hoga...
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then there was slient in geet's room...
geet's head was still in maan's shoulder & maaneet hands was together...
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maan: angel aab raat bohot ho gaye hain tum soo jao...
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geet: hmmm
{but she didn't move}
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maan: soo jao...
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geet: hmmm
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maan: maon tumse baat kar raha hu...
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geet: main bhi apke he baat sun rahe hu..
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maan: toh phir soti kyun nahi??
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geet: mann nahi ho raha..
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maan: toh phir kya karoge abhi?
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geet: kuch nahi bash yuhi he bethe rahunge..
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maan {smiles} : okkk...
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geet: but apko bhi toh soo na hoga na?? apke ghar pe toh sab apka wait kar rahe honge??
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maan: hmmm...
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geet: toh aap jao..
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maan: hmmm
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geet { she remove her head}: she pulled maan's hand to stand him up
geet: uthoo na... jao sab apka wait kar rahe honge...
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maan stood up: but mujhe nahi jana...
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geet: noo noo aap abhi jao hum baad main milege...
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maan: kese??
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geet: matlab?
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maan:mujhe toh tumhara naam bhi nahi pata toh main kese milunga??
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geet: ohh hainn { smiles} hume toh ek dusre ka naam nhi nahi pata...
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maan give his hands to shake: hello My name is MAAN SINGH KHURANA...
will u be my friend??
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both shakes hands:
geet: hii my name is GEET
friends...
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MAAN: sweet name just like you..
geet blushed...
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geet: aap abhi jao hum phir milege...
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maan: ok but tum mujhse gussa nahi ho na??
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geet: nahii {smiles}
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maan: ok!!!
lekin hum milege kese??
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geet: ghar main jese aaj mile...
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maan: mere budhu dost hum roz asse thori mill sakte hain??
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geet: kyun nahi??
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maan: kyun ki agar kisine mujhe roz tumhare room main chupke se aate huye dekh liya toh mere ache se dhulai karenge...
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geet: ohhh... Toh aab???
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Precap:...😉
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Edited by nelufar10 - 12 years ago

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spoorthi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#35

Are wah zindgi me peli baar mera tukka sahi jagah laga mai to party karne jarahi hun! !

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aditimaan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#36

wow lovely so cute.so they became friends.to ab dono milenge kaise?

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Ash1991

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Posted: 12 years ago

#37

Geet is so sweet...
Loved it alot...

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nelufar

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Posted: 12 years ago

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MG SS ~Shadow of his love~

Part 6:::::
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geet: toh aab??
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maan: idea!!
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geet: kya??
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maan {take out his card from his poket}: take this..
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geet take his card: iss ka main kya karu??
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maan: hayee main kya karunga tumhara??
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geet {make a baby face} : maine kya kiya??
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maan {pull her cheek} : ohh my cute angel... mere card main mera number hain so tum mujhe call karoge aur hum baat kar sakte hain...
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geet: aaawww samaj gaye {smiles}
.. no u go...
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maan: ooo not so good angel...
maine tumhe apna num diya mujhe kon de ga??
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geet: oh woh toh main bhul he gaye.. rukiye...
geet went to her study table.. write her number in a note...
then she give it ti maan..
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geet: yeh loo...
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maan: hmm ok then talk u tomorrow ok?
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geet: ok...
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maan went to window ..
maan: geet now good ni8.. bbye...
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geet : bye {she hugged him}
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maan hugged her back...
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maan: now sleep ok...
both broke the hug & maan went out...
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<< After sometime later>>
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MAAN in his room:
maan was thinking about what happened with him & geet...
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on the other side...
geet was also thinking about him...
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both slept thinking about each other...
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<<< Morning>>>
Maan wake up with a sweet smile in his face ...
Maan take out his moblie & msged geet...
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geet was sleeping when her sleep broken by msg tone...
geet open the msg & that make a big smile on her face...
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MSG::
Hey sleeping beauty good mrng...
wake up...
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geet msged him back::
good mrng...
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maan smiled to see this msg...
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Then he went to take bath & ready for office...
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In KM At breakfast table:::::
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maan sit in his chair & his mother Shalini start to serve him...
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maan: maa aap log kab aaye??
{as they was out of town}
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shalini: shub ko beta...
tum bolo kal aadi ki shadi kese rahe.??
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maan smiles thinking about geet
maan: bohot ache thi maa... enjoyed a lot😊
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shalini was little shocked: what did u say?? u enjoyed a marriage???
iss pehle toh jab bhi maone kisike shadi ke bare main tumse pucha u just say hmmm...
tumhare tabyat to thik hain na??
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maan smiles : yes maa... aap bhi na.. wese papa kaha hain??
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shalini: woh ready ho rahe hain... tumse sidhe office main millenge...
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maan: ok mom.. now i hv to go... will meet u in evening...
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shalini: ok beta...
maan hugged her & went to office...
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on the other side
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geet also get ready & say bye to mr.malhotra and went to Asian Constructions for job interview...
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she enter the office & wait for her turn...
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geet {st} : i wish i get this job... but i hv no experince na... but still babaji help me ok??
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waiting & waiting... then she thought to msg maan...
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msg:::
hey... kiya kar rahe ho aap??
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maan smiles & reply

msg:::
checking a file...
you??
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msg:::::
waiting for my call foe interview..
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msg: interview??
for what???
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msg:: ARCHITECT...
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msg: where??
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It's geet's turn...
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so she msged maan:
talk u later now hv to go byye...
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maan: all the best...
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geet smiles & went to manager's cabin...
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they asked her some question but as always she have no experince they said no...
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geet: ok thnks sir... {she went out}
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geet come out from the office..
geet : koi nahi geet puttar... yeh job nahi mili toh kya hua? we will try for next...
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ok so i hv to cheer my mood...
ICE-CREAM...
She smiles & went to ice-shop
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Geet ordered for herself & sits..
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geet: now time to find more job interviews... uff feeling so bored .. ok first will finished the ice-cream thn work ok??
hmmm...
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she about to start eating her ice-cream when her mobile start ringing..
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geet : wrong time...
then she saw it was maan so she picked up...
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maan: hello angel...
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geet: hii
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maan: interview kesa tha??
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geet saw that her ice-cream was melting..
geet: maan u just hold for sometime ha...
my ice-cream is melting...
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maan: what?
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geet: aree baba main main ice-cream kaha rahe hu tum thore der hold karo plz... phn kaat na maat ok??
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maan {smiles} ok u eat i'm waiting ...
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geet : thnks...
geet start licking the ice-cream...