For my diii nazrin!!

hey guys as many of u know i am he cheylii of sareeta jee(the mahaan poet of the forum)

i just penned down few lines dedicated to my didi nazriin...just tell me how is it!!

A letter to my sister

Dear sis,

Selfless love only have I

A priceless treasure to gift

prosodic words aren't left

to bring smiles across your face

have I a lamenting heart

thanks sis for what you have been

unknotted the entagled ropes

that darkness knit all aroun

Of all I admire was the incessant love

that flew around

with wings outstretched

with feisty words to soothe umpteen hearts

the tune of a distant hymn

reminds me of the hearts sorein the crimson sky

emotions added the azure ocean

time a swift servant

but now a crippled tyrant

i agonise witha mist clung heart

moon put over a cludy veil......

images blurred....

I write in anguish

i squirm in the pangs of nostalgia

i fate thwarted blissful days

with echoes and shadows of some sweet memories

with prayers

Your sister

Sughra

Sughra.... Chyeeeelliiiiiiiii, that was sooooooo.... I am so at a loss of words... fabulous dahling! Aur tu mujhe gurujee bolti hai... arre maaayi, aaaj se main teri cheli aur tu meri guru!!! 😊

Fantastic work... by the way one question, why the sad tone to the entire poem?? 😊

sugu ur poem is wonderful girl, i have no cclue tht ur talent vests in poetry also. just amazing. wow kaa forum has a lot of talented people, good.

if u dont mind- i also niticed the dull tone in the poem, its like ur leaving her and assuring her. sorry i dont have a keen knowledge in poetry. sorry if i interpretted wrong.

btw, sareeta dii if u use all the dictionarry in ur post tht will make people like me(less known dict) very hard to praise. 😆

Originally posted by: yamulya1

btw, sareeta dii if u use all the dictionarry in ur post tht will make people like me(less known dict) very hard to praise. 😆

Amu tu bhi na yaar! Maine itne saare words kahaan use kiye???!!! Tu bhi bas mere ko aise hi chedti rehti hai!!! 😆

wow!!!! that was so sweet sughra....
ya i noticed the sad part tooo...

i wish i had a sister like you!!!

how sweeetttt!!!!
yaar sughra dedicate 1 2 me!!! lolz, u have talent

Originally posted by: sareeta

Amu tu bhi na yaar! Maine itne saare words kahaan use kiye???!!! Tu bhi bas mere ko aise hi chedti rehti hai!!! 😆

nahi diii, i am not chedting u😆. i found it hard to write. 😆

no taking it serious diii🤗

awwwwwwwwwwwww......sughu......u left me speechless.....OMG!!!!!!! wht am i suppose to say.....im soo lost in ur poetry....awwww 😭 😭 sweeetheart that was soooooooo luvly.......this is the frst time sumone wrote a poetry for me....i just cant explain how beautifull it was.......im just so touched.....i feel sooo blessed..... ohhh sareeta diii kyaa aap meri madat kar saktii hai...mai iss larkii se kya kahu.... 😭 😭 😭 awwwwwww i luv u soooooo much..... 😭 😭 abbb mujhe sach mey rona aa raha hai... 😭 😭