The mysterious bonding...(KR&SS FF)

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Posted: 12 years ago
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hie peeps ..dis is renu here...so am here to make an FF on my fav jodi's kriyansh and swaron..hope u people lyk my cncpt..dis FF is nowhere related to the show...so here is a prologue.pls don't mind any grmmcl or spllng mistakes..

PROLOGUE:

"dheko we don't have other optns..agar humey money chahihey tho humey wife husand ki thara actn karanahoga.."he said looking at her..

"but..."she was gng to reply he but befre dat he had cut her dwn...

"bas four months ki bath hey uskey bath hum ye job chodkey apaney rasthey chelejayegey..."said rey tryng to cnvsn her with his words...

"hmm tek hey ..but only four months usey ek din bi zada nahi.."she said getng up from the chair...a smile creekd on his face...with the exctmnt he ran to her and hugd her as tghtly he culd...

"thank u so much thank u.."he said hugng her ...

"oh okay...ab muje chodogey pls me breath nahi kara parahihu.."she said tryng to brk the hug..

"oh am really vry sorry.. out of exctmnt meney tumey hug karaliye hey.."he said

"hmm ..its okay..hothahey i undrstnd"she said gvng him a smile...

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"uncle ..uncle..."he came in to house..

"kyon? oh tum avo avo beta..kise ho swayam?"

"uncle apko patha hey muje swayam nahi..."an female vce cutd his wrds..

"detective swayam bolana chahihey.. papa...am rght swayu?"she said cmpltng him...

"you are always rght shar.."he said with a wide smile on his face...she to gve him a smile and sat besd him on the sofa...

"acha beta bathav kya bat hey ..?"he askd him

"ah ah dective ji bathaye apaki investigation me aapa ko konisi kabar milihey"said sharon .

"wo uncle,shar acrrdng to my investigation humney patha chela hey ki humney paper me jo add diya hey us add ki respne aayihey...one couple is gng to come to teach in our school.. "swayam said ...

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"tho apahiho na wo master jo humari school me bachoko padaney ayahey?"askd swayam

"yupe..am mr.MR.reyaansh singhania..aur ye meri wife MRS.kriya reyaansh singhania ..."he said movng his hand frwd for a hand shake...hear dis kriya widend her eyes..

"oh ach am Swayam Shekhawat..aur ye ..meri best friend ..aur es school ka owner ki beti..Sharon Rai Prakash"said swayam

"oh acha ..hello MISS.Sharon Rai Prakash"she said gvng her hand shake..

"hello..aur apaka naam kriya hey?"sharon said looking at kriya..but she didn't reply her..rey lookd at her indicatd her dat sharon is talkng to her..

"hmm ya .. ek min "she said pulling away for them

"mera naam kriya nahi mary hey..tumney meri namm kyu badala?"

"thaki humey koi problm nahi ho"

"but "she was cutd by him

"no but and put ab chalo.."he said dragng her back to them...

"hmm wo thodi persnl issue thi dessn karali humney"he said to swayam

"hey shar tumey nahi lagtha kuch gadabad hey?i mean my detective mind is sensng sum thng is wrng"he said in sharon ear..

"shh chup raho..now talk to them"sharon answrd him back..

"acha apako path hey meri di ki naam bi kriya thi aur apko dhekey muje di bolneki man karahey ..kya me apako di bolasakithihu?pls" she said witha pleadng look..

"ofcurse ..kyu nahi... tum muje di bola sakti ho.."she replyd with a smle on his face...

"oh really thank u thank u so much di..aap bohat achey ho"she said hugng her..and she too hugd her back...

so bolo how was dat? acha tha ya bura tha ya wrst? ..let me knw if u want me to wrte it furthr or not...pls gve ur feedback plz do like and comment, it only takes a few seconds to like and a couple of minutes to comment... no tomato's & eggs pls...


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sweetydiyafrien thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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prologue was great start... awesome... loved it...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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amazing concept
love it
plz cont. soon
really want to read further
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Gr8 start...
Awesome prologue...
Update soon...
Nd whn u update plzz pm me also
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Posted: 12 years ago
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amazing start babes
loved it
superb
would love reading it

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Posted: 12 years ago
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amazing start
nd nice concept
plzz pm me weneva u update :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Superb prologue. . .
Waiting 4 d update. .
Update super soon. .
And do pm me.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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luved it
ppllzz continue
n update soon...:)
n do pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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amazing strt
do continue...:)
n pm me...:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice start
update soon
plz pm me

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