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Chapter 2
Yaay yaay next update on Thursday pakka as u reached the 60 likes criteria yaay 🥳
Coming to the update
Wow the diva is always awesome 😊
Loved how she stand strong in front of swayam
N awe poor girl but hero is always there to save his heroine 😉
Beta Rey Wow 😳
But different packs 😲
Now that's interesting I am liking it 😊
Coming to the last line of swayam "sexy" it was so cute 😳
Loved the entire update
Wow I have to learn a lot from you as a writer fairy
Good job as usual 👏
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Commenting just to make this FF show in my posts.
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Marium aaj thursday hai 😳
Update ???
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Originally posted by: --Ta_Sha--

Hey fairy :D
I know I am super duper late but I didn't get chance/time to read any stories since a month or so :(
Anyways finally I am here :)
Coming to ur concept
It reminds me of one of my favorite stories 'twilight' 😳
It's nice and unique on IF :D
Hmmm I must say u described all the stuff related to wolf well in the first few posts. It made it a lot easier to read the 1st chap :)
Counting to the 1st chapter
Well I was confuse in the beginning not cause of concept but was thinking who is Sharon's mate
Was hoping that's it's no one other than swayam
And yaay it is swayam only
Liked how u described Sharon's sadness and pain
Loved swaron shop scene it was cute 😳
Awe he was guilty for making her cry
Poor Sharon saw swayam with someone else :O :'(
Good job 👏
Before I end my comment I have to say that you are a great writer and I loved ur writing since the day I first read your JDM S1 ❤️




No, problem! You are read in now na.. so be happy! 😊
And thank you for such a sweet comment! Love yaa for that...
I never knew you read my works before because i dun think i have ever seen your comments on my works! 😳 But still thanks a lot! 😃
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Are you going to update now??? 😳
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Originally posted by: --Ta_Sha--

Chapter 2
Yaay yaay next update on Thursday pakka as u reached the 60 likes criteria yaay 🥳
Coming to the update
Wow the diva is always awesome 😊
Loved how she stand strong in front of swayam
N awe poor girl but hero is always there to save his heroine 😉
Beta Rey Wow 😳
But different packs 😲
Now that's interesting I am liking it 😊
Coming to the last line of swayam "sexy" it was so cute 😳
Loved the entire update
Wow I have to learn a lot from you as a writer fairy
Good job as usual 👏



You yourself is an amazing writer and it proves that my own friend read your works but not mine! 😳
Thanks a lot for the comment, it means a lot to be that you are commenting! 😃
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Edited by -Marium- - 12 years ago
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Chapter # 3



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Sharon was sitting in front of her mom and best friend, that in a towel giving laziest expressions to them. Sharon knew if she started telling everything then they will freak out and she will go directly to hell. She sighed and kept listening to the scolding she was trying to digest in her ears.

"Stop freaking out, please!" Sharon asked yelling at her mother's annoying behavior. "Freaking out!? You think I am freaking out, Sharon? As much as this is truth that no one can hurt you because you are a werewolf then it is also true that you are my child, my only child and I just can't stop caring about you!" Her mother shouted and tears started flowing from her eyes. "Shit, I am really sorry mom!" Sharon while instantly walking towards her mother seeing her teary eyes and hugged her warmly. "Sorry, I shouldn't have talk to you like that, please forgive me," Sharon said looking down at the floor... "I am not angry or upset Sharon, is just that I get scared when you are not around sometimes, and why did you go to that territory? That is another pack, you what it could have been dangerous?" Her mother asked again hugging her tightly in fear to lose her daughter.

Sharon broke the hug instantly and looked at Natasha who made a weird funny face and ran into Sharon's room. Sharon was planning on killing her afterwards, "Am I missing something, honey?" Her mother asked crossing her arms on her chest and raising her brows. Sharon did a light nervous laugh, "Out with it already, Sharon." Her mother glared at her. "The soon to be Alpha of that pack is my pack, and I was planning on telling you so don't kill me!" Sharon said in one breath and ran into her room as well, locking it from inside.

After almost half an hour, Sharon unlocked the door when her mother black-mailed her that she will tell this to her dad right away on a phone call. Her mother silently came into her bedroom and sat on the bed, next to Sharon who was looking so nervous and fragile that tears started falling from her eyes. "Baby, stop crying. I am not going to eat you, honey. And besides I don't think a wolf looks attractive while crying!" Her mother joked to make her stop crying and Sharon chuckled at her joke. "Thank you, mum." Sharon said and wiped her tears. "I never knew my daughter is so fragile, I am worried for you. Is something wrong?" Her mother asked caressing her cheek lovingly. "Err, actually I' no we both found out that we are mates to each other like 2 years ago." She said and looked at her mother's shocked expression, "Please, don't do that, mum. Listen," Sharon said and continued, "and in these two years we never spoke to each other, I don't why but I think he was as confused and nervous about this whole mate thing as I was for all these years but I loved him, but how can it be possible that he didn't?" Sharon asked her mum totally upset about it. "So, my princess loves her man, but how you do you he doesn't? He told you?" Her mother asked, "No, he didn't but he don't love too because' because I saw her kissing someone else today, in morning and a wolf who loves his mate can't do that!" Sharon said a bit loudly. Her mother sighed and wrapped her arms around her. "Don't worry Sharon everything will be alright, if things won't work then you have can wait for this mate bond to break in coming years, even after being your mum I can't lie that, but you have to wait, long and long, dear but remember your mum is always with you, alright?" Her mother said and kissed her head. "Love ya, mum." Sharon said kissing her mum her cheek before she left her room.

*

Swayam's sister Sonia and Rey literally dragged him and pushed him down on the couch and sat in front of him. "What?" Swayam asked casually, "Don't even try to fool around us!" Rey said raising her brow at him. "Yeah, right, Rey, beta, go call the doctor! LOL! It was so fun, you should have looked at your face, man!" Swayam said and burst into laughter, even his sister was muffling her laughter because for now she was on Rey's side. "Kaminey, it is not my mistake that you are an Alpha and every single person has to bow at him, even his best friend." Rey said and punched him in his stomach, "Saalai, choor mujhe!" Swayam said and both of them starting fighting like monkeys.

Sonia was banging her head from the wall and shouting for her mom. Her mom soon arrived looking as young and smart like any girl. "Holy mother of God, leave each other!" Her mother ran to Swayam and Rey and tried to get hold of the situation, and after too many attempts both of them standing on each corner of the room, and Swayam was shirtless whereas Rey was bottom-less. All thanks to Swayam that he didn't tore his boxer, anyway. "Shame on both of you, even Sonia's son is more mature then both of you!" She said and smacking both of theirs head. "Maa'" both of them said at the same time and earned a deadly glared from her. "Both of them, foot to yours room, now!"

*

"Everybody knows in Simla that there are werewolves and you we are so lucky that the hottest Alpha to be is in our college, sometimes I wonder how good it is to be a werewolf. I am so excited for this grand party, what are you going t wear?" Every girl in the college was talking about the grand party and Sharon was totally clueless that what was happening around her. Natasha walked towards her and passed her a think paper or seems like an invitation. Sharon asked her what is it so she simply said that she should read it herself, "What the hell, he is turned 18 today?" Sharon almost yelled. "Psst, why are you shouting? Everyone will hear you, they shouldn't that what you and Swayam are." Natasha said and dragged Sharon in the empty classroom. "No, way! It is so not good, now what?" Sharon asked totally freaking out. "Chill, what could have all of all, you will get into heat and have sex and everything' shit, OMG!" Natasha put her palms on her mouth, "Yes, absolutely. Natasha, it will be next to impossible for him to control himself and even I am turning 18 after few days, God what is happening and why with me only?" Sharon said looking up, "By the way are you asking from real God or our wolf God?" Natasha asked totally humorless. "Shut up," Sharon smacked her arm lightly.

"Look, I am going out now, from the college before Swayam will see me because I know he must be thinking the same thing and I can't look at him like this, so good bye." She said and literally ran out of the classroom only to see Swayam standing at the corner of hall with huge girl crowd around him. Sharon glanced at him quickly and saw he was busy smiling at other girls and took the right chance to tip toed out of the hall. She reached the exit of the hall but before she could even step out, he walked in the blink of an eye and stood in front of her. Sharon glared at him and tried to run out with her over powered wolf skills, but darn his mate held her hand and now she couldn't just deny what was his mate's wish.

"What is your problem, idiot!?" Sharon shouted, making lots of heads turn around them. Swayam gave a cold face to Sharon and looked around soon whole hall was empty with few people left around to whom Swayam smiled. Of course, Sharon won't agree to what he was going to ask her if there will be no people left around. "When will you stop showing off your Alpha tricks, huh? They are human being, stop compelling them!" Sharon whispered with venom in her tone. "It depends on you, look if you will obediently agree to me then who needs to compel the students, right?" Swayam asked taking support of the wall and smiling at her. "God, you are making me confuse. Why all of a sudden after 2 years you are talking to me and all, huh?" Sharon asked totally pissed off. Swayam looked at her without any expression, "You really wanna know that?" He asked standing straight and looking in her eyes, "Hmm'" Sharon only uttered a signal hmm looking in Swayam's eyes which instantly changed color from lightly brown to jet black; black, the color of desire. Swayam came closer to her, "Because I have realized one thing, that we both are mates and nothing can change this, not even both of us, and how many times or how hard we try but the bond will only pull us towards each other, you are different Sharon, not like other girls, who just wanna be my mate and get me to reach the height or may be because they think I am good eat, but I see something in your eyes, which I see in my mom's eyes when she looks at my dad, I know this is love and I certainly know that you are in love with me. Why should be ignore each other when we know we can't," Swayam all of this while looking in her eyes or towards her lips and after he looked back to her face, "Do you love me, too?" Sharon asked though she knew it won't matter much if he says no because it is normal to feel not to be loved by your mate for her. "I love you'," He said and instantly Sharon gasped looking in his eyes, "'but I am not in love with you." Sharon nodded and slightly looked around to check on people if they were watching, to her luck they weren't. "Well, I don't like all these birthday parties and all, it makes me look like kid that I am certainly not but I do wish that you come tonight to the party, will you? After all it is your mate's and Alpha of this territory's celebration." He asked looking around towards students to check himself too, "I can't, I am from another territory, and I can't betray my pack." Sharon huskily said, "Yes, but I am your mate too and how much your pack tries to stop you from meeting the wolves of my pack, they simply can't stop you from meeting or obeying me, it is wolf rule, forgot it?" Swayam asked raising his eye brow at her, "I will try. I am not promising so don't get excited and don't wait for me!" Sharon said with attitude. He gave her his 'I always win' smirk like smile, "Dream on!" Sharon said and in a blink of an eye reached towards the exit, again only to be stopped by Swayam. "What is this, seriously? Why do you always block my way like this?" Sharon asked, glaring at him. He didn't say anything instead opened her hand bag slightly which was hanging on her arm and put a small black colored card in it, the invitation card. "I'll be waiting'" He said and did something which made Sharon gasped, kissed her lightly on her cheek.

Sharon definitely couldn't stay at college any longer. She ran into the nearby cold, breezed forest and turned into beautiful furred wolf. She was insanely deep in forest but she turned around and saw Swayam leaning against the window of some class from far away, looking at her wolf form intently.


Note below.

Edited by -Marium- - 11 years ago
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Disclaimer : Who ever wants to get PM's add the id i have mentioned in the start of the chapter, and hit the like button on third post of the 1st page of this FF.

There is nothing much to say about this update because i don't think that the update was hard to understand to complicated so i explain some here. 😳

I have to have 60 likes at least on this chapter till next Thursday! 😈
(No 60 likes, means no update)

Please comment as they encourages me to write more and faster!


-Marium


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Aahh loved the bonding between sharon and her mother. ⭐️ She was so scared to lose her daughter. 😃 Their conversation was amazing. 👏 The way sharon said to mom that swayam is her mate and ran away from there was really cute. N her mom is right, she indeed is fragile. 😳

Oh my god, swayam and rey fighting like monkeys and its result. Swayam shirtless and rey bottomless. 🤣

Wow, now that's something really interesting that they are so open about being werewolves and everyone in shimla accepts them and the girls are excited for the party. Great. 😎

Eeeps really did i read it right? Swayam finally confessed his feelings. Yippee. 🥳

Awe he said he sees something in her eyes which he sees in his mother's eyes when his mother looks in his father's eyes. N that's love. Wow.

But sharon said she doesn't love him. 😒 That's understandable, she is afraid. 🤔

Awwiee he kissed her. 😲 Awesome. I am sure sharon will go to the party. *finger crossed*. 😳

Will be waiting for next Thursday. Awesome update Marium. 👏 👍🏼

Edited by Anindita91 - 12 years ago

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