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Posted: 12 years ago

#101

Originally posted by: u-me-aur-D3
happy birthday

Thanks Rae 😳

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veronica

@SwaRon_rocks

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Posted: 12 years ago

#102

Originally posted by: Ayesha_Kreya
Happy b'day...dear...

Thanks 😊

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veronica

@SwaRon_rocks

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Posted: 12 years ago

#103

Ek gudiya ne dastak di..

Dil ke darwaje pe..

Anjaani si ..

Par lagi pehchani si..

(😳)

Pehle najar me jo dil ko chu jaye..

Ye jadoo har kisi me kahan...

Koi ek pal me ajnabi se dost ban jaye..

Aisa anokha he ye jahan...

(yup aisa jadoo sirf aap jaise special people mein hai..as rightly said by someone u r a dil-touching di😳)

Gumsum si..

Chup chup si...

Kabhi aam si..

Kabhi khas si..

Kabhi natkhat ..

Kabhi shant si..

Doston ke dilon me basti wo..

Doston ki jaan si..

(m feeling flatered di..exact discription😆😳)

Honthon pe hamesha khile muskan uski..

Dil ye dua he...

Pure ho har ek arzoo uske ..

Sach ho jo bhii uska sapna he

(Thanks😳)

Thanks a lot deep di..ur one of the best writers..loved the poem..coz u wrote it..and voh bhi mere liye..Thanks di..thank u!!

love

ur baby

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veronica

@SwaRon_rocks

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Posted: 12 years ago

#104

swaron os BLEEDING LOVE for you veru do read and tell me did you like it
the concept is basically from the time when dazzlers weakling existed.Swayam is the majnu and is madly in love with sharon.Sharon is falling in love with him but he does not know yet.Keep your speakers on listen to the song while reading

Closed off from love
I didn't need the pain
Once or twice was enough
And it was all in vain
Time starts to pass
Before you know it you're frozen

But something happened
For the very first time with you
My heart melts into the ground
Found something true
And everyone's looking round
Thinking I'm going crazy

But I don't care what they say
I'm in love with you
They try to pull me away
But they don't know the truth
My heart's crippled by the vein
That I keep on closing
You cut me open and I

Keep bleeding
Keep, keep bleeding love
I keep bleeding
I keep, keep bleeding love
Keep bleeding
Keep, keep bleeding love

SHARON'S POV
I had closed myself to love or any such felling because i knew they always end up breaking your heart.I built mile highwalls around my fragile heart cuz i did not want to get hurt and feel that pain.Once and twice i did try to open up to you but it was all in vain as i was too scared and did not want to be vulnerable so i returned back to my shell.time passed but i did not move.Its like I was frozen neither could i move away from you nor close too you.I was stuck.But then something happened with you and I changed.walls around my heart broke and my heart melted and I started falling for you.I found something new something so beautiful I found LOVE.I loved you but everyone else around me thought that It must be crazy and stupid of me too fall in love with you.It was not their fault It was mine as even i didnt know I was capable of love before you came into my life.But now I believe because i feel it when I'm with you.Now when they feel like something is changing that I am changing and the reason is you they are trying to pull me away but they dont know the truth,the truth that your love has completely consumed me.They say I'm going to get hurt but all i can think is that you've already cut me open and i keep bleeding love and love and love

Trying hard not to hear
But they talk so loud
Their piercing sounds fill my ears
Try to fill me with doubt
Yet I know that the goal
Is to keep me from falling

But nothing's greater than the rush that comes with your embrace
And in this world of loneliness
I see your face
Yet everyone around me
Thinks that I'm going crazy, maybe, maybe

But I don't care what they say
I'm in love with you
They try to pull me away
But they don't know the truth
My heart's crippled by the vein
That I keep on closing
You cut me open and I

Keep bleeding
Keep, keep bleeding love
I keep bleeding
I keep, keep bleeding love
Keep bleeding
Keep, keep bleeding love

SWAYAM'S POV

I am trying so hard to block their sound telling me to stop loving you coz they think you'll only hurt me but i cant block their voices as they are too loud neither can i stop loving you because loving you is like breathing to me.Their piercing words are wrenching my heart and trying to fill it with hate for you.Even though I don't like what they are saying because I know somewhere deep inside you love me too and will never hurt me but i also know that whatever they are trying to tell me is because they care for me and don't want me to get my heart broken.Their is nothing more pleasant than being in your embrace close to your heart.The thought of it,the rush of it makes me feel alive and even when I'm all alone surrounded by darkness your face is the only thing that i see which gives me hope and strength to and not give up,not one me,not on you and most importantly not on us.Even though I know you will never rip my heart out they think its crazy of me to love you like this.Well maybe I am crazy,Yes I am crazily,supidly and madly in love with you.They are trying to pull me away from love so that i can live my life but they dont know the truth that you are my life and i cant live without you,the truth that you love me too.They still persuase me that you'll hurt me well you have already cut me open but I don't feel the pain I just keep bleeding love and love anf love...

And it's draining all of me
Oh they find it hard to believe
I'll be wearing these scars
For everyone to see

I don't care what they say
I'm in love with you
They try to pull me away
But they don't know the truth
My heart's crippled by the vein
That I keep on closing
You cut me open and I

Keep bleeding
Keep, keep bleeding love
I keep bleeding
I keep, keep bleeding love
Keep bleeding
Keep, keep bleeding love
You cut me open and I

Keep bleeding
Keep, keep bleeding love
I keep bleeding
I keep, keep bleeding love
Keep bleeding
Keep, keep bleeding love
You cut me open and I
Keep bleeding
Keep, keep bleeding love

BOTH POV

Though loving you is draining all of me as it as engulfed me and taking out everything inside of me piece by piece.I am falling deeper and deeper but i love every second of it yet they dont believe it.They dont find it as powerful as consuming as I do.I'll make them believe me.I'll wear that bright smile on my face which exist because of you and your love for everyone too see that I am not crazy that its you and your love that's keeping me alive and happy and not breaking me apart.All i feel is that no matter how much they try to pull me away i will keep loving you more and more.Maybe they don't know the truth but i do and the truth is that YOU are LOVE and LOVE is you and everytime you will come close and cut my heart open I will keep bleeding love and love...

Harshu di 🤗

The os is awesome..

The song selection is superb..m falling in love with this song..

and the way u described swaron's emotions through the lyrics..is brilliant..

Each and every emotion was nicely penned..👏

Loved the ending lines..YOU r LOVE and LOVE is YOU..

U r a fab writer di..i want links to all ur writeups..

Lastly thanks a lot di..u wrote this for me..it really means a lot..

Thanks..