ARSHI FF: HOPE IN RAIN-A STORY OF PASSION, LINK TO THREAD 2{page 138}

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KBS

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Posted: 12 years ago

#691

Originally posted by: Suchi.R
Read all parts together.. liked the concept.. writing style is beautiful.. Loved the suspense.. Liked all parts but not Arnav using Sana for physical pleasure.. did not like a bit of it.. I accept Arnav as rude, egoistic..I am ok with flirting Sana.. but when he used her only for physical pleasure, i cant agree with it.. sorry.. but overall liked this FF.. so definitely would love to read more..

ya I also didn't like the part but that was necessary
will reveal why, how and when pinky promise

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Posted: 12 years ago

#692

Originally posted by: sarun9
Cute update. How the scar formed? Loved arnavs deal and behavior to khushi. Update next part soon.

update is coming
and thnx

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KBS

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Posted: 12 years ago

#693

Originally posted by: .Anisha.
loved the update 😳
do continue soon
thanks for the PM

thnx dear
update is on its way😉

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KBS

@oKBSo

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Posted: 12 years ago

#694

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aishwarya

@Dreamer3003

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Posted: 12 years ago

#695

res😳

unres

totally amazinggg👏👏

this s gettin more interesting👏

and m very much excited for d upcomin parts😳

well written!!!!👍🏼

d flashback Arshi part and d arnav part n d last wer outstanding😊

waitng for d nxt part😳

Edited by aishu3003 - 12 years ago

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lala rukh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#696

awesome update...starting from khushi's kiya matlab kiya bolon mein to la saying to khushi ...u simply can told that u tripped,hahaha thats awesome...

payal,akash,anjali and now her husband also knows the truth ...

flash back was awesome too...uff the way arnav broke down and cried in some past guilt, beautifully written dear,loved it :)

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shruti

@shruti46

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Posted: 12 years ago

#697

res

so more history..anjali and payal are at fault for separating them at the same tym arnav is also blaming himself for same thing..that is confusing..

may b they all r at fault..

loved how u described arnav's emotion.

and the last line"kash main tumse mohabbat kar pata"

was icing on the cake...

.i already wrote while commenting on ur OS SHADOWS dont underestimate urself..

u r also good at emotional scenes as u r in ahem ahem scenes..

continue soon..

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Khesnee B

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Posted: 12 years ago

#698

IM very confused...Payal and Anjali are responsible for their separation and on the other hand Arnav misunderstood her😕

Im not liking the way Arnav is maintaining distance from Khushi🥺

The flashback was awesome😳

Continue soon😊

P.s-Thanks for the dedication🤗

Edited by kenny_Arhi - 12 years ago

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--MISHTEE--

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Posted: 12 years ago

#699

Loved d story

just now caught up

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Nicky saluja

@Nickysweet

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Posted: 12 years ago

#700

res
Unres I m on first page i don't believe it first time yipee
Loved it so much truly fab update
Arnav misunderstood her but what is the reason. Did karan brainwash him about her and he push her and she got injured. I think something like this happen.😉
She had memory loss and don't remember anyone not even her love😭
Hope she will regain her memory soon and bring arnav back in her life😛
He is feeling guilty now😭
Muah for the update and romance is amazing😳

Edited by Nickysweet - 12 years ago