TaaYam OS ~ Babul Jo Tumne Sikhaya~

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Hey guys!! im bck bt nt wid anthr tr ss..dis time i tried doing a TaaYam OS..pls bare wid me guys..its my frst time trying..i knw its nt gr8 bt i really respect their relationship n admire their bonding..anyhoo enough of my bak-bak..here's a taayam OS 😃

p.s: here taayam r real brothersister..their parents r dead..dey hve lived in mumbai since dey were young..SwaRon r allrdy married n today is tr's marrge 😃
*d shikhawat mansion ws fully decorated wid flowers n lights..there was a big red carpet from d entrance to d main hall where d mandap ws nicely decorated..all d guests had arrived n were waiting for d bride to come..on d mandap, d handsome groom ws allrdy dre, waiting for his bride..d pandit den asks to bring d bride to d mandap for d weddng..d groom den signals his bestman cum bestfrend cum brother in law to fetch his bride a.k.a his taani from her room..d bestfrend a.k.a swayam rushes to her room to fetch his sister..as he entered d room, he cudnt find her..d room ws full of girls and he spotted Sharon among dem..Sharon, his wife, his beloved..she spotted him too n a smile crept on her face*

Sharon(shouting)- ok girls..d groom is here allrdy!! He is at d mandap..we have to go down rght nw😃

*all d girls move out of d room except for swaron, d3 girls n ofc our very own bride, taani..as d room cleared, swayam cud spot taani nw..she was looking absltly stunning wid her red coloured lehengga, her jewelerys n d big tika on her head*

Swayam- wow taani..tum bohut hi jyada pretty lag rahi ho😃

Taani- thnx bhai😊

Sharon- ofc swayam..khubsurat toh lagegi na..aaj apni rey ke liye sajji hai😆

Taani(blushing) - bhabhi aap bhi na😳

Simmi- oohhoo..blushing n all haan?

Sharon- okok girls..abhi we have to go down

Swayam- uumm wait ..cn I hve 5 mins alone wid my sister ladies?

Sharon- sure baby..will b just outside waiting😳

Rinni- baby n all haan?

Sharon - shut up..lets go

*n d d3 girls leave TaaYam in d room*

Taani- kya hua bhai? Evrythng ok?main acchi toh lag rahi hoon na? yeh sab theek toh hai na?😕

Swaam- haye krishnaji..calm down taani..evrythngs fine bas..uumm..kuch missing hai

Taani(panicking)- kya? Omg main kuch bhool gayi hoon kya? Wat is missing bhai?😲

*swayam den takes a pretty red shaadi ka chunari out from d cupboard n put it on taani's head who was sittng infront of a mirror*

Swayam - nw its perfect😃

Taani - wow bha!! Dis is so pretty!! Yeh aapne mere liye liya?😃

Swayam- taani yeh chunri mama ki thi..unhone apne shaadi mein peheni thi aur ab main tumhe pehena raha hoon..she wud hve done d same thing if she ws here wid us..she wud hve been so proud of u taani..aur tum seriously iss world ki bestest bride lag rahi ho

Taani(sobbing)- b..bhai..thnk u so much..aaj ke din main mama ko itni yaad kar rahi thi..i ws feelng so incomplete widout her today..par aapne yeh kami durr kardi bhai..bhai bachpan se leke aaj tak u hve been evrythng for me..my father,my brother, my bestfrend, my mentor n nw my mother too..i love u so much bhai..thank u for always being dre for me😭

Swayam(hugging taani)- chup pagli! Dekh tune abhi se hi mujhe rula diya..ab baadme mat complain karna ki main kyu nahi roya! 😆

Taani- bhai!

Swayam(kissing her head)- I love u too meri behena..accha ab no more rona dhona..aasun pochle apni n lets go down..warna tera jo hone wala pati parmeshwar hai na, who mujhe maar dalega agar ek second aur late gayye toh😆

Taani- hahhaha..ok chalo 😳

*swayam held tani by her shoulders n escorted her out of d room n towards d mandap.. behind dem, all d d3 girls were following dem down..as soon as rey (d groom,duh)saw taani coming down from d stairs, his face lit up n dere ws a million dollar smile on his face..he ws mesmerized by her beauty and so were d guests..it ws truly said dat she was d most beautiful bride in d world..as all d rasam ended n taarey got married, it ws time for her bidaai..as she walked out of her home, all d beautiful memories passd thru her mind..*

(Bg song- babul jo tumne sikhaaya from hum aapke hai kaun)

Babul jo tumne sikhaaya

Jo tum se paya

Sajan ghar le chali

Sajan ghar le chali

sajan ghar main chali

Taani remembered hw her brother used to tuitor her..hw she used to make excuses n avoid studying

Yaadon ko lekar saaye

Chali ghar paraaye

Tumhari laadli

Kaise bhool paaongi main baba

Suni jo tumse kahaaniyan

Chhod chali aangan mein maiya

Bachpan ki nishaaniyan

Sun meri pyaai behena

Sajaye rehna

Yeh babul ki galo

Sajan ghar main chali

She rememberd his bed time stories widout which she cudnt sleep at night..her pranks where he used to take all d blame for her..getting up every morning n see his face frst..him fullfilng all her wishes however stupid or crazy dey might be

Ban Gaya Pardes Ghar Janam Ka

Mili Hai Duniya Mujhe Nayee

Naam Jo Piya Se Maine Joda

Naye Rishton Se Bandh Gayee

Mere Sasur Ji Pita Hain

Pati Devta Hain

Devar Chhavi Krishna Ki

Sajan Ghar Main Chali'

She rememberd hw he used to n still is very protective of her..never letting her go out of his sight..always keeping her safe n out of harms ways..she was crying badly nw..dey hve reached d car nw..it ws time to say goodbye to her brother, her evrythng

Taani(crying n hugging swayam)-Bhai!! Main aapko keise chodke jaa sakti hoon bhai..i will miss u so much..we hve never been separated..i cnt live widout u bhai..😭

Swayam(sobbing) - sshhh..taani..its ok..n hum ofc milengge..we r nt separating forever 😭 main fir bhi tera ghar aata rahungga to annoy u guys n to keep reminding u guys dat me n Sharon r till alive!! 😆

Taani - bhai!😕

Swayam - accha okok..sorry baba..jokes apart..im gonna miss u so much taani! My choti..ab koi rona-wona nahi taani..ur married nw! u shud b happy! Ur going to a new home..gonna live wid a new family..ur family..im so happy for u dat u got such a good husband n such a lovely family..god bless u taani n humesha khush rahe!

Swayam(to rey) - dude..buddy..jijai!😆 main tujhe apni behen saup(giving) raha hoon..pls take care of my taani..b d best husband to her which I knw u wud..bt I want u to promise me sumthng..tu who pura nibhaega na?

Rey - haan bol na swayam..kya?

Swayam - kabhi isko aasun ya dukh mat dena..isko humesha khushi de 😊n pls bare her..sumtimes she will anoy u bt u just hve to live wid it 😆😛

Taani(glaring at swayam) - hhaawww..bhai!!😲😡

Swayam - hahahaha 😆 sorry baba

Rey -hahaha 😆 swayam..i promise u..main isko bht pyaar dungga n koi aason nahi aane dungga iske chehre par😊

Taani - bye bhai..i will miss u so much!! Luv u bhai😭

Swayam - will miss u double pagli..n luv u too..sadha khushi raho😊

*n wid dat she leaves wid her husband to her new home n to a new beggning bt also bringing along her memorie wid hers dat she cherished wid her bhai*

That ws it..i knw it ws very bakwaas bt i wanted to try wrtng an OS on dem..if u liked it den pls like or commnt..criticism is welcomed 😊

oh n cudnt gve d link to d song bt u guys cn search it on utube for dose who dsnt knw d song😃

Edited by forever18able - 12 years ago

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rabitaarey thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Owww it was so cute really nice os 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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very cute os
nice describe
loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey dear
It was a beautiful Os
Loved reading it :)
-GoluGudiya- thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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That was a really beautiful OS !!
Never imagined TR's marriage could also have TaaYam's POV !
And The song was simply amazing!
Great Job Done on This !
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Omg
Loved it!!!
Such a cute OS <3
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awe such a cute os loved how you showed Taayam's love and care
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Posted: 12 years ago
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This is so amazing, the bond that Taayam share is I breakable and so beautiful.
I cry, and I also laugh reading your awesome OS. I love it to the core, u did a fabulous job and the song is very touching.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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so good os...loved it so much...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Super cute os di
It was so emotional
Thanx for PM

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