ArHi SS: A Thousand Miles | NOTE Page 44 - Page 25

Originally posted by: Gurmeet4Drashti

Hey ...
This is fantastic !!!

Awww poor Khushi went through sooo much ... :(
I loved the way Arnav actually realized that khushi went through a lot and somewhere down the line he's responsible for it !!

His breakdown was portrayed so well ... <\3

Originally posted by: shutter

the frosted glass, the person behind that glass and away from his view, his pain, his sadness... All of it so beautifully described!!!!

The only good thing here was that he found her...

Next is the pain n broken heart... Lain bcz she doesn't wanna see him, broken bcz he thnks its all his fault!!!

u have done a great job in portraying tha se very thoughts n feelings... Awesome stunning beutiful, inspire of the underlying tragedy of it...

m looking forward to some more of,it... I love the pain sadness n grief...

Originally posted by: -LiveCrazily-

u r awesome the way u describe arnav feeling, his fighting with his own emotions, he fights with himself, with great arnav singh raizada .he clicked at right time, but it will him where he want to him.

i just want to hug him right but no i can't what if he behaved little more sincerely and came on the right time. he gets what he done.

It's hurt him, but the fragile girl fighting for her life may be against her own will suffers more than him everytime.

Originally posted by: Madafterarhi

Such tangible, tangled emotions..beautiful. The way you present the Payal prt was just wow.

Thank you for giving us this.

Originally posted by: P4rveen12

Wow that was quite a intense and emotional update,

Arnav phone call to Anjali was so heart wrenching, poor Arnav.

I didn't click on when the nurse said Payal, I thought she was asking for her sister. But Arnav put his shatir dimaag in to use and realised she meant her mothers Payal.

Love the way Arnav entered the room Khushi was in and finally took the Payal to her,

Hope Khushi responds when Arnav puts the Payal on her.

Loved the update, brilliant read.

Eagerly waiting for the next part,

Continue soon and thanks for the PM xx

Originally posted by: ShrayaBiswas

Read the prologue! Loved it! Though the line 'unlawfully unwedded wife' left me in mystery! Will read the rest of the parts in a relaxed way later! :)
do expect my comments about them! :P

Originally posted by: sonia_92

you've changed your writing style in this chapter, its different, but a good different, its interesting. I.really liked the phone conversation between Arnav and anjali, I think the emotions were apt. I really liked how you used the significance of the payal too.

love
Sonia