Virika OS - A divine soul

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hola people!! i know i have been updating a lot today but i was so bored and this idea just popped into my mind so decided to pen it down..Its my first ever OS hope it comes out nice :) now back to the update!

A DIVINE SOUL

A new morning in the Vadhera household! It had been almost a week Viren and Jeevika had got married but they had yet not consummated their marriage.. they both did not know why..

JEEVIKA'S POV
Its been almost a week we have got married but still had no physical relationship..is this right ? I know he is the world famous lawyer MR Viren Vadhera but does he have no time for me ?his new wife?? what will i tell beeji ? she must have not even expected this! i know he loves me but why does he not show it??

VIREN'S POV
Its been a week i have got married to Jeevika! but we have not been in a physical with each other.. why ? is it because of me and my busy work schedules? what will she think about me? Before marriage i had promised her that i will keep her happy but because of my work i cannot fulfill the promise.. she must be really pissed with me right n0w but what should i do?? oh no!!

jEEVIKA'S POV
I Kept waiting for him to come.. though i was sleepy but read books and stayed awake till 2 am..but to no avail.. i am doing this from the past 2 days but he just does not come home ! ok now i cannot wait more i am sleeping!! wait , what do i hear ? Someone is coming in my room..must be Viren only!! ok now i am not going to give a damn! il pretend sleeping lets see his reaction to that!!

VIREN'S POV
I tiptoed in my room at around 2 in the morning finding Jeevika asleep peacefully in the room!! Her face was no less than an angel i couldnt resist my self on seeing her.. Maybe this is the right time! i threw my bag on the couch beside the bed , opened to closet , examined my closet to find my night suit, quickly changed it and sat on d bed admiring the angelic face of the love of my life :) she looks so sweet and serene while sleeping.. Wish i saw this sight everyday!

JEEVIKA'S POV
Why is he staring at me like that ?is he trying to...? oh thats great.. i hope he is !!

VIREN'S POV
I couldnt resist longer!! but is it okay with her??i mean she is sleeping so should i disturb her? no i think i should come early tomorrow and romance her..i think i should let her sleep now! i was about to off the light when i saw her moving..was she awake?yes she was!

JEEVIKA'S POV
i couldnt bear this anymore,, so i decided to break the ice between us.. i got up from the bed and made him fACE ME ..i spoke my heart out to him and told him everything .. i said "Virenji i dont know what is this barrier between us. whatever it is i am not liking it!! do u remember the moments we had before our marriage ? those memories , tjose promises still linger around and i miss the virenji i fell in love with! i miss the virenji who made me fall in love with him.. his sweet and subtle romance , where is he now? he has just dissapeared.. right now i dont know the person i am talking to..this is not the virenji i knew! the virenji who cared for me , for whom i was more important than his work..where is he? Where is the virenji i loveed? has work become so important to u that u forget that u have wife waiting for u at home , wanting to love you ? its been a week to our marriage but i hardly see you ..maybe i see you only 2 or 3 hours in a week? Dont u want a family of your own? i want! i want to be loved , i want to be protected and have a family of my own!! and no be ignored or left behind crying..i cannot stand this anymore" i sobbed

VIREN'S POV
omg! did i hurt her so much ? i cannot see her crying anymore! SO i kept one of my hand on her cheek and kissed away her tears.. she had closed her eyes by that time.. i slowly lay her on the bed and adjusted myself on top of her.. i unbuttoned my shirt and removed it! i saw her in awe and affection! FINALLY there was no barrier between us..i slowly opened the drape of her transparent white saree and got on top of her ! i was so close to her that we could feel each other's breath by now..i slowly caressed her face by my fingers and removed the strands of hair that was blocking me by seeing her angelic face..i traced her forehead by my fingers and slowly kissed them..i went down and kissed her beautiful eyes which always makes me fall in love with her again! i kissed her cheeks , her nose , her jawline and now i was aiming for her neck! i moved my fingers around her neck and planted soft kisses on them.. then i eyed her juicy lips and crashed her lips with mine...in the start she did not respond but i was hell shocked when she responded with equal desire.. the kiss which started romantically soon turned into a deep and passionate one ! my tongue playing with hers ! we both got out of breath soon and stopped for a few minutes!!

JEEVIKA'S POV
omg! it actually happened!! we actually made out!! this was indeed one of the best days of my life!! when he came on top of me i closed my eyes in hope, in a hope that he would kiss me!we both were so close that we could feel each other's breath.his amazing body felt me i sheer astonishment! i must say my love has an amazing and a very hot body!! the feeling i got while getting kissed by him was marvelous..i just cannot explain it ! when he crashed his lips on to mine i was shocked earlier.. i couldnt control my desire anymore so i responded back with equal desire.. we both were out of breaths after having a pretty long kissing session..but i desired more!yes i did! I wanted to fill the gap of this one week in just a single night! today's night!so i got on top of him now!! i removed my blouse and my saree and completely surrendered myself to him..I know i was too early for this but i want him to know that i completely trust him! i unbuttoned his pant and opened the zip!! he also did not mind it i hope!! we both were now naked !! YES COMPLETELY NAKED! i pulled his hair and kissed his neck!! he moaned in pain!! well when he did that i moaned in pain too!! AND now i was tired so i let him come on top of me !! and then we made love all night !! indeed a night to remember!!

VIREN'S POV
oh my! i did not know she would get that wild! but great to see this side of hers.. yes we were completely naked ! though i was completely shocked by this move of hers i realized how much she trusts me and so even i surrendered myself to her!! then i examined her from top to bottom planting soft kisses everywhere i could and somewhere some truly hard love bites!she moaned in pain but i knew she was enjoying it.. her whole body was filled with love bites but i continued kissing , sucking and licking her !! i was enjoying ! yes i was!! i kissed her every where possible ! i wanted to tell her how much i love her and how much i need her! then finally i crashed my lips on her .. we had a real passionate kiss for minutes and then we made love all night!!


That night the two souls who really loved each other but never expressed it, became one !! ONE DIVINE SOUL!! truly it was a night to remember!!that night they surrendered completely to each other and completed each other..after this night the two had no complaints with each other!! now they were A DIVINE SOUL who were always together :)


Hush i am finally done with it !! my longest piece of writing up to date!! i hope it was not a problem for you all to read it!! i have gone in much detail for the first time!! i hope u all were comfortable reading it !! if not do tell me , i wont post updates with such details in it., please drop in a comment and tell me whether you all like this post or no and should i continue writing such posts or write how i used to earlier.. all comments are welcomed ! but please do let me know!! do not forget to press the like button!

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-Latty- thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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it was a romantic and a very hot OS dear 😳☺️

i was blushing like hell while reading it 😳
BEAUTIFUL piece of work

i loved it ❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Amazing...amazing
their povs were vry well written
awesome
loved jeevs confession nd viren's guilt
loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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this is the most hop os i have ever read on virika...
OMG...
HOT HOT HOT...
luved it...
nd the way u showed their pov is just amazing...
jeevika confession..awww...
guit!!!!
grt os...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Aww..
It was soo romantic...
I was just blushing while reading it...
Awesome yr..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hai hai so hot and sexy thank you absolutely brilliant and mindblowing
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Posted: 12 years ago
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OMG OMG grushaa this has to be the best best best OS i have ever read sachiii omg itna hot ufff i was going water water by sharam hahahhaha sachii yaaar viren's POV was seriously besharam n jeevika hayyyeee i am in love with this jeevika ...I WAS blushing like anything while reading n was saying ""shit shi""t hahhahahhaaha i have to read it again ... hatss off 👏👏👏
this is the best OS of urs hahahahahaha
🤣🤣🤣


Edited by JennyKryan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Romantic and really hot too ;)) had me blushing at a few sections but it was awesome yaar :))
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Posted: 12 years ago
#9
😳 wasn't expecting this when i clicked on the story
Nice work.😃 its so hot and sexual. lovedd itt ❤️

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Very romantic OS
very well described
thanks for pm

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