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Posted: 12 years ago
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PART 4


Maan:ali listen dis is the guy abut whom I told u...
Kabir:& dis is the guy abut whom I told u dat his wife is sweet bt he is a big sadu...
Maan look at kabir in anger. Kabir do the same.seeing dis rahul comes in between.
Rahul: stop it guyz plze...see maan & kabir dis is my bachelor wala last trip together & I really don't want 2 spoil it.if u both being so mature did such things wht will u say 2 ur children.
Kabir:bacho ki baat maay kar yaar...aur haan I m ready 2 shake hand ask him 2 agree.
Geet comes ahead & hold maans hand.she nodes & give him a smile.
Maan:ohk...deal bt ask him 2 stay away 4m & myyy wife...
Kabir:listen bro even I m nt dat interested in u & cuming 2 ur wife she is sweet bt nt my type...& she already married tua I won't even think like dat...
Maan:ohk den ali we can move ahead with the plan...
With dis he catches geets hand & walk towards the van.
All of dem moved ahead with the tracking plan.
They reached the place by Aftrnoon.
Ali:guyz we have reached the mountain we jv 2 track bt we won't be going with dis tomorrow early morning as we won't be able to reach top till night.
We can camp over here & plze do wear warm cloth as it would be really cool at night.
Every1:yes ali...
Everyone went to build there respective camp house.

Maan & geet started making der tent while kabir was struggling with stands.
Maan & rahul were done with there tents & rahul took chance & went 2 sleep while kabir was still struggling. ...
Maan & geet were passing by kabirz tent.maan saw kabir bt ignored & was going ahead wen geet hold maans hand & askhim 2 help him...
Maan node
Maan:bro need help...
Kabir without turning back.
Kabir:yes bro I m struggling 4m last 1hr...he turned. ...
Kabir:I think I will manage
Maan:r u sure. ...
Kabir thought 4 a while. ...
Kabir:na...bro teach me how 2 stand the tent...
Maan smiles
Maan:get me dat rod & hammer. ..
Kabir & maan build the tent properly. ..
Kabir:naina tera aashiyana tayar hai...
Naina:ya at last...
Kabir;:thankz bro..
Maan:anytime bro...bas meri biwi se dur rahna...
Kabir:haha...I got dat he winked 2 geet...
Maan smiles..
Kabir:tu hasta bhi hai..
Maan:wht a joke...
Kabir:wa...kodak moment hai geet capture kar ley..
Geet smiles. ..
Geet:ohk nw chalo we will go 4 dinner. ..
Maan:ya just dis sleeping bag..
Geet:u both r sleeping together. ..
Kabir:yaa...naa...actually rahul & aditi r sleeping together tua we hv 2 adjust. ..
Geet:wht...
Kabir:yaa...
Naina:no wyz...I won't sleep with u...dat 2 alone na re baba na...
Geet:r8...
Maan:hmmm..Kabir y sleep in diff tent
Kabir:I asked ali yaar he told dat tents r over as we all had not planned lke dis b4...
Geet:den...
Maan:hmmm...
Geet:u sleep with maan & I will sleep with naina. ..
Maan & Kabir together:no...wayz
Geet & naina:yes wayz...
They both left from der saying dis...all had there dinner & were going 2 der respective tents..
While passing 4m rahuls tent maan & Kabir heard sound actually nt sound bt moose whch aditi made.
they were making out dat 2 in tent & dat 2 in glaciers.
Kabir:saala yaha bhi chalu ho gya
Maan:kamina hamey shood khud maze le rahaa hai
Kabir:naina yaha aa...geet tu bhi aa..
Naina:kya hai...Kabir stops her 4 speaking by keeping hand on her mouth
Kabir:speak slowly. .
Naina:OMG...they r f****** over here...
Maan & kabirz eyes popped out...
Maan:we can't take dis he can't enjoy alone. ..
Kabir;:yes bro..
Maan:we will hv fun..
Geet:maan...limits
Maan:baby other wala limit
Geet:oh...
Kabir:kya baat hai naughty geet..
Naina:Kabir limits. ..
Kabir:haan haan pata hai...chal dude iski life hell karte hai...
Maan :par kasey...
Geet & naina leaves from der.
Kabir:soach...bhai soach...
Maan:kabir...
Maan speak loudly ao dat rahul could hear.
Maan:kabir tujhe pata hai mene suna hai ki yaha par ek bhoot hai...
Kabir:kya...baat ka..kar raha hai ...
Maan:haan bro suna hai dat iss pahad par few years bck ek couple aaya tha..
Kabir:oh...
Maan:wo couple mey se dono saat tua aaye thay par ghar sirf ladki gayi...
Kabir:kya baay kar raha hai...
Maan:haan suna hai jo bhi ladka ladki yaha saat sotey hai wo bhi 12 ke baad wo ladka maar jata hai...
Kabir:kya...
Maan:haan...
Kabir:dude 12 baaj ne mey sirf 10min baki hai...
Maan:f*** aacha hua hamne geet aur naina ko saat sone diya...
Kabir:saach yar nahintua hum maar jate...
Saying dis maan & kabir gabe high five 2 eachother & went 2 sleep. ...rahul heard everything & couldn't take it so fast & furiously wore clothes & went out 2 sleep. .
Maan & kabir did lot of fun in the trip. They use 2 interfere while ali use 2 talk 2 his gf..den they robbed rahulz bag & hide it in van so he couldn't Change clothes...
As kabir & naina couldn't sleep together maan & geet also adjusted & slept separately. They climbed lot of mountains & maan always helped Kabir 4 tents as he use 2 forget evrytime.
Getting chance maan use 2 do romance with his wife & Kabir with naina.aftr wht rahul heard he never slept woth aditi aftr that...
Maan & Kabir got 2 be good friends...

Precap:going bck 2 home sweet home...
Edited by nimi216 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#42
Awesome update dear.

Waiting for next.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43
loved the part...

maan and kabir finally teaming up was fun...

eager for home return...

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Posted: 12 years ago
#44
amazing updates
luvd it
maan kabir ko bilkul pasand nahi karta starting mein but woh hi unke partners bante hai par trip mein dono mein frndshp ho jati hai aur bechaare rahul ko tang karte hai
thanks for the pm
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#45
kitne baatameez hai maan aur kabir...rahul aur aditi ko alag kar diya...ek taraf se sahi hai...maaja agaya...lage raho...

awesome n wonderful update...


loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update n fr d pm also...

waiting fr d nxt prt eagerly...

continue soon plz...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#46
Will update 2day & my dis will end this OS...
Edited by nimi216 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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PART 5
It was early morning. Maan got up early.there flight was in the evening around 6:45pm.they had half day still in there hand.there maan & geet had plan something 4 Kabir & naina.
From naina geet got 2 no that kabirz dad had fixed kabir & nainaz wedding bt according to naina kabir don't want 2 marry naina as she is a bit boring & even not like other girls how roam around him every minute.
Naina likes kabir & kabir's feelings were not known 2 her.
Geet disclosed everything in front of maan & maan thought 2 ask kabir also.
Maan was already ready bt kabir ws still sleeping.maan took a cup of water & splash it on kabir's face.kabir woke up all sudden.
Kabir:wht the hell...dude go 2 hell..who told u 2 do dis...shit my sleeping bag...u no dis is was just disgusting...f*** o**
Maan:b****** u r good 4 nothing. ...jaldi uath I asked u yesterday also we would go 4 a jog...chal jaldi. .
Kabir:wht...jog...arey yaar..
Maan:chal raha hai ya uthao...
Kabir:haan rukh..
Kabir got up...
Maan:shi...ye kya hai...
Kabir turned maan was holding a dupatta.kabir took it 4m his hand.
Kabir:terey biwi ka dupatta hai...
Maan:merey biwi ke pass yesa dupatta hai hi nahi...haha...joke mara.
Kabir:wo kya baat hai...biwi ke pass kya hai kya nahi hai saab pata hai haan.
Maan:biwi meri hai...
Kabir:haan haan..ohk..aab chal..
They went on 4 a jog around the field. Kabir got tried very soon & sat on a rock.
Kabir:rukh yaar thak gaya...pani dey...
Maan also sat beside him...
Maan:sunn ek baat puchu...
Kabir:haan bol na...
Maan:wo dupatta naina ka hai na...
Kabir puke out water.
Kabir:tu...tuj.tujhe kasey pata...
Maan:pheli baar dekha kabir thapar ko thapratey hua...hahah...
Matlab I m r8...
Kabir had a smile on his face...
Kabir:haan yaar usika hai...I still remember it...
I was in a friends wedding wen I saw naina 1st time...haha...she had wore a sari red wali...she was nt wearing specks & all...she was hot...I lke hr bt dat time I had a gf...whch my dad never no about...she was aditi's besty & I m rahul's we meet 1st time a sanjana's wedding.
Maan:hmm...u were 1 side aashik it seems..
Kabir:yup...my dad liked naina he want us 2 marry bt problem is even if we marry would she b happy. ...& u tua no I can't say without flirting. ..hobby se hai meri..kisikey sath bhi challu ho jata hu...
Maan:who noz dat better. ..
Kabir:yup...
Maan:tu use bolta kyu nahi...
Kabir:try kiya tha yaar bas bolti baad ho gayi...
Maan:u no wht even she likes u...
Kabir:wht...r u kidding. ...
Maan:she herself confessed it 2 geet..
Kabir got up ...& started running. ..
Maan:were r u going. ..
Kabir:shubh kaam mey deri kyu...love u dude...tussi great ho jo rahul ya aditi nahi kar paye wo terey biwi aur tune kar diya...
Maan:saamne dekh ke chal...gir jayega..
& Kabir fall Down coz of tree...he got up...
Kabir:I m f9...
He runs...maan smiles & nodes. ...
Kabir reached tent der naina was nt der...
He checked everywhere bt she wasnt der..
Kabir was passing tua suddenly his eye went on a lady standing near the tip watching sun rise...
Kabir went near her...
Kabir:naina...
Naina turned. .
Naina:Kabir...
Kabir:naina...naina. ..I..I love u...
Naina:kya..
Kabir:haan dekho I never said u but I love from the day I saw u 1st time..
Nainaz eyes get moist. .
Kabir:arey don't cry...ok if u don't lke me den f9 I will never force u...
Naina:r u mad...
Kabir:haan...bacpan se...
Naina:u mad even I love u...
Kabir:see even u r mad 2 love me den..
Naina:Kabir. ..
Kabir:ohk kidding
Kabir hugs naina & kiss her forehead.
Suddenly everyone claps...& laughs
Kabir & naina smiled seeing maan geet rahul & aditi. ..
Kabir hugged everyone & asked them 2 be in touch & come 4 his wedding whch will now surely happen. ..

All returned there homes by evening. ..
Maan geey took der baggage & entered there home...
Maan:merey ghar jasa koi ghar nahi...
Maan lays on sofa...
Geet:dat what na...now next tour with be aftr an year nt b4 dat...
Maan:no u told aftr 6months. ...not done..
Geet:oh hello...mujhe pregnant bhi hona hai aur family bhi plan karni hai...nt like u..
Maan:oh...
Maan didn't get wht geet told den suddenly he got it..
Maan:par uskey liye tho u need me also na...
Geet:datz wht I m telling u Khurana ji...aabh ye sabh shoad do aur family plan karo nahi tua umar kaat jayegi...
Maan pulls Geet
Maan:arey jaab itni aachi biwi ho tua sudhar kasey jaye...
Geet smiles & they hug each other...

THE END...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#48
lovely part
naina kabir together
all happy for them
maaneet moment was awesome
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Posted: 12 years ago
#49


loved the part ...

i didnt thought that u will end this story so soon...

would love to have an epilogue with ore of maaneet...


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Posted: 12 years ago
#50
amazing update 😃
but this was the last update soo me sad...
wow maan aur geet ne kabir aur naina ko mila diya
pllzzz give epilogue also
luvd ur story 😃

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