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Posted: 12 years ago
#21
read the edited version... nice part...

but i was expecting we will be getting to see some more of possessive maan with kabir...

i loved their bet and how geet said she won though she lost... lovely...

will be waiting for the next

thanx for the pm
Edited by -lakshmi- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#22
loved the update
maaneet bet and geet lost
cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#23
Awsome update dear ...
Loved maaneet passionate moments...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#24
train k log hi honge unke trip main m fr sure...

nice update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update n fr d pm also...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 12 years ago
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PART 3
After few hours maan got up.he saw geet sleeping peacefully in his arms.he thought not 2 disturb her & was going 2 washroom. While getting up from bed he saw his hand was hold tightly by geet. He smiled & was trying 2 remove hand bt dwn geet hold it more tightly & kept under her cheek & smiled.
Maan can't help bt just sat over der looking at his beautiful wife.

After sum half an hour geet got up & saw maan how was sitting beside her with a huge broad chest which was bare.she smiled & hold his waist & hug him.maan smiled at this.he also hugged her.
Maan:uthaney ka irada hai ya nahi...itz 8
Geet:hmmm...na...
Maan:dinner nahi karna kya...
Geet:na u order something over here...I m tiered don't want 2 go out..
Maan:r u sure. ...coz we were supposed 2 meet the new fellow members. ..
Geet:very sure & we can meet dem tomorrow while leaving 4 tracking. ...
Maan:hmmm...tua I was thinking y 2 waste time & wait 4 night...we can start it here itself. ...
Geet:no maan wait first order I m hungry. ..
Maan:aaa...no...phaley kissi do fir I will order. ...
Geet:no maan 1st order karo...
Maan made a face on which geet smiled.maan order some food 4 both of dem then hopped on bed & took geet in his arms.
Maan:jaan aaj tumari jaan khatrey mey hai...
Geet:aacha...geet smiled at this & encircled her arms around maan's neck.
Maan smiled they continued with there kissing & teasing session.
Waiter knocked the door.
Maan made a face on whch geet smiled & ask him 2 open the door.
Maan got up & wore his track's & went 2 open the door.he took the dinner trolley 4m the waiter & gave him tip.
Maan came with the dinner inside the bed room.geet covered herself with sheet & got up...she was going 2 washroom wen maan called her.
Maan:kaha ja rahi ho...
Geet:washroom. ...kyu
Maan:I m still nt done with u & u need energy 2 handle me tua hv dinner 1st
...maan smirk.
Geet nodes as she no her husband very well...they had dinner together also feed each other.
Geet:maan bas I can't eat more...
Maan:last 1...
Geet:maan I will surely throw evrything out no plze...
Maan took the chance & feed her a last bite & geet make a face...
Eating so much made geet very lazy & sleepy.she sat there only & ws sleepy.
Maan opened the sheet whch geet was holding & cover both of dem in it...
He kissed geet & both slept der itself.

It was morning,
Geet & maan got ready with there tracking backpack.
They came down ali was present there.
Ali:good morning maan...good morning Mrs. Khurana.
Geet:good morning ali...u can call me geet.
Maan:yes ali...anyways wht the plan...I m excited 2 explore manali.
Geet smiles seeing the excitement.
Ali:we will be tracking on a small mountain 2day as it is our 1st day & if u pple r interested then we can do camping over there...
Maan:amazing. ...so wht r we waiting 4...letz go...
Ali:yes but we r waiting 4...
Kabir:hey ali I m here...
Ali & maan both turned...
Maan:tumm...
Kabir:tummm...
Ali:u both no each other...
Geet was also in shock.
Ali:maan he is kabir he & his friend's r coming with us...
Maan:no wayz...
Kabir:yes...he is just uff...I won't. .
By the time naina rahul & aditi also came at the place...

Precap:will they go together. ...


PART 4:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/88696822
Edited by nimi216 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Edit-

Yohooo m 1st 😛
Loved the update maan dont want to go with kabir 😆 jealous maan 🤪
Edited by Zeal-DD - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#27



Maaneet dinner time was so romantic and passionate...

they are in a trip to Manali and wahan bhi sab pahunch gaye...

wonderful update...

thanx for pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome part
maaneet dinner was romantic
maan dont want to go with kabir
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Posted: 12 years ago
#29
cute romantic update loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
#30
thanx for the speedy update... loved the part...

i loved that u have brought kabir back... am loving this possessive maan a lot...

looking forward for the next

ps: it will be helpful for the readers if u put the latest updated part no and date at the heading...
Edited by -lakshmi- - 12 years ago

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