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I am sorry...though i used to constantly read kuch is tarah...i never read this...but i think that was one of the greatest mistake i did...i am sorry for that 😔 i know you might be angry for me not reading even after you send me pm...khaan pakhadkhar sorry... 😕
You are suchan amazing writr...actually i have already told you this when i commented in kuch is tarah...but jitne bhi bolu...u know its less...coz its amazing...i read it all in a go...that excited i was to read it...shuruwath yaad hain aur anth bhi...uske beech time was just flying...i kept pressing the last next link...but much to ma disappointment nothing happened...thats the timd it struck me... 😆
From the beginning...virmans nokh jokh b4 marriage,manvis treatment,their confession,virats accident,the repetition of events...everything so well written...pls ab mujhe intezaar nahi ho rahi...please update both the stories soon..
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where r u Artii??
plzzz update ur both story...
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Hello lovely people...m back wid a new update...thnks a lot 4 ur lovely comments n lyks..I really hope u lyk dis update as well...EnJoy..Extremely sorry 4 da delay..

Warning: Might find this boring and lame...read at ur own risk..



VirMan...Tum Ho Mera Pyaar...Part  34...

~Recap~

He looked at Maanvi, who was about to turn around and leave.

Viraat: Suno...

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Maanvi turned around, to face Viraat, who was looking at her with an amazing smile.

Maanvi: Bolo...
Viraat: (fingers running through his hair) Um...woh...woh...
Maanvi: Woh woh kya kar rahe ho? Jo bolna hai bolo.
Viraat: Haan woh..
Maanvi: Fir woh...? Tum yahan woh woh karte raho, main chalti hun. (turned around to walk away) 
Viraat: Nahi suno...
Maanvi: (turns her face towards him) Bolte toh ho nahi suno suno kar rahe ho...jaldi bolo.
Viraat: Woh...
Maanvi: Woh...Woh...Woh..lo saare woh maine keh diya, ab jo bolna hai bolo.
Viraat: (looking everywhere but her) Main yeh kehna chahata tha ki..ki..(looking into her eyes) hum dost hai na?

Maanvi looked at him with an raised eyebrow, trying to hide her smile.

Maanvi: Likh kar paper mein, sign kar ke dena hoga?
Viraat: Nahi woh...
Maanvi: Fir woh...iss woh se shadi kyun nahi kar lete, bahut pyaar karte ho shayad isse.
Viraat: Nahi woh..

Viraat closed his eyes and bit his tongue, while Maanvi giggled silently.

Maanvi: Dekha, keh rahi thi na. (turned around to walk away) 
Viraat: Arey suno toh..
Maanvi: (turns back around) Ab kya hai woh ke Pati Devji?
Viraat: Um..tum..tum yahan kyun aayi thi?
Maanvi: Woh...main...woh..
Viraat: (smirked) Itni hi der mein tumhe meri "woh" pasand aa gayi, jo tum khud Woh Woh kar rhi ho?
Maanvi: (looking down, embarrassed) Nahi main toh woh...

Viraat laughed a little seeing Maanvi's face.

Maanvi: Haso mat, main bas yahan haava khane ke liye aayi thi. 
Viraat: Oh ho acha acha...(smirks) toh kya yahan khaana nahi milti jo tum haava khane aa gayi?
Maanvi: Mera woh matlab nahi tha.
Viraat: Toh kya matlab tha aapka Maanvi Ji?
Maanvi: (fake smile) Matlab ki baat Ullu Chep nahi samjhte...toh acha hoga agar aap apna dimaag na chalaye, aapke ghothnon(knees) mein dard hoga.
Viraat: Mazak bana rahi ho mera?
Maanvi: (looking at her nails) Banane ki zarurat hai kya?
Viraat: Tum...Bandariya...
Maanvi: Ullu Chep.
Viraat: Tum haava khane aayi thi toh jaa kyun rahi thi?
Maanvi: Tumhe jo dekh liya.
Viraat: (smiles) Kyun mujhse dar lagta hai?
Maanvi: Nahi nahi..dar tumse nahi,, tumhare sangat se lagta hai, agar mujhe bhi raat ko jaagne ki aadat ho gayi toh.
Viraat: Toh kya, tum bann jaogi Ullu Maanvi Chaudhary.
Maanvi: Joke tha? Hasna tha?
Viraat: (smirks) Haan haso na.
Maanvi: (pointing her index finger at him) Tum...(turns around) Bye...

Maanvi turned around to walk away when her gaze went down, where Jeevika, Dabbu and Shlok was standing at one place, and Viren, Kadambari Chachi, and Pinky Chachi on the other. Viren and Jeevika were looking at each other, giving small smiles at each other.

Maanvi: (to herself) Humari love story wapas track par laane ke liye Di aur Jiju ko ek dusre se dur rehna padh raha hai. Ek minute ke liye bhi dono paas nahi aa sakhte. Di aur Jiju humare liye yeh sab kar sakhte hai, (smiles) toh hum unhe kuch pal paas laane ke liye kuch toh kar hi sakhte hai. Ullu Chep, time to pay back. (turns to face Viraat) Viraat, yahan aao.
Viraat: (confused) Kyun? Kya hua?
Maanvi: Aao toh sahi.
Viraat: Ok..

He walked where she was standing, looking at her with and raised eyebrow.

Maanvi: (looking at him) Woh dekho...
Viraat: (looking at Maanvi) Kya dekhun?
Maanvi: (moves his face towards the direction she was pointing to) Neeche dekho. Di aur Jiju ko.
Viraat: Usme kya hai? (smiles at her) Unhe toh hum roz dekhte hai.
Maanvi: (hits on his arm) Chep ke Chep hi rahoge na tum. Unke beech mein jo space hai woh nahi dikh raha tumhe? 
Viraat: (looking down) Kaisa space? 
Maanvi: Andhe ho kya Viraat? Woh dono new couple hai, unke beech mein duriyaan acha lagta hai kya?
Viraat: Ohhh...toh aise bolna tha na, khamakha dimaag chala rahi ho mera. Haan toh duriyaan...
Maanvi: Haan duriyaan,,(smiles) jisse hume nazdikiyaan mein badalni hai.
Viraat: (shocked/confused) Hume? 
Maanvi: Haan hume. Dosti ki hai na toh nibhao.
Viraat: Ok toh...Kya karna hai?
Maanvi: (smiles happily) Di aur Jiju ko paas laana hai bas.
Viraat: Woh mujhe bhi pata hai, magar kaise?
Maanvi: (frowns) Kaise? Yeh toh mujhe bhi nahi pata.
Viraat: (sarcastically) Great. Very Good.
Maanvi: Kyun na hum in dono ko kahin bahar bhej de?
Viraat: Nahi, public mein koi privacy nahi hogi.
Maanvi: Haan toh movies.
Viraat: Movies. Idea bura nahi hai.
Maanvi: (smiles widely) Haina. Toh kaunsi movie?
Viraat: Koi bhi acha...
Maanvi: Woh main dekh lungi. Par hum sabko manayege kaise?
Viraat: Dadaji se main baat kar lunga. Bhai aur Bhabhi ko hume mil kar manana hoga.
Maanvi: Haan chalo.
Viraat: (looking at her weirdly) Abhi?
Maanvi: Haan toh..
Viraat: Itni raat ko? 
Maanvi: Manane ki baat kar rahi hun, late night show bhejne ki nahi.
Viraat: Oh, (smiles) haan, tab thik hai. Chalo.

Maanvi and Viraat smiled, walking down towards the garden. Viraat went to Jeevika, while Maanvi walked towards Viren as they reached down.

Viraat: Bhabhi ek minute  baat kar sakhta hun?
Jeevika: (smiles) Haan Viraat bolo.
Viraat: Bhabhi woh...(cuts off by Maanvi) 
Maanvi: (smiles) Hum dono ne kuch plan kiya hai.

Maanvi, along with Viren joined Jeevika and Viraat.

Viren: Kaisa plan kiya?
Viraat: (smiles) Movies ka.
Jeevika: Movie?
Maanvi: Haan. Aap ke aur Jiju ke liye?
Jeevika: Kya? Nahi nahi Mannu, movies woh bhi hum..nahi.
Viren: (looking at VirMan) Tum dono thik ho kya? (looking at Maanvi) Maanvi tum bhi...
Maanvi: JIju...aap dono ki nayi nayi shadi hone wali hai, isiliye humne yeh plan banaya. Haina Viraat?
Viraat: Haan bilkul.
Jeevika: Nahi nahi, ghar wale maanege nahi, aur hume movie bhi nahi dekhni.
Viraat: Ghar par sabko hum mana leinge.
Viren: Lekin...
Maanvi: Lekin wekin kuch nahi Jiju, aap dono kal movie dekhne jaa rahe hai matlab jaa rahe hain. 
Viren: Thik hai Saali Saiba, hum kal jayeinge. 
VirMan: (smiles widely) Very Good.
Viren: Ab sone chale?
Maanvi: Haan haan chalo.

Everyone walked inside the house and went to their respective room.

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~Next Morning, After Breakfast~

Viraat: Dadaji please.
Maanvi: Beeji please na.

Viraat and Maanvi were in the study room, along with Dadaji and Beeji, trying to convince them for VirIka's day out.

Dadaji: Thik hai jaa sakhte hai woh...par...
VirMan: Par?
Beeji: Par tum dono bhi saath jaoge.
VirMan: KYA? (looking at each other) HUM DONO.
Dadaji: Haan tum dono. Maanvi Beta...

Maanvi looked up at Dadaji and understood what he was trying to do.

Beeji: Tum dono saath nahi jao ge toh koi nahi jaye ga.
Maanvi: Haan thik hai, hum jayeinge.

Viraat looked at Maanvi confusedly, yet happily.

Dadaji: (smiles at them) Jao.

Viraat and Maanvi walked out of the room.

Maanvi: (angrily) Yahi sambhalna tha tumhara? Aise sambhalte ho?
Viraat: Mujh par kyun gussa ho rahi ho, tumhi toh thi jisne kaha (immitating Maanvi)  haan thik hai, hum jaiyeinge. 
Maanvi: Haan toh aur kya kehti main...khud kuch hota nahi hai tumse...mujhe badnaam kar rahe ho.
Viraat: Main kaha...(cuts off by Maanvi) 
Viren: Viraat Maanvi? 

Viraat and Maanvi turned towards Viren and Jeevika, who were standing behind them.

Jeevika: Mannu Dadaji aur Beeji maane?
Viraat: Haan Bhabhi maane na.

Jeevika smiled along with Viren.

Maanvi: Par ek shart rakhne ke baad.
Viren: Kaisi shart?
Viraat: Yahi ki hum dono ko aap dono ke saath jaana hoga. So basically, hum aap dono kabab mein Haddi hai.

Viren and Jeevika laughed out loud, looking at Viraat and Maanvi's weird faces.

Maanvi: Isme itna hasne wali kaunsi baat hai?
Jeevika: (laughing) Tum dono ki shakal. Arey tum dono itna tension mein kyun ho? Hum saath mein chalte hai.
Viren: Haan, (smiles) thodi masti bhi ho jayegi.
Viraat: Par Bhai yeh humne aap dono ko kuch time akele rehne ke liye diya tha, ab hum saath chalege toh aap dono,,,
Maanvi: Usski fikar tum mat karo Chep. Woh bhi main kar lungi, kuch kaam tumse toh thik se hota hai nahi. Main khud kar lungi.
Jeevika: Acha toh kis time ka show hai?
Maanvi: 1:00pm ka. Abhi 11:00 am hai.
Viren: (looking at his watch) Tum dono jaa kar taiyaar ho jao, abhi time hai.
Viraat: Haan.

Viraat and Maanvi walked away, towards their bedroom, while VirIka smiled at each other. They entered the study room where Dadaji and Beeji were present.

Viren: (happily) Dadaji kaam ho gaya.
Dadaji: (smiles proudly) Maine kaha tha na, dono ko manana hi padega.
Jeevika: Haan Dadaji.
Beeji: Waise dono maan gaye na. Iss Maanvi ko main achi tarah se janti hun, apni Di ke liye woh koi bhi bahane bana legi.
Jeevika: Nahi Beeji aisa kuch nahi hoga. (smiles) Hum chaaro saath jayeinge.
Dadaji: Thik hai...
Maanvi:  Di 
Viraat: Bhai...

Maanvi and Viraat were standing at the door of the study room.

Viren: (to himself) Kahin in dono ne kuch sun toh nhi liya?
Jeevika: (to herself) In dono ne sab sun liya kya?
Viren: Um..hume chalna chahiye.
Dadaji: A..haan haan jao jao tum sab...der ho jayegi.
Viren: Haan, haan chalo.
Jeevika: (looking at Maanvi, with a worried smile) Chalein.
Beeji: Haan jao.
Maanvi: (looking at the, weirdly) Aap sab itna ajeeb kyun behave kar rahe ho?
Viren: (looking at Dadaji, Jeevika, and Beeji) Woh...woh..
Maanvi: (whisperes to Viraat) Lo tumhari tarah tumhare Bhai ko bhi 'woh' kehne ke bemari hai.
Viraat: Woh chodo aur chalo, warna movie miss ho jayegi.
Viren: Haan chalo.

Viren, Viraat, Maanvi, and Jeevika went out, leaving Dadaji and Beeji behind.

Dadaji: (heave a sigh of relief) Chalo gaye toh dono.
Beeji: (smiles) Haan.

Dats it 4 2day...sorry 4 dis lame update...was out of my mind,..wrote dis in a hurry,..will update nxt part soon, n dat won't b boring...well hopefully...thnk u...tc Love Aartii...
PM'S WILL B SENT OUT LATER


Edited by Artii159 - 10 years ago
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arti tum to gayab hi hogayi thi yaar missed yu and yur updates sooo much ...
and this update was fun reading it ...virman cute little nok jhoks cant get enough of it ...then the woh woh woh thing bechara virat ek dam chup reh gaya 😆😆 and phir viren bhi woh woh vadhera khandaan ki zubaan woh woh pe hi atack gayi 😆😆
awesome plan by beeji dadu and virika ...movie time with the awesome foursome gonna be really exciting ,,,,,waiting for the update jaldi karna ok 😃
and the banner looks really goood 👍🏼
Edited by kulsum_virman - 10 years ago
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yaayyy its me first 😃
now kuch iss tarah update kardo plzzz
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Wel cm back..😊
Hey it was nice...😊
Plz do continue...😊
Edited by kiru2992 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice update but its small they are planing send there
sibling for movie but they didn't know there sibling plaining
for them update soon this time soon and long update