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Posted: 10 years ago
interesting precap
i think virat has seen his n manvi's wedding pic
cant wait for the next part
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VirMan...Tum Ho Mera Pyaar...Part 35...

~Recap~


Viren, Viraat, Maanvi, and Jeevika went out, leaving Dadaji and Beeji behind.

Dadaji: (heave a sigh of relief) Chalo gaye toh dono.

Beeji: (smiles) Haan.

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Viraat: (looking at Viren) Bhai tickets kahan hai?

Virika and VirMan were standing at the counter of the theater.

Viren: Maine toh tujhe diye the.

Viraat: (looking at him as if he's gone mad) Mujhe? Kab?

Viren: Diye toh the.

Viraat: Mere paas nahi hai Bhai, apne zarur kisi aur ko diya hoga.

Viren: Arey maine hi toh kaha tha tujhe dresser par rakha hua hai utha le.

Viraat: Yeh aapne kab kaha tha?

Jeevika and Maanvi were just looking at them, weirdly.

Viren: Jab tu mere room mein aaya tha, main apne baal bana raha tha tab.

Viraat: Bhai maine nahi uthaye, maine bas aapko kaha ki jaldi karo aur wahan se nikal gaya.

Viren: Haan toh galti teri na. Tujhe puri baat sunni chahiye thi.
Viraat: Meri kya galti? Aap dresser check nahi kar sakhte the? Aur kiya bhi na ho toh, ghar par nahi puch sakhte the ki ticket liya ya nahi.

Viren: Hadh hai, Tu nahi puch sakhta tha ghar pe?
Viraat: Bhai aap...
JeeMan: BAS BAS BAS...
Maanvi: (showing them the tickets) Tickets mere paas hai. Mujhe Di ne diye the.

Viraat: Toh hum yahan yunhi ladh rahe hai? (looking at Maanvi) Aap pehle nahi bata sakhti thi Maanvi Ji?
Maanvi: (hands on her hips) Pucha aap dono ne? Bas ladhne lage.

Jeevika: Acha Mannu chal ab ticket de.
Maanvi: Haan. (handing him the tickets) Jiju yeh lo.

Maanvi handed the tickets to Viren.

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Viraat: (looking around) Bhai, kaunsi seat hai?

Viren: (pointing at the top seat) Tum dono ki wahan, aur hum dono ki (pointing at the 1st seat) wahan.

Maanvi: (looking at the distances) Itne dur kyun?

Viraat: Kyun Bandariya, kabab mein haddi banna hai kya tumhe?

Maanvi: Nahi woh...
Viraat: Chalo ab.

VirMan and Virika walked in different directions towards their seat.

Viren: Dikh rahe hai dono yahan se?

Viren asked Jeevika as they sat down on their seat.

Jeevika: (looking behind) Haan.

Viren: Kya kar rahe hai?

Jeevika: Bas abhi baithe hai apni seat par.

Viren: Ab?

Jeevika: Maanvi apne phone par kuch kar rahi hai, aur Viraat bas aage screen dekh raha hai.

Viren: Screen? Hadh hai, paas mein itni sudar ladki baithi hai, aur Janab blank screen dekh rahe hain.
Jeevika: Maanvi ne phone rakh diya. Ab woh bhi bas idhar udhar dekh rahi hai.

Viren: (irritatedly) Idhar Udhar, kamal hai, idhar udhar hi dekhna tha, toh hum inhe ek crowded mall mein le jaate.

Jeevika turned herself completely around, facing the screen.

Viren: (looking at Jeevika) Kya hua?

Jeevika: Mannu idhar hi dekh rahi hai.

Viren: Oh...Thoda paas aao.

Jeevika: (looking at him with a narrowed eyes) Kyun?

Viren: Arey unhe lage ga na, un dono ka plan work kar raha hai.

Jeevika: Haan.

Jeevika inched closer to Viren, placing her head on his shoulder.

Viren: (smirks) Acha ek kiss.

Jeevika: Viren Ji, mauke ka fayda mat uthao.

Viren: Mauke fayde uthane ke liye hi hote hai Jeevika Ji.

Jeevika: (blushes) Thoda sharam kijiye.

Viren: Arey sharam kyun?
Jeevika: Koi dekhega toh kya soche ga?

Viren: Itna andhera hai, kaun dekhega?

Jeevika: (hand on her stomach) Baby.

Viren: Oh Baby. (looking at her stomach) Baby chalo chalo ache bacchon ki tarah aankhein band karo, abhi Mama aur Papa kissy kareinge.

Jeevika: (blushes) Viren Ji..

Viren: (looking at Jeevika) Main apni Baby se baat kar raha hun. (back to the baby) Haan toh Baby, chalo close ur eyes.
Jeevika: Aap na..
Viren: Lo Baby ne ankhein band karli, (smiles) ab kissy do Baby ki Mama...

Jeevika: Viren Ji...

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Maanvi and Viraat were just sitting and eating their popcorn as the movie still hasn't started yet. Maanvi gaze went towards Virika, who were sitting very closely.

Maanvi: (pointing at VirIka) Viraat, woh dekho.

Viraat: (looking at Maanvi) Kya?

Maanvi: Arey, Di aur Jiju ko dekho.

Viraat looked at the direction where Maanvi was pointing.

Viraat: (smiles) Itne paas? Plan kaam kar raha hai.

Maanvi: Kaam kaise nahi karega, humara jo idea tha, (smiles widely) kyun Partner?

Viraat: Partner?
Maanvi: Haan Partner, hum dono ne saath mil ke Di aur Jiju ko akele mein milne ka idea banaya, toh huye na Partners.

Viraat: Hmm...Partners. Interesting. (lost in his world) Aisa lag raha hai jaise maine yeh Partnership pehle bhi kisi se ki hai, kisi ladki se.

Maanvi looked at him with a hope sparkling in her eyes, smilingly.

Maanvi: Kisse?

Viraat: Pata nahi, bas kuch dhhundla sa dikhta hai. Pichle kuch dino se aisa ho raha hai mere saath.

Maanvi: Kya hota hai?

Viraat: (lost in his world) Wahi, aisa lagta hai jaise, yeh zindagi maine pehle hi jee li hai. Ankhon ke samne kisi ka chehra aata hai, har raat ko uska sapna, par woh dikhti nahi. Uska chehra dhhundla hota hai, kuch clear nahi dikhta.

Maanvi: Aur kya dikhta hai?
Viraat: Kisi ki...Shadi, (looking at Maanvi) shayad. Par usme bhi kisi ka chehra nahi dikhta. Anyways, woh sab chodo, yeh batao hum movie kaunsi dekhne wale hai? Main yahan aa toh gaya par mujhe pata hi nahi kaunsi movie dekhne jaa rhe hain hum.

Maanvi: (smiles) Horror Story.

Viraat turned his face completely towards Maanvi.

Viraat: (looking at her with wide eyes) Ho..Hor..Horror..Sto..Story?

Maanvi: (confused) Haan, Tum aise kyun bol rahe ho?

Viraat: Bho..Bhooton Wali?

Maanvi: Naam Horror hai toh bhooton wali hi hogi na Viraat. (laughs) Tum bhi.

Viraat: Maanvi tum pagal ho? Aisi movies dekhne koi aata hai kya? Chalo nikalte hai yahan se, koi aur movie dekhte hai, yeh nahi.
Maanvi: Yeh kyun nahi? Arey Mujhe aur Di ko horror movies pasand hai. Aur Jiju ko toh Bhooton se dar war nahi lagta.

Viraat: Nahi, chal...chalo kuch aur dekhte hai.
Maanvi: Ek minute, ek minute. (smirks) Tumhe horror movies dekhne se dar lagta hai?

Viraat: (looking everywhere but him)  Na..nahi, muj..mujhe kyu..kyun dar..dar lage..ga...Nahi, dar nahi, lagta.
Maanvi: Acha? (smiles) Toh yahi dekhte hai.

Viraat: (frowns) Par, par tumhe, dar..dar laga..toh?

Maanvi: Mujhe nahi dar lagta. Ab chup baitho movie start ho gayi.

Viraat gulped hard, and turned his face towards the screen. His heartbeat raised, and he started sweating.

Viraat: (to himself) Hey Bhagwaan, kahan phas gaya.


The movie started with scary musics which freaked Viraat even more.

Viraat: (to himself) Jai Hanuman gyan gun sagar, jai kapis, tihun lok ujagar...Ram doot atulit bal dhama...Anjaani-putra Pavan sut nama...Hey Hanuman Ji, Raksha karo.


Maanvi turned her face towards Viraat, and saw him breathing heavily, and sweating badly.

Maanvi: Viraat tum thik ho?

Viraat: (worried smile) Ah,..haa...haan main thik hun..mujhe kya hona hai.

Maanvi: Lag toh nahi raha, tumhe dar lag raha hai kya?
Viraat: Da..dar..dar..na..nah...nahi, nahi, bil, bilkul nahi.
Maanvi: (smirks) Pakka na?
Viraat: Pa..pa..pakka...pakka..pakka.

Maanvi: (smiles) Ok..

Maanvi turned her gaze towards the screen. After a little while, there was a ghost that showed in the movie, Viraat quickly closed his eyes and held Maanvi's hand tightly.

Maanvi: (looking at Viraat) Kya hua?

Viraat: (opened his eyes) Nahi,,,kuch nahi, tum dar na jao, isiliye tumhara haath pakad liya.

Maanvi: (suppressing her laughter) Acha,,yaa...thanks.
Viraat: (fake smile) Anytime.
Maanvi: Abhi main thik hun, mera haath chodh sakhte ho tum.

Viraat: Ha..haan.

Viraat, unwillingly, pulled his hand away from hers.

Viraat: (to himself) Kab khatam hogi yeh movie?

All of a sudden, there was a loud and scary sound that played in the movie, which freaked Viraat even more. He closed his eyes and hid his face in Maanvi's hair. Maanvi was taken aback with his sudden action. She looked at her side and saw Viraat's face hidden in her hair, while his hand tightly wrapped around her.

Maanvi: (concerned) Viraat tum thik ho?

Viraat: (face still hidden in her hair) Kya thik hun, meri yahan dar ke maare jaan nikal rahi hai,  Aur tum puch rahi ho ki main thik hun ya nahi.

Maanvi: Par yeh toh bas movie hai.

Viraat: (pulling her more close to him) Mujhe horror movies dekhne se dar lagta hai.

Maanvi: Par...
Viraat: Please aise hi rehne do.

Maanvi: Viraat look at me.

Viraat: (pulls her even closer) Nahi.

Maanvi: (places her hand on his arm) Look at me.

Viraat: Nahi.

Maanvi: Meri taraf dekho.

Viraat moved his head up, looking at Maanvi, in her eyes.

Maanvi: (looking into his eyes) Its ok, bas movie hai, aur kuch nahi.

Viraat: Mujhe dar lagta hai.

Maanvi: Main hun na, daro mat.

Viraat: (looking at her) Bhoot ka chehra...

Maanvi: (places her palm on his cheek) Bhoot ko mat dekho, mujhe dekho.

Viraat: (looking at her closely) Uski sound...
Maanvi: (cutely) Bas meri awaaz suno.
Viraat: (looking at her eyes) Tumhari...

Maanvi: (smiles/places her other palm on his other cheek) Meri...

Viraat moved his hand up and moved some strands of hair behind her ears.

Viraat: (lost in her eyes) Aur...?

Maanvi: (lost in his eyes) Bas yunhi, mujhe dekhte jao.

Viraat: Aur...?

Maanvi: Aise hi mere paas, rhe jao.

Viraat: Aur...?

Maanvi: Mujhe,,,

Viraat: (palm on her cheek) Tumhe...?

Maanvi: Mujhe sunte jao...

Viraat: (leaning close to her face) Aur...?

Maanvi: Aur, mera Vir...

Again there was a loud scary sound played in the movie, which scared both of them this time. They hugged each other, as tight as they could, with their eyes closed. After a while Maanvi opened her eyes, she realized their closeness, and a smile crept over her lips. She was hugging her Husband after so many days. Once again she closed her eyes and pulled him even more close to her. Viraat was smiling, with his eyes closed, pulling her closer to him, inhaling her sweet scent.

Maanvi: (to herself) Kash yeh pal yahin ruk jaye.

Viraat: (to himself) Kash hum hamesha aise hi rahe.


After what seemed like forever, VirMan pulled away from the hug. They turned their faces towards the screen. This time, Viraat wasn't scared at all, he was just lost in his world, while Maanvi was smiling to herself. Soon the movie ended and they went back home.

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Viren, Jeevika, and Maanvi were sitting in the main hall, remembering  Virika's wedding ceremony.

Viren: (smiles) Humari engagement pe dono Chachu ne kya gaane gaaye the na.

Maanvi: (smiles back) Haan Jiju, saath mein Dadaji bhi toh the.

Jeevika: Bahut maza aaya tha uss din waise.

Maanvi: Maza toh bahut aaya tha. Waise humari shadi ka album kahan hai?

Jeevika: Woh toh Chandigrah mein hai na.

Viren: Haan, par yahan par bhi hai, Dadaji ne yahan par bhi rakhwaye the.

Maanvi: Mujhe dekhni hai Jiju, kahan hai?

Viren: Mujhe yaad nahi. Chalo dhudhte hain.

Maanvi: (getting up) Chalo.

Virika and Maanvi went away, looking for their(VirIka's & VirMan's) wedding album.

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Viraat was sitting on his bed, when his gaze went towards a photo album, place on a table.

Viraat: Yeh kaisi album hai? Aur mere kamre mein kya kar rahi hai?

He got up and walked towards the table. He picked up the album, and something fell down from it, on the floor faced down. He placed the album back on the table and picked up the picture that was lying on the floor. His eyes widdened in shock as he saw the picture.


Viraat: Yeh...kab...?


Viren, Jeevika, and Maanvi reached Viraat's room and saw him holding a picture in his hands, his back facing them.

Maanvi: Viraat ke haath mein shadi ki photo.



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Edited by Artii159 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
choti maa🤗loved it and missed u😭
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Posted: 10 years ago
Artii awesome update dear
Great job and very well written
Hope virat memories will be back soon
Thanx 4 upcoming pm
Waiting 4 next part
Update soon dear... Take Care 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
finally u updated this one!!! was eagerly waiting for this story!! loved it to the core!!! The interaction in between VirMan in the theatre was so touching and sweet! and in between Virika was ooo cute!! lolzzz Hmmm Virat found the wedding album and the pic!!! interesting waiting for his reaction but I just hope it is not VirMan's wedding pic lollzz!!!! I am really loving their journey to the past!!!! dont want it to end so soon!!!

Do upd8 soon this time!!!***love***
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Posted: 10 years ago
Rofl...ye kya tha...exchange...virat is scared of horror movies...thats so funny...hahaha...wat abt the wedding album...waiting fr the next...cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice update he scar to watch horror movie
but what exactly he seen update soon next update
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amznggg updt dear... wtng fr nxt prt..updt soon
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its superb  yaar...
continue soon...