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Hey guyz m bck wid a new update, m extremely sorry 4 da delay...thnks a lot 4 ur lovely comments guyz, n 4 da lyks..hope u'll lyk dis part as well..EnJoY...Sorry 4 da delay...

VirMan...Tum Ho Mera Pyaar...Part 33...

~Recap~

Maanvi: (smirks) Tumhare kaan bajte hai kya?
Viraat: Nahi, tum mere sir par baith kar clap karti ho na, woh baj rahe hain.
Maanvi: Joke tha? Hasna tha?
Viraat: (smiles) Haan haso.

Maanvi rolled her eyes and looked away with a smile.

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Dabbu: (bored/looking at Maanvi) Maanvi Di, kitna boring trip hai, kuch karte hai na.
Pinky Chachi: (excitedly) Haan Haan, kuch karte hai.
Inder Chachu: Par kya?
Madhan Chachu: (thinking) Haan kya karein?
Viren: (smiles) Chachu gaane gaate hain na.
Kadambari Chachi: (happily) Haye ni Viren, main bhi yahi kehne wali thi.
Shlok: (smiles widely) Haan khelte hai.
Dadaji: (getting up from his seat) Bhai hum toh nahi kheleinge. Tum saare bacche khelo.
Beeji: Haan.

Beeji, Badi Beeji, Dadaji, Swamini Bua, and Vanshika Maa moved towards the front seat, while all the youngsters moved back. Maanvi and Viraat were just sitting at the back, Maanvi was smiling at everyone, while Viraat was lost in her.

Kadambari Chachi: Arey Partner Shartner kaun kaun hoga?
Pinky Chachi: (smilingly, pointing at them) Haan, main, Jeevika, Viraat, Kadambari Ji, aur Shlok ek team mein.
Inder Chachu: (smiles) Thik hai fir, main, Viren, Madhan Ji, Maanvi, aur Dabbu ek team mein.
Kadambari Chachi: Haan done. (looking at a lost Viraat) Viraat chal aaja mere top hope.

Viraat was still busy staring at Maanvi, while she was just looking down, trying to hide her blush.

Madhan Chachu: Mannu tu bhi aajaa.
Maanvi: (looks up/smiles) Ji Chachu.
Kadambari Chachi: (looking at Viraat weirdly as he was not getting up) Oye Viraat aa na.

Viraat didn't even move an inch. He was just staring at Maanvi, lost. Maanvi blushed and got up to move, which brought Viraat back to his sense.

Viraat: (frowns) Kahan jaa rahi ho?
Maanvi: (smirks) Tumhare kuch der pehle kaan baj rahe the na? (pretending to be worried) Ab kaan pura band hi ho gaya kya?
Viraat: (running his fingers through his hair/looking down) Nahi, woh..(looks up at him) tum batao kaha ja rahi ho?
Viren: Oye Viraat, hum antakshri khelne jaa rahe hain.

Viraat's expression changed, after hearing the word 'Antakshri'. His past came in front of his eyes, his past with Maya.

Viraat: (looks out of the window) Main nahi khel raha, I'm sorry.

Maanvi looked at Viren, as she understood the reason of his denial.

Viren: Viraat.
Maanvi: (hands on her hips) Kyun nahi khelni? Darte ho ki haar jaoge mujhse?

Viraat turned his face towards Maanvi, and gave him a small smile.

Viraat: Main aaj tak kisi se nahi haara.
Maanvi: (folds her hands across her chest) Of course, kyun ki aaj tak tumhara samna Maanvi Vad,,I mean Maanvi Chaudhary se jo nahi hua na, isiliye.
Viraat: (stands up) Tum mujhe challenge kar rahi ho? Mujhe? Viraat Vadhera ko?
Maanvi: Haan kar rahi hun. Agar haara sakhte ho, toh aajao maidaan mein.
Viraat: (smirks) Aur agar main jeeta toh kya dogi mujhe?
Maanvi: Jo tum chahoge woh. Par agar main jeeti, then?
Viraat: Toh tum jo chahogi tumhe main woh dunga.
Maanvi: (side smile/hand extended) Manzur.
Viraat: (shakes his hand with hers) Done then. Let the game begin.

Viraat and Maanvi went to their respective teams.

Team A: Viraat, Jeevika, Shlok, Kadambari Chachi, & Pinky Chachi.
Team B: Maanvi, Viren, Dabbu, Inder Chachu, & Madhan Chachu.
Pinky Chachi: Chalo Team A, jo ki hum hai, start kareinge.

Viraat smirked and raise one eyebrow, looking at Maanvi, who just rolled her eyes at him.

Shlok: Main shuru karta hun.
Inder Chachu: (smiles widely) Karo karo, dekhna kaise haarte ho tum sab.
Kadambari Chachi: Jeetein ge toh hum hi.
Inder Chachu: Dekhte hain, chalo shuru karo.
Shlok: Chota baccha jaan ke na koi aankh dikhana re, tupi tupi taap taap, tupi tupi taap taap...Akal ka kachcha samajhake na humko samajhana re, tupi tupi taap taap, tupi tupi taap taap.
Viren: (laughs) Tu baccha sirf dikhta hai, tujhe koi samjhaye usse pehle tu usski khabar le leta hai, toh yeh gaana tere pe suit nahi karta.
Kadambari Chachi: Sahi baat hai, par iss waqt hum game khel rahe hai jisse hume jeetna hai. Agar tum logo ko nahi jeetna hai toh theek hai, (smiles) hum jeet jaate hai, (looking at Pinky Chachi) kyun?
Pinky Chachi: (smiles widely) Haan ji bilkul.
Maanvi: Hum haar kyun maane?
Viren: Exactly hum kyun haar maane bhai, woh bhi bina khele.
Jeevika: Toh chalo shuru ho jao 'P' se.
Viren: Theek hai. (looking around at his team) Kaun gaye ga?
Maanvi: (pointing at Chachu, smilingly) Inder Chachu.
Inder Chachu: Main?
Viren: Haan Chachu, aap gao.
Inder Chachu: Ok. 'P' se (scratching his head)...Um...pa...pa...
Kadambari Chachi: (irritatedly) Kya Pa Pa kar rahe hain aap, gao bhi.
Inder Chachu: Gaa raha hun na. (smiles) Papa kehte hai bada naam karega (looking around confusedly)...beta...humara...(smiles) aisa kaam karega...bas itna hi aata hai mujhe.
Viraat: Kya Chachu. Chalo (looking at his team) humari baari, 'A' se. Kaun gayega?
Pinky Chachi: (smiles/hand up) Main, main gaati hun. (gets up and starts dancing) Aksar is duniya mein, anjaane milte hain, aanjani raahon mein milke kho jaate hain, lekin hamesha woh yaad aate hain..Aksar iss duniya mein.

When Pinky Chachi was singing the song, Viraat was just staring at Maanvi, while she was looking at Pinky Chachi, smilingly, unaware of his glaze.

Viren: Kya baat hai Chachi. Ab kaun gayega?

Viraat came back to his sense, hearing Viren's voice.

Inder Chachu: Chal tu hi gaa de.
Viren: ok Kisse?
Pinky Chachi: "E" se ji.
Viren: (looking at Jeevika) Ek din...ek din teri rahon mein, bahon mein panaho mein aaunga, kho jaunga, ek din tera ho jaunga (winks as she looked up)...yeh dil toh na, keh saka yeh baatein, dil toh na keh saka...
Kadambari Chachi: (smirks) Chal Jeevika, ab tu gaa.
Jeevika: (blushingly) Chachi main.
Viraat: Haan Bhabhi, aap gaaiye ab. (looking at Maanvi, with a smirk) Haarana jo hai inhe.
Jeevika: (smiles) Ok Devar ji. Kisse gaana hai?
Viraat: "A" se.
Jeevika: Ok...(thinking) Um,,,(smiles, looking at Viren) Aye dil Deevane...(looking at both Chachu and Chachi's) Aye dil...Deevane...(stands up) Aye dil deevane, deevane, na jaane, hua kya..? (looking out) Mausam suhane, suhane, na jaane, (turns back at them) hua kya...? (walks towards Maanvi) Takrar karte karte, (hugs her from behind) lagta hai mujhko aise, (walks towards Viraat/shaking her head negatively) inkaar karte karte, lagta hai mujhko aise, jaise hote hote pyaar ho gaya...(looking at Viraat and then Maanvi) Hote hote pyaar ho gaya. (walking towards Viren) Hote hote pyaar ho gaya, ha ha ha ha...(smiles, signalling him, with her eyes, towards VirMan) Hote hote pyaar ho gaya.

Jeevika went back to her seat and sat down.

Viraat: Wah Bhabhi, (looking at Viren, teasingly) ho gaya?
Kadambari Chachi: (teasingly) Haan haan ho gaya na.

Jeevika blushed hard, looking down.

Viraat: Ab Team B...Bhai?
Viren: (looking at Madhan Chachu) Chachu your turn.
Madhan Chachu: Kisse shuru karna hai?
Viren: (looking at Team A) Kisse?
Kadambari Chachi: "A" se.
Madhan Chachu: Firse, acha chalo. (smiles at Viraat) Aane wala pal, woh aa raha hai...(smiles at Maanvi) Jaane wala pal, yeh jaa raha hai...(looking at everyone) Aane wala pal, woh aa raha hai...jaane wala pal, yeh jaa raha hai...(looking at Maanvi) Nayi manzilon ko hai (pointing at Viraat) tera intezaar...La La La La La La La La La La...
Inder Chachu: Wah, kya gaana gaaya hai. Chalo Team A..shuru ho jao "A" se.
Kadambari Chachi: (gets up from her seat/hands spread out) Angdaaiyaan leti hoon main jabb zor-zor se...Ufff! angdaaiyan leti hoon main jab zor-zor se, Uhh ahh ki avaaz hai (looking around) aati har ore se...(walks towards Inder Chachu) Main to chaloon is kadar, Ke mach jaae ye gadar, (touches his face with her finger) hosh waale bhi madhosh aayein re nazar...(smiles widely) Mere photo ko...(showing him her palm) Mere photo ko (hand on his chest) seene se yaar chipkale saiyaan (clapping) fevicol se.
Inder Chachu: (hands on his chest) Aye haye, hamesha ke liye chipakna hai kya mujhse?
Kadambari Chachi: (hits him, blushingly) Chup rahiye aap. (walks towards her seat) Ab Team B ki baari, (sits down) shuru karo "E" se.
Viren: (smiles) Maanvi, tum gao.

Maanvi smiled and went to sit beside Viraat.

Maanvi: (leaning close to his ear) Ek main (moving back from him/standing up) aur ek tu...(points at him, then at herself) dono miley iss tarah...hoo (leaning back at him again/her hair brushed his face) ek main aur ek tu, dono miley iss tarah,,,(walking towards Pinky Chachi, who was standing) aur jo tann mann mein ho raha hai, (hugs her) yeh toh hona hi tha.

Maanvi went towards Viren, and starts dancing, along with him. Everyone else were smiling, looking at Viren and Maanvi, and then at Viraat, who looked a bit confused. After a little dancing with Viren, Maanvi went back to Viraat.

Maanvi: (sits besides him/looking at him with a smirk) Ho duriyaan,,,(stands up, turns her face towards Pinky Chachi) waqt aane pe mitayein ge...(showing him her index finger) ek din...(inching close to him) itna paas paas aayeing ge. (moves back from him) Intezaar kab talak, (dancing with Pinky Chachi) be karar kab talak, (dancing with Kadambari Chachi) yun hi pyaar kab talak, (leans back at Viraat/near his ear) bolo bolo bolo bolo bolo...(moves back a little/finger on her lips) shhh shhh...(sits down)

Viraat smiled amusedly at her.

Maanvi: (getting up) Ek main aur ek tu...(leaning close to his face) dono miley iss tarah...(moves back/dancing with both Chachi's) hoo ek main aur ek tu, dono miley iss tarah,,,(sits besdie him) aur jo tann mann mein ho raha hai, (smiles at him cutely) yeh toh hona hi tha.
Inder Chachu: Wah kya gaya hai Maanvi,
Maanvi: Thank You Chachu.

Maanvi gave Viraat a side smile, and went back to her seat. While Viraat was lost in his own dreamland.

Viraat: (to himself) Mujhe aise kyun laga, jaise yeh sab pehle bhi ho chuka hai. Jaise maine yeh din pehle bhi jeeye hain. Woh bhi Maanvi ke saath...
Kadambari Chachi: Chal ab teri baari Viraat, "A" se.

Viraat came out of his dreamland, and gave them a confused smile.

Viren: Gaa bhi 'A' se.
Viraat: (looking at Maanvi) Anjaane ho tum jo begaane ho tum jo pehchane lagte ho kyun? Tum gehri neendon mein jab soye soye ho toh mujh mein jagte ho kyun? Jab tujhko paata hai (smiles) dil muskurata hai kya tujhse hai vasta? (looks down) Kya tujh mein dhundhun main kya tujhse chahun main, kya kya hai tujh mein mera? (lifts his gaze up at her again) Jaanun na main, tujh mein mera kissa hai kya...? Par ajnabee apna mujhe tu laga. Jaanun na main tujh mein mera kissa hai kya...par ajnabee apna mujhe tu laga.

Maanvi was whole time looking down, with a smile playing on her lips.

Kadambari Chachi: Team B, "A" se.
Maanvi: Dabbu, teri baari.
Dabbu: (frowns) Mujhe nahi aata Di gaana, aap hi batao kaunsa gaun?
Viren: Um, (smiles) tu na woh gaa...(frowns) nahi nahi, woh "A" se nahi hai..(smiles) tu na, (frowns) nahi nahi, woh bhi nahi hai.
Inder Chachu: (whisperes to Viren and Madan Chachu) Mujhe toh kam gaane aate hai, toh mujhe nahi pata.
Madhan Chachu: (whisperes) Mujhe bhi nahi.

All four of them turned towards Maanvi, who was looking at them unbelievingly.

Maanvi: Kaise Partners miley hain mujhe, sach mein.
Viraat: (smirks) Time is running.

Maanvi glared at Viraat and then looked at all them four.

Maanvi: Dabbu tu na...(thinking) um..
Team A: Tick Tick 1...Tick Tick 2..
Inder Chachu: (annoyedly) Kya Tick Tick, chup karo.
Team A: Tick Tick 3...times up. (stands up happily) Hum jeet gaye...!!!

Maanvi gave Viraat a 'Whatever' look and rolled her eyes, as he winked at her.

Viraat: Shart main jeet gaya, Ms. Maanvi Chaudhary.
Maanvi: (like a little kid) Tumne cheating ki.
Viraat: Arey maine kya cheating ki?
Maanvi: Tumne ki hai, main keh rahi hun na.
Jeevika: Mannu maan le, tu haar gayi. (smiles) Ab tu wahi karegi jo Viraat chahiye ga.
Maanvi: (folds her hands across her chest) No way, main nahi karne wali.
Viraat: (frowns) Yeh kya baat hui, tum haari ho, aur main jeeta, toh ab tumhe wahi karna hoga jo main kahun ga. Aur tumhe manzur bhi tha, ab tum peeche nahi haat sakhti tum.
Maanvi: (sigh) Ok fine. Bolo kya karna hai mujhe?
Viraat: Tumhe...

Viraat got interupted by Dadaji.

Dadaji: (facing towards them) Acha Bacchon, chalo ab kuch kha lete hain.
Inder Chachu: Haan haan chalo.

Maanvi rolled her eyes and walked away, following by other, along with a smiling Viraat.

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Within sometime, Vadhera's, along with the Chaudhary's reached The Vadhera House in Mussoorie.

Dadaji: Chaliye, Beeji, Bahenji, hum aa gaye. Chalo Bacchon.
Pinky Chachi: (excitedly) Haye Rabba, aa gaye hum. Chalo chalo.

One by One, everyone came out of the bus, besides Maanvi, who was inside the bus, looking for her bracelet.

Dabbu: (looking around) Wow, yeh toh Chandigrah wala ghar se bhi bada lagta hai.
Viren: (smiles) Chalo andar chalte hai.

Everyone started walking inside, Viraat looked around and found someone missing. He turned around towards the bus and saw a worried Maanvi, inside the bus looking for something. He smirked and started walking towards the bus, while others went inside. Once he reached, he got into the bus, and stood in the corner with hands folded, smilingly.

Maanvi: (worriedly) Kahan gaya?
Viraat: Kya dhundha jaa raha hai Bandariya Ji?

Maanvi looked up at him, with a irritated expression.

Maanvi: Dekho, abhi mera bilkul mood nahi hai ladne ka, please.
Viraat: Toh maine kab kaha ki aao Jhansi Ki Rani, mujhse lado? (smiles) Main toh yahan bas tumhari madat karne aaya tha.
Maanvi: (fake smile) Thanks, (frowns) but no thanks, main khud dhund lungi.
Viraat: (smirks) Nahi dhund paogi.
Maanvi: (hands on her hips) Ab iss mein bhi koi challenge dalna hai kya tumhe?
Viraat: (walking towards her) Chaho toh kar sakhte hai, I have no problem. Is mein bhi tumhi haarogi.
Maanvi: (eyes narrowed) Tumhe kaise pata?
Viraat: (looks away from her) Bas pata hai.
Maanvi: Aise kaise...wait a minute. (pointing at him) You!..Kahan hai meri bracelet?
Viraat: (walking backwards) Ma..main,,mu, mujhe kya pata.
Maanvi: (walking towards him) Chep Vadhera, tumhe sab pata hai, (hand extended out) wapas karo.
Viraat: (stood still) Jao nahi karta, kya karlogi?
Maanvi: (angrily) Viraat, mujhe meri bracelet wapas karo abhi.
Viraat: Kyun?
Maanvi: Tum de rahe ho ya nahi?
Viraat: Nahi de raha, (smiles at her) jo karna hai karo.
Maanvi: Tum,,,

And with that she started running after him. Viraat, in order to save his life from the Bandariya, ran out of the bus, followed by Maanvi.

Maanvi: (breathing heavily) Viraat...meri bracelet...wapas karo.
Viraat: (panting) Nahi...kar raha.

They continued running, Maanvi chasing Viraat. She was about to get a hold of him, but she lost her balance. Just as she was going to fall down, Viraat, who turned back to tease her, saw her loosing her balance. He hurriedly ran towards her and wrapped his arms around her slim waist and pulled her towards him, preventing her from falling. Viraat was lost, lost in her beauty, while Maanvi's eyes were closed in fear of hitting herself on the ground. His heart continued thumping hard against his chest, not because of all that running, but because of the girl he was holding in his arms. Maanvi slowly opened her eyes, only to find two pairs of eyes looking at her, lost. Her cheeks turned bright red, seeing love in his eyes. The same love that he had for his Wife, his Maanvi, when he remembered her. Her eyes filled with tears, which tensed Viraat to the core. He immediately pulled her up and cupped her cheeks in his palm.

Viraat: (worriedly) Maanvi kya hua? Tum ro,,ro kyun rahi ho? Tum, tumhara bracellet mere hi paas hai, please ro mat.

He hurriedly took out the bracelet from his pocket and held it in front of her.

Viraat: Dekho.

Maanvi smiled through her tears, seeing the same concern in his eyes for her, which he always had before. Viraat held her hand and tied the bracellet on her wrist.

Viraat: Ab toh pehna bhi diya, please mat ro na.

Maanvi wiped her tears and gave him a cute smile.

Maanvi: Dekha, iss baar tum khud haar gaye.

Maanvi winked at him, and turned around to walk away, when she found her hand being held by him.

Viraat: Tum aise nahi jaa sakhti.

Maanvi turned towards him, looking all confused.

Viraat: Shart, jo pehle main jeeta tha. So tumhe ab woh karna hoga jo main kahunga.
Maanvi: Kya chahte ho tum?
Viraat: (stepping close to her) Tumhe mujhse...
Maanvi: (still confused) Mujhe tumse kya?
Viraat: (coming more close to her) Tumhe mujhse...
Maanvi: (heartbeat increasing) Mujhe tumse kya Viraat?
Viraat: Pyaar hai?

Maanvi's heart stopped beating for a minute, she was just looking at him confusedly.

Maanvi: Kya?
Viraat: Kya kya? Tumne hi toh kaha mujhe tumse...(smiles) toh main complete kar diya. (leaning close to her) Toh batao pyaar hai?
Maanvi: Tum mujhse puch rahe ho na? Is mein karne wali kaun si baat hai?
Viraat: Arey nahi, maine abhi bataya nahi ki tumhe kya karna hoga, maine toh bas aise hi pucha.
Maanvi: Toh meherbani kar ke aap batayeinge mujhe, ki mujhe kya karna hai?
Viraat: Acha thik hai. Tumhe mujhse...
Maanvi: (rolled her eyes) Not again...(ready to walk away) main jaa rahi hun.
Viraat: (holds her arm) Acha ok, bata raha hun. Tumhe mujhse...(smiles) dosti karni hogi.
Maanvi: Kya?
Viraat: Haan.
Maanvi: (hands folded across her chest) Aur kyun karungi main ek Ullu Chep se dosti?
Viraat: Dekho tum shart haari ho, toh dosti toh tumhe karni hi hogi mujhse.
Maanvi: Theek hai.
Viraat: (smiles/hand extended out) Toh friends.
Maanvi: (looking at his hand/trying to hide her excitment) Ab haath bhi milaun?
Viraat: (smirks) Kyun tumhe gale lagna hai kya? (arms spread out) I don't mind.
Maanvi: Chep kahin ka. (hold one of his hand) Friends.
Viraat: (shakes hands/smiles widely) Forever.

Maanvi again rolled her eyes and walked away, leaving a smiling and lost Viraat behind.

Viraat: (kisses her hand, which she just held a few seconds ago) Friends.

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Everyone, besides Maanvi, were sitting on the dinning table, as it was dinner time. Viraat was just looking around, frowningly, looking around for Maanvi. His lips curved into a big smile, when he saw her desending the stairs, looking just like an angel in her blue and white, patiala suit. But soon, his smile faded away, and his expression changed into a confused and shocked one.

Jeene Laga Hun...

Viraat: (looking at Maanvi, coming down) Jeene laga hoon, pehle se zyada...Pehle se zyada, (points at her, smilingly) tumpe marne laga hoon...

He saw himself, standing at the end of the stairs, looking up at Maanvi. He looked down at himself and then at the other Viraat. She came down, without noticing anything around her, which confused him even more. She sat down, in front of him, looking down, as she was blushing. He looked up at the other Viraat, or should I say, imaginary Viraat, who was looking at Maanvi, all lost, walking towards her.

Viraat(Imaginary): (hand on his chest/looking at his hand) Main, mera dil, aur (looks up at Maanvi) tum ho yahaan, (walking towards a blushing Maanvi, who was looking down) phir kyun ho palkein jhukaye wahaan.

He(Imaginary Viraat) came and sat beside her, on his knees, looking at her with lots and lots of love in his eyes for her.

Viraat(Imaginary): (smiles) Tum sa haseen pehle dekha nahi, (tilt his head, lost in her) tum isse pehle the jaane kahaan...

He stood up and spread his arms out. Viraat was just confused, looking at himself in that way, beside Maanvi, who was quietly eating her food.

Viraat(Imaginary): Jeene laga hoon pehle se zyada, (holding his head in his hands, lightly) Pehle se zyada (looking back at Maanvi) tumpe marne laga...

His eyes popped out as he saw Maanvi, behind that Viraat, in white saree, looking stunning.

Maanvi(I): (holds his hands, pulling him towards her/walking backwards) Hmmm...Hmmm...
VirMan(I): (Viraat pulls her towards him, hands around her) Ho..hooo
Maanvi(I): (Viraat twirls her around) Hmmm...Hmmm...
VirMan(I): (pulls her back on him) Hmm..OOo...

Viraat looked down at Maanvi, who just finished her dinner, getting up, and walking away from him. He again looked at the Viraat & Maanvi, who were hugging each other, lost in each others arms. He got up, without moving his eyes away from them.

Viraat(I): Rehte ho aake jo tum paas mere, (moving some strand of hair, away from her face) Tham jaaye pal yeh wahin, (smiles, looking at her, lost) Bas main yeh sochun...
Maanvi(I): (wraps her arms around his neck) Sochun main tham jaaye pal yeh, (smiles) paas mere jab ho tum...

Viraat bumped into Maanvi, as he was walking without looking. Both were lost in each others eyes. Maanvi's hands on Viraat's chest, while his rested on her waist.

Sochun main than jaaye pal yeh, paas mere jab ho tum...

Maanvi looked down blushingly, and walked away from there, as she came back to her sense. Leaving a smiling Viraat behind, with his heart, beating at a uncontrollable rate. He turned his face, towards Maanvi, who was walking away without looking at him.

Chalti hai saansein, pehle se zyada, pehle se zyada, dil theharne laga...

He again looked at the imagainary VirMan, who were dancing in front of his eyes, making him smile ever more, and his heart beat increasing every second.

Maanvi(I): (swaying in his arms) Hmmm...Hmm..
VirMan(I): (touches his forehead with hers) Oh ho...Ooo...

He walked up, towards the terrace, alone. He stood at the railing, looking up at the sky, lost in Maanvi's thoughts. He turned towards the couple, imaginary VirMan, and smiled amusedly. He turned to look at the door, wishing Maanvi to be coming in front of him any minute. When he found no one there, he turned his attention back to the sky.

Tanhaaiyon mein tujhe dhoonde mera dil...Har pal yeh tujhko hi, soche bhala kyun.

He again turned around towards the door, but this time, his wish came true. Maanvi was standing there, looking a little surprised.

Tanhaai mein dhoonde tujhe dil, har pal tujhko soche...Tanhai mein dhoonde tujhe dil, har pal tujhko soche.

He smiled looking at her, turning fully towards her.

Milne lage dil, pehle se zyada, (turning his face towards the imaginary VirMan) Pehle se zyada, ishq hone laga..

Imaginary VirMan, were lost in their back hug, with eyes closed, and swaying softly at the music.

Maanvi(I): Hmmm...
VirMan(I): Oh ho...Ooo
Maanvi(I): Hmmm,,hmmm...hmmm hmmm...
VirMan(I): Oh Ho..oo

He looked at Maanvi, who was about to turn around and leave.

Viraat: Suno...

Bas, itna hi...hope u lykd it...sorry if it was long n boring update, soon a new twist will b added...thnk u...tc Luv Aartii...

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Edited by Artii159 - 13 years ago

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Niaksharma

@Niaksharma

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#314

Res/
superb...
Liked it...
Awesome one...

Thanks for pm
nd continue soon...
Loved virmaan too much...

Edited by Niaksharma - 13 years ago

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Tuba KHAn

@Tuba_KSG

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#315

Res .. 😊
Unres !! 😊

eeeksss !! 👏
U updated Finally , after aaa LONG time .! 🥳
And The Update was Am-am-AMAZING .. 👏
Bus scene was nice n Antakshri Game was AwesOme .. I imagined Every Thing tOw mjhe tOw bht maza aya 😳 ..Aww , Dining Table scene was sooo CUTE .. The Idea Of Imaginary VirMan was Great , i enjoyed their Performance .. 😛👍🏼
eeeksss , I just Loved Whole Update 🤗..
Pleeesssh next time jldii krna yr .. 🤔

Edited by Tuba_KSG - 13 years ago

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kulsum_virman

@kulsum_virman

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#316

res
unres
loving the old virman back its like relieving those beautiful memories and you are giving us the moment to relieve them with amazing tadka of urs...😃
just loved the update it was soo much fun ...the antakshari part just awesome how whole time virat was soo lost in admiring manvi
the way used her trick to make him sing 😃
then the bracelet part he just cant see her tears awww😊
awesome update arti ...😃

Edited by kulsum_virman - 13 years ago

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virmanfan013

@virmanfan013

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#317

hey artii thanks for the update again and it was really very beautiful and i enjoyed the every bit of it.very beautifull written dear👏

the virman moment in the bus very well portrayed.

hayeee virat was lost in mannu and didn't listen anything😳😳

antakshri part was superb and when virat said that mujhe aisa kyu lag raha hai ke aisa pehle bhi kabhi hua hai then i was like jumping (never mind you know how mad i am 🤣 )

and then braclet scene was also amazing and their chasing part😳😳😳

then come the dining table scene where virat was imagening himself and manvi dancing with each other was so cute romantic and i was toh like☺️

anyways very beautiful part

thanks for the pm

take care😊

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Aenna

@Aenna

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#318

Wooow full Filmy update..
I really luved dat imaginary virman...
Nd all d virman moments were awwsum..
Virat is realising his luv...
Update asap nd thnx for d pm