Dard-e-Tanhai SS: Ch1 P2

Dard-e-Tanhai'

Okay guys i'm totally heads in love with this new show. I really love the story but the only complaint I have is it's not long enough! I mean come on it's an amazing show and I really wished it would be longer atleast an hour long but sadly it's only 30 minutes 😭

Anyways I kinda envisioned this story in my mind so here goes

Heads up: I'm a horrible speller in Hindi I apologize in advance!

Prologue

The story is about a Kashmiri girl Antara who had everything that she could dream of a loving family happiness, security and soon to be husband. (So I wanna start off with her being engaged) She had everything but true love. She like any other girl dreamed that one day her knight and shining armor would come and rescue her. But in reality there was nothing. She was engaged to Veer Pratap Sharma Major in the Indian Army located in Kashmir. He was a handsome fellow with an average size family along with an average size dream. He wasn't the type of person that would be open to anything. Being in the army especially in Kashmir it taught him to never underestimate in someone ability. Over time seeing several deaths caused Veer to have a stone-heart but everything changed when he met Antara. A fun loving bubbly girl that just finished college.

But everything changed after one fateful night!

Her life has taken a dramatic turn

Her Father is Dead...

Her mother has lost her sanity after witnessing her husband's death

And her brother is waiting for a Father that is suppose to come and fulfill his wish.

Because of one night she lost everything.

Her father a part of her mother and most importantly herself...

Pain

Anger

Tears

That was what was left with a broken heart in tacked

So do you guys like it?

Please do like it and give me plenty of ideas 😊

How will she meet Raghu...??? N what abt her fiance ???
Damn interesting...
Continue soon dear n do pm me 😊

ooohhh! cutie, nice start! please continue 😊

Anatra or raghu ki life same hi h ek ne maa khoi to dusre ne papa...aane wale time me dono ek duje ke sath denge 😊

Chapter 1

Achee insano ke saath ghalat nai ho sakta…

"You never know what's going to happen Tara (Antara), make sure when your time comes you don't have any regrets. Make sure you've lived a full and happy life."

Achee insano ke saath ghalat nai ho sakta…

Khushyaan tere paroon taale hai beta isse chootne maat dena

Achee insano ke saath ghalat nahi ho sakta…

Beta mein tujhe khush dhekna chaata hoon

These thoughts were making Antara suffocate. She couldn't breathe. She couldn't do this. But she has to. Coming so far she can't go back now.

So many thoughts were going through her mind when taking very heavy steps to the morgue to identify her father's body.

She knew she couldn't do this but she has to stay strong…

She has to…

After going through numerous bodies all night she finally found her father. She didn't cry nor did she scream. The tears had died in her eyes she had died herself.

She couldn't allow herself to break. If she broke who would stay strong for her Maa and Ishu.

It's been a month now and her Aunty and Uncle are here to convince everyone to come to Mumbai with them.

Antara: Per iss sabse kaha hoga… Papa vaapis toh nahi aajange

Uncle: Beta baat samajne ki koshish karo. How long are you guys gonna keep living like this?

If not for my saying atleast think of your Mother. She needs medical treatment; most importantly she needs to get out of this environment. She's not willing to move on. Didi still think that Jiju will walk through those doors any minute.

Mami: Please try to understand beta. Your like our kids and we really want you guys to be happy. Plea-

Before she could say anything more Antara cut her off by saying we'll be leaving with you guys in the morning.

Antara: it's really late now you guys should rest…

Tomorrow is the new start to her new journey…

So do you guys like it? 😊

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