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Part 62


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Early morning maan woke up only to find himself alone in bed. He looked around for her but she wasn't anywhere in the room. He sighed as his head ached due to last night's crying but was surprised when his eyes fell on the freshly prepared lemon juice kept beside the table. He knew it was only she who could have thought so much for him and drank in one go with an Anacin.

It was the sweet chime of her anklet that got his attention as his eyes fell on the beautiful girl who came from bathroom wiping her wet hairs with towel. She glanced at him for once and then at the empty glass of lemon juice and started drying her hairs.

"good morning" he said to get her attention but she just simply ignored him not paying any attention to him. He shied seeing her anger and laid back on her soft bed, his eyes fixed on her back as she continued her work. She thought may be he had left seeing the silence in the room but then seeing his reflection and his eyes that were fixed on her, she got conscious of herself!!!

He stared at her wet neck and those water droplets that flew smoothly from her dripping hairs to her white neck and finally hiding themselves in her sleeveless white top. He gulped, as his eyes involuntarily fixed on her chest which was slight wet due to water and his eyes refused to leave the view.

She saw him looking at her without a blink through mirror and immediately straightened herself as she walked out throwing her towel on him, thus breaking his concentration. He hit his forehead mentally cursing himself for losing his focus. The day was normal like always with the only difference, that this time it was a silent morning.

Geet did whatever she usually does, making breakfast, cleaning dishes and then doing some household cleaning, but this time she wasn't starting her radio, nor was disturbing him in every two minutes, cribbing for something or the other. He even tried to start conversation with her, but she would either ignore or would reply with a "hmm" or "umm".

It was afternoon and full three hours had passed since she was staying aloof. When she served his lunch, he simply pushed away the plate saying he will eat only when she will talk with him normally. She glanced him for a minute and just took the plate and started eating herself while he sat there gaping at her.

After finishing off her lunch and cleaning the dishes, she kept his share of food in microwave and left to her room. His stomach grumbled in hunger but he knew she will talk only for him, otherwise he wont be able to make her speak. Three hours passed and she didn't came out. Ab to ye khamoshi use bhi bardash nhi ho rhi thi!!!!

Ye entered her room and sat beside her and asked sweetly, "which question are you doing geet, do you need any help from me???" seeing her struggling at some step, he immediately came at her help and said, "geet multiplication galat hai" and pointed at the step where her calculation was wrong. She looked at him for a moment and then immediately closed her books and left the room in huff.

She went in the balcony and stood in the railing as she looked at the clouds hovering above. The clouds were dark and strong winds blew. She smiled softly as she remembered how he was revolving around her since morning. Atleast this was diverting his mind from all those issues for some time but her mind would keep going back to his words. But then his efforts were making her feel so special and so important, she didn't know how to explain herself.

After all who doesn't like the attention of their love and the way he would cutely try to make her speak was making her heart flutter. She lifted her hands as she felt the first rain of the season. The chilled water droplets fell on her face, wetting her as she left herself loose in the moment. He stood behind her seeing her smile, laugh and enjoy in the rain like the day when they were going to village.

She stiffened when she saw him looking at her and ran back to her room. She wiped her off and was going to change when she heard her cell ringing. "where were you since morning ha!!!" geet yelled on him as soon as she received the call. "shoo shoo!!! Man was in practice since morning, and then meri date thi you forgot!!!" "yeah yeah most important things in the world for rohan nanda!!!" she taunted while he just chuckled hearing her angry voice.

"accha sun I wont be coming to that get together at your house today" she said after controlling her anger. "kyuu" rohan pouted hearing her no, but she was determined to not go this time. "you are going" he said from back. She turned to see maan standing on the door with his hand folded on his chest. "see even maan bhai said yes, why are you refusing" rohan said from phone.

"maine kha na am not coming and that's final" she said for the final time and cut the call. He got angry and held her shoulder tightly, "just because of this I didn't wanted to tell you' nhi chahta tha tumhara khud ko yuh apni jindagi jine se rokna" she looked away hearing him shouting. "geet look at me" he said as he held her chin and made her look at him.

"geet I have a month with me and I will somehow arrange the money, but please don't stop yourself like this and make me feel more low. Please!!!" he said cupping her face. She looked at him and said, "I didn't refuse because of all that maan. Wha meera bhi hogi and I didn't want to create a drama there" she said closing her eyes tightly.

"matlab" he asked confused when she said, "yesterday I misbehaved with her dii, so surely she would have told meer too' and I knew aj she will be just waiting to pounce on me. Kal in hostel I will talk with her and try to calm her, par aj, it would just destroy other's plan if we fight there" she sighed knowing meera would be literally planning to kill her today.

"meera doesn't know anything!!!" he said after a second while she looked at him with a how-do-you-know look. "I talked with sam yesterday night and she herself said that she wont tell meera about anything that happened yesterday" she just pulled a face hearing he talked with sam but then didn't said anything.

"she called to know if you are ok or not bach' I mean mishty!!!"

"I don't trust your friend" she said in a huff.

"but I do and if she said that, she wont break her promise ever" he said looking at her with a proudness on his friendship. She just disliked him talking about her but this time he was adamant to speak, "geet she is my childhood friend and you are my wife. I am sorry I didn't told you about that but mishty she isn't the one who asked me to not tell you. She isn't wrong, bas you aren't seeing her good side with your insecurities, but I will remove them pakka' and would you like if I had to break my friendship because of the misunderstandings between you both???"

She left the room, but he knew she will understand if not now then later. In evening she was all set to leave and before going, she again served him his food but he said he will have later. She wanted to argue and he was just waiting for her to do that, but then rohan called saying he was waiting downstairs.

Geet looked at him helplessly and would have refused rohan but he took the plate from her hand and ate a bite saying, "tum jao I will eat". She looked at him with uncertainty but he just nodded his head taking another bite of the chapatti. Still unsure she went away leaving him behind.

He looked at her retreating back which was all alone again, biting him eating him and taunting him of his loneliness. Kash he could have just hold her with himself and told her how much he wishes to be with her every minute' every second. He kept back the filled plate in fridge as he rested his back on the close door of the refrigerator.

She sat all alone in mid of all that masti and hungama. Her friends tried to involve her in talks, in their games; she would smile and would involve with them for some minutes, but then would retreat back. She hated all this happiness at the moment when she could feel the misery of the person whose happiness mattered the most.

Suddenly all these seemed so meaningless, nothing gave her peace' she was restless and suffocated. Even few elders were there too, rohan's parents and his relatives who were sitting in the other side of hall talking and discussing business. Seeing her so alone and gloomy, rohan's dad came and sat beside her as he asked her if she is ok.

She nodded with a smile, greeting the old man respectfully. "I hope my son treated you well princess" said rohan's dad with a laugh, his presence itself radiating the aura and authority he carried. "ji uncle" geet said looking down. "geet bte you can tell me if there is any problem, you know that right!!!" said rishabh nanda, rohan's dad placing her hand on her head in a fatherly way.

Rishabh nanda, a well-known businessman and multi-billionaire, was always fond of geet. He was impressed by the changes he noticed in his careless son after her entry in his friend circle, and it wouldn't be wrong that he felt indebted toward her after he came to know that rohan cleared his 11th with first division, just because she taught him. Many a times he had met her with the rest of the group, and he was impressed by the simplicity this girl carried. She was an elegant mix of modernity yet carrying a traditional touch in her every act. And to be honest, it was his hearty wish to see her as a family member in future. Like every father he wanted the best and she was better than the best even.

geet smiled back in response and nodded. seeing her silence he excused himself and went back to his place. it was more than an hour and now it was being difficult for her to stay back.

"rohan i am going back please" geet said as she looked at the time in her watch, ten past nine and it was already atleast an hour drive from here to her flat in the mumbai traffic.


he looked at the desperate girl and interrupted, "but we were to stay for night here right... achanak se!!!" "rohan please next time we will plan again, but this time let me go" she was so desperate that he had to agree and he was going to call his driver when rohan's father interrupted, "its late, i will drop her myself, driver rehne do" geet tried to refuse politely but he was insistent and she agreed politely and went with him.

It was 10:30 when she reached home only to find all lights off and a complete silence surrounded the atmosphere. she felt itchy with the silence and uncomfortable too. she immediately went in his room only to find it dark and silent too. may be he is asleep, she thought but then the feeble noise from her movements on the bed could be heard and she immediately opened the light. he covered his eyes due to the sudden brightness and then looked at her as if he is seeing a dream'

how can she be here at present he thought, she was to go directly to hostel na phir yha... maan yaar tera dimaag ab khuli akho se sapne bhi dekhne laga" he thought but then seeing her come closer to him and touching his forehead, he realized it isn't a dream. "phir headache ho gya aapko???" she asked looking at his red eyes.

He tried to refuse, but well she knew him atleast this much now. She cursed herself for going to that party, her whole day's efforts to keep him diverted seemed waste now. "gadhi ek get together nhi chod sakti thi tu" she cursed herself but he kept his finger on her, "maine bheja tha, stop cursing my mishty". She just twisted her lips and went in her room to bring a balm.

Sitting beside him, she softly massaged his head, rubbing his forehead in circular motion, pressing it lightly with her palm. He laid near her, enjoying her soft movements and for the first time loved this sweet pain too, after all due to this only she is sitting beside him after a whole day of anger.

She realized about the lunch and asked, "aapne khana khaya ya nhi" her voice was so stern, he knew that he is gone now if she saw that plate. "hmm khaya" he said but she knew better than to believe his words and leaving him went to the kitchen and looked for a used plate there but couldn't see one. She opened the fridge and saw fully filed plate there and then glanced at him who stood on the kitchen door bowing his head like a child who got caught by his mother when he steal something.

She didn't said anything, but her insides were ready to fight. But then his headache and would worsen if she fought!!! She kept back the plate and went in her room to change in something comfortable and came back in two minutes with a paper in her hand.

He tried to look into it, but she just went away and took a bowl and filled it with water and took out a pack of pasta from upper shelf. She kept it for boiling on gas, while she chopped veggies other side. Reading the recipe in paper, she made him a fresh pasta in fifteen minutes and served him.

He looked at her with so much love that even this world seemed so small in front of her today. He couldn't believe how come she do so much for him, without even a single uff' no complains' no issues just love showered her every action. He still remembered her reaction when sam told him that he love pasta more than anything else, and he had second her too' but today he could proudly acclaim that he love whatever she makes from her hand' let it be poison too.

Seeing him unmoved, she lifted some pasta in a spoon and brought it to his mouth. He opened his mouth, his eyes still fixed on her while she looked at everywhere other than him. "it's the best pasta I ever ate, par tumhare alloo parathe are my favourite" he said after munching the bite.

Her eyes immediately turned to him as she heard him compliment her pasta. She could still remember the day when he had seconded sam about pasta and she remembers the jealousy that crept her heart too. Next day the first thing she did was to find a recipe of the dish but she didn't get the chance to make it.

Both had an eye lock as he again took a bite from her hand. He didn't knew how to express himself to her, how he felt at the moment seeing her here for him and then realized, he hadn't asked her how come she is here!!!!

"tum yha, you were to go directly to hostel tomorrow na!!!" he asked. She was already furious about him neglecting himself so much and snapped, "its my house too". "ha baba, tumhara hi hai, I just asked"


"sidhe khiye na you didn't wanted me here, taki you could do whatever you wish' aur phir mai to hu hi aapka khyal rakhte ke liye har waqt" she said sarcastically but he was haughty too as he replied, "aur kya, tum to ho hi mera khyal rakhne ke liye, agar tum nhi rakhogi to kya sam rakhegi"

She banged the spoon on table as she marched away in her room hearing him say that, when she clearly told him about her dislike toward sam. But he too followed her behind and sat in front of her with his pasta and said, "khilao or I wont eat it too"

She would have probably said, ki rehno do but then he was having headache and he was empty stomach since morning and thus accepting her defeat she had to do what ever he said.

"puchogi nhi what I am thinking" he said as he looked at her motionless. When didn't said anything he said, "I am searching for the girl who came with me from delhi, wo sehmi si dari si ladki, wo thodi jhalli si aur kabhi kabhi bolne wali ladki ko!!!"

She just ignored him as she stood up to make her bed, but he continued, "pata hai sometimes I used to feel bad for making you go through all this at such a young age, but ab I think it was only babaji's wish. He knew no one else other than you could handle a man like me, and see aaj I am so proud of myself for doing the best thing in my life by choosing you as my life partner."

She just twisted her lips and said, "stop flattering me, bas bahane hai ye sab aapke. Jab apko manane ko kho to kuch hota nhi bas bate banwalo aapse"

"tum hi bolo what I should do' I will do anything"

She just ignored him and sat down on her place. He came and laid on bed too, placing his head on her lap. She tried to push him off, but then he held his hand saying its paining. She got concerned immediately, and cupped his forehead but then seeing that soft smile on his lips, she tried to push him away but he held her by waist saying, "I wont let you go now samjhi!!! And its my right to lay like this" and then taking her hands he wrapped them around him "and to hug you and sleep samjhii"

She did whatever he wanted while he just laid on her lap. Then remembering something he said, "I sold my all investments today and got 5 lakhs in return. Tum chinta nhi karo I will arrange the remaining amount too."


"aur aapka kya, kyu itna chinta karte hai ki sar dard ho jata hai. I know we will get out of all this, bas aap apna khyal rakha karo!!! Agar main nhi aati to phir you would have slept without eating, without taking any medicine for this headache, mujhe nhi pasand apki laparwahi"

"to tum rakhna mera khyal na' mujhe kuch nhi hona"

"mai hu that's why you sent me hostel na when I refused to go, par phir bhi you insisted. Mujhe to ye bhi nhi pata tab you even take care of yourself ya bas aise hi!!!" she looked away saying this. "I am not going to hostel until all this solves samjhe aap!!!" she said showing her finger to him.

"you yourself said ye tumhara ghar hai, jo chahe karo!!!" he simply replied and kissed the back of her hands and said, "ab to naraz nhi mujhse!!!"


"I am damn angry' don't try to distract me samjhe" she said remembering she was supposed to be angry on him.

"are but just now you were talking with me na' ye kaisa gussa hai tumhara"

"bas aisa hi hai' aapko to fark hi nhi padta"

"areee!!!" he fought back with her till both their lids felt heavy and a deep slumber took over them.

Precap: tujhme rab dikhta hai yaar amai kya kru❤️

finally problem being solved


<<part 61 Prev Next part 63 >>

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Chalo am typing the next part too, give me big big comments this time to get the next update soon or keep waiting till I feel satisfied with the response. (no one words commented will be counted)

I don't know how you guys felt about the update, but I just loved their fight in this one. Her jhoota anger which surfaced when ever he didn't take care of himself and yet she isn't ready to accept her defeat.

they say na raste mushkil hmesha milte hai, par achi hum safar wo hoti hai jo un rasto pe apka saya nhi apka sathi banke chale, hmesha aapke sath bina kuch mange aur chahe!!!


Edited by neha512 - 12 years ago
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That was an awesome update neha...
Ofcourse its not easy to manaofy geet now... though at the end of the day, she is just trying to show that she is irritated and angry still when she is kind of not that much angry...
Loved the roothna manana... i think all these things are parts of married life that makes ur relation more strong..
He is trying with all his might.. but then she is angry and also enjoying all the attention from him... it was real cute... And the last part was awesome... her claiming it to be her house and refusing to go to hostel and he agreeing to her claims... And the pasta part... the flashback of it and him assuring her that he loves what she makes... all these are small gestures but they exhibit the immense love and care!!
And the thing to be noted in the update... rohan nanda's interest in Geet... and wants her to be a member of family.. oops... late hogaya... Geet belongs to Maan... am wondering if u have anything in mind for this particular thing...
anyways loved the update.. andi want next one jaldi se... 😉
Edited by Shruthe - 12 years ago
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aaj mein second hi aayi...koi baat nahi... next time try karenge😆

i definitely believe that the best hathyaar in hands of a gal is her silence... and geet taking up this against maan was nice... though she is hurt and sad but i think now its only baahari gussa... and am loving this rootna manaana a lot...

rishabh nanda... he feels obligated towards geet and also would prefer her as his DIL... well DIL uski tho kabhi bann nahi sakthi... but ut mentioning him now is ringing the bells... will he have any hands to solve maaneets financial crisis???

i loved how u shown their love to each other... maan asking her to go t the party inspite of his craving her closeness... and geet coming back soon from the party feeling restless for maan... cute and lovely couple...

i loved even the pasta part a lot.. especially how maan remembered the past and told her he loves what ever she makes...he is so cute...and then their hak jataana on each other was also lovely...

aakhri lines jeevan saathi ke baare main was just wow👏

neha dekh kithni badi comment type ki hai maine... aaj raat ek aur update dena ab... bachaaa😉

Edited by -lakshmi- - 12 years ago
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wow lovely emotional update..te way my maan drooling on his geet and geet throwing te towel was lovely..te way geet avoiding him and my maan trying to talk with her and break her silence but geet is geet didt open her mouth was lovely..te way my maan not eating until she talks with him and te way she ate her food making my maan to open his mouth was lovely..te way geet thinking abt my maan and smiling and my maan admiring her, she denying for te party and my maan asking her and geet seeing him eating she went was lovely, but my maan felt lonely and slept without eating emotional..te way geet didt enjoy te party and sad and rohan ki dad asking wat and te way she rushing to home was lovely..will rohan ki dad help my maan?..te way geet seeing my maan and his headache and te way she applying balm and worried abt him wa sso lovely emotional..te way geet making pasta and te way feding my maan and te way my maan teasing her was lovely..te way my maan lying on her lap and te way she pushing and my maan saying his rights was emotional..te way my maaneet ki scenes were so lovely..now geet with my maan..i love te update

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