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u rockd sweety...👍🏼

thanx sweetie...

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Hey Babaji !!!!
Its sooo creative...😊
Aur kahati ho mujhe kuch nahi aata...😈
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thankyou guys... we finally crossed 300 likes... yippiee

and this update is specially for SAm GuRTIHOLIC, as it was your wish to have his song on maaneet"⭐️

PART 63

Three weeks had passed but the problem was still hanging on their neck. Maan had tried all the ways to collect money but just couldn't succeed much. Fifteen lakhs in it is a big amount and the maximum he could collect was 6 lakhs till now. Every day there will be thousands of warning calls and twice-thrice few people came and warned him too. Whenever something like that would happen, he will hide it with geet, but what he didn't knew was geet was quiet aware of the warnings he received every hour.

"just a week is left, I know I am failed" he said as he held his head in his palms. Geet cupped his face and said "we still have a week, don't lose hope please." Her eyes were teary seeing him in so much tension. His dark circles, and tired face always depicts his mental condition, but what could she do to sooth him she doesn't understand.

That night he was way too broken and left her home alone. She was worried as the time passed and around 11 he returned back, but she was shocked to see him drunk. "aapne peeii hai!!!" she said as she retreated back her steps looking at him shock. He just nodded and tried to walk back in his room. His each step was so shaky, making him loose balance with every second step.

She immediately held him by arm, as she saw him almost falling this time. Seeing her holding him, he let all his weight loose on her petite body. She stumbled once but then somehow held him and made him sit on the couch itself in the living room. He fell on the couch like a sag and kept his head tilted at head rest looking at nothing in particular.

"how can you do this???" yelled geet angry seeing him so vulnerable. But he just didn't even paid attention to her as if her words fell on deaf ears. "aap sun rhe hai meri baat" she again yelled but he just pulled her to him, making her fall on him and moved his body closer to hers, pressing her body on his.

"ye aap kya kar rhe hai, chodiye mujhe" she struggled to free herself, but he held her tightly by waist, digging his face in her neck. The alcohol smell entered her nose, making her feel disgusting, her stomach having pits as if she will vomit anytime.

Seeing her so struggling, he just pushed her away making her fall on floor. She immediately stood up and ran to the corner of the room. She sobbed seeing his this face, how can some liquid have these effects on a man. She just wanted to ran away at the moment but then stopped hearing him murmur something. She went a little closer to have a proper look and saw him closing his eyes.

"go, you too go away. Accha hai when I will be in jail, you will not be that broken'. Gussa ayega shayad soch ke ki mai hi kyu mila tumhe. But I promise I will always love you only' pakka wala promise." She just kept her hand on her mouth as she tried to control her sobs hearing him say that. She just wanted to curse babaji at the moment for making him this weak, this vulnerable at the moment' she sat beside the couch as she saw him drifting to sleep but whole night he was unconsciously murmuring "I love you mishty, sirf tumse pyaar karta hu."

It was afternoon when he woke up' the house were empty and his head ached not able to face the bright light. He found himself at couch and he smelled disgustingly like garbage at a moment. He tried to remember last night but everything was blank except the few flashes of him drinking some liquor at a near by bar and sobs of a crying geet.

He immediately got tensed as he tried to recollect what had happened but everything was so fuzzy that his head revolved. He looked for geet scared, did he did something wrong last night, did he crossed his limits!!! Did he'!!!!

Realizing she may be at school he sat down but still a fear was lurking on the corner of her head. Around 2 pm geet entered, her eyes were all red, face pale and had tear marks. Seeing her, he ran toward her but she stepped back at once. Seeing her stepping back, he got scared and he felt his doubt being confirmed.

He looked at her with a pained look but her face was firm, expressionless. She took out something form her purse and handed him, he looked at the 10 lakhs check she gave him and looked at her with a confused look. "ye lijiye and threw the money on the face of those bank people"

His face turned pale as he looked at her with a expression of from-where-did-you-got-this-much-money. He was angry and hurt and that's when his eyes fell on few nail marks and a purple blotch on her arm, and he got suspicious if someone else tried to take advantage of her innocence. "from where did you get this money ha" he shouted as he held her tightly by her hairs, his eyes blood shot red thinking something wrong happened to her.

"aahhh" she winced as he pulled her long hairs roughly and she looked at him with tear filled eyes. Seeing tears in her doe shaped orbs, he immediately released her and moved his hand through his hair. "kha se aye itne paise!!!" he said gritting his teeth. His mind was getting consumed in dark clouds as he tried to think every possible reasons but only wrong options displayed in front of his eyes.

"it doesn't matter, what matters at the moment is that you are going and return the money to those officials and will never look back at them!!!"

"geet don't make me lose my mind, sidhe sidhe bolo ki kha se aye itne paise wo bhi ek din me'" seeing her silent he said, "khi tumne khud ko to nhi'." Chii his tongue even refused to speak anything wrong about his geet.

She looked at him confused wondering what he wanted to say and said, "I had arranged the money from rohan's dad!!!" he felt a big blow in his self-respect hearing that. He knew he was in problem, may be his whole life would have changed after a week, but there was this self respect with him at least even then' but hearing she begged for money in front of some outsider, he just wanted to die at the moment.

"you begged for money in front of some outsider' why are you hell bent on making me fall in front of everyone's eyes. Pehle sam ab aur rohan ke dad!! At least I could have gone with some self-satisfaction that I did tried, but failed but your this act just made me fall in my own eyes"

She just looked at him with pain hearing his words, she thought he would understand her efforts but here he is just blaming her only. "I just understand now how much you understand me maan' pyaar ka dava karna asan hota hai but wo trust rakhna aise waqt mushkil" he looked at her in shock as she pulled out a paper which had a contract between her and mr rishabh nanda'

"miss geet is taking rs 10 lakhs from mr rishabh nanda in exchange of a Fixed deposit whose maturity value after 4 months is Rs. 3.5 lakhs and an expensive jewel piece which had a current Market price of Rs. 7 lakhs. Along with that mr nanda holds the right to use the jewels as well as sell them whenever he wish."

He read the contract paper in shock and then looked at geet in confusion as she said, "I know that for you, your self-respect is important than anything that's why I didn't asked money form him before. He is a multi-billionaire and trusts me enough to lend this small amount without any guarantee, but I never told him anything. Par kal when I saw you I that state, I just couldn't hold myself and went to a jeweler to know about the resale price of the pendant which my mom left for me, the only symbol I had of her. But maybe babaji was in my side when he said that the pendant had some expensive stones studded in it which are difficult to find now and he will gave me seven lakh if I sell it to him. I would have agreed had it not been uncle who was coincidently in the same shop and took that pendant from me and agreed to give me money in return. Ha I did tell him what they did with you, but it wasn't with shame but proudness."

I even asked him to buy it from me but he refused and said ki he will give me money and he doesn't need that pendant but I insisted as I didn't wanted you to ever feel burdened with someone's grace."

"tumhari maa ki akhri nishani!!!" he said shocked. It was probably the only part he heard as he just didn't knew how to react hearing she gave away the only symbol she had of her mother. How could someone just give away his/her mother's symbol that too for him' was he even that much worth?

"at the time of marriage chachi kept that in my bag. I asked about it to dii and she told me maa had made two identical pieces for us at that time for our marriage. Chichi gave hers on her marriage and my pendent on mine. Till today I never knew its worth so much, I just kept it with me because it was made by my mother' par shayd it was for this day she made that!!!"

"I am not taking your money' return it back" he said with arrogance. She looked at him with anger, here she is ready to sell what was of her mother and here he is showing dominance. "you are taking it maan' and no fight over it" she said it with finality.

"I am a man, its my duty to give you funds, not to take what ever you have" he said looking away, his boosted male ego came in way. She just turned him around holding his hand and said, "oh today you are saying "tera "mera"!!! but you forget the day when you yourself said that whatever yours is mine, I have to take whatever you give' wo shopping wala din when I wanted to pay and you said ki its your duty to pay for me' phir aj when I am fulfilling my duty you can't stop me!!!"

"geet did you even realize you may lose the only memento of your mother because of me" he said holding her by her shoulder. "at least it will give you peace' warna aap ko har raat you tootta hua dekhu' taki har raat you will go outside and drink to calm yourself!!! Bhut kho chuki hu.. ab is nashe me apko nhi khoungii mai!!"

He looked at her in shock. She continued, 'did you even realized how it felt to see you not able to walk straight' to see you losing your control' to see you torturing yourself this way'. Who le day I try to just bring a smile on your face and what do I get in return this'" she said showing her blue wrist and the marks'. He was ashamed of himself to do that to her. How could he just loose himself due to some drink?

"geet this is all what you have' agar in future if I failed to gather that much amount and mr nanda sold that pendant, I will never be able to face you" he said cupping her face.

She just looked at him and taking his hand kept that cheque on his palm and said, "I never saw her, mai us kal ke karan apne aaj ko barbaad ni kar sktii. May be I will lose that pendant, but it won't hurt me that much it hut now to see you like this. Ye lijiye and pay them off'. I just want you, nothing else!!!!"

PLAY ME: TUJHME RAB DIKHTA HAI


She walked away in her room leaving him there. He looked at his broken condition and then at her strong determined self. Here when he should be the one to support them, here she is the who is being strong, giving up her everything yet not saying a uff even' probably today he understand why love is said to be the blessings of god!!! As today he is really blessed having her with him.

Going to her room, he took her wrist in his and softly caressed it, seeing her wince with his slight touch even, and he gave to her, the thought itself pierced his heart with needles. Taking an ointment he applied it on her swelling and various nail marks on her arms. She just sat silently, not saying anything. He kissed her forehead and said, "I will never drink again, tumhari kasam" while she just looked at him with all the love of world.

Bending down, he placed his head on her lap, while she placed hers on his back, both sat their hugging each other thanking god infinitely for giving them their togetherness.

Finally the day of decision came and maan went with the required amount of money. Employees looked at him and talked behind his back, some even laughing on him but he cared none. He just straightly went and kept the briefcase with cash on Mr. sharms's table where all the higher officials sat. but before mr sharma could take the money, a police officer stopped him.

All got shocked and wondered what the issue is and that's when mr nanda along with other police officers came and said, "mr sharma not this soon. Firstly we all will like to meet the person because of whom all this chaos is created." Mr sharma gulped hard seeing mr nanda, he wasn't only the most richest person of the country but the most important client of their bank too.

"mr nanda aap" said mr sharma choking. "sharma ji why are you sweating in this air conditioned room. Accha ye chodiye, let me all show you a video" taking his laptop he started a video which had sharma entering in bank's store room and changing the papers of the client because of whom maan got caught. "sharma ji doesn't that man look like you" said mr nanda sarcastically and then said, "you very successfully bribed the cameraman for the footage, but afsos aap ye bhul gye gi, jaise aapne use kharida waise hi koi uar bhi use kharid sakta hai!!!"

Mr sharma was exposed in front of everyone as the security guard supported mr nanda. On being asked the reason he told that maan was going to get the promotion which he deserved and thus to move him out of the way, he involved him in a fake case. All the while the only person who stood silent was maan, he was enraged and could have killed sharma on the spot, but he was happy that finally his mishty's belief won.

"mr khurana, I am rishabh nanda, geet must have told you about me" introduced mr nanda himself professionally to maan. Maan nodded politely and mr nanda continued, "I know young man you are shocked with all the happenings. But let me explain you everything now, when geet told that you are being dragged in a fake case and even police couldn't find the culprit, I used my sources and well you know, if some high profile backing you get, everything speeds up and so last night only they found this security guard. Mr sharma had paid him enough and shifted him in another branch so that no one could suspect him but ell we caught him on time, and with few punches of officer he spoke everything. Even handed the spare copy of video he had kept with himself to blackmail sharma when ever he will need help"

Maan looked at the man with respect and gratitude and said, "thankyou sir for whatever you did for me. I will never forget the way you helped me and please I will like to return back whatever you spend because of me" said maan politely.

Mr nanda just accepted remembering how geet told that maan is a man of self-respect and after maan returned his ten lakhs to him, mr nanda promised to send back the pendant and FD by evening. Even the bank officials apologized and asked him to join back, but he just nodded and returned home.

As geet opened the door, he just hugged her tight, lifting her in air and revolving all around. After whole 3 month, his laugh echoed in the entire house. ou were right, sab thik ho gya mishty" he said shouting holding her by shoulder. geet just laughed at his excitement as he told her about the happenings at the back and finally said, "they have offered my job back".

Geet's all excitement went down the drain as she said, "you aren't joining that place again, samjhe aap" she said pointing her finger to him. "but" he said, but she just said determinedly, you aren't ever going to step at that place ever again. and us sharma ko to I won't leave, jitna pareshan usne aapko kiya, I will give him double the torture, and we are filing a case against him for mentally torturing us samjhe!!"

She was so angry because of that sharma, but yet it was her love that was visible in it too. Next day she woke up early and so did he. Taking a bath he got ready and waited for her to come out, but stood rooted in his place as he saw her coming in a white chudidaar, her hands filled with bangles and that anklet that chimed with her every step. But what took his heart was the red sindoor she had applied on her forehead, along with that red bindi that glittered in between her eyebrows.

Seeing him rooted in his place, a deep blush covered her cheeks thinking her efforts are appreciated. She waited for him to say something, but janab was already bowled to say anything. Wrapping her hands around his, she pulled him out of the reverie and took them to their destination. Both stood in front of the goddess ganesha , geet covered her head with her chunni while he just stood beside her loving her every antic.

Both prayed for other's happiness, wishing for a lifetime togetherness with loads of happiness. Panditji blessed them as a couple, making his heart flutter with happiness, while she just blushed with shyness.

After reaching home, the first thing he did was to call his mother and tell her about the problem they faced, how she stood beside him and supported him even better than he could support her. His mother just cried in happiness hearing her son go on and on talking about her daughter in law.

Precap: geet knowing about physical relations

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Edited by neha512 - 12 years ago
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first of all congrats to cross 300 likes... u deserve it ... much more... keep up the good work dear...

it was really hard to see maan so broken... and then their convo with regard to money was good... geet was able not only to arrange money but also with out much help and also with maintaing their self respect...i also loved how she gave more importance to maan and their future than her moms jewellery... its sure that her moms blessing will always be with her whethere she has the pendant or not...

the way how u solved their problem was nice... i really had wished that geet should have a hand in solving his problem... even i had thought about her deposit , but then thought it as a small amount... they need more... then u brought this locket... its really true, a womens ornament is not only for her shringaar but it is also an asset to the family...

mera shak sahi nikla... here comes rishab nanda... i hope yeh phir na aaye ab... help kiya, maaneet ne thanx bola... baat khatham... but i really doubt... he and his wish to have geet as his family member...😡

last part was just too lovely... maan is comlete latoo over her... and geet too wore her sindoor and all for him ... not under any compulsion

uff finally problem khatham ab cute moments ki baari... will be waiting
Edited by -lakshmi- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-



Hey Babaji !!!!
Its sooo creative...😊
Aur kahati ho mujhe kuch nahi aata...😈



aaj kuch zyaada hi tareef nahi ho rahi...





OMG!!!! Neha ki ff per bhi humara dhawa..🤣
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Love it...❤️
Edited by singh24 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awsome update
loved it tooo much
simply superb
mr sharma that bas***d
rohan dad is sooo good
how he trusted geet and her trust on maan
finally maan is out of this
geet is a true life partner
and finally his mom is also happy

update next soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
It was fabulous they love made them yo come through their hardships
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Posted: 12 years ago
neha lovely part

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so sleepy now

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Posted: 12 years ago
oh you actually took my breath away. I loved the update. I was really creative and mind-blowing. I love the way you showed each other feeoings for one another and the honesty in their feelings. Thank god Maan is saved from mr Sharma. felt really happy as Geet took a stand in their relationship and how she succeeded in. cant wait for the next update i hope it as soon as this one. Onces again it was amazing

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