Rey ff-$Dooriyan akhir kab tak$(ch1-p2 tsr ch2 p3)

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Posted: 12 years ago
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CONCEPT-New ff on rey. As tani left rey it bcme vunerable for him to live any more. Now he dont blive in love. He has failed in it twice. Evryone tried to cheer him bt all goes in vein. Now he only dance to let out his lonliness. Bt he gets hurt more.One day he gets a call frm his home n leave for his home. Next day everyone waited for him bt he didnt cme. Suddenly dey got d news dt rey has left d st. Loise n no one knows abt his whrabts. Evryone passed frm college n settled with dere partners.Simmi n nilesh.Rimmi n Amar.Neha n Vicky.Bharat has opened his own automobile company n also run a nyt dance school for poor children.Sharon n swayam r engaged now n soon to get marry.There is no single day dt all f dem r not trying to contact Rey. Bt as it seems he doesnt exists anymore.So to know more stay tuned to story n cmmnt. If i get gud response den i'll start it or otherwise dis will b end.N plz like se kaam nahi chalne wala.

INDEX:
CH 1- PG 2

TEASER CH 2- PG 3
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sweetydiyafrien thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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i am confused but i like the concept... after reading more will comment...
do continue soon and pm me...
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Intersting concept
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do continue. its really nice concept. and pm/scrap me
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Loved the cncept..!!
Its very interesting..!!
Do cntinue..!!
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Plz continue and pm me ur updates
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nice ... continue soon and do pm me
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CHAPTER ONE- KAHA HO TUM...



SCENE-SWAYAM'S PLACE-

SWAYAM IS TALKING ON PHONE.



SWAYAM- HEY MY PRINCESS KYA KR RAHI HO.




PERSON ON PHONE- SWAYAM STOP TRYING TO CHANGE D TOPIC. TUM KAB AA RAHE HO. HUMARI SHADI EK HAFTE ME HAI AUR TUM WAHA MUMBAI ME AUR ME YAHA JAIPUR ME HU.




SWAYAM- I KNOW SHARON U R MISSING ME A LOT BT JARURI KAAM K LIYE MUJHE MUMBAI ME RUKNA PADA. I SWEAR ME JALDI TUMHARE PAAS AAUNGA. OK NOW TELL ME KI KYA KR RAHI THI.


SHARON- BAS SHADI KA JODA TRY KR RAHI THI.



SWAYAM- AAGE MAT BOLO VARNA ME SAB CHOD KR ABHI TUMHARE PAAS AA JAUNGA.



SHARON- TO AA JAO NA. AKHIR AISA KYA KAAM HE JO TUMHE MERE PAAS AANE SE ROK RAHA HAI.




SWAYAM IN MIND- I M SORRY SHARON BT ME TUMHE YE NHI BATA SAKTA. BT I PROMSE KI JO ME KR RAHA HU USSE TUM SABSE JYADA KHUSH HOGI.



SHARON- HEYY! HELLO SWAYAM R U THERE...SWAYAM




SWAYAM- YAH SHARON I M. LISTEN SHARON I HV SOME WORK I GOTTA GO. BYE.



SHARON- BYE. N CME SOON. I LUV U.



SWAYAM- I LUV U TOO.




LATER DT HE PICKED UP A ENVELOPE N OPENED IT. THERE WAS A LETTER IN WHICH A ADDRESS WAS WRITTEN. THERE WAS SOME PICS ALSO. HE LUKED EACH PIC CAREFULLY N TEARFULL EYES.




SWAYAM- THIS TYM U WONT RUNAWAY. I M CMING. B READY T FACE ME.N HE PACKS HIS STUFF N MOVED OUT F HIS HOUSE.



SCENE- INTERNATIONAL AIRPORT



FLIGHT ATTENDENT- WELCME TO BRITISH AIRWAYS MR SWAYAM SEKHAWAT. HV A SAFE JOURNEY TO LONDON SIR.


SWAYAM- THANK U.


SUM TYM LATER...

AIR HOSTESS- SIR MAGZINES ?


SWAYAM- NO THNKS. (BT HE SUDDENLY STOP HER N TKE A BUSINESS MAGZINE.) THNKS.

AIR HOSTESS- WELCME SIR.
Edited by Samara92 - 12 years ago
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AS AIR HOSTESS TURNED TO LEAVE SWAYAM'S EYE FELL ON TOP F SUM BRITISH MAGAZINE. HE TOOK DT N READ D COVER PAGE LINE. SWAYAM- TOP BUSINESS TYCOON N SO YOUNG AT DIS PLACE. IMPRESSIVE. SO U R BUSINESS TYCOON BT U R MY TRUE DANCER. I M CMING REY. I M N DIS TYM I WONT LISTEN U. U WILL B D ONE. YES D COVER PAGE HAS D PIC F OUR HERO REY BT IN DT WAS NOT D OLD REY. HE IS SUMONE ELSE. HIS STERN LOOKS SAYS HE IS REYANSH SINGHANIA D BUSINESS FREAK. HE IS TOTALLY CHANGED. (LATER I DISCLOSE ALL UR HOW, WHY N ALL) FAR AWAY IN A BIG MANSION LONDON- A MAN GET UP FRM HIS BIG KING SIZE BED N WENT TO BALCONY TO BREADTH FRESH AIR. AFTR SUM TYM HE CME BACK N WENT TO FRESHEN UP.HE CME OUT FRM HIS WASHROOM N FOUND HIS JOGGING PAIR ON BED. AFTER GETTING READY HE WALKED OUT F ROOM.FER HRS LATER HE CME FRM JOG N WENT DIRETLY TO HIS ROOM WHERE HE WAS WELCMED BY LEMON JUICE.
Edited by Samara92 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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swayam is going to bring back rey. wow. update soon and om me

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