asya stort 'till my last breath'

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"TILL MY LAST BREATH"

Before I start my story I would like to introduce characters

1)MS ZOYA FAROOQUI:- US citizen, stays with her aapi(zeenat) n jiju(anwar) who lost her mother in fire accident n came to bhopal in search for her father..she is a doctor but stopped practicing due to some reason which will be revealed later..she is a women of modren era, she hides her pain putting the face of joy n happiness doesnot follow anyrules believes happiness comes with sad and waiting for true love

2)MR ASAD AHMED KHAN:-who studied architect and now owner of the dilshad construction and believes that girl should have thezeeb, tameez and well dressed ..who hates is father because he left his mother for other women and fears that he wldn't become like his father and never know what is true happiness and also workoholic. Loves his mother and sister more than anything in this world.who is also introvert followes his life on rules and regulation and does not believe in love
3)DILSHAD:- mother of asad and believes in love and waiting for someone to change the life of his son to bring happiness in his life.loves her son and daughter. She understand his son very well

4)NAJMA:-daughter of dilshad and sister of asad very innocent loves her brother

5)AYAN:- son of rashid and half brother of asad loves his brother understan him very well and enjoy every second of life
other character
RASHID AHMED KHAN
SHIREEN
ZEENAT
ANWAR
TANVEER

RAZIYA
SIDDIQUE

this is mostly about the ZOYA and ASAD
will zoya get her love?
will asad believe in love?
what is fate decided for them?
will zoya find her father?
this is story full of love,romance,fun and many more


CHAPTER 1
THE DREAM

Dilshad,Asad and najma are having dinner ..asad doesnot like to talk while having food..almost everyday breakfast,lunch dinner is almost as silent as a library but then library is even better as it usually have wispering sounds heard now and then…
tring tring….tring tring…tring tring,…..
dilshad:- najma get my phone
najma:-jii ammi
dilshad:-hello!! Anwarji salaam..how are you??its been soo long ??how is everyone??
(anwar:- salaam dilshad ji everyone is fine,how is everyone their ??)

Dilshad :- fine!! what else??
(anwar:- I'm sorry to disturb you but I need a favor)

Dilshad :-sure, tell me
(anwar:- actuall my zoya has some work in bhopal and she'll be coming in three days and I cant let her stay alone in that huge city and only people I know is you,,I know I'm asking to much from you but I'm really sorry )
dilshad:-actually it'll be our pleasure, we love to be host and she can stay how many days ever she wants
(anwar:-thank you so much and I really don't know how to repay you, really thank you)
dishad:- when is she coming? Ill send my son to pick her up
asad who was busy eating suddenly stopped and was looking at his mom and was wondering what is goin on?
(anwar:-on Wednesday morning at 9:00 am, and thank you ance again)
dilshad:-ok then,bye allah afiz
(anwar:-bye allah afiz)
dilshad placed her phone on the table and called asad
dilshad:-asad do you remember sher khan mamujaan?well his friend anwar and even I know him through your mamu..well he called me that his wife sister is coming to india due to some work and she is going to stay in our home for few days,she'll come on Wednesday morning around 9:00 u should go and pick her up
asad:-ok ammi,lekin I ve meeting on that day I wont be able to go
dilshad:-asad!! Guest is coming our home and we should take care of them and you are goin to airport
asad:-ji ammi
asad acepted what his mom told him and took his phone in order to change his meeting timings
new york
anwar:-congrats zoya you can go to bhopal now,,they are very happy ,now you can go and stay in their home
zoya:-lekin jiju I don't want to trouble anyone I'll stay in paying guest jiju and I cant stay in someone home and I don't know how many days it takes
zeenat:-yah allah mein kya karu is ladaki ka,,zoya I wont send you to bhopal if you want to live alone or outside
zeenat sits on sofa and starts crying
zoya:-aapi pls dnt cry I'll stay in their home..i promise Ill listen to you
zeenat:-is it important to find out about your father?
zoya:-jii aapi I won't be able to move forward in my life if I don't get answer about my past and I need to know my past or else I'm scared that I might be alone through out my life, I need answer about my mother and why my father left her and me?
zeenat puts her hand on zoya's head brushing her hair and said
"zoya remember whatever happen you don't forget that we are here for you and you are never alone"
zoya:-i know aapi
zoya hugged her aapi
scene 3

""it looked like someone had poured a mixture of orange and red over the sky. As the sun went lower, the sky became almost like a muted brown. Asad sat down on bench which was on the side of the road to enjoy the sunset and he suddenly heard a voice and he thought some angel is singing ,her voice was so sweet that birds stopped humming its own sound and went with sound he heard and he immediately got up and looked everywhere he ran towards the sunset view as if though his life depended on it and he got tired and his breathing was heavy and fast and was looking everywhere and there he saw a girl …..
she was facing towards the sunset and she was playing with flowers in her hand and humming a sweet melody, wind just blew lifting her hair which was few inches below her shoulder , 'hair like silk' he thought.. he observed her carefully and she was wearing a white top her sleeves was 3/4th covering upto her elbow and jeans he noticed her pulling sleeves on the right hand every 5min

He slowly walked towards her and never noticed what was on the way and he kept his foot on thrones piercing deep into his foot that would have made any person cry out of pain but he lifted his leg and removed throne but his gaze was on her and was scared that if he close his eyes or see somewhere else she might disappear..

He moved slowly towards her…cursing sun as it was shining briliantly on her face and how lucky it was enjoying a beauty like her
He stood right behind her and she was about to turn…….""

Asad suddenly got up from bed who was sweating and breathing heavily
"what is wrong with me? Who is that girl and why am I getting same dream again and again since three days ?"

Asad gulped huge amount of water and started to think about the dream and suddenly realized what he was doing
"oh god!! I think I should go to psychiatrist tomorrow , and how can I think about a girl and that too girl is wearing jeans she does not have any thezeeb or tameez "

So many question and no answer asad was unable to sleep since three days as his mind was boggling with lot of question

NEXT CHAPTER

WELCOME HOME

WHAT IS ASAD DREAM ABOUT?
WILL ASAD BE HAPPY WITH GIRL OF MODREN ERA?

WILL DILSHAD AND NAJMA LIKE HER?

WHAT IS FATE PLANNING FOR THEM?

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