*New*Saras-Kumud OS: Beyond Love.. (5/29/13)

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Nikki

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Nice os :-)

Just too hot :P

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Divya

@april12

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Awesome os

This is a splendid addition to the original episode

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..Zainab..

@..Zainab..

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

OMGGG this was so effing hot!

I freakin loved every bit of ur os it' was so god damn amazing!😳

Girl u nailed it!

Ur such an amazing writer this is my very first time reading ur work

Nd trust me u blew my mind!😉

Ahhh cvs should totally just hire u for such scenes!

I mean it'll help their stupid brains a little! 😉😆

Oh nd I really like ur writing style!

He couldn't seem to get enough of touching her, of holding her, of feeling her. The love he felt for her surpassed any emotion, any sensation Saras had ever felt in his life. And right now, that love had unleashed with a power that even he could not contain. She was his soul mate. He felt it in every breath he took, every time he looked into her eyes, every time she helplessly responded to his touch. Now he could not imagine a life without her, without being able to love her. His hand moved down her arm and caressed her waist. Her lips parted on a gasp and his attention was drawn to the moist fullness of her lips. His hand continued to trace the curve of her waist; along the kamarbandh that had enchanted him since the first time he'd heard it chiming. With the ease of a lover, he slowly tugged at it. As the cool silver slid over her waist, Kumud felt as if her skin were on fire and ice at the same time

This paragraph just did it for me! It was like the best part in the whole damn os! So well written

Every emotion I felt so clearly and at times I felt like I was watching a movie!

I'm not even kidding I read ur os like 5 times nd saved on my phone to read

It again later!

I'm so in love with it!

Please write more and pm me!

Sorry for such a weird comment I couldn't help myself! I like wanna write more but have no words!

Just keep writing like this! 😆😉