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Posted: 12 years ago
Interesting promo.
Hope Swayam is a speed junkie,would be so apt for his character here and make me love him even morešŸ˜›
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: austen4ever

<font size="3">Interesting promo.
Hope Swayam is a speed junkie,would be so apt for his character here and make me love him even morešŸ˜›
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Thanks
LOL I didn't think it that way :D
But I m sure u gonna like it anyways :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
interesting promo...
plzzz update soon...😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey!
Sorry for the extremely late reply!!
I read the update and promo and both were really interesting!!
and after both a lot of questions are in my mind...
but i feel like th enxt update will answer some of them so i will wait for the next update...
Awesome Update and promo!!
UPDATE SOON!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: taarey1fan

interesting promo...

plzzz update soon...😊😊


Thanks dear
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: 8JSmileyFace8J

Hey!

Sorry for the extremely late reply!!
I read the update and promo and both were really interesting!!
and after both a lot of questions are in my mind...
but i feel like th enxt update will answer some of them so i will wait for the next update...
Awesome Update and promo!!
UPDATE SOON!!!


It's ok dear no prob
Thanks for liking the update
N well answers to ur question don't know about all but hopefully some might :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey guys me here with the update.
If you didnt receive my scrap than i think you havent commented on my promo. Guys know that i am scrapping only to those who comments on my last update no matter if its a promo or a chapter. So please comment.

I don't know why but I wanted to add the following song with this update and if you guys don't like it then Sowwy in advance just hoping you guys like the update.

Part 13

Dil Ye Dil
Dil Ye Dil
Dil Ye Dil


Ganga runs into her room and locks it from inside panting for breathe. She rests her back on the door and clutches her ghagra unable to grasp what happened few seconds ago. She feels her neck and all parts where he kissed her, she smiles but soon that smile vanishes. She was angry now how can he do this to her. No matter what he does with other girls but he has no right to do that to her. She feels like throwing all the stuff and breaking them which were in the room but she knows she is a maid and can't do anything like that. Neither she can throw stuff around nor she can question him. She was frustrated fully. She goes in restroom and washes her face and every place where he touched her. She rubbed her face and neck as hard as possible, irritated and crying for long finally she slept.

Ye Dil
Deewana
Deewana Hai Ye Dil
Deewane Ne Mujhko Bhi Ah Kar Daala Deewana
Maine Uske Shahar Ko Chhoda
Uski Gali Mein Dil Ko Toda
Phir Bhi Seene Mein Dhadakta Hai Ye Dil
Maine Dil Se Usay Nikaala
Jo Na Karna Tha Kar Daala
Phir Phi Yaad Usi Ko Karta Hai Ye Dil


On the other hand swayam was standing in his same spot and wondering why did he do that to Ganga. Thinking this he walks out of the house in the rain. The rain drops fell on him and he was looking like a God in human form. He was looking so hot in the rain that anyone would die for him. He doesn't like rain since childhood as he used to play in rain with his dad, mom and Sharon. Since his dad died he never went in rain he hated rain. He was not thinking about his past. Right now he was thinking about present only.
He was so confused at his own behavior. Why did he do that to Ganga? He knows she is different and she is not for all this. Why did he lost his control? He doesn't love her right? He asked himself while clutching his hairs. 'No I can't love her. I don't love anyone. Love is waste of time. I will never fall in love NEVER.' He thought to himself. He wasn't simply just questioning himself. Instead he was telling himself to believe it and not to listen to what's in his heart. Though he didn't know what was in his heart but he knew that he doesn't have to listen to it as heart is the reason for love and pain as well.

Ye Dill
Deewana
Deewana Hai Ye Dil


He was busy in forcing himself to believe what his mind was saying. But heart doesn't listen to anyone. It never has and it never will. While drenching in rain his eyes fell on a plant around him. He saw how that new plant was about to destroy in the heavy rain. He rushes to it and picks it up and goes inside the house and place it with other plants. He looks at all the plants and wonders why did he save that plant. 'Why?'

God saves the world
World saves the man
Man saves the heart
Heart saves love


He stands up and goes towards Ganga's room and stands outside her door and thinks to himself ' I am sorry Ganga. No I am not sorry for what I did but i am sorry that I did all this without asking for your permission. You must be shock to know that I am not feeling guilty for what I did. In fact I am feeling a strange feeling which I never felt around any other girl. Kissing you and coming close to you was giving me a great pleasure no I think it wasn't pleasure it was happiness, satisfaction and a lot more. God I don't know what's happening to me.' He turns around and goes in his room and goes to sleep.

Dil Dil Dil
Dil Dil Dil


He wakes up in the morning. His head was aching as he didn't slept well and didnt even bother changing his wet clothes or drying his hairs. He felt sick so he called out "Ganga mujhe chai (tea) chahiye aur haan sar dard ki dawa bhi jaldi lao". Saying this he freshens up and when he comes out from restroom he doesn't find his tea or medicine. He gets upset and marched out of the room to check on Ganga and the reason of her delay. He goes straight in the kitchen and finds it empty and untouched as if no one used it since morning. He looks at his watch and it was noon. All his anger goes away now he was worried as Ganga starts doing her work early morning. He goes and knocks her room and after getting no reply he goes in and finds it empty too. Thinking about last night he goes out in garden to see if she is there working in garden. He doesn't find her there either.
He asks the watchman and watchman replies "baba woh toh suraj nikal nay k samay par hi ghar se chali gai aur kaha k ap ko bol doon k unho nein kaam chor diya hai aur haan baba woh apna saamna b lay kar gai hain." Saying this watchman goes back to the gate leaving a shocked swayam standing on his place. He felt like he lost everything again. Yup again he felt that when his father died. He hated that feeling and cause of this feeling he wanted to be alone. So he never have to feel this feeling again.

Dil Ki Khata Bhi Hai Kya
Mujhko Gila Bhi Hai Kya
Is Dillagi Ke Siva Dil Ne Kiya Bhi Hai Kya
Aashiq Hai Ye Chor Nahin Main Kya Karoon
Dil Pe Mera Zor Nahin Hai Main Kya Karoon
Aashiq Hai Ye Chor Nahin Main Kya Karoon
Dil Pe Mera Zor Nahin Hai Main Kya Karoon


He goes in kitchen and tries to make himself some tea. But all the things weren't at the place they were before Ganga came. Ganga changed everything's place according to her comfort. He gets irritated and leaves the kitchen.

Ye Dil
Deewana
Deewana Hai Ye Dil


He goes in his room and sees all the stuff scattered around. He misses his clean room now he was addicted to cleanliness. Ganga would clean his room daily. Suddenly he remembers how Ganga was cleaning the room and commenting on his actions and untidiness. With this thought he marches out of the room and then the house.

Dil Kaisa Bepeer Hai
Vo Ek Tasveer Hai
Main Kehta Hoon Tod De Kehta Hai Zanjeer Hai
Koi Kachchi Dor Nahin Hai Main Kya Karoon
Dil Pe Koi Zor Nahin Hai Main Kya Karoon
Koi Kachchi Dor Nahin Hai Main Kya Karoon
Dil Pe Koi Zor Nahin Hai Main Kya Karoon


He goes to his favorite place 'beach'. It wasn't as quiet as it is at nights but still the smell of sea and the fresh air was still calming. After a while he started feeling better. He was enjoying the view and wasn't thinking about anything else no past no present no future. He was focusing on the deepness of sea and the boat that was far away in the deep sea. "No jaan it's not like that I respect you and your values completely" a unknown voice reached his ears and brought him back to the reality. Swayam looks in the direction the voice came from and finds a couple walking towards his car on whose bonnet he was sitting.
"No you don't" the girl walks ahead of the guy in anger and the guy follows her with pleading face. "I do jaan I do. I don't know what happened to me last night. The plan was to get wet in rain and dance in it. Don't know when I lost control and all that happened. I know we were suppose to wait till we get married next week. But don't know why you look like angel and couldn't stop myself from loving my angel." With that the holds his ears and make a cute pout. The girl ask in firm tone " you will not this again promise?" The boy quickly replies "I promise not even after we get married". listening to this girl opens her mouth wide and says "no you can do it after marriage". "Oh ok so you want me to do it after marriage" the boy asked naughtly and the girl blushes and runs away from him and boy follows her. Ugh swayam clutches his hairs again as all this reminded him of his last night with Ganga. Unable to take it more he sits in car and starts driving it. He wanted to go home but home will only remind him of her. So he decides not to go home with this thought he keeps driving. He visits all the places not stopping his car at any point but to fill gas. He keeps driving and thinking about everything that happened in his life. All good stuffs and all the bad stuffs that follows the good ones. As soon as he started remembering bad parts of his life his frustration and anger increased every single second. He kept thinking and driving unaware of roads and surroundings.

Ye Dil
Deewana
Deewana Hai Ye Dil
Deewana Dil
Deewane Ne Mujhko Bhi Ah Kar Daala Deewana
Deewana Dil
Maine Uske Shahar Ko Chhoda
Uski Gali Mein Dil Ko Toda
Phir Bhi Seene Mein Dhadakta Hai Ye Dil
Dil Dil
Maine Dil Se Usay Nikaala
Jo Na Karna Tha Kar Daala
Phir Phi Yaad Usi Ko Karta Hai Ye Dil
Dil Dil


It was a long and empty road. His car was talking with wind. The gear was continuously changing and the speed was increasing dramatically. He was so engrossed in his thought that he was paying attention to the speed. People on the road were running for their lives to the footpath. He finally hit the brake which caused a loud screech sound. Loud enough to wake up and scare each and every soul. He stopped his car right in front of his house.

Ye Dil
Deewana
Deewana Hai Ye Dil
Deewana Dil
Deewane Ne Mujhko Bhi Ah Kar Daala Deewana
Deewana Dil


He walks out of his car unwantedly. He didn't want to go in the house but he has no other option. He was tired. He was feeling sick. He haven't ate anything since morning and now it was very late at night. His body was giving up on him.

Ye Dil
Dil Dil Deewana Dil
Dil Dil Paagal Dil
Dil Dil Dil Dil


He walks up towards his house and suddenly he sees what was in front of him and stops there only. His eyes popped out of their sockets. He was hell bent shock. He couldn't understand what happened and how and when?

Dil Dil Dil Dil
Dil Dil Dil Dil
Dil Dil Dil Dil
Dil Dil Dil Dil
Dil Dil.



*THE END*


Oops again a cliffhanger. Sowwy my friend (sweet16cash) I know firstly i ended at a cliffhanger than I am very late and now this cliffhanger again. But will try not to make you and others wait for long again.

I know guys no Sharon in this update too :( but she will b in picture soon :). Just a little bit more patience. I m sure you gonna love future updates as of now do comment and share ur views on the update.

Please guys "nice update pm me update soon" is not a comment do share "what u like? Didnt like?" in your comments.

Sorry if sounded rude :'( but writing through phone isn't easy and than these comments demotivate me instead of encouraging me.

Love
TaSha
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Posted: 12 years ago
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First one to like and comment 🄳 [:D/]
Firstly Amazing update
Loved it to the core
Swayam's feelings and behavior were well brought up...
So is this the way ganga gets Swaron together? You know by leaving and he in this condition... You know what i'm trying to say?!
Just to curious to know now!!!
A cliffhanger is always a treat to the writer as they have fun getting back reactions and keeping the curiosity levels high šŸ˜†
But seriously can't wait to read ahead... I'm pretty sure you are coming up with something interesting šŸ˜‰
Update soon!

P.S thanks for the scrap 😃
Edited by smartypantstanu - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
wats wrong with my swayam😭
y is he feeling all this for ganga????😲
again no sharon in the update😵
upar se cliffhanger!!!!!😔
ufff kabhi nahi sudhrogi tum
anyway wat i liked in this update was the convo of that unknown couple...😊it was really sweet😳
and the best part is dat Ganga leftplease dont get her back...atleast not until swaron are together phweesh😳
i want my sharon in next updatešŸ˜’
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Posted: 12 years ago
There is no need to say that I like the update coz I love it to the core
Firstly ganga leaving house was a shock and now another cliffhanger
Now dare you update late I will sue you Hehehe šŸ˜†
Thnx for the pm
Do continue soon

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