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My very first draft of story...i knw its nt the best but some i would like to share with u all...feel free to crtisize
"A ZILLION LIFETIME WITH YOU IS NOT ENOUGH..."
Swaron Fairytale Romance
tanha tanha raaton mein neend nahi aati hai
yaadain sataati hain mujh ko rulaati hain tanha tanha raaton mein
manzil na rasta koi chalte jaeyn tujh ko bhulana chahain, kese bhulaeyn
ab saath hain mere yaadon ke ghere
ek saans hai baaqi, choote kabhi tanha tanha raaton mein
phir kiyun sataane aaein woh baatain tumhari saanson ko choone aaein saansain tumhari
dard ki lehron mein ham behte hi jaeyn jeena bhi mushkil ab to, mar bhi na paeyn
woh zakh harey hain jo tu ne diye hain koi aas na baaqi koi khushi
tanha tanha raaton mein neend nahi aati hai tanha tanha raaton mein
Swayam tanhai mein beta apny muhabbat ke ruswa hojane par ro raha tha. Wo apna haal e dil apni diary ko ro ro kar suna raha tha shayiri ki surat mein. "I wish mein aaj shivam ki party mein jata hi nahi" swayam ka dil buhut buri tarha se toota tha q k uss ne apni pehli muhabbat apni chahat ko shivam ki baanhu mein deka tha.
"Sharon tum mere saath aisa kesy kar sakti ho, u knw hw much i love, phir b tum uss shvam k saath...but mein q ro raha hoon, tum tu kabi meri thi hi nahi, tum ne tu hamesha meri muhabbat ko reject kiya hai(wipping tears with both hands innocently)..."Khud ko bohot samjany k baad wo puri tarha se toot kar floor beth gya...aur aansu thy k ban hone ka naam hi nahi le rahe thy. Room k andar swayam shikhawat apni sharon k liye ro raha tha...aur bahir aasman us majnu(swayam) k liye ro raha tha jisne apni muhabbat ko pany se pehly hi kho diya.(it was raining)
Swayam apny dard ko kam karny k liye barish mein ghar se bahir aakar dance karny laga.
(Swayam dancing in the rain to macky gray song)
" I try to say goodbye and I choke Try to walk away and I stumble Though I try to hide it, it's clear My world crumbles when you are not here"
(Scene changes:Sharon in her room crying)
"Swayam kya sochy ga mera bary mein that am a cheap and easy girl...No...nooo...swayam aisa nahi sochy ga...afer all he...he loves me.(sharon's innor soul question her) tu ye sila diya us ki muhabbat ka k uss k hi samny kisi or ko tumne apny aap ko kiss karny diya(sharon crying out loud)
(Sharon staring at swayam's picture) "agar mein kaho k jo tumne deka mere aur shivam k beech wo sirf shivam ki taraf se tha tu kya tum mera believe karo gy?"
Sharon wants swayam to knw that it was not what she wanted therefore she tries to call him to talk to him. Swayam dznt pickup his phone coz hez dancing in such pain with so loud music that he dont even hear himself.
Next morning in the college
Sharon asking the whole gang about swayam as he still not in college. No one knows about him..."ray!ray wherz swayam tumne deka hai usey?" Ary no ya, kab se us k phon par try kar raha hun wo answer hi nahi kar raha hai...sharon i think some thing is wrong, warna swayam itna irresponsable kabi nai ho sakta. " kkkya kya matlab hai tumhara...aaa aisy q keh rahay ho(sharon get worried and her words r trembelling) listen he'll be fine okai"
Swayam on his way to college on his cycle (ofcourse) very depressed and thinking about new year party. He is in such deep thoughts that he dnt hear his phone ringing...and he dznt even hear or see the truck comming frm the front...
Ray and sharon r trying to think where swayam can be as hez never so late for college. In the mean while rayz phone rings
"Sharon its swayam! (Sharon get alert and tries to listen to the phone)...hello swayam? Aap kon? G mein unka frnd hoon, mein hi unko phone kar raha tha abi...swayam kahan hai? WOT??? Konse hospital mein?
(Sharon is worried to hear abt the hospital) ray mujy btao gy kya hoa hai...
Sharon hurry up swayam ka accident hoa hai his condition is very serious we need to go to hosp...wot? No...no ray plz no no plz ray tell me that its not true...aisa nahi ho sakta...its all coz of me...na mein usy jls krny k liye shivam se frndship ka drama karti or na shivam mujy kiss karta..."sharon ye sab baatein karny time nahi hai.. chalo...(ray grabs her)
"In hospital"
Sharon is looking at swayam through glass door and cnt stop crying...shez staring at swayamz face and all memories are retraveling in her mind...she is realising how important swayam is to her...suddenly nurses comes.out of the room very worried...ray ask thm abt swayam condition and thy say that the chances are very little u pray for him...after hearing this ray and sharon burst into tears and ray tells her... "U knw he loved u so much but after last night he was nt himself...he was very distrubes and rang me saying..."ray i thing i shud let go of sharon...i lost all my hopes...she and me are just nt meant to be (crying)"
"Excuse me this is patiantz stuff(bag)"
Sharon quickly grab the bag of ward boy and hugd it so tightly and kiss it all over as it was swayam, she can smell his perfume frm the bag, she opend the bag and finds a diary and start reading it, as she reades silent tears falls down on her cheaks. Coz she is reading his painful poetry that he wrote last night "tanha tanha rato'n main"
Mean while ray comes from the back and tell her that swayam is out of danger nw, go see him...as she hear that she ran to the room see her.lover boy her majnu her secret admirer the boy who always commanded her wish was lying in hosp bed very week but yet so charming...sharon controle her emotion and go down and slowly to his lips and kiss him vry softly so that he dnt wake bt how cud lover boy miss the most awaited moment of his life time... Swayam trying to speak and sharon lock his lips with hers...tears roll down swayamz face,,,, sharon wipe his tears and say...will u be ma boy friend for zillion life times? Swayam smiles and say
"Even a zellion life time is not enough with u sharon...mere pyar ki koi had nahi hai"
Sharon gets emotional and lye down on swayams chest saying i love with very cute voice and swayam replya as always "love u too"
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