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Posted: 12 years ago

CHAPTER 53(A). THE DAY OF ENGAGEMENT PART I

Place - Living Room at Khurana Mansion

It was nine in the morning and the whole house was buzzing in excitement. Dadima was standing right in the middle directing the servants, who were carrying gifts to the cars parked outside, "Arre! Ismein kaanch ke saamaan hain, sambhaalke le jaao.", she shouted. NT walked down the stairs talking on the phone, "Haan! Haan! Laxmi Nagar! Aapko wahaan shaam ko pahunchna hai. Aur Make up artist kisi aise ko bhejna joh sabse best ho. I want the girl to look like a princess." Upstairs, Geet was packing the red and white saree for the evening along with the maching sets and accessories. Suddenly, Dadima's voice floated upstairs, "Geet beta! Jaldi karo! Aapko wahaan pahunchke Khushi ke gharwaalon ki madat bhi karni hai." "Ji Dadima! Aayi!", Geet shouted back. Soon, Geet and NT were assembled downstairs. Dadima instructed both of them, "Dono dhyaan rakhna! Khushi ke gharwaalon ko koi problems nahi honi chaahiye! Kuch ho toh Maan ya Dev ko call kar ljiye ya toh humein hi call kar lijiye, chalega!" Both the girls nodded. Dadima continued instructing, "Aur dekho NT beta, ek bade ghar ki bahu hona matlab sabki nazar Paayal par hogi. Use aise tayyaar karna ki sab dekhte reh jaayein. Kisiko usmein ek bhi khot nazar nahi aani chaahiye!" NT nodded. Dadima turned towards Geet, "Geet beta! Paayal bahut dari hogi, nervous hogi. Use apni baaton mein uljhaana ya joke crack karna par use shaant karo. Agar woh nervous hui toh shaayad hadbada jaaye aur yeh humein avoid karna hai. Yeh high society waale galti dhoondte rehte toh Paayal ko bilkul nervous hone mat dena!" Geet nodded.

Suddenly, the three ladies heard a chuckle. They turned to see Annie and Arjun standing there. "Arre Dadima! Bas karo! Aur instructions dogi toh yahin shaam hojaayegi.", Arjun spoke. Dadima shook her head at his cheek while Maan came down the stairs dressed for Office with Dev following him. "Maan! Aap aaj kahaan chale? Aapko toh Shantivan jaana haina! Aakash bete aap logon ka wahaan intezaar kar rahe honge.", Dadima spoke up. Maan looked at her, "Haan Dadima! Humein wahaan jaana hai. But Office mein important kaam hai. But don't worry Aakash se humne baat karli hai. He doesn't mind. Aur humlog half day le rahe hain. Wahin office se direct chale jaayenge." Dadima frowned but nodded. Maan looked at NT, "Chalo NT, Geet! Hum tum dono ko Laxmi Nagar drop kar dete hain." Geet and NT nodded, took Dadima's leave and walked away. Maan and Dev also took leave and walked away. Maan reached the door, turned and looked at Arjun who was flirting with Annie, "ARJUN! Chal rahe ho ya nahi?" Arjun looked away from Annie and fumbled, "Haan! Haan! Aa raha hoon!" Dadima frowned at him, "Arjun beta! Ab aap kahaan chale?" Arjun replied, "Woh Mumbai Office ke quarterly reports Bro ke saath discuss karna hai. Toh maine socha aaj hi woh kaam niptaaloon." He kissed Aanie on her cheek, kissed Dadima's cheek who swatted the back of his head and walked away behind Maan. Dadima looked at Annie and huffed, "Ab aap toh humein chod kar nahi jaa rahe haina?" Annie shook her head and hugged Dadima, "Don't worry, Dadi. Main aapko chod kar kahin nahi jaa rahi. Main aapke saath poori time gappe karoongi aur phir hum dono shaam ko tayyaar hokar Shantivan jaayenge!"

Place - Buaji's House at Laxmi Nagar

It was ten in the morning when someone knocked on the door. Buaji who was making tea for herself was surprised. "Haayre Nandkisore! Ab is waqat kaun aaya hai?" Buaji was shocked when she opened the door and found Khushi's friend Geet and another lady, both smiling and carrying lots of gifts. Behind them stood servants, all holding gifts of various shapes and sizes. "Ee sab ka hai, bitiya?" The lady beside Geet smiled, "Khushi ne aapko bataaya nahi ki hum dono aanewaale hain?" Buaji shook her head. The lady spoke again, "Hum Naintara hain aur yeh hain Geet. Hum dono Khurana khaandaan ki bahuein hain aur Khushi ki Bhabhiyaan!" Buaji let them in and they entered the house. The servants placed the gifts inside the house. The ladies sat on the sofa and Buaji inquired, "Khushi ki Bhabhiyaan?" NT nodded, "Mere pati aur mere Jethji Khushi ko apni behen maante hain. Toh Paayal bhi unki behen jaisi hi hui na! Aur Ek baar Paayal ne Geet ki jaan bhi bachaayi thi. Toh hum sabne socha ki Paayal ke liye kuch special karein. Yeh saare gifts ladki waalon ki taraf se ladke waalon ke liye!" She waved her hands over the gifts. Buaji looked speechless. Haayre Nandkisore! Yeh Khushi ne humaare bhaag hi khulwa diye! Ab ee sab tohfa dekhke koi bhi humaare Paayaliya par ungli nahi uthaayenge! Soon, the rest of the family entered the room and the introductions were done. Hugs were exchanged among Geet, Paayal, NT, Khushi and Lavanya. Amma and Babuji were shocked at seeing the gifts and NT again explained the reasons behind them. "Par hum kaise….", Amma spoke but Buaji got up and dragged the parents to the kitchen. She whispered to them, "Aapan dono chup karo. Agar yeh tohfe humaari ghar se gaye toh yeh bade log humaari Paayal par ungli naahi uthaayenge. Tum jaanat hona ki hum log aur un log ka koi mel nahi!" Amma frowned, "Par Jiji Aakash Bitwa parivaar waale haisiyat aur aukaad dekhne waalon mein se nahi hai!" Babuji nodded but Buaji persisted, "Arre! Baat ko samjho! Yeh bhi bade log hi hain. Agar mana kiya toh bura maan jaayenge. Phir ka karogi? Aur bhoolo mat ee log Khushi ke baas (boss) bhi hain." It was clear that parents were not comfortable but what can they say? Bua had stated true facts. They agreed reluctantly.

Soon, all of them settled and spoke about the engagement. NT informed about the beautician she had called for Paayal and that she would take personal interest in getting her ready. Amma was really grateful for NT's intervention. NT also assured them that Khurana Car will be ready for their travelling in the evening. Soon, Amma and Buaji went for Mandir as they had a mannat to fulfil, "Uu ka haina humne mannat maangi thi ki agar Paayal ka rishta tey hua toh hum sagaai ke din archana karwaayenge.", Amma explained and soon the ladies walked off. Babuji also took his leave as he had to meet some neighbours. The remaining ladies retreated to the bedroom where Paayal showed off her engagement dress and NT spoke about her College days when she was dating Dev. Hence, the girls spent the morning chatting among them.

Place - Shantivan

It was around three in the afternoon when Maan, Dev and Arjun entered the house and looked around the decorations. The hall was decorated with various flowers and lighting. Soon, Naani welcomed them, "Arre! Aapan teeno aagaye. Aayiye! Aayiye! Aakash kab se aap teeno ka intezaar kar rahe hain." All three hugged her. Maan looked around, "Angel Dear aur Shaam…" Naani piped up, "Shaam Babua caterers ke paas gaye hain aur Anjali Bitiya so rahi hain." Arjun piped up, "Maama, Maami?" Naani replied, "Manorama Beauty Parlour gayi hai aur Manohar humaare khaandaani jewar Polish karne diye hain wohi lene gaye hain." Maan nodded, "Aur Arnav?" Naani smiled, "Chote apne kamre ma hain." Maan nodded and walked towards Arnav's room while Dev and Arjun headed for Aakash's room.

Place - Arnav's Room at Shantivan

Arnav sat working on his laptop when someone cleared their throat. He looked up to see Maan standing in front of him, arms folded across his chest, a smirk on his face. "Maan!", Arnav got up and hugged Maan. "Thanks for coming dude! I needed you today!", Arnav spoke and Maan was surprised, "You needed me, matlab?" Arnav took a deep breath, "I am planning to propose Afreen tonight." Maan frowned, "Afreen?" Arnav fumbled, "Matlab Khushi! I am proposing Khushi! And I am nervous." Maan smirked, "Tum kyun nervous ho rahe ho? I mean you are Arnav Singh Raizada, Dude!" Arnavgave him a blank stare, "We are talking about Khushi, Dude! Woh ladki jo mera do minute mein band baja sakti hai. I am not risking anything when it comes to her. You tell me she will say yes, right?" Maan sat on the bed and spoke up, "Waise proposal toh baad ki baat hai. What are you doing about your identity?" Arnav frowned as he stood by the poolside door looking outside, "What is wrong with my identity?" Maan huffed, "Woh tujhe yahaan dekhegi aur use pata chalega ki tune usse jhoot bola hai." Arnav whirled around and looked at him, "JHOOT!! When did I lie?" Maan narrowed his eyes and Arnav rolled his eyes, "I did not lie. I just never told her things that she didn't ask questions about. Sahi sawaal poochti toh I would have had to lie. I didn't lie." Maan stood up and stared at him and Arnav gulped, "Fine! I lied. But if you see from her point of view, I did not lie." Maan rolled his eyes, "Tu kuch bhi kehle Arnav, woh toh yahi samjhegi that you played a game with her." Arnav glared at him, "I did not play any game with her. I love her. I did not lead her on." Maan huffed, "But the fact remains that she will see you there and be shocked." Arnav smirked, "And when I see her I will be shocked too. I will say 'Khushi, tum yahaan woh bhi Paayal ke saath? What's going on?'" Maan looked at him in shock and soon a smug grin spread across his face, Arnav grinned back and both started laughing loudly. As they stopped laughing, Maan spoke up, "I see your plan. I totally see your plan. And I have to say it is good. The plan is good."

Both of them sat on the chairs near the poolside. Arnav spoke up, "Maan, the plan is simple. I will act as if I don't know that she is the girl who is Aakash's future saali. Afterall, no one has shown me any picture of her and she has never seen Di's Chote's pics. She knows that there exists a younger brother of Anjali Di and I know that Paayal has a younger sister, that's all. And I made sure that we never met at my place or go to Paayal's house at Laxmi Nagar with my family. According to my family, I do not know where Paayal lives. So I would just say I did not know that Paayal's sister is Khushi. When I told her about my past and family, I never told her anybody's name. She knows me as your family friend and she thinks that I know her due to you. And the best part is she knows that you are going to my brother's engagement but she does not know that my brother and her sister's fianc are the same. So she can't rat me out through you either. You could just say that you did not know that Aakash's Paayal and her sister Paayal were the same." Arnav rolled his eyes and Maan shook his head. Maan spoke, And If she asks that 'Paayal ki behen ka naam Khushi hai aur humaara naam bhi Khushi toh aapko shaq nahi hua?' then what will you say?" Arnav smirked, "I would say no one told me Paayal's sister's name is Khushi and the comedy is she never told me her sister's name too. It was always Jiji this and Jiji that." Maan laughed and Arnav grinned. Suddenly, Maan looked at him, "And what about the invitation? Usne tujhe engagement ka invitation toh diya hoga na?" Arnav grinned, "I never saw the invitation. I told her that yesterday that I did not even look at the invitation yet. See I am smart." But Maan shook his head, "Arnav bhale hi tune invitation kholke nahi dekha par invitation ke design toh same the. Agar Khushi ne is par shaq kiya toh?" Arnav rolled his eyes, "Isliye main apne aapko lucky samajhta hoon kyunki Khushi utna detail mein sochegi hi nahi. Aur jab tak yeh baat use soojhegi, I would have proposed and we would be engaged. Phir sagaai ke agle din she will come and fight with me and I will make up to her. No problem." Arnav smirked smugly but Maan shook his head. Sometimes Arnav was too arrogant. Sambhalja Arnav varna ek din yeh tera ghamand tujhe duba le jaayega!

Place - Aakash's Room

Dev and Arjun entered Aakash's room and stopped in their tracks. There on the bed lying on his stomach was Aakash with a photo frame in his hand. Dev and Arjun smirked at each other and sneaked into the room. Even though Dev and Arjun were older to Aakash by a year and Arnav was their age, they felt more connected to Aakash than Arnav. Maybe it was because Arnav and Maan were the older brothers who took all the burdens on their shoulders while they made sure that Aakash, Dev and Arjun never faced any struggles or difficulties in their lives. For the younger three, Arnav and Maan were the same even though Arnav was younger to Maan by two years and about the same age as Dev and Arjun. For them, Maan and Arnav were the serious responsible brothers who took care of them while Dev, Aakash and Arjun were the younger brothers who had fun and goofed around.

Dev sneaked by Aakash while Arjun raised his hand towards the photo frame. Both the boys looked at each other and suddenly, Dev shouted, "Aakash!" and at the same time Arjun pulled the photo frame from his hand. Aakash jerked out of his daydream with a loud shout and looked around to see Dev and Arjun looking at the photo frame. His eyes widened, Meri Miss. ChamCham ki photo! He lunged after them but they avoided. "Guys! Give me my frame!" Dev smiled at him sweetly, "Humein toh Bhabhiji ko dekhne do. Afterall she is our gang's new member." By our gang, Dev meant about the group of five members comprising of Dev, Annie, Aakash, NT and Arjun. From the young age all five were together and also went to same college. While Dev was in same batch with Arjun, Aakash was in the batch of Annie and NT. Infact, when Dev and Arjun passed out of college they made Aakash the bodyguard of their girlfriends, NT and Annie respectively. Poor Aakash! On one side there were College hot shot boys who wanted a chance with NT and Annie now that Arjun and Dev had passed out and on the other side were Dev and Arjun. Both sides were ready to smash him if he went against them. As I said; Poor Aakash! Aakash rolled his eyes and lunged at Dev who threw the frame towards Arjun who caught it and spoke, "Waise Bhabhiji good looking hai. Good choice! No wonder Aakash aaj kal khoya khoya rehta hai!" He winked at Aakash who glared at him. Dev piped up, "Iski haalat dekhke mujhe ek gaane ki yaad aa rahi hai! Who kya gaana tha? Haan!" He began to sing, "Yeh Khoya Khoya Rehta Hai, Yeh Din Mein Soya Soya Rehta Hai!" and he burst out laughing. Aakash huffed and pulled the frame from Arjun's hands. Arjun continued the song, "Yeh Raaton Ko Uth Uthke Rota Hai, Yehi Gaata Hai Woh Le Gayi Dil!" Both Dev and Arjun sang while Aakash sighed miserably at their teasing, "Taram Pum Taram Pum Taram Pum

Chalo Usko Dhoondenge Hum

Pari Hai Woh Hai Hoor Koi

Jo Dhaaya Hai Itna Sitam"

Aakash looked the photo and sang quietly, "Nahi Woh Toh Kuch Aur Hi Hai

Kahein Kya Yaaron Tumse Hum"

Arjun and Dev looked at each other and sang along, "Taram Pum Taram Pum Taram Pum, Chalo Usko Dhoondenge Hum"

Aakash rolled his eyes at them and placed the photo frame by his bed side table. As he sat on the bed, Dev and Arjun joined him. Dev piped up, "Arre Yaar! Gaana toh khatam kar!" Aakash shook his head but Arjun persuaded, "Aakash! Tu toh College ka best singer hua karta tha yaar! Itna achcha gaata hai! Apne doston ke liye yeh gaana toh poora gaa de!" Dev smiled, "Humaare liye Aakash! We will even sing the chorus part. It is been ages saath baithke gaane gaaye hain, yaar. Please un college ke dino ke liye!" Aakash huffed and started singing:

Itni Haseeno Mein Chhupi Ek Aisi Haseena Hai

Ke Moti Si Tum Ho Jaise

He picked up the photo frame and pointed it to his friends while singing further.

Anghooti Mein Woh Nagina Koi Ho

Dekha Hai Tumne Kaho Kya Usko

He lied on the bed.

Jaise Nagina Koi Ho

Dekha Hai Tumne Kaho Kya Usko

Dev and Arjun lied by Aakash and sang in chorus.

Taram Pum Taram Pum Taram Pum

Chalo Usko Dhoondenge Hum

Pari Hai Woh Hai Hoor Koi

Jo Dhaaya Hai Itna Sitam

Aakash got up and looked at the photo again and sang.

Nahi Woh Toh Kuch Aur Hi Hai

Kahein Kya Yaaron Tumse Hum

Dev and Arjun again gave the chorus.

Taram Pum Taram Pum Taram Pum

Chalo Usko Dhoondenge Hum

All three burst out laughing. Arjun piped up, "Dhoondhna kya hai? Bhabhi toh mil gayi!" Aakash smiled at the comment. He closed his eyes and imagined his Paayal dressed in blue saree smiling at him softly. He sang in soft voice.

Doodh Si Rangat Hai Dhuli Ho Chandni Se Jaise

Kamal Ke Jaisi Nazaakat Hai

Karishma Hai Woh Khudaayi Ka Toh Jo

Dekha Hai Tumne Kaho Kya Usko

He opened his eyes and smiled softly. He sang forgetting the audience in the room.

Jaise Karishma Hai Woh

Dekha Hai Tumne Kaho Kya Usko

He was jolted from his thoughts when Dev and Arjun sang the chorus.

Taram Pum Taram Pum Taram Pum

Chalo Usko Dhoondenge Hum

Pari Hai Woh Hai Hoor Koi

Jo Dhaaya Hai Itna Sitam

Aakash looked at his friends and sang further.

Woh Subah Ka Taara

Haan Woh Kismat Se Humaara Hai

Oh Yaaron Doli Saja Ke Rakhna Hai

Use Banna Hai Meri Dulhan

"Haay Haaye!" Dev and Arjun shouted as Aakash blushed and smiled sheepishly. Dev and Arjun sang the chorus as they started poking Aakash.

Taram Pum Taram Pum Taram Pum

Chalo Usko Dhoondenge Hum

Pari Hai Woh Hai Hoor Koi

Jo Dhaaya Hai Itna Sitam

Aakash pushed them away and jumped up the bed to escape them. He sang further.

Nahi Woh Toh Kuch Aur Hi Hai

Kahein Kya Yaaron Tumse Hum

He jumped down the bed and all three sang together.

Taram Pum Taram Pum Taram Pum

Chalo Usko Dhoondenge Hum

All three looked at each other, smiling at their antics. Suddenly, Dev spoke up, "You know what, Arjun? Yeh sab masti mein hum Bhai se milna toh bhool hi gaye!" Arjun slapped his forehead, "Haan yaar! Bhai se bhi toh milna! Chal, is Junior ASR se mil liya. Ab senior ASR se milte hai." Dev nodded. They said byes to Aakash and told him to get ready and walked off.

SONG DETAILS

The song is from the movie "Doli Saja Ke Rakhna" (Year 1998) picturised on Akshay Khanna sung by Babul Supriyo and Sreenivasan.

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Posted: 12 years ago
awsome update loved it
NT and geet in khushi house and helping them
soo nice of them
and maan,arjun and dev in arnav house
i love their bonding with arnav and aakash
want to see everyone reaction seeing geet in their mansion
update next soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
okay once again give me half an hour and one shall be back
sorry took longer than one thought
so let get down to it then shall we
awww finally the day is here man
payash are getting engaged
and a lot will happen on their engagement day
lets just hope nobody gets beaten up by the end of it
and we all know whom am referring to there
ASR of course he better play his cards right or khushi will defo feel like killing him
might even do that for lying to her like that
but lets get back to the story and not what might or might not happen
so all ready for payash engagement then
awww so cute how khuranas too are getting ready for this too
from gifts for the engagement to getting the bride i guess dolled up
okay that sounds horrible dolled up sorry couldnt find better word its pathetic me vocab man
awww aint dadi the best right
the way she wanted to make sure payal looked her best and to drive her nervousness away
dont worry dadi these girls will make her feel like a princess for sure
oho so all geared up for this day it seems
and why not finally the day when things will be set in motion is upon them
though that also means time for separation might be near too
dang it dont know if i want that to happen
but then we cant take payash day from them can we now
so this looks like will be some event for sure
but it would have been cooler if arhi and maneet could do the same
but lets not steal their thunder here at least
hope it all goes smoothly maybe not though if ASR dont ruin things
only time will tell what she will say or do
poori ki poori fauj aa gayi guptas ke yahan waah kya baat hain
of course khushi ki bhabhis hain ek toh honewaali bhabhi hai
but lets not go to that for now
awww they really love the gupta sisters dont they our khuranas
well buaji raizadas would never mention about this and all know it
but then not everyone is like them and khuranas am afraid
no wonder they were hesitant to take these gifts
but they will since khushi veerji and boss sent them
wow that was fun for sure
chatting with just all the girls
wow they must have had a blast and kept payal from worrying too much
so the boys have reached raizadas huh
well maan and arnie dudes dont ruin things
what i mean is best of luck to you guys after all tonight is the night when things shall happen for both of you and you knoe what i mean
arnie and his proposal for khushi and maan and his engagement with geet soon
lets see what lover boy 2 is doing since the first lover boy is gonna see him
dudes stop worrying too much
okay what am i saying do worry after all bechare ki pyaar ka jo sawal hai
maan man he might be ASR but that aint gonna matter to khushi and you know it
considering same is your case you may be MSK but in front of geet thats nothing
the plan might seem good now my dear but once you are in front of her it shall go down the drain
no way will she fall for that and you know it or do you
hello she is so gonna be mad for sure i can guarantee it
at least i hope she shall be
hmmm this is gonna end in disaster and maan stop encouraging him please
ek DM yeh toh defo gaye bara ke bhaav se
really do you really think she wont get you
hello itni bhi bholi nahin hain
and trust me this over confidence of yours will bring you down
hah when she finds out propose toh bhale aap karr le but beta uska jawab ke itne bhi naa confident rahiyega
man this is gonna end in disaster for sure his this arrogance will bring him down and it better
or he will never learn for sure
oyye hoyye lets not forget the lover boy of the day
haiyye he is so lost in payal that he didnt even notice the two enter
well this should be fun right
hmmm so maan and arnie are closer than anyone else due to their nature and the other three were the carefree lads who had their older siblings to look up to
wow poor sky man he had to look over the girls and yet not get into trouble with others
man he had it bad right
but thats the least he could do for his friends right
of course yeh khoye khoye rehete hain inko inka pyaar jo milne waala hai
am sure you guys were the same at time of your engagements
wow now thats one lover boy for sure
kya baat hai sky aap toh cha gaye
wow that was something werent it just and so cute too
well junior ka yeh haal hai senior toh inse bhi aage hai ji
wow this was the engagement without the dhamkas the shocks the twists and suprises
picture toh definitely abhi baaki hai mere dooston
and boy cant wait for the same now
wait did he forget geet man
she knows about it all so if maan might not say anything but she still can
so things are be real fun for sure
wish he wouldnt think that he can win her so easily man
cheers for pm
how many of you guys think that this idea of his is gonna flop
for sure it will am telling you
okay i know he said he didnt lie to her
but thats not true naa
and this is KKG urf afreen he is doomed man
well hye is asking for it am afraid
DM bachaye inhe though one doubts it anything is possible now
Edited by chavvi16 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
woww...awesme...
loved it...
waiting for seeing khushi's reaction...for the truth and proposal......
updte soon...
thankx for pm...😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice part.kurana womens in laxminagar and khurana mens in shantivan.loved arnav maan bonding and akash ,dev,arjun bonding.what will happen neaxt?will things happen according to arnavs plan or not?update next part soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
Brilliant update ...akash is so cute...loved it...keep it up
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing update! Loved how dadi maa telling them all about what they should do and not do, it was as if it's PayAl grandmother making sure that everything goes fine! I'm glad that no one from high society will point fingers at the Gupta now! Dadi you are fabulous! Awe I love nt and geet, they are like the best friends you can get.

It was just way to nice how they bought gifts and all for them and arranged a beautician for PayAl! We too sweet and I love them for that! I hate it when people point fingers at you for wearing this and that! That's why I get pissed at my dads friends when they complain about mine and my sisters dressing! Which is really appropriate! But no they still have to call him and tell him. Idiots.

Anyways maan and arnav! They rock. Hahah arnav has a full proof plan! I was scared that khushi will be hurt, but by Arnav's plan I hope nothin like that happens and she accepts the proposal! It would be amazing to see them engaged too. Well her veer ji is there to if something does happen!

Awe akash scene was just so cute. Awesome friends he has. Dev and arjun! The way you explained how they are more close to akash than arnav because arnav and maan had a lot of burden on them, was what I liked! Haha college days, bechara akash even when his friends were gone he had to take care of their girlfriends! If he lets guys come close to their girlfriends he'll get beating from them and if he doesn't he gets beating from the others guys from college! Haha.

Loved the song scene! OMG I can't wait for khushi reaction to arnav and raizada families reaction to geet!! It'll be one heck of an engagement to read about.

Oh that means I'm wrong I thought akash would be protective over here! Which is not. Cool! And the Devi Maiya idol wow what will happen further updates! Yep I always knew dev wasn't a stupid one, he might think about PARATHAS all the time but when it comes to family he will do anything.

Well it's good that your back pain is gettin better! And you'll be totally healed than!! Yayy :D
Thanks for the update and continue soon.
Love you (:
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Posted: 12 years ago
Arnav is being overconfident... Khushi is not that easy to tame
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Posted: 12 years ago
arnie lover boy
plan to bada mast banaya hai
loved it
lovely update
thanks for pm

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Posted by: Rizz-ington

1 years ago

⭐Back⭐ Arhi FF | Iss Darr Ko Kya Naam Doon: Chapter 3 - Part 3/3 (85%)

A N A R H I F F ---- Iss Darr Ko Kya Naam Doon Summary: Khushi is an internet famous 27 year old fashion designer from Lucknow. She has a chirpy...

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Posted by: Aleyamma47

1 years ago

Tu Meri Pehalwan ~ A VeeRat Tale - Chapter 15 on pg 7 Tu Meri Pehalwan ~ A VeeRat Tale - Chapter 15 on pg 7

Introduction Although the family background of this fiction is the same as of the original series, there are slight changes in the plotline....

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Posted by: MidnightLibrary

9 months ago

Rishtey the Bond of marriage (new chapter) Rishtey the Bond of marriage (new chapter)

Chapter : Melodious Encounter https://www.indiaforums.com/fanfiction/chapter/52348

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