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Kalpana

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Posted: 12 years ago

#741

Originally posted by: coolflora
o i love both rain sequence
also the way khushi make arnav take the idol

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Posted: 12 years ago

#742

Originally posted by: sushna
woww...nice...
waiting for truth to be out...
thankx for pm...😃

Thanks for the review!

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Posted: 12 years ago

#743

Originally posted by: tejaswini.253

i'm extremely sry fr d late reply

was in d hospital due to high fever n was asked to take complete bed rest

n was strictly forbidden frm using laptop

got discharged just yesterday

hope u understand

n dat was a nice udate dear

thanx fr d pm

Thanks for the review!

Oh teri! In the hospital???? Are you ok? Please take care and have complete bed rest. DFL and I am not going anywhere. We will stay here. But your health is more important. Take care!

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Posted: 12 years ago

#744

Originally posted by: drunkiiebabe
sorry for the late reply was on vacation awesome update loved it thanks for the pm

Thanks for the review!

And about late review, chalta hai yaar! Its ok!

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Posted: 12 years ago

#745

Originally posted by: AnjuRish
amazing mindblowing story ...pls pls pls add me n PM list i hv sent u a buddy request

Thanks for the review!

Added you!😉

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Posted: 12 years ago

#746

Originally posted by: chavvi16
okay will read in few mins
hope all is well with ya
why am i gonna hate you by end of chapter 55
chalo koi nahin shall try not to hate you too much then

Not only you but everyone will hate me. But woh writer hi kya jo apne readers mein heavy reactions na paida kar sake? And donot restrain. I would love to hear your words when you read that chapter. If my readers react strongly that means I am a good writer, thats what I believe. So blast away if you are not happy with me.😉😉

hmmm seems you willie out to shock us for sure
is it still hurting you or much better

Back is still hurting but I will be fine!

lets see what you have got for us
lets get down to it then
arrey waah beta sudher gaye yeh toh
he actually asked her if she wants to dance in the rain
hmmm beta pyaar mein aap kya se kya ho gaye

So true! Arnav turns into a lover boy!!!😉

though he still is that LG too right
well some things can never change for sure and would never want them to change

Once again you are right! Woh kehte haina kutte ki poonch tedhi ki tedhi rehti hai. Waise hi Arnav ki kuch harkatein waisi ki waisi hi rehti hai.😉 But then we do love Arnav the way he is! Varna IPK toh banta hi nahi, right!

haiyee bina kuch bole hi inhone radio on karr diya

Dekha, Khushi ne shaadi se pehle Arnav ko train kar diya!😉 Banda toh bina pooche radio lagaata hai!

oh personal driver of afreen thoda toh sabr karna seekhiye
pyaar mein bahut papad belne padhte hain
and this is just the start my man
jab future mein shaadi hogi tab jaa karr hi the wait shall be over

So true!

if your family doesnt decide to be kaba mein haddi sorry hadda more like
sirf imagine hi kariye aap arnie at least maan does sometimes do what he wants to do

The last line you said...er...wrote was so hilarious. Still laughing.

koi nahin his imagination will no longer be that one day and thats the day one is looking forward to
and who would have thought that the imagination would turn to reality so soon man
now thats what i am talking about arnie my man
uff what a silly thing to ask ever since geet urf soni made entry inot your house who else would be dancing in the rain

Exactly! Aur kaun ho sakta hai????

what do you personal entertainment
thoda aap bhi iss mein bhag lijiye ji
not every day you get the chance to romance with soni mate
and the romance is there
wow one thinks and you have already provided for the same
now thats something for sure cool naa how you anticipate what we want and give it to us brilliance that is

Ya, that is so cool. You think and I write!!! Jo hukum mere aakaa!😉

satyanash ho yaar inn mooaun ka yaar
why haddi bann rahi hai aap NT and dadi
but then inki toh sach mein kismat kharab hai yaar
why does it happen to them so much man
this close they were for the lip lock but should have know it wouldnt happen

Arre! Hindi Television hai yaar! Yahaan kissi wissi nahi dikhaate!

chalo at least the are gonna help make it official for maneet
but like you said wont be happening so soon oh well guess that too we will see
wow solid chedha jaa raha tha maan ko
as it is one dont get such opportunities with maan so they shall take advantage of the fact naa
beta aap toh bach gaye iss baar but maybe not next time right
so what esle should she call geet arnie puttar or yeh bhi toh kissi ki bhabhi hongi jab aap dono ki shaddi hogi

So true! Yeh Arnav bhi na! Kuch nahi samajhta! But seriously, the reason Arnav is surprised is because he did not think that Maan and Khushi's relationship was that strong that she was almost a part of Khurana family.

wonder why she is so chirpy but good she is that naa
solid national blackmail she will do us all proud wont she

If Anjali knew, she would be very proud of Khushi. After all in the serial she was best blackmailer of Arnav.

hey she might as well learn this as she shall need it like his di to make him do things naa
after all it aint easy getting him to do something naa
sorry its the story of all men in their life and you are one of them
well thye have to do it naa these women to get you to listen to them

You are so right, babes! These men folks! Have to be house trained!😉

haiyye i am really proud of khushi there when she said and did what she did
hey babaji whats dev fixation with parathas man
oyye munde kabhi toh ghar mein kya ho raha hai uss baare mein bhi socha kariye NT thaari toh kismat hi ajeeb hai aisa pati mila tujhe well too late now

Dont worry for NT. Dev is not that dumb. He will play major part in Maaneet romance after twist.

wow so it seems that she wants them to be with each other officially then cool
hello how dare you refuse for your engagement with geet
poori baat toh sunna liya kijiye but nahin uff what to do with them
chalo at least he didnt complete his sentence in time warna toh yeh gaye hotte

So right! Agar poora sentence bola hota toh Dadima chidhaane ke liye hi sagaai postpone kar deti!😉

so something bad will happen
dont tell me he will loose her for a year or so

He He He!😊😃😆😳

hmmm well shall wait for this to happen too even if it will be something bad
dadi you better leave it to babaji now for future of maneet
abbb jo hona hai woh ho karr hi rahega naa
beta arnie toh woh ghadhi bhi aa gayi hai jab aao ki band bajegi
oh boy it seems that the twists are coming our couples way huh
well hope they are ready for all this storm into their lives cause it wont stop right

Yes, the day of twists has arrived! You will be so confused by the time I throw all my twists.

pssst khushi its the same sagaai as you will know for yourself soon enough
i doubt it that either maan or you arnie baby will get your respective girls that easily for sure
warna majaa nahin aayege naa

So true! Pyaar Kiya toh dard bhi saho!

after all whats in a love story that has no twist and the lovers meet so easily
wow kitna samaan le karr ayi hain annie and poor jun man
oyye hoyye so true what you said there jun
but thats true not only for maan but arnie tooo
after all these girls may look innocent si darri hiu si but mess with them and trust me they wont ]spare you

So true! These girls are dangerous. Handle with care!😉

awww am glad annie and jun liked geet for maan thats nice
wow that was romance packed and also forewarning of disasters to come
am glad i made you laugh with my last comment
hope this doesnt offend you though
cheers for pm

Thanks for the review! And no, you did not offend me. I enjoyed the review thoroughly. Laughing half of the time!😆😃

Thanks a lot once again for the review!

With lots of hugs and kisses.

Kalpana

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Kalpana

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Posted: 12 years ago

#747

Originally posted by: Zindagirocks_21
Hey it's a wonderful update. Chapter 51 (B)
I loved it how maan was dreaming about his wedding and geet dressed as a bride! It was funny how he was like once you tell your family about your love they never leave you alone! Which was true! Arnav bites was right maan beta! Ahah they were so close to kissing and dadi na had to call her! But no worries be happy. That's the motto for maan bitwa now! He'll get his time.
But an awesome scene between them and a lovely song.

I am happy that you liked the update. Yes, that song is really beautiful. I go dreamy eyed when I hear it.

Khushi and arnav. Wow just amazing. She was dreaming about him and actually said I love you to him in the dream! Hahah arnav singh raizada coming through the window. Hmm now that's the scene I would never forget. But damn I loved how he's like pyaar mein IQ mera zero ho Gaya hai ( something like that).

In the show, I always wanted Arnav to come through Khushi's window once but it did not happen. So I made it happen here. Yes, that line was real funny!

Nice way of waking her up! Jalabiyaan jal gayi! I was laughing so much at that scene. Even arnav bitwa did after a long time. Which is really good. Only khushi could bring that happiness to arnav! Hmm day dreamin arnav singh raizada! I really like the song never heard of it thought but by reading the lyrics I'm like damn I should listen to that song! But their imagination of eachother was just to cute. Khushi in car and arnav in her house. Really loved it.

The Jalebiyaan jal gayi was hilarious. Kaash show mein bhi hua hota. That song is really awesome. Do listen to it once atleast. It is one of my favorites.

Awee lavanya I feel a bit bad about it but khushi is right you have to move on and if you don't like the person just say no! She's an independant girl and she can do that. When babuji said about their proposal for khushi I was literally like NoOo hahaha! I'm like no one can have her except khushi. Damn it's getting closer an closer to PayAl engagement.

Dont worry for La. She has NK for herself.

Thank you so much for the pm and I'll just finish readin the next part and reply again (:

And also I would for sure love to see Shyam and Anjali scene again as you mentioned you would. Yep geet and akash are the closer to eachother I feel like when they meet akash is going to be very protective over her! Awe I can't wait to see that if that happens. And finally thank god your okie. If I would've known before I would've messaged you and asked you about it but atleast now your recovered and please take care of yourself from now on.

No, Aakash wont be protective, He is a calm and stable minded fellow. Now if Arnav was in his place then he would have been more than overprotective. And I am fine. Just have back pain if I sit too much but even that is improving too.

Love you
-RAMADAN MUBARAK (:

Thanks for the review!

Love you too.

RAMADAN MUBARAK

Kalpana

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Kalpana

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Posted: 12 years ago

#748

Originally posted by: Zindagirocks_21
IM BACK AGAIN!! It was an amazing part! Arnav and khushi scene was just awesome! Barish once again, I loved how he called her khushi and she was like first of all I'm not khushi I'm afreen! Loved it. She loves when he calls her afreen rather than khushi her real name. I loved how she emotionally black mailed him to keep the Devi Maiya idol! I was like maybe arnav Won't take it. But khushi is khushi and she will do anything.

Thanks for the review! I am so happy that you liked the scenes in the rain. And remember the Devi Maiyya Idol scene. That scene will play very important in Arnav's life later on after the twist!😉

Omg maan and geet scene was just fabulous. It was wonderful. I love that song piya ore piya! It was just too cute. But the hilarious part was how they were caught by dadi and Nt when they were almost about to kiss. Haha it was just way to funny when they started teasing him. OMG after such a long time dev is back lol and what was he thinking about PARATHAS! Lol this guy just loves it way to much that even when it's an important thing going on he'll only think about the PARATHAS. Oh god I hope nothing happens to maan! I feel like as if something will happen to geet which will also effect maan a lot. I hope so nothin happens. Damnnn engagement is coming, and arnav has to reveal the truth to khushi. Haha it's funny how she was like in I'm going to give the card to arnav and maan veerji 6 months earlier so that they could come to te wedding. Yay Annie and arjun are here. Khurana family is complete.

I am glad that you liked the Maaneet scenes. That song is one of my favorites too. I also loved the scenes in the show where Dadima would interrupt Maaneet romance. It was too funny. Had to put such a scene in my story too. Yes, Dev is back to parathas. But dont think of him as dumb. He will play a very instrumental role in Maaneet's life after the twist.

Cannot wait for the next update.
Continue soon and thanks for the pm (:

Once again thanks for the review! Loved it. Kalpana

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Posted: 12 years ago

#749

Originally posted by: spvd
finally finished reading

part 51 B
awesome dear...
loved it so much...

Thank you so much! Glad that you loved it!

KM Maan Geet
haye that was so lovely...
Maan is dreaming Geet as his wife...
so cute and adorable dear...
hahah he thought of Arnav for this interruption...
the sequence was so nice dear...

That scene is one of my favorites because it is much more bindaas than all maaneet romance scenes in DFL till now.

Anjali
oh ho tell them dear else Arnav's reaction is gonna be like a active volcano...

That is why she is not telling him.

Khushi Arnav
oh wowo here Khushi is dreaming about Arnav...
too good...
so lovely...
Arnav's condition made me laugh...

Yes, that scene was hilarious! Poor Arnav got a shock when Khushi said I love you!

who is that alliance?
hope not the Raizadas...
who was her love? i mean La...
lovely part...

About La's lover, he was some guy called Rohan. Not important. It is mentioned in some chapter. Cant remember the chapter number. Khushi sees La sad and she talks and gets to know about La's broken heart. Have to go check which chapter it was written in.

About the alliance, you will come to know in chapter 54 and 55.

Thanks for the awesome review!

Please keep reviewing like this!😉

Kalpana

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Kalpana

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Posted: 12 years ago

#750

Originally posted by: spvd
part 52
awesome dear...

Thank you!😳

KC Arnav Khushi
oh new rain sequence...
they were reminded of the past incidents...

nice way to make him accept God's blessings...

Happy that you liked those scenes. Do keep in mind the Devi Maiyya Idol scene. Because it is very important after the twist.

oh Arnav is still lying...
hes gonna get from khushi so much thats for sure...

Don't worry. Khushi won't blame Arnav. His logic is really good!

KM Maan Geet
excellent...
i so loved this one so much dear...
haye Daadima and Naina are teasing the love birds...

Glad you liked it. Dadi and NT teasing the lovebirds is something I wanted to see from the start of DFL.😉😆

hahaha that was funny...
Maan was about to reject the idea but stopped at the right time...
good for him...
what was that?
hope no trouble reaches them...
and finally Dev and his paratha is here...

Yes, Dev and his parathas are back due to poular demand. TRP ke liye ... I mean likes and reviews ke liye kya kya karna padhta hai!😉