Tanveer ka pardafash OS

Hii guys m mags nd dis is my frst os on IF so plz support me nd ignore d mistakes...so as we saw yesterday's SBS i thought i shld write an os...so here it is..Tanveer ka pardafash.Zoya is doing prayer in d living area...nd thn tanveer enters ther.Zoya who is busy doing prayer didnt feel d presence of tanveer...Tanveer to herself-'aj main tmhe nh chodungi aj toh tumhe is duniya se rukhsat kr hi doongi'thn she spread kerosene oil ol over d ground...before burning it she says-'kitni koshish kri tumhe marne ki bt tum har br bach gyi...pr aj nh aj agr maine tumhe tumhare allah miyan ke ps nh phchaya toh mra nam bhi tanveer nh' nd she laughs evilly...She picks one candle nd as soon as she tend to throw d candle on oil she deels a strong grip on her hand nd is shcked to see asad there with eyes full of anger following by dilshad nd najma...To be continued...So if uh thnk tht i did justice to it nd if i shld continue it so plz tell me thorough ur cmnts nd msgs...sory for ny mistkes...

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Tanveer ka Pardafash:- PART-2 Asad,najma nd dilshad everythng wht tanveer said...nd ol of thm r lukng her in full anger as if they will kill her ryt der only.. Zoya finshes her namaz nd stnd nd fold her mate nd thn only she luks back nd see tht wht tanveer was trying to do... Thn zoya says''tanveer tmne mjhe kha tha na ki mjhe mr.khan ya mre abbu mein se kisi ek ko chunna hoga so main mr.khan ko chunti hu...tanveer main yeh toh nh janti ki mre abbu zinda h ya nh pr main itna zrur janti hu ki jab tk main zinda hu main tumhe mrs.asad ahmed khan nh bnne dungi...'' Asad,najma nd dilshad were confused at wht dey saw nd heard... ''yeh sab kya ho rha h zoya''-dilshad.. ''ha zoya ki ap phle se janti thi iski asliyat aur isne abhi jo bhi bola kya vo sch h?''-asad. ''Ha phoophi main sab janti thi iske bare mein''-zoya. ''toh phr tumne hume kch btaya ku nh''-dilshad. ''ha zoya agr tum sab janti thi toh kch btaya ku nh?''-asad. ''maine btane ki koshis ki thi mr.khan bt apne mra yakeen nh kia''-zoya ''hume poori bat btao zoya''-dilshad . To be continued... Sry i guys i ll post d nxt prt tomorw itself...gud nyt sd

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Tanveer ka pardafash... Part 3. ''phoophi tanveer mr.khan se nikaah krna chahti h lekin srf paiso ke liye...isliye jab apne mr.khan ka rishta mre sath tey kr dia toh isne mjhe marne ki bht koshsish ki...yaha tak ki isne mri mehndi mein acid dal dia tha taki mjhe dard ho aur main vo rasm rok duu''-zoya. ''par apne toh kha thi ki apko alergy thi''...-asad ''ha zoya aur agr tumhe sab pta tha toh tumne hme btaya ku nh?''-dilshad ''kuki main nh chahti thi ki mr.khan ko yeh pta lge ki jispe vo itna trst krte h uni tannu ne unhe dhkoha dia...main mr.khan ko tutte hue nh dkh skti thi phoophi(eye lock mitwaaa)''-zoya in tears ''jab tanveer ki vo chal bhi nakamyab ho gyi toh isne toh isne natak kia aur asad ko apne ps bulaya vo bhi hmare nikaah ke din aur unhe behosh kr dia aur mre samne yeh unke bagal mein jaake let gyi...''-zoya ''tum khna kya chahti ho zoya?''-asad ''main yeh kehna chahti hu ki us rat ap logo ke beetch kch nh hua..apne mjhe koi dhokha nh dia mr.khan''-zoya. ''aur phr vha ajmer mein bhi isne mjhe pr do br hamle kie ek br jab main hotel se nikal rh thi...aur dusri br isne mjhe pahaad se gira dia...vo toh alah miyaan ne mjhe bacha lia...pta nh kha se ek green chadar ayi aur usko pakad kr main upar aa gyi...''-zoya ''kya vo chadar apke ps h?''-asad ''ha pr apko kya krna h mr.khan?''-zoya ''ap dkhaiye toh shi''-asad. Zoya brings tht chadar nd shw it to asad...nd asad is surprised tht alah ne uski dua suni aur zoya ko bacha lia...tanveer is olso shckd to see tht again she is saved beacuse of mr.khan belongings... ''apne ku mangvayi yeh chadar''-zoya ''yeh chadar mri h maine hi ajmer sharif chadayi thi''-asad ''pr tumne hume yeh sab mjhe bhi nh btaya...ku zoya kya main tumhari ammi nh hu?''dilshad ''aise mt khiye phoophi main apko apni ammi manti hu...vo toh mjhe tanveer ne kha ki vo mre abbu ka pta janti h...aur vo mjhe tbhi btayegi jab main unka raaz raaz rkhungi..''-zoya Tanveer to herself-''ab maza ayega...jab jammy ko pta lgega ki zoya kiski beti h toh vo apne ap hi inko apni zindgi se bedkhl kr denge''. ''tanveer tum btati ho inke abbu ka pta ya main police ko bulayu''-asad ''nh jammy hum btate h...zoya ke abbu ka nam h gaffur sidqui jiski vjh se aj ap aur najma apne abbu se dur aur jiski vjh se rashid ahmed khan ne khala ko chd dia tha''-tanveer. Everyone is shckd...zoya to herself-''mri vjh se hua h yeh sab mre abbu ki vjh se aj asad,najma aur phoophi ki yeh halat h...nh aisa nh ho skta''sayng dis she faints... To be continued... So hows it guys...

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[B][/B] Tanveer ka pardafash Part-4 Zoya faints nd asad hold her in his arms nd take her to her room...ol r worried nd thn asad calls the doctor...thn only tanveer is happy thnkng tht nw she has tym nd she ll thnk of sumthng play her another card...bt har br kismat sath nh deti bure logo ka..nd police arives nd arests tanveer...yeah hum sab ki dua qubool ho gyi yippie :) :D ...inside d room asad askes frm doctor''doctor sahib inhe kya hua?'' Doctor to asad-''inko gehra sadma laga h jiski vjh se behosh ho gyi h...pr ghabrani ki koi zrurt nh h yeh ab thk h pr dhyan rkhe ke inse koi aisi bat na kre jisse inko stress ho...''. Asad-''thnku doctor hum dhyan rkhnge''. Aftr 1 hr at 11:00pm Asad siting near bed nd thn dishad come nd says-''asad bete jao fresh ho jao''. Asad-''ji ammi''. When asad comer back to d room aftr freshng up he is surprised to see tht no one is there in d room nd thn onlu he sees a letter near d bed... Letter:- '' mr.khan i m sry ki main apke mana krne ke bad bhi us ghr mein ja rh hu pr mjhe apne kch sawalo ke jawab chahiye jinhe liye bina main ghr nh lautungi...maf kijiyega...khuda hafiz'' Asad is shckd nd tnsd to see d letter... At sidqui house:- ''bhr aayie abbu mjhe apse bat krni h...abbbu zoya screaming bhr aiye abbu''-zoya. Every1 come out nd is schkd to see zoya back... ''yeh kya abbu abbu laga rkha h tumne ae ldki...nd by sayng dis razia pushes zoya nd shes is about to fall whn she feels two strong arms holding her... 'Ap kya kr rh h yha...apko rest krna chahiye''-asad. ''No mr.khan main jab tk apne sawalo ke jawab nh le leti tb tk yha se nh jaungi''-zoya zoya holds sidqui's color nd ask her''y did uh do this to me abbu...mri kya glti thi jo apne mjhe is duniya mein akele chd dia...ku kia apne aisa ku''sayng dis she fall on her knees cryng continuously... Everyone is shckd wht she jst said nd did...bt asad tries to console her before tht raziz picks her up by holding her albow nd says''yeh kya bakwas kre ja rh ho tum badtamiz ldki kbhi apne apko aur apne pehnave ko dkha h...um jaisi bazaru ldki inki beti nh ho skti ayi smjh...''. Nw asad has lost his temper nd he roared lyk a lion''bs razia bee bht bakwas krli ap mri zoya ke bare...aur ek shbd apne kha toh main bhul jaunga ki ap mjhse umar mein bdi h'' With tht razia loose her temper... Plz scroll down for continuation...

Tanveer ka pardafash... ''kya krega tu asad ahmed khan jab maine tri ammi se tre abbu ko cheen lia tha tb tri ammi kch nh kr payi toh ab tu kya kch kr payega...aur rh bat tri(zoya)toh 17 saal phle tri ammi bhi ayi thi pr kya hua kch nh bechari ko allah ke ps jana pada''-razia. ''ap mri ammi ko kaise janti h aur kya kia tha apne...''-zoya. ''haha maine hi toh use gudiya factory mein mara tha aur nam rashid miya pr laga dia tha...aur tjhe bhi marvane ki bht koshish kri pr aj main tjhe marke hi choundi aj main tjhe nh chodungi tu mre pati ki najayaz aulad h najayaz''-by sayng dis razia tries to kill zoya by presing her throat bt she deal with a hard slap on her face nd tht too by his husband thapakkk... Thn razia came to her senses nd realised tht wht she said infront of ol... Zoya was shck tht she was about to fall whn asad hold her nd she hugged him nd cried keeping her head on his shoulder... ''aisa mre sath hi ku hota h mr.khan...main bachpan se akeli hu aur ab jab mjhe mre abbu ka pta chla toh pta chla ki mri ammi ki mau ka kaaran yeh the...''-zoya. ''Chliye zoya ghr chlo hum aur ek pal yha nh rukenge''-asad. They both move to der khan mansion ol teary...nd in asad calls d police nd tells thm to arest razia...