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Posted: 12 years ago
#51
Aww that was so cute
I loved loved it
continue continue continue
or else hehehe 😈
<3 Farhana
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Preview :

"Ahh!!!!" screamed Zoya shaking the hell out of Asad. "Zoya!!! Where are you?" he shouted but didn't got any reply. "Zoya, if it's a bloody prank then just stop it!" he again screamed. "Zoya its scaring me come out right now!!!" he again shouted but it didn't helped. Tears of helplessness flowed down his eyes. The encounter which Zoya had just a few moments back was scaring him. Guess now he knew why Anwar and Zeenat were soo scared to let Zoya fly alone to India. Soon the lights turned on and he could hear clapping from the back side. He turned back with a sharp turn. "Tum?" he spoke out totally shocked. The person burst out laughing seeing him so helpless. Ya allah ye mohabbaat! Tsh Tsh, bahut afsos hota hai tumhaari haalat dekhke Asad miyan. Aapko kya laga, in sab ke baad bhi hum us kambhakt ladki ko mera ghar barbaad karne deti? Maaf kar dijiye hamein Asad miyan. Aapke paas na keval do raastein hain. Ya toh aap in mohtarma ko yahan se lekar dur chale jaaiye ya phir inka mara hua muh dekhiye!" spat the person. "NO! Aap... aap jo kahengi main wohi karunga... please chod dijiye Zoya ko. I beg you... please!" said Asad. "Itni bhi kya jaldi hai Asad miyan? Thoda toh ruko... Arey asli game toh abhi shuru hua hai! Aise hi thodi na hum use jaane de sakte hain? Pehle uski maa ne meri zindagi barbaad karne ki koshish ki thi aur ab ye. Huh. Aayi badi... Razia Siddique se panga liya hai usne... use bhi toh pata chale ye najeez kya kar sakti hai.!" Razia burst out laughing as Asad ran out in search of Zoya... his Zoya...





Author's Note : Okay, I know I'm updating it very slowly. Well I have my reasons too. I'm stuck in studies like anything and I doubt I will be able to provide regular updates. Will try my level best to update but I just can't say anything. Sorry !
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Posted: 12 years ago
#53
awesome preview...

waiting for full update Kon

miss u a lot
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Posted: 12 years ago
#54
update coming up tomorrow :)
last part
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Posted: 12 years ago
#55
Hey! I have just read the last two chapters and this preview..I m loving the story so far. I hope u update the next part soon.

Wish u all the best! 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
#56
awesome😃waiting for ur update and pm😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#57
Nyccoo!! Update fast ;) Waiting for it!!! N pls pm me!!!

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