D-K FF important note pg 12

Hi this is my first time doing a fanfic so pls come right out and say its horrible if it is.And pls do pm me.Oh and one more thing............can sum1 tell me how to make a siggy??????????

It starts on from 15/1 epi.Just pretend that there is no Dhruv.

Panna and NT are talking when the see Dev rushing to work.NT stops him.

NT: Dev beta aaj tum Office se jadhi aajana.Woh Kaajjal ne humme lodhi ke liye ghar bullaya hai.Tum aoge na?

Panna: Agar tumhe kam hai toh koi baat nahi.(smilling)

Dev: Nahi nahi main aoonga.<blushing>

Dev walks off while Panna and NT laugh.

Kaajjal's house

Lodhi is in full swing.Dev and Family are welcomed by Satya and Bimmo Bua.Dev loks for Kaajjal and sees her distributing sweets.(Kaajjal is wearing a red and gold sari with a low back sari blouse.She has her hair down.)He keeps staring at her and then Bua snaps him out of it and shows him in.Kaajjal is looking elsewhere but walking straight and bumps into Dev, who at that point if time was looking else where.The plate of sweets falls and so does Kaajjal.She grabs Devs sleeve for support.Instinctively he holds her waist and upper arm.They have a long eye-locking session with "Pyare Hua Chupke Se" in the background.They both snap out of it at the same time and bend down to pick the sweets.

K: Sorry sir maine aapko dekha nahin..

D: Koi baat nahi

It's the last sweet remaining and both go to pick it up when their hands collide.They both fumble.Kaajjal grabs the sweet and runs away blushing.Dev smiles and stands up as well.

Bua calls every1 to throw the tills into the fire.Kaajjal and Dev do it together but their hands touch and heve another eye-locking session.Hottie breaks them up by telling them to hurry up.Each threw the till toghether and prayed for each other's happiness.

Then it was time to dance.While dancing Kaajjal came too close to the fire and her her pallu caught fire.Dev saw it first and pulled one of the drapes to smother the flames.

Bua: Arey Kaajjal Puttar tum thik to ho na? Aur Dev tumhara haath to jal gaya hai.Kaajjal tum Dev ko apne kamre lejakar First Aid kar dana aur apni Sari bhi badal dana.

Kaajjal's Room

Kaajjal puts Devs hand into a bowl of ice-water and went to go change.When she came out she was wearing a blue and pink sitara sari.

To be continued.Pls feel free to pm me to continue.

first of all welcome to the forum nikki 😛 ,and the start of ur ff is quite good,and the priview looks very interesting 😳 ,so just keep going 😊

As jyoti has said..your ff looks very hot & interesting preview..hmmm..continue dear.& welcome to the crazily in love world of Dev & Kajjal..

Love-Hema

Originally posted by: jyoti06

first of all welcome to the forum nikki 😛 ,and the start of ur ff is quite good,and the priview looks very interesting 😳 ,so just keep going 😊

Thanks Jyoti but i want at least 4 reviews before i continue

tht was 2 good .....continue soon

gud job!hey anmol here.. 😛 about the siggy thing,ill tell u in school ya?

Recap:Kaajjal's pallu catches fire and Dev comes to her rescue but in the process burns his hand.

Part 2

Kaajjal comes out wearing a pink sitara sari and Dev keeps looking.Kaajjal comes over to Dev and takes his had out of the ice-water,pats it dry and applies a cream for burns.While applying she rubs too hard and Dev yells out in pain.Immediately she starts blowing on it to soothe it.Dev thinks that she takes care of him so much.Yes she is the right one for him.Kaajjal is done with the burn cream and puts on a bandage but her pallu gets caught in it so when she stands up her sari starts to slip.But our hero comes to her rescue yet again and wraps her pallu over her shoulders and takes her pallu out of the bandage(Sohail Khan/Neha Dhupia scene in Fight Club).

K:Thanks sir.Chale?
D:Ha ofcourse.

All this while Nt,Satya and Panna are witnessing this and smile to each other in an approving manner

Farmhouse

Lodhi is about to end when D-K arrive.When its time to go dev says bye to every1 butkeeps staring at Kaajjal.When their eyes meet they have another eye-locking session and finally say bye to each other.

The Next Day; Dev's House

Dev receive a bouqet of flowers.He see's the card attached to it and smiles to himself.Nandini is shown coming into the Living Room

N:Dev yeh bouqet kisne bheja hai?
D:Kaajjal ke family ne
N:Kaajjal ke family ne ya sirf Kaajjal ne?
D:<Blushing>
N:Accha koi baat nahi lekin kam se kam phone karke unhe Thank You toh bole do.
D:ha bhabi main wahi karne ja raha thah.

Dev flips out his mobile and calls Kaajjal.she picks up the phone.

K:Hello
D:Hi Kaajjal bouqet ke liye thanks.
K:Your welcome sir.Aapka haath kaisa hai?
D:Ab think hai.Suno Kaajjal main woh Doctor ke paas jah raha tha aur woh office ke paas hai
K:Ha toh?
D:Nahi woh main soch rahaa tha ki kyatummeresaathlunchparchalogi?
K:Aapn abhi abhi jo kuch kaha mujhe kuch samajh me nahi aaya
D:Maine kahaa kya-tum-mere-saath-lunch-par-chalogi?
K:<Smiles to herself>Jaisa aap kahe.
D:Achcha toh 1 pm sharp Ceasar's main?(sry guys thats the best i cud think of)
K:Thik hai

Preview
Dev asks Kaajjal to dinner.
Love confession

you r doing a great job nikki 👏 👏 keep it up 👍🏼

Recap:Dev asks Kaajjal to dinner

(Kaajjal's family and friends have gone to mussorie for smthg)

Part 3

Kaajjal had been waiting for Dev for over an hour.She had waited enough.She walked over to the exit and starting opening the door muttering "I can't believe I just got stood up"

Suddenly there was a strong pull from the other side of the door and she fell into the arms of a very sheepish Dev.

D:Sorry Kaajjal mujhe der ho gayi.Car problem.
K:It's okay.
D:Toh andar chale
K:Ha.

D-k to a seat near the window which overlooks the sea.(Jst pretened that Mumbai is super clean)
D:Order kare
K:Ha
Dev orders seafood pasta.Kaajjal stares at him
D:Kya hua?
K:Kuch Nahi
Kaajjal orders the Vegetarian Special
K:Aaj Tuesday hai.Aaj main vegetarian hoon
D:Oh,Waiter tum mere order ko Vegetarian Special me badal do.
K:Nahi sir iski koi zaroorat nahi
D:Its okay

After lunch Dev drives Kaajjal back home.While driving Dev asks Kaajjal
D:Kaajjal tum sham ko kya kar rahi ho?
K:Kuch nahi...kyun?
D:Nahi woh main bhi kuch nahi kar raha tha toh....kya tum mera saath dinner par chalo gi?
K:KYA!!!!!!!!!!!!!
D:Kya hua?
K:Kuch nahi
Dev pulls up infront of Kaajjal's house
D:Toh main tumhe 7:30 pick-up karne aa jaoonga.
Kaajjal gets out of the car and is about to shut the door when Dev says
D:Tum sari pahen lena.Achchi lagti ho.
K:<blushing>Thik hai.


Kaajjal is wearing an orange chiffon sari with her hair down.She waits at the porchfor Dev to come.He arrives at 7:30 sharp.Kaajjal gets in and Dev says
D:Tum bahut achchi lag rahi ho.
K:Thanks.

Dev and Kaajjal are in a secluded area when suddenly the car sputters to a stop.

K:Yeh gari koh kya hua?
D:Pataa nahi.

Suddenly it starts to rain heavily.Dev gets out to check the engine.Just what he expected,the radiator was hot.Then he spots a little cottage around the corner.

D:Kaajjal waahan ek cottage hai.Jab tak barish nahi band hoti hum wahaa thairte hai.
K:Thik hai.

They both rush to the cottage but find it locked.Dev finds a brick lying around and uses that to break the lock open.Then both of them go inside.Dev shuts the door.It's really dark and everything is covered in white sheets.Kaajjal feels a draft coming in and shivers.Dev sees this and puts his jacket over her shoulders.Kaajjal thanks him and sits down on one of the sofas.Dev does the same.After a while Dev looks up and sees Kaajjal.And keeps staring.In the moonlight Kaajjal looks even more beatiful.
D:Kaajjal.Mere jacket ke left pocket main tumhare tumhare liye kuch hai.
Kaajjal reaches into the pocket and takes out a little box.She opens it and sees a diamond ring.Together with the ring was a little card saying:Will you marry me?