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InkedImagination

@Queen0fDarkness

Dazzler

+ 12

Posted: 12 years ago

Hey people. Right honestly I've no idea that RBO forum was still open and kinda active, had I known I'd have come here 2yrs back 😆This is my first write up (and last) on Shaan & Khanak and its very short One shot.So I'd appreciate the feedback 😊

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Made for Each Other?
"Maine aap se pyar kaise kiya?" she shouted as she paced the room."Haan yeh teek hai khanak. Galti tumhari aur mujhe hi blame karoge na?""Maine darwaza khol ke rakh diya kya? Mummy ji kya sochenge. Teen saal hogaye hai hamari shaadi ki aur ab tak hum.. chi chi..." she lightly patted each cheek one after the other. "Tauba tauba""Kuch nahi sochenge. Mom toh yahin sochenge ke hum dono ke beech pyar badh raha hai""Shaantanu" she whacked him. "Aap toh besharam hai hi aur aap aapke hone wale bacche ko bhi besharam bana na chahte hai?""Oh" he bent down placing his hand on her bump. "baby so jao, mama papa ke baatein nahi sunte my baccha. Ok?" he caressed."Burtal hai. Burtal" she pushed his hands off and headed into the washroom, Shaan followed."Kya hai?" she stopped and turned raising her brows."Aww" he pinched her cheeks. "meri baby naraz hai mujhse""Shaantanu" she whined pushing his hands off. "Baby main nahi aap hai aur aap jaiye yahan se, mujhe nahana hai""Main bhi aata hoon na" he spoke and paused seeing her raise her brows. "Tumhare madad karne" he added knowing all too well his wife was cranky. "Damn hormones" he muttered beneath his breath."Kya kahan? D... dan homons kya hai?" she asked frowning.He stifled his laughter and coughed in his hand. "kuch nahi kuch nahi.. jao. Tum jaake shower kar do. Main guest room main tayyar ho jata hoon""Mujhe pata hai aap mere hi mazak udha rahe hai" she turned and closed the door behind her.He looked at the door and sighed. "Were we really made for each other?"
The End...😆
Very Short I know 😳
Those who've understood then well done. 👏Those not then basically they're opposites. 😛
Do leave your feedback.Thank you for reading. 😊

Edited by ...Tanya-K... - 12 years ago

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Maneesha Reddy

@Maneesha_Shanak

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

Hii

Welcome back to the forum again...🤗

Yes the forum is very much active😃

Lovely part...😃

very well written!!😃

Lol khanak 3 saal hogayi...shaan ki paathshaala se kya seekha?😆

the ending was hilarious specially shaan's whine😉

keep writing!!

Edited by Maneesha_Shanak - 12 years ago

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poo_j

@poo_j

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

Wow!!! 👏 Loved it..Very beautiful!!! 😃

The OS is so in synchronization with our ShaNak!!!👏 From the dialogues to the gesture..And besharam Shaan..😆 And cute Khanak understands her hubby intention so well..😆😳😉

Beautiful siggie!!!

Thanks for writing dear..😊

P.S: Why the last one??? Do write on ShaNak more if possible!!!😊

Edited by poo_j - 12 years ago

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Miss.Wahian

@Miss.Wahian

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

Welcum to RBO forum🤗 I'm Neelu😊

Ur siggi so beautiful...they look Damn perfect together

And now, main part...Loved ur OS...its Short & sweet 😳

I was acually feel like I'm watching one of shanak scence while reading it...her english & his teasing😳

& why dis is last write???...u write really well...I'll love to read more Shanak write up from U😛

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InkedImagination

@Queen0fDarkness

Dazzler

+ 12

Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Maneesha_Shanak
Hii
Welcome back to the forum again...🤗
Yes the forum is very much active😃

Lovely part...😃
very well written!!😃
Lol khanak 3 saal hogayi...shaan ki paathshaala se kya seekha?😆
the ending was hilarious specially shaan's whine😉
keep writing!!

Thank you 😳

Had no idea it was active till I'd come across it by mistake but right now so glad I did so. 😊

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crazy4shanak

@crazy4shanak

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

Short but beautiful os...y this is last...this was soo good...keep writing...nd welcome to the forum

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InkedImagination

@Queen0fDarkness

Dazzler

+ 12

Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: poo_j
Wow!!! 👏 Loved it..Very beautiful!!! 😃

The OS is so in synchronization with our ShaNak!!!👏 From the dialogues to the gesture..And besharam Shaan..😆 And cute Khanak understands her hubby intention so well..😆😳😉

Beautiful siggie!!!

Thanks for writing dear..😊

P.S: Why the last one??? Do write on ShaNak more if possible!!!😊

Thank you so much 😳

Last one because I didn't think I'd even receive any feedback 😆 but happy with the response I'm getting so may do another 😉

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InkedImagination

@Queen0fDarkness

Dazzler

+ 12

Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Miss.Wahian
Welcum to RBO forum🤗 I'm Neelu😊
Ur siggi so beautiful...they look Damn perfect together

And now, main part...Loved ur OS...its Short & sweet 😳
I was acually feel like I'm watching one of shanak scence while reading it...her english & his teasing😳
& why dis is last write???...u write really well...I'll love to read more Shanak write up from U😛

Hi neelu, myself Taslima but known as Tanya by all in IF 😃

Thank you so much for the welcome and compliment 😳

If I can I'll surely write up on Shanak hopefully. 😃

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InkedImagination

@Queen0fDarkness

Dazzler

+ 12

Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: crazy4shanak
Short but beautiful os...y this is last...this was soo good...keep writing...nd welcome to the forum

Thanks a lot dear 😊

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Miss.Wahian

@Miss.Wahian

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: ...Tanya-K...

Hi neelu, myself Taslima but known as Tanya by all in IF 😃
Thank you so much for the welcome and compliment 😳
If I can I'll surely write up on Shanak hopefully. 😃

hii...dear...So the siggi made by U only...must say its beautiful😳

Hope to read more from U😊

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