ArShi FF:The Predator And His Prey: Chapter 18 on pg:53 (21/2/)

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Hey, i am Niya. i am starting an new ff of arshi. its my first attempt. hope u guys will enjoy it.
a slight dark ff. not that much.



Prologue:

Her life was full of joy
her life was full of colours
her life was full of happines
her life was full of fun
her life was full of people
Until he came into her life, her PREDATOR.




Character sketch:

Arnav singh raizada:

27 years old rude, arrogant, ruthless, businessman.very rich. plays any dirty game to win. he will get what he want at any cost by hook or crook. doesn't have any emotion. does not believe in love. Had a dark past because of that he is rude. loves his sister very much.

Anjali raichand:

Arnav's elder sister married to kush raichand. have a son. very caring and sweet lady. loves her family much.

Jayashri Raizada:

Arnav's nani.(same as the show)

Manorama Raizada:

Arnav's mami. akash's mother.(same as the show)

Manohar Raizada:

Arnav's mama.(same as the show)

Akash Raizada:

Arnav's cousin. 26 years old. little bit shy. helps arnav in his business.

Khushi raichand:

20 years old very beautiful girl with her bubbly and sweet character.loved by everyone. innocent and naive.
kush raichand:

khushi's elder brother,married to anjanli and have a son.a very rich business man. loves his family very much. fights with khushi.

Ansh raichand:

4 years old son of anjali and kush. very naughty. loves his mamu and bui most.

Avinash raichand:

khushi's father,a very rich businessman. a very good person who loves and care for his family.

Aradhya raichand:

khushi's mother, a very caring lady who loves her family very much. traditional.

Alok Raichand and Lata Raichand

khushi's grandparents ie, avinash's parents. grand childrens call them as Thakuma and Thakupa. very strict yet caring.

Payal sharma:

cousin of khushi.22 years old. very caring towards khushi. modern but value tradition.

Shashi sharma:

khushi's mausaji. payal's dad. a rich businessman.

Garima sharma:
khushi's mausiji. payal's mom.

Ashish sharma:

khushi's cousin.26 years old. elder brother of payal. very funny and caring towards khushi. supports her most. near one calls him as ashu. has a feeling towards ayesha, khushi's bestie.

Madhumathi Sharma:

payal's bua ie, shashi's sister, a widow. loves her family, very funny. taditional.

Ayesha kapoor:

bestie of khushi. 20 years old. very bubbly, have a crush towards ashish.

Lavanya kashyap:

arnav's current girlfriend. 23 years old model. very rude. thinks she is everything.


Aman mathur:

Arnav's PA. do everything arnav ask to.





Index:

prologue: pg 1 (scroll up)

cs: pg 1 (scroll up)

chapter 1: pg 1 (scroll down)








Chapter 9








Chapter 17




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Posted: 12 years ago
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they all ready know each other... hey khushi as a boyfriend or not i think she needs a one...
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no neha. mine is a different story. it is the continuation of the show.
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interesting.
i lurvvv dark stuff. 😳
but it has soo many characters. i think i'd forget most of them. 😆

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Nice cs
Waiting for the part
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Hey just found ur stry. Amazing strt. Excellent. Lots of character. Keep updating. Nd do pm me wen u update next.
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Thanks a lot guys. so here goes the first chapter.

it will be starting from the teej day.there will be little confusion but it will clear as the story progress. in my ff arnav is little more dark.

The Predator And His Prey
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Chapter 1


After the pooja, the entire Raizada family and Khushi, Payal and Lavanya gathered outside the temple. Anjali is continuously glancing to the entrance. This was seen by Khushi.


Khushi: "Kya hua Anjaliji? Kyun aap vahan dek rahe hain?" She asked confused.

Anjali: "Woh... my husband didn't come yet so... i was just waiting for him."

Payal: "Khushi aao humein jaana chahiye." Payal urged her. Khushi looked at Nani and Anjali and said

Khushi: "Toh hum chalthe hain Anjaliji, Naniji."

Anjali: "Wait for sometime Khushiji. My husband and son will come now. After meeting him we will drop u both to ur house." She told Khushi smilingly.

Khushi: "Aapko ek beta hai?" She asked confused as she didn't see him till now."

Anjali: "Yes. His name is Ansh. He is 4 years old. He was at his fathers's house that's why u didn't see him."

Khushi: "Oh.. Par Anjaliji ab humein jana chahiye, varna Buaji bahut ghussa ho jaungi. Humein aapke bete ko bahut man kar raha hai. Par kya karien." She told apolagasing.

Anjali: "It's okay Khushiji."

Nani: "Khushi bitiya, when will u come to our house next time?" She asked hopefully.

Lavanya and Mamiji is irked by hearing this where as Arnav was looking at Khushi with hopeful face. Khushi looked at him and Lavanya.


Khushi: "Kal hum lucknow jaa rahe hain." Arnav looked at her confused.

Nani: "Kya hua bitiya? Sab teek hai na?" She asked worried.

Khushi: "Sab kuch teek hai Naniji." She assured Nani.

Anjali: "When will u come back?"

Khushi: "Hum wapas nahi aa jayega." Arnav became shocked hearing this.

Arnav: "what the..." He told suddenly. Everyone looked at him confused.

Anjali: "What happened chote?" She asked confused.

Arnav: "erm... no.. nothing di."

Anjali: "We all are also going Lucknow tomorrow. My nanand is coming so to welcome back her. U know what i didn't see her yet. This is the first time i am going to see her. I am super excited." She told happily.

Khushi: "Sach mein, main bhi. hum pehli bhar apne ghar mein jaa rahi hoon 5 saal ke baad. Hum ne bhi apni bhabhi ko nahi dekha. Aap ko pata hai unka ek beta bhi hai." She told smiling brightly.

After much more talking Khushi and Payal went back to home. When they stepped out of the temple there came Kush and Ansh Anjali's husband and son. Upon seeing them she rushed towards them happily. She took Ansh in her arms and kissed him on his cheek.

Anjali: "Why u became late?" She asked pouting her lips. Khush smiled at her.

Kush: "Tomorrow Choti is coming know. So there is preparation going on to welcome her." He told honestly.

They three went back to the temple and greeted the family. He broke her fast and they went back to sv (shantivan). Through out the journey Arnav was very restless by hearing that Khushi is going away.



At gupta house.

Khushi and Payal are excited to go back to their family.

Payal: "Finally, After long 5 years, we are going back to Lucknow." She told sighing heavily.

Khushi: "Yes jiji, I am very excited to meet them all. Especially my bhabhi and nephew. " She told happily.

Suddenly Buaji came there and glared at both of them.

Buaji: "How many times did i told u two to not speak in english her? Tomorrow on wards u two could do what ever u want." She scolded both of them.

Payal: "Sorry Buaji. We got carried on." She told sheepishly.

Khushi: "Okay, Good night Buaji."

With that they went to sleep.



Next day morning at SV


Everyone is getting ready to go to Lucknow. Lavanya is also going with them and Nani is very irritated with this fact.

Nani: "Don't know y this miss Kashyap is coming with us. What we will say when ur in-laws ask about her Anjali bitiya?" She asked worriedly.

Kush: "It's okay Nani. No one going to ask anything. After all she is going to be the bahu of this house." He teased Nani.

Nani: "what?????? It is not going to happen." She said shocked.

Arnav was coming from the upstairs with Lavanya: "Don't worry Nani. I will not marry her because i don't believe in marraige." He told arrogantly.

Nani stopped the argument there itself as she know that continuing that conversation is not gud for both of them. After sometimes they started for Lucknow.



Raichand Mansion



The Raizadas reached to rm (Raichand mansion) early as they came by flight. Now everybody is waiting for the daughter of the house to arrive.

Ansh (anjali's son): "Mamma, why are we waiting here?" He asked confused as he don't know why everyone is waiting here.

Anjali: "Beta, We are waiting here to welcome ur bua."

Ansh: "But where is she mamma?" He asked her upon not seeing his bua.

Kush: "They are on their way beta. They will be reaching here soon."

Ansh: "Means my bui will come soon. yaayy! He started to jump enthusiastically while everyone smiled at his acts.

Aashish (payal's brother): "Why they are not here yet bhai?" He asked impatiently.

Kush: "Ashu be patient. U r worse than Ansh."

Ramu kaka (their servant came there): "Saab ji, babyji has come..." Before he could complete Ashu ran to the entrance and everybody foolowed him there to welcome them. There came Payal and Buaji. Every raizada became shocked.

Nani: "Payal bitiya, aap yahan?" She asked confused and shocked.

Payal and Buaji also became equal shocked.

Payal: "Naniji and Anjali ji?" She also asked equally shocked.

Payal And Buaji looked confused at everybody.

Avinash (khushi's father): "hmm (smiling) it's a long story. I will tell u all. Now come inside." Everybody went to inside. Everyone hugged and welcomed buaji and payal. But khushi is nowhere to be seen.

Anjali: "Toh aap hai meri sali?" She asked Payal smilingly.

Payal: "I'm also is ur sali but indirectly." She told in fluent english.

The Raizada's and Lavanya become shocked because payal is speaking in pure english.

Mami: "Hello hai bye bye! Thish Khoon bhari tang knows englishhh?" She murmerd to herself.

Payal: "your direct sali is khushi. isn't it khushi?" By hearing the name Khushi, Arnav listened to the matter more keenly.

Everybody looked for khushi but she is no where.

Buaji: "haire nandkisore! where is titaliya?" She asked Payal worriedly.

payal ( in a worried tone): "Buaji she was with me."

Ashu: "what? then where is she now?"

Everyone became worried for her especially Arnav. He was damn confused by all this and Khushi is also no where to be seen.

will continue soon...😛



i know i am very buddhu in hindi. actually i was born in UAE. so i don't know hindi that much. hope u all will tolerate my hindi.


i know my story is little boring. but as story progress u all will enjoy it or i hope so. sorry for the mistakes. pls do comment and like. feel free to write my mistakes. bye...😉

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Edited by niya55 - 11 years ago
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hey what going on... i m not getitng this 1 chapter...
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about the story, u told know u didn't understood. okay i will explain it to u briefly.
u remember the teej day in ipkknd ryt? actually khushi is anjali's s-i-l but they don't know each other (will get to know more as the story progress). after khushi goes out frm the temple her bhai kush will come there. so they will not meet. tomorrow khushi is going back to her house. khushi and arnav are going to same house only as they are related to each other. but they don't know this.
rest u will know as the story progress.
i hope now chap 1 is clear. i already mention that is little confusing. next update i will clear it all.
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Hey thnxx for d pm,loved d update. Fabolous. Amazingly good. Please continuee sooon.

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