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Posted: 12 years ago
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ohkkk guys it's not mine os it's my friend shikha [shikha1997] os she wrote it a few day before and send me to got to know howss it i told her to post it but she is not getting a time and told me to post it on behalf of her so guys plz give all the credit and appreciation to her not me 😃😃


scene taarey in cafe -

taarey met in a cafe to discuss about their marriage which their parents fixed .n while having their coffee together rey called the waiter ...

rey - i want some salt to put in my coffee

taani was actually shocked.

taani - rey aap coffee mai salt dalkar pite hai ...

rey- yup actually i used to it when i lived near the sea area where i a drink only salt coffee and i really liked it ...

rey loved her since he saw her in a cafe you all can say love at first sight ,, he was about to tell her his feelings bt before he could speak anything taani speak something which broke him from inside , she said

taani- i am marrying you just for my parents , i can't able to love you in my whole life soplz don't expect much from me , i promis i'll keep your parents happy and fullfilled my all duty of daughter - in law but as a wife plz don't expect much from me ...i wanted to tell you all truth before spoiling your life forever that's why i m here and agrre to meet you ...

rey- [ after coming over to the shock ] --it's ohkk taani i can understand and me too marrying you just for my parents i m happy that you told all the truth without any fear and all , so we husband wife na sahi but we can become friends na ...

he forward his hands which taani happily accepted Both decide dat dey will just be frnds...later as tym passes both become best frnds n even taani starts feeling for rey she used to give him salty coffee everyday n he used to drink it happily...after 5 years their marriage rey met wid an accident n died n d nurse gave a letter to taani which rey gave her...in d letter he had written dat he had lied to her about d salty coffee cuz he was nervous in d cafe n was deciding to propose her...so instead of asking for sugar he asked for salt...bt d salty coffee tastes really nice wen she gives him...

after reading this taani broke completely , and now only tears are left in her life ...


i know guys it's too short but it's her first try so plz support her and yeah i made a little change in her story so i hope you all liked it ...





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-GoluGudiya- thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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It was really very nice ! It was Shocking, Sad and Emotional ! I really Liked It and The ending was beautiful ! 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Its a sad but a wonderful OS
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Yaashi...meri behna!!! Thankuuu sooo much to post it for me 🤗
N u hav written it soo nicely...luv u for it 👏 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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superb os...
really diff...
short yet poweful...
sweet yet salty...

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: shikha1997

Yaashi...meri behna!!! Thankuuu sooo much to post it for me 🤗
N u hav written it soo nicely...luv u for it 👏 😊


luv you too dear 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
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it was beautiful, the perfect blend of sad, emotional, happy and a big shock!
amazing👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Beautifully written but emotional and painful.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thankuu soo much guys for ur lovely comments n support 😊
Bt dis os could nt hav been posted widout yaashi's help 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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its so emotional😭 and short😆
but really well written!!

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