KR SS : Day of love (Chap 10 / Pg 92) - Page 29

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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesom!!!
Cutest fight ever:-):-):-)
Lovely.. 😊 😊 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
AWESOME

AMAZING

SUPERB

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1st FIGHT N REY SERIOUSLY 7 DAYS TAK BAAT NAHN KI

I LOVED DERE SILLY FUNN TALK

BEAUTIFUL

UPDATE SOON :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update

KR moments were superb

loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow...
just amazing...
kriyaansh fight...actually cute fight n the way kria convinced rey was just aww...
loved it esp last part...

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Chapter 7 ' Inhibitions galore

Kria woke up with a start as her alarm went off early in the morning .. She hurriedly switched it off so that Rey is not disturbed ..
She usually woke up after he came from jogging but today was different and moreover it was a special day for him ..
She smiled as she turned to look at his sleeping form .. He was on his side facing her .. A bit of his hair coming over his eyes .. His one hand under his head and the other slightly covering his face ... She slowly and quietly moved close to him .. Ruffled his hair slightly .. And smiled " Happy Birthday Rey .. May you get all the happiness in this world .. " she whispered and brought her lips hesitantly close to his cheek .. She wanted to give him a peck but she found her lips trembling with their close proximity to his cheek and she blushed deeply and closed her eyes .. She couldn't make herself kiss him ... She quietly turned and left for the washroom smiling at her own shyness ..

******

" Good Morning , Rey ..." He heard her sweet voice as he sleepily rubbed his eyes and forced them to open .. He gave her a smile still with his half-closed lids ...
" You awake before me " he remarked sitting on the bed ...

" I wanted to wish you first ... A very happy birthday " came her sincere wish ..

" Thanks a lot " it was then he opened his eyes wide and was surprised to register the sight before him .. She was dressed beautifully in a salwar kameez and was setting her hair ... He knew it was for him ..His grin widened ...

" Kya aap mere liye yeh pehen sakte hain for breakfast , please "

She pointed to the clothes that were kept on the bed .. He noticed that she had chosen a white Kurta for him ..

" Sure" he wondered what was she planning for his Birthday .. Like a small child he felt really excited in his heart ..


******

As he came down for breakfast , he saw her waiting with the aarti thali in her hand .. She made him sit and applied a tika on his forehead and did his aarti ..
Then kept the thali aside and fed him a spoonful of gajar halwa ...

"Kria has made it for you " His mom remarked ..

He was elated that she had taken the trouble to make his most favorite sweet dish .. He smiled at her but when she brought the spoon near his mouth "Thank God .. no kheer " he whispered and smirked ..

She glared at him ..

But, the next instant she gave him her shy smile when he praised her .. "Its really good , Kria .. " her soft blush just made his day .. He really loved how she flushed at his compliments .. he just felt so proud that he could bring that emotion on her face .. an expression only for him which added a charm to her whole being.. so innocent and so true .. just like her ..

He couldn't help but feel happy for her .. It was her own way of wishing him and he could see that it made her so content ...

He could see his family standing beside her and the smile on their faces was a proof that this girl was definitely someone who with her love ,respect and joy in her heart ,had come in their lives to make their family bond more stronger ...

******

His family had also made sure that the newly weds get time with each other ... They had been for a quiet family dinner the previous night and now Vicky was gonna go for a few days trip with his friends and Rey's mom and Dad planned to visit one of their relatives and take some time off for themselves ...
He was really excited that he and Kria would be spending a lot of time together ..

She was doing so many things for him in her own subtle way .. He too wanted to get something special for her .. but what .. he just couldn't decide..

" Agar aaj hum dinner ghar par karein toh ?" Her question brought him out of his planning ...

" Haan .. I would love that "

"Abhi mujhe thoda office mein kaam hai and then I will go for a little shopping .. But , Main jaldi aa jaaongi shaam ko " she informed him as she got ready for her office after breakfast ..

"Hmm .. Ok .. Mujhe bhi office mein important meeting hai .. I think I will attend that and see you in the evening "
He spoke thoughtfully but at the same time excited as now he knew what he would get for her and he also had ample time to go and buy that ...

******

"Arre tumne darwaza khola, Ramu Kaka and baaki sab kahan gaye ?" he questioned her as he entered his house ...

"Sab ko chutti de di" and she giggled .. He couldn't help but notice that she was draped in a beautiful red saree ..


She gently pulled him by his arm " Aap jaldi fresh ho jao " as she took him upstairs in their room ..

While walking he saw the dining area ..
It was decorated with flowers and she had placed 2 candles on the table .. moreover a lovely dinner cutlery was already laid out for two ..
He looked at her and couldn't believe that Kria ,his wife .. the one who always seemed so calm and composed .. was so excited about his birthday !!! She seemed to be behaving like a child .. This was something new to him .. He had always imagined her to be the more mature one amongst them .. But he just loved this new side of her .. he really wondered if he is ever gonna know and understand her completely .. every time he thinks he knows her .. he finds something intriguing about her ..

******

"Yeh maine pehli baar banaya hai .. I just hope its nice " Kria said as she fearfully served them the dinner ..

Rey couldn't help but smile at her anxiety ..

He was really surprised that she took all the trouble just for him .. she had prepared his favorite .. Thai cuisine ..

"I don't think I have tasted anything better than this " he smiled .. overwhelmed with joy when he saw her giving a sigh of relief and smiling comfortably ..

"I have got something else for you " she passed a gift wrapped box to him ..

"Kria .. seriously ab iski jarurat nahi thi , tumne itna kiya hai .. I can't tell you .. I am so happy .. "

"Khol ke dekheyi na "

"Ya .. " laughing a bit at her eagerness ..

He opened and stared at it for a few moments and then looked at her .. He pulled his chair close to hers surprising her a bit .. gently took the spoon from her hands and placed it aside and then held her hands firmly in his and looked at her directly .. He could see her waiting in anticipation for his reaction ..

Still not breaking his eye contact .. he brought her knuckles close to his lips and kissed them softly ..

She immediately looked down ..

"Aapko ajeeb toh nahi laga na .. yeh dinner .. yeh gift .. " she asked slowly .. still doubting him ..

"Ajeeb ?" he almost let out a shocked shriek .. and her head bend a bit more ..

"Kria .. meri taraf dekho " and she slowly looked at him .. she could see the truth in his eyes ..

"Main tumhe bata nahi sakta .. mujhe kaisa feel ho raha hai .. "

He kissed her hands again .. "I feel so lucky .. so special ..that you thought so much .. planned .. went ahead and did so much for me just to make me feel this way "

"Maine toh kuch bhi nahi kiya .. yeh toh sab normal .. "

He interrupted her by shaking his head in negation ..

"No .. nothing what you did for me was normal .. I just can't believe it .. yeh photo frame .. tumne apne haathon se banaya hai na .. "

She nodded ..

"And these shells which you have decorated it with .. you had collected it when we were in Goa na .. " Again she nodded and felt really happy that he had noticed that too .. "Humari shadi ki photo ismein kitni pyari lag rahi hai .." he smiled..

"You know Kria .. when I was young .. for every birthday I used to wish for a miracle before blowing the candles .. "

She chuckled ..

"Ya I know its funny .. but as I grew older .. I understood .. miracles are just dreams .. and I stopped wishing for it .. but now .. " he paused

She narrowed her brows curiously waiting for him to continue ..

"But now .. I feel as if I have experienced a miracle in my life .. "

He looked deeply in her eyes .. "You "

"I just hope ki tumne aaj mujhe jitni khushi di hai .. usse kahin jyada main har pal tumhe doon .. I just wish this for my birthday today .."

He could see her eyes getting moist with her smile intact on her lips ..

He came forward and kissed her forehead .. she closed her eyes and felt his warm lips on her eyes .. and whispered "I know I am bad with words and worse with emotions .. but please abhi yeh aansoo nahi .. "

She slowly opened her eyes but a few drops of tears made their way out of her eyes .. "Aisi situation mein mera dimaag bhi kaam nahi kar raha hai, I just can't think of any joke now to make you laugh .."

She blinked twice and burst out laughing .. In between her laughs she teased "Aapke paas dimaag hai ?" and then she realized what she said so she stopped laughing instantly and bit her lower lip .

Now it was his turn to laugh at her nervous look ..

******

"Kria .. actually maine tumhare liye yeh laaya tha .. but you were looking so pretty in that red saaree that I didn't give you before dinner .. " he gave her a gift wrapped box .. as they entered their bedroom after dinner ..

"Yeh dress hai ?" she asked with delight ..

"Hmm .. next time when we go out for dinner , I want you to wear it .. Will you ?

"Usmein poochne wali kya baat hai .. " she started unwrapping it ..

"Kya tum sach mein mere liye yeh pehnogi ?" the disbelief in his voice surprised her .. her hands paused as she was opening the gift wrapping paper ..

"Main ek kaam karti hun .. main abhi yeh pehn kar aapko dikhati hun .. "

She heard him take a sharp breath which surprised her .. but she ignored it .. and went in the washroom ..

******

After almost 20 minutes , the washroom door opened .. Rey had been pacing to and fro in his bedroom waiting anxiously for her .. he couldn't understand what was taking her so long ..

But , when he saw her step out .. his heart stopped .. he could actually feel that he had stopped breathing just looking at her .. he wanted to move forward and hold her .. he wanted to say something to her .. but he just couldn't do anything .. he seemed to be rooted at his spot ..

After a few moments of complete silence , when Kria faltered while stepping ahead ,did he come out of his spell and moved forward held her by her shoulders to support her .. she recoiled a bit on his touch ..

It was then that he noticed certain things which he had overlooked entirely previously ..

She had her head bent down looking towards the floor .. generally when she is shy , her eyes are lowered .. but he had never see her head bending so low .. he noticed her hands .. her left hand was trying to pull her dress lower .. her right hand was fidgeting with the hair which she had placed on both her shoulders as if trying to hide it with her hair .. he saw her toe nail digging into the carpet nervously and then he looked at her whole body .. she kept shifting her weight a bit unevenly on her legs trying to conceal the shivers she was feeling ..

He slowly cupped her cheeks to make her look at him and was shocked at what he saw ..

Her kajal had run down along with her tears and stained her cheeks .. her eyes were red and she was trying her level best to avoid meeting his eyes ..

For the first time he saw an expression on her face .. an expression which could be termed as nothing but mortification .. because she was uncomfortable to the core .. He just couldn't see her in this state .. he looked around and immediately found her duppata lying on the chair .. he pulled it over her head and then covered her .. "I am sorry , Kria .. tum please change kar lo " he literally choked at his own words .. and stood 2 steps away from her , turned his head and closed his eyes ..

What had he done ? How could he not understand her feelings .. how could he hurt her so much .. He had brought her the gift and had thought it would bring a smile on her face .. They were coming close from being strangers to acquaintances to friends and he had started feeling a bit more than that for her .. he wanted to talk about his own feelings to her .. They were coming close to each other .. she was being more carefree around him and now he had pushed her far .. far away from him ..

He actually felt like slapping himself for getting that dress for her .. When he had seen that dress on the manequin , he had imagined just her .. as per him it was perfect for her .. he had only thought that the deep bottle green colour would compliment perfectly her fair complexion .. but he hadn't thought that she would hide her shoulders with her hair which the thin straps of the dress would reveal making them bare .. he hadn't thought that the length of the dress which came above her knees would make her uneasy .. he hadn't thought that the fall of the dress which he thought was flawless fitting her curves appropriately would make her edgy .. and above all he had never imagined her to react in such a drastic manner ..

Before he could think further ,he suddenly felt a weight onto him .. he opened his eyes instantly and saw her hugging him and sobbing hard on his shoulder .. He didn't know what to do .. "Kria .. Please .. I am sorry .. " .. he gathered her carefully in his arms trying to be as gentle as possible so that she doesn't feel more awkward ..

"Shhh ' please ro mat .. I am sorry .. " he tried to caress her hair softly .. trying to calm her ..

He kept moving his hand over her back relaxingly .. But , she kept on crying .. He tried to cup her face in his hands .. but she wouldn't allow .. she just hugged him more tight ..

"Kria .. please calm down .. chalo yahan baitho " he tried to take her to the bed .. but she wouldn't leave him and kept standing at her place not letting him move too ..

Then he heard her mumbles amongst her sobs .. "I am .. am so sorry "she stuttered .. "No .. Kria .. No .. "

But .. she was not listening to him .. she kept murmuring inaudibly .. "Mujhe .. mujhe aisi dress pasand nahi .. mujhe aisa nahi karna chahiye tha .. But .. main kya karoon .. Mujhe aapko hurt nahi karna tha ..But mujhe waqt chahiye .. main tayar nahi hun .. Mujhe malum nahi kyon mujhe bahut darr lag raha hai .. "

He understood her feelings .. the feelings of a girl .. he felt selfish for getting that dress for her .. But .. he wouldn't let her feel any more embarrassed than she already was ..

He held her by her shoulders .. moved her to the edge of the bed .. made her sit on it .. then he knelt .. and cupped her face .. he tried to make her look at him .. but she wouldn't ..

"Kria .. tum meri wife ho .. before that you are my friend .. you have full rights to tell me .. what you like .. what you don't .. I will never do anything against your wishes .. remember that .. never ever .. please believe me .. trust me .. "

At the "trust" word , she looked at him and he could feel her breathing was returning to normal .. she had calmed down a bit ..

He gently wiped her tears .. kissed her forehead ..

******

Dear Readers,

I know many of you might find it strange the way Kria was reacting ...

But .. this was something i wanted to bring out .. her awkwardness .. her embarrassment .. opening up to the other other with your thoughts , words is different than opening up physically .. even though the person is your husband .. Will touch upon this emotion a bit more in the next chapter too ..

Hope the feelings have come out well ..

Keeping my fingers crossed ..

Regards,
Amy


Edited by a_happy_2000 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Such a lovely updt
beautifull written
kria is so innocent n sensitive
such a reaction can be expected
we girls are shy dont open up so easily
but the way was handling kria was amazing
loved it
updt nxt sn
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice part..
Expressed kriya's feelings very well..
Edited by sanju_arsha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update...rey is so caring and supportive...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Res 😳

unres

mindblowing update👏👏

d way u have described kriya's feelings wer jus amazing👏👏

and d surprise she planned for rey was too cuteee😊😊

i totally loovveedd ittt😃

waiting for d nxt part😳😳
Edited by aishu3003 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Love it
love the way kria does all things for rey

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