|a&k fanfiction|He Fancies My Madness| ch:01 pg:15

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Posted: 12 years ago
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He Fancies My Madness

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Prologue;

Khushi's point of view:

My life is very monotonous. Sometimes, I feel like a robot trapped in some kind of master plan.

It has taken a turn for the worst.

All because of him.

It has been quite a few months since he left..

And took my life with him.

I know my parents were worried about me.

I had distanced from everybody.

I did not want anybody to see my sadness and part of my madness.

I looked into the mirror and saw a girl with pure hazel colored having big dark circles under, staring back at me.

Lifeless.

It was because I stayed up many nights watching outside my window, gazing at stars wishing he would come back to me.

Because, nobody can fill the void of my heart except him.

"Me? Come back to you?" His reflection in the mirror mocked my misery.

I know it is just my imagination and suffering.. I am used to seeing his face in my imaginations.

His reflection always had an evil grin.

"Keep dreaming." He scoffed. "Dreaming doesn't kill."

I closed my eyes, wanting him leave me alone for once.

But, he never did.

He always stayed until I shed few tears.

I try to ignore him, but it was a waste effort.

"Cry me a river."

"Shut up." I pleaded in a whisper.

"I just wanted to vent. I was alone." He said. "I needed entertainment and what is better than a silly, clumsy and naive middle class girl?"

"Stop it."

"Deep down you always knew that I never wanted you. That I was playing with you and your fragile heart. Didn't you?"

"Leave me alone." I growled.

An unknown anger was growing on me.

"I already did."

With all my strength, I screamed and punched the mirror causing it to break and shatter all around.

He disappeared.

"Khushi, are you okay?" my mother wondered from the door.

Breathing deeply, I replied "Fine"

"It's getting late, I hope you are ready to go to school." she reminded me.

I didn't reply.

I was busy staring at the broken glass pieces, which seems to be everywhere.

Just like my broken heart.

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First and foremost, I am not a writer (please keep that in mind) correct me if you find any mistakes.

Should I continue this story? I won't know if it sucks or not unless you drop a like/comment.

Thank you!

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Index;

chapter 01
(the new world): page 15
Edited by sinner-like-me - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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53 views, but not even a single comment? Is my story that bad?! 😔
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Woah it is really good! :) x
Never read anything like this!

Will you mind if I PM my readers this story? :)

Thanks and do tell me!
Take care!
<3
Vani ~
Edited by Shimmer_Vani - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow I loved it...
Nice concept
Pls do pm me in future
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thts simply nice
Super start
Thank u Vani for recommending this
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Interesting concept.. Unique must say... =)

Do continue soon .. would be looking forward to more updates.. 😊
Posted: 12 years ago
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SUPERBBB👏👍🏼 KEEP IT UP
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This looks so nice and the concept is different and fresh...
Would you please PM me? I'm already loving the story!!!
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Awesome concept very interesting and different one .

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