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Posted: 12 years ago
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So as I promised a new OS on SaRa
Rain Sequence
here it is


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*~*Tu Jane na*~*





The day started rather weirdly every one sarita knew was acting strangely first of her mother-in-law actually smiled at her genuinely, although her good mood was due to Sundari's departure on the instance of Rohan's parents but still it was surprising.
Then there was her husband who did nothing but stare at her as if lost in daze and when asked something, he would just mumble and stutter as if he was caught doing something embarrassing.
Sarita pushed all these thoughts aside, she had lots of chores to complete which increased day by day as her sister-in-law Sheila's wedding approached nearer and her other two SIL will not as much as move a finger to help her out so as a result all the work load has fallen on her.
Dadi sighed as she watched Sarita labour, Sarita was arranging the flowers, catering and all the other arrangement on the phone all the while instructing the servants to pack the gifts for important guests.
"My poor allah ki gai, I don't know what will happen to this house once
she leaves".

The whole day passed as such Sheila was talking with Rohan on the phone, Munni was deciding what to wear on mehandi, sangeet, shadi, biddai and reception.Bubbly was hogging everything that she could find in the kitchen,Sohanlal and Kamla were plotting ways to bring Divya into the house.

Raj remained in his shop away from all the madness but the things in Raj's shop were not moving as per the daily schedule as Raj was busy thinking about someone special,someone with long beautiful flowing hair someone whose eyes were chocolaty brown someone who did not need designer dresses or expensive accessories to look beautiful, someone who looked more beautiful than 10 television actresses combined his wife his Chotu.Her simplicity was her beauty.

For days now Raj has been thinking off her dreaming of her he was no longer the old Raj that Divya had killed and just left a shell behind.He was healing slowly, due to sarita his artistic heart that was buried deep down began to resurface he began to feel alive again.
As he was lost in all these thoughts he didn't notice the time passing night has fallen and it was already 9:30 PM.
With a shock he realized that he had forgotten an important delivery. All his employers have already left for their respective houses only he was left and he had to do it. He kicked start his bike and began his journey on the way he passed his house and noticed Sarita coming out of his house he stopped the bike in front of her and asked teasingly. "Are you having an affair with somebody that you are going to meet this late at night"
Sarita rolled her eyes, in the past 10 days she and Raj have become very close and he had began to open up with her more and with this friendliness came a great dose of teasing from his side.
"No, I was just going to the tailor's--
Raj mocked Interrupted her
"WHAT u are having an affair with the tailor, chee buri baat Sarita"
"NOOO" Sarita protested "He forgot his measurements for Sheila's lehanga,I was just going to give it to him"
"Ohkay I was just kidding"Raj replied "Chalo I will drop you I am going in the same direction"
Sarita eyed the bike carefully
"On the bike"she asked
Raj sighed and said."yes on the bike,I named you right Chotu, you do behave like a kid sometimes"
Sarita sat on the bike rather hesitantly Raj grabbed her hand and encircled it around his waist "hold on tightly" he muttered
Sarita tried to ignore the butterflies in her stomach as Raj drove off.
They first stopped at the tailors shop then delivered the items.
It was already 11:00 when they finished
both of them were hungry as they did not have dinner Sarita pointed at a Pani-Puri stall and grabbed Raj hand and dragged Raj towards it.
Raj loved it when Sarita behaved like a child all excited and chirpy.
The Pani-Puri wala saw them approaching and said "it's to late only 1 plate remaining"
Raj saw the disappointment in sarita's eyes and said "no problem we will share".
Sarita was a bit surprised at this and was more taken aback when Raj himself fed her it was nothing like the last time both of them were at complete ease and comfort in each other company.
Sarita fed Raj the puri and it was the tastiest thing Raj has ever tasted.
They stood there staring at each others eyes for a long time until the Pani-Puri wala fake coughed and said "sahabji, money"
Sarita turned away as Raj paid him the money while glaring at him.
Together they moved towards the bike but thunder clasped over them Sarita jumped in Raj arms in fright
raindrops fell and within moments they were drenched wet.

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Banner credit -krazyriya-
First i decided on a 1 shot but it turned into a 2 short
I will upload the next part according to the reviews.
You are free to live me suggestions i will try and add that in next part



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Posted: 12 years ago
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OMG!it is awesome Shreyu! 🤪
plz continue soon yaar! it is just fab!dying to read next part! 😳
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thanx 😆
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next chapter is gonna be hot romantic and steamy
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Originally posted by: ...Jes...

reswa!😉

PS: will edit later!😊


fast re i am waiting
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I will try and upload the next part tomorrow
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I can't wait for the next part..
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Wow very nice 😉 and please do continue 😃
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Awesome Graphic
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Posted: 12 years ago
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beautiful beautiful beautiful! <3<3 I would love it if something like this happened in the show! I absolutely loved how you showed Raj teasing Sarita! <3 Adorable!!!!

And the whole pani puri thing was just fabbb too! <3 Like a first date for SaRa! <3

Please continue this soon! I'm desperately waiting to read more! :D

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